1、学优中考网 2012 中考英语：命题作文写作指导和技巧点拨 一、命题作文【6 篇】 范例点拨 1If we dont save water，the last drop 0f water will be our tear环境污染是当今世界上最大的问题。根据提示，请你用自己的话说说应该怎样保护我们的水资源。1生命离不开水； 2饮用水在减少； 3水污染严重； 4应该保护和再利用水。注意:1根据所给题目，请用英语写一篇短文或对话，分值相等；2写短文：词数不少于 80个；3表达真实可行，内容连贯正确，语言流畅。写作指导：1. 分析所给提示的重点关联处：水的重要性、目前水的状况以及如何保护并再利用（rec
2、ycle）水资源。2. 直接翻译是不能很好地完成本文的写作的，因此和合理的安排和组织。一定要按照第一点的提示顺序来写作。3. 注意字数的控制，同时因为是中考形式， “注意”的第四点一定要特别留意，尤其是“不得使用真实人名” ，否则该试卷会按舞弊处理的。One possible version: 参考范文学优中考网 Water is very important to usWe cant 1ive without water. But some people dont care about thisThey often waste a lot of drinking waterThey pour
3、 dirty water into rivers or lakes, and they throw rubbish into them, too. So we have less and less drinking water. At the same time, many rivers and lakes are seriously po1lutedWe must do something to stop the po1lutionwe must protect the water We must find ways to recycle itIf we dont，the last drop
4、 of water will be a tear drop*2请你参考所给信息，写一篇关于你的一位同学或朋友的小短文，Zhou Yi; 14; tall/short; thin/strong; kind; favorite sport; listen to music; read books.要求：1、可用所给信息，也可适当发挥；2、词数: 60-80 词 (2005 陕西)写作指导: 1. 文章要求里没有说明男女，因此可以根据自己的理解来选用。对于所给的选用词语，应当结合自己的写作进行选择。2. 所给的词语比较简单，在书写时要注意选用不同的句型，避免一个句型用到底。建议合理使用一下复合句。3
5、. 由于是人物介绍，因此时态使用一般现在时是毫无疑问的，但要注意第三人称单数的变化。One possible version: 参考范文学优中考网 Today I want to tell you something about my classmate/ one of my best friends, Zhou Yi. He / She is a boy/ a girl of 14 years old. He / she is tall/ short and thin/ strong. He / She likes reading books very much. He / She like
6、s sports, such as swimming and playing basketball. Sometimes when he / she is free, he / she enjoys listening to music. He / She is kind. Im not good at English and he / she often helps me with my English. Im happy that I have such a good friend. 技巧点拨 1正确理解命题人的命题要求，读懂命题写作的具体要求；2写作要围绕着所给命题内容来展开，不要加上没
7、有必要的语句；3注意所写句子的流畅程度和上下句的连贯性；4合理地掌握句型的使用，并对词语的搭配及变化形式要充分掌握；5理顺自己的思路后开始写作，同时要注意对完成的写作要进行适当的修改、润色。实践-写作文 1用 100 个左右的单词, 写一篇 The Importance of Plants 的说明文.内容提要:1). 没有植物 , 生命就不能延续; 2) 植物能从阳光, 空气和水中生成食物, 而人和动物则不能;3) 人类主要靠吃植物而生存; 4) 植物能使空气清新, 有利于人类健康. 参考范文The Importance of PlantsPlants are very important l
8、iving things. Life cannot go on if there are no plants. This is because air, water and sunlight make plants grow and at the same time plants 学优中考网 can make food from them while man and animals cant. Animals get their food by eating plants and other animals. Man gets his food by eating plants and ani
9、mals, too. So, animals and man need plants in order to live. This is why we find that there are so many plants around us. As we know, plants can make air fresh. This is good to our health. *2 以 Am I ready for a higher school?为题写作文一篇，要求内容表达完整。内容提示:时间过得很快，进入初三就要面临中考。感觉到老师上课的速度快了，时间也紧了，作业量增加了，课外活动的时间在逐
10、渐地减少参考范文2. Am I ready for a high school?How times flies! It seemed to me that I began my grade three only a few months ago, but then I got a smell for something different: Im going to have my exams for higher school!I cant have time to do my homework at home, so I have to do some of it at school. Wh
11、en I learn this, I am surprised. Is this the time for Grade Three?I can feel my teachers are a little nervous and some of them seem to be easier to get angry with our students when we dont do well in our studies. It seems to me they have lost some of their patience. Im feeling nervous. At the same time, I realize we have no classes for activities. Sure we have PE classes. But where are the classes for art? Where are your breaks? Why do we have 学优中考网 classes after classes? Does it mean we are machines and our teachers are mechanics?I am not ready, yet!*
