1、Communication Workshop,Writing,In this lesson you will learn how to use linking words of contrast and how to write a report about a tourist attraction. At the end of the class, you will be able to write a report about a tourist attraction, using linking words of contrast.,What can we see in the Unde
2、rwater World?,What adj. can we use to describe them?,Use the words below to make comments:on the one hand, on the other hand, however, but,One the one hand, the fish are interesting. On the other hand, the sharks are violent.,Linking,Example:,The fish are interesting but the sharks are violent,or,or
3、,The fish are interesting. However, the Sharks are violent.,1. seals and penguins exciting, caf very expensive 2. fish very interestingdolphin show cruel 3. Sea Theatre great funVirtual reality voyage not very realistic 4. Views from caf very goodfood and coffee terrible,More practice,On the one han
4、d, the seals and the penguins are very exiting. On the other hand, the caf is very expensive.The seals and the penguins are exciting. However, the caf is very expensive.The seals and the penguins are exciting, but the caf is very expensive.,On the one hand, the fish are very interesting. On the othe
5、r hand, the dolphin show is very cruel.The fish are very interesting. However, the dolphin show is very cruel.The fish are very interesting, but the dolphin show is very cruel.,On the one hand, the sea theatre is great fun. On the other hand, virtual reality voyage is not very realistic.The sea thea
6、tre is great fun. However, virtual reality voyage is not very realistic.The sea theatre is great fun, but virtual reality voyage is not very realistic.,On the one hand, the views from caf are very good. On the other hand, the food and coffee is very terrible.The views from caf are very good. However
7、, the food and coffee is very terrible.The views from caf are very good, but the food and coffee is very terrible.,How to write a report,list of good points conclusion list of bad points general description,Read and match,Read the report about Underwater World and match the four paragraphs with the
8、following headings.,General Description,The Underwater World is a new park. It is located on a beautiful part of the sea front, ten kilometres from the city centre.,List of good things,On the one hand, there are several good things about Underwater World. a It has modern buildings and some of the la
9、test technology. b It also has some exciting things to see like the man-made iceberg and some beautiful coral. c It has an excellent picnic area.,List of bad things,On the other hand, some things are not so good: a The pool for the dolphins is very small and generally there are too many animals in a
10、 small area. b The discovery pool is good but you have to wait a long time to get in. c There are problems with the sound in the virtual reality show.,Conclusion,Go to Underwater World, especially to see the coral and iceberg. However, dont go to the dolphin pool. And take your own food, and use the
11、 picnic area.,Heading,To: Mrs Brodman From: Amanda Bartok Date: 3rd August Subject: Underwater World,Layout,Heading To: From: Date: Subject:,General Description General feature(adjectives) Locationbe located in ten km from,Layout,List of good things,List of bad things,On the one hand, there are seve
12、ral good things about a b c ,On the other hand, some things are not so good: a b c ,Layout,Conclusion,some advice for visitors who havent visited the place,Go to especially However, do not And,Lets write our own reports,Peking Man Site,Heading,To: From: Date: Subject:,General Description,1.What kind
13、 of park is Peking Man Site? beautiful, a park of relic 2.Where is it located? And how far is it from the center of Beijing? ZhouKoudian, Fangshan District, about 50km,List of good things,Is there a big museum ? What can you see in it ?,fossil,some other exhibits,2. What other places can you visit i
14、n Peking Man Site ? What knowledge can you learn there?,Peking Man Cave,the Upper Cave,Pigeon Hall,geography and biology,3. Is it an educational place ? What kind of people is it good for ? Students, the people who are interested in geography and biology,List of bad things,1.Are there any other ente
15、rtainments in Peking Man Site? 2.Is the path between the caves narrow or wide? 3. Is there a restaurant for the tourists to have meals?,Conclusion,What advice do you give the tourists? the place to visit the best season the food,Peer-editing,.,Homework,Write another report about another place you have visited, e.g. a zoo, a national park, a village ,
