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9、er A boy, Li Ming, whom father died a month ago, was late for school He stood outside the classroom silent I smiled to him and let him come After a while, he began to cry Seeing this, I walked to him and asked what has happened He told me his mother was ill but he had to get some medicine for her At
10、 the same time, he apologized to me for his lateness Moved by his word, I praised him for his deeds and decided to sing a song was named “Mother“ for the students From then on, I began to realize we should respect our parents and did our best to help them Do you think so? Im looking forward to your
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