1、高三英语写作训练福州金桥高级中学 张滢Waving Flago When I get oldero I will be strongero Theyll call me freedomo Just like a waving flag o And then it goes back (x3)o Oho Born to a throneo Stronger than Romeo But violent proneo Poor people zoneo But its my homeo All I have knowno Where I got growno Streets we would ro
2、amo Out of the darknesso I came the farthesto among the hardest (survival)o learn form these streetso it can be bleako accept no defeato surrender retreato (so we struggling)o fighting to eato (and we wondering)o When well be freeo so we patiently waito for that faithful dayo Its not far awayo but f
3、or now we sayo When I get oldero I will be strongero Theyll call me freedomo just like a waving flago and then it goes back (x3)o ahhho ahhho ahhhoo so many wars settling scoreso bringing us promises leaving us pooro I heard them say love is the wayo love is the answer thats what they sayo but look
4、how they treat uso make us believerso We fight there battleso then they deceive uso try to control uso They couldnt hold uso cause we just move forwardo just like buffalo soldierso (but we struggling)o fighting to eato (and we wondering)o when well be freeo so we patiently waito for that faithfully
5、dayo Its not far awayo but for now we sayo When I get oldero I will be strongero theyll call me freedomo just like a waving flago and then it goes back (3x)o ahhhooo ahhhoooo ahhhoooo When I get oldero I will be strongero Theyll call me freedomo Just like a waving flag o And then it goes back (x3)o
6、Oho and everybody will be singing ito and you and I will be singing ito and we all will be singing ito woah woah woaho when I get oldero I will be strongero Theyll call me freedomo just like a waving flago (and then it goes back (3x)o and then it goeso When I get oldero I will be strongero Theyll ca
7、ll me freedomo just like a waving flago (and then it goes back (3x)o a oh a oh a oho When I get oldero When I get oldero I will be strongero just like a waving flag (3x)o flag(x2)o just like a waving flago Do you like this song? o Why do you like this song?o Because it makes me cheerful令人愉快的 /pleasa
8、nt快乐的 /rhythmic有节奏的/wonderful美妙的 /musical有音乐感的Brainteasero 1.why does Kitty run as fast as a bus?o 2.Peter has a dog but this dog never barks.Why?o o 3.Why does the dog sit under the big tree?Because Kitty is in the bus .Because it is a toy dog.Because it doesnt want to become a hot dog.Writing tips
9、:o Decide tenses and personal pronouns.o Draw an outline.o Think about phrases/sentences patterns/proverbs /conjunctions just learned.Para 1: Beginning说出文中的要点，核心问题。说出文中的要点，核心问题。Para 2: Body围绕主题，展开叙述、讨论。围绕主题，展开叙述、讨论。Para 3: Ending对全文的总结和概括对全文的总结和概括 。提示作文o 每个人都有自己的梦想，那么你的梦想是什么呢？请以 “My Dream”为题，写一篇短文。o
10、 要求： 1）内容切合题意，适当发挥，表达清楚，书写规范。o 2）不少于 80词，已给出的句子不计入总词数。o Everyone has his dream. 主要内容 What is your dream? What is your reason? How do you make your dream come true?My DreamEveryone has his dream. So do I. Somebody want to be a nurse, somebody want to be a teacher. They all have their dreams. And I wa
11、nt to be a doctor. Maybe you will ask why. I can tell you . Because I want to save everybody life in the world. Maybe you will think it is impossible. But I think it will come true if I work hard. Now, my main duty is to study hard so that I can become a doctor some day. Work hard , my dream will co
12、me true!What do you think about this short passage?Do you have any ways to change them to make it more fluent?wants wantsthe reasoneverybodysWorking hard范文 My Dream(一 )Everyone has his dream. My dream is to be a dancerwhen I grow up. I want to be a dancer because I like dancing very much. I think da
13、ncing can make me happy. Its not easy to become a dancer, so from now on I must study hard and try to learn more about dancing. And I also have to do lots of practice every day. I think if I put my heart into it, nothing is impossible. And I am sure I can be a famous dancer one day.(二 )Everyone has
14、his dream. My dream is to be an astronaut when I grow up. I want to be an astronaut because I am interested in science. If I become an astronaut, I can travel around the space and discover the secrets in space. So from now on, I must study hard and try to learn more about science. And I need to exer
15、cise more to make me fit for his job. I think if I put my heart into it, nothing is impossible. My dream must come true.Conjunctionso 表示罗列增加 first, second, third, first, then/next, after that/ next, finallyo 表示并列关系 or, and, also, too, not only. but also, both. and, either .or, neither.noro 表示让步关系 th
16、ough, although, even though, however o 表示因果关系 because, because of, since, as, thanks to., so that, such thato 表示举例 for example, for instance, such as. 请以你校学生的名义写一篇短文请以你校学生的名义写一篇短文 ,陈述陈述反对拟在你校附近兴建一座化工厂的理由反对拟在你校附近兴建一座化工厂的理由 .短文须包括以下内容短文须包括以下内容 :1.大部分同学都大部分同学都 反对反对 兴建兴建 .2.尽管该厂可能为本市赚钱不少尽管该厂可能为本市赚钱不少 ,但
17、弊大于利但弊大于利 .3.可能造成噪声污染和空气污染可能造成噪声污染和空气污染 .4.侵占学校部分操场侵占学校部分操场 .注意注意 :可以补充若干理由可以补充若干理由 ,不要仅不要仅仅翻译以上各点仅翻译以上各点 .词数词数 :100-120.写作的步骤写作的步骤1.根据文章提示在头脑中搜索你想用的根据文章提示在头脑中搜索你想用的单词单词 :1.大部分同学大部分同学 都都 反对反对 兴建兴建 .2.尽管该厂可能为本市尽管该厂可能为本市 赚钱不少赚钱不少 ,但但 弊大于利弊大于利 .3.可能造成噪声可能造成噪声 污染污染 和空气和空气 污染污染 .4.侵占侵占 学校部分学校部分 操场操场 .be
18、against 反对反对Most students of our school我们学校 大部分同学大部分同学make a lot of money赚赚钱不少钱不少o 弊大于利弊大于利 do more harm than good. Pollute vt.污染污染take up 侵占侵占Playground n.操场操场还有一些关键性短语补充：o 采取措施o 阻止阻止 不受不受o 对对 造成伤害造成伤害o 做运动做运动take measuresprevent fromdo harm tohave sports2.想好开头句 .提出观点。including me,the construction
19、ofa chemical factory near our school .Most students of our school,are against3.写好其它句子来支持你自己的写好其它句子来支持你自己的 观点观点 :Although the factory will for our city , we do think it will us more than good. The air will be badly and we cant the noise entering our classrooms. make a lot of moneydo harmpolluted preventfrom, the building of it will a part of our small playground. We cant have enough place to play games and after class.take upBesideshave sports
