1、大学英语四级写作指导,英语四级写作简介,怎么考 考什么 怎么改 注意的问题,考什么,校园生活 热点话题 工作求职,注意事项,思考提纲，句型。3-5分钟 字要写清楚 注意词数 避免犯低级语法错误！ 时态、形式、搭配（中式英语） 表达不清，或者啰嗦。找到解决这个问题的方法。Find a solution to solve the problem. 两句话直接放一起、 一句话中在没有连接的情况下出现双谓语 缺少句子重要成分（不如只有主语，没有谓宾） 他没来，因为他病了。 He didnt come. Because he was ill. ,如何表达,主语+谓语+(宾语) 特别要注意搭配，不能所有表
2、达都按中文翻译。 时态、形式（单复数、第三人称） 英语思维（detailed thinking细节思维等）,英语搭配,学知识,学习榜样 Pursue knowledge，follow the example. 打开电视、打开盒子、打开门、打开信 Turn on the TV, open the box, answer the door, unfold the letter. 提高人民生活水平 Raise peoples living standard. 提高英语水平 Improve ones English 假牙、假钱、假货、假花 False teeth, counterfeit money,
3、 fake product, artificial flower.,细节思维,他的英语说得很好 His English speaks good. 现在人们的生活离不开电视。 Now peoples life cant leave TV. 虽然他英语很好，但他四级却没过。 Although his English is very good, his CET-4 was not pass. ,词汇修饰,对主谓宾的修饰 可以直接放在被修饰词前面的词语或者简单词组 他送了我一份漂亮的礼物。 He gave me a beautiful present. 我那个漂亮的手机被一个无耻的小偷给偷了。 My
4、beautiful cell phone was stolen by a shameless thief.,从句修饰（先主后次）,一般原则，后置，用有连接作用的词或词组连接。 介词 从句 这是我生日时他送给我的漂亮礼物。 This is the beautiful gift (which) he gave to me on my birthday.,练习,1. 低碳生活受到人们的普遍欢迎 2. 低碳生活方式非常有好处 3. 我们应该如何去做,现今，有非常多的人喜欢低碳（low carbon）的生活方式，这在更多的上下班族在日常生活中使用公共交通系统得以体现。 低碳生活方式给我们和我们的社会带来
5、了许多好处。首先，毫无疑问，低碳生活非常有助于环境保护，并且它也是减缓地球气候变化的有力手段，这对我们的健康也很有意义。 我们应该承担起引导低碳生活的责任，这意义重大。我们有各种方式去引导环境友好生活。首先，我们应该将私家车的使用最小化，它们排放了大量的温室气体。另外，由于世界能源正在快速减少，我们应该培养公众的能源保护意识。例如，我们可以关闭不必要的电子装置，使用可重复利用的材料。再者，在空闲时间，我们应该找机会钟更多的树，它们能够吸收二氧化碳。 简而言之，低碳生活是我们最好的选择，只有这样，我们才能与环境建立和谐的关系。,现今，有非常多的人喜欢低碳（low carbon）的生活方式，这在更
6、多的上下班族在日常生活中使用公共交通系统得以体现。现今，有非常多的人喜欢过低碳生活，这种情况在越来越多的上下班族在日常生活中使用公共交通系统得以体现。,Lead a life 过的生活,有 There be,指代前面的那种情况，即那段话，可否连起来说？,这句话需要当做名词来用，一个句子如何当名词？,Nowadays, there are a considerable number of individuals who prefer to lead a low-carbon lifestyle which find expression in the fact that more and mor
7、e commuters are using public transportation system in their daily life.,低碳生活方式给我们和我们的社会带来了许多好处。首先，毫无疑问，低碳生活非常有助于环境保护，并且它也是减缓地球气候变化的有力手段，这对我们的健康也很有意义。 Low carbon lifestyle can endow us and our society with numerous benefits. Firstly, it goes beyond doubt that low carbon lifestyle contributes a lot to
8、 the environmental protection and it is a favorable way to slow down the rate of climate change of our earth, which also means a lot to our health.,我们应该承担起引导低碳生活的责任，这意义重大。我们有各种方式去引导环境友好生活。首先，我们应该将私家车的使用最小化，它们排放了大量的温室气体。另外，由于世界能源正在快速减少，我们应该培养公众的能源保护意识。 We are supposed to undertake the responsibility
9、to lead a low-carbon lifestyle, which is of great significance. And there is a diversity of measures we can take so as to lead such an environmental-friendly life. For one thing, we are expected to minimize the use of private cars, which emit a large amount of greenhouse gases. For another, we are s
10、upposed to cultivate the public awareness of energy conservation for energy in the world today is decreasing rapidly.,例如，我们可以关闭不必要的电子装置，使用可重复利用的材料。再者，在空闲时间，我们应该找机会钟更多的树，它们能够吸收二氧化碳。 For instance, we can turn off electrical appliances if not necessary as well as using renewable materials. Furthermore,
11、 at our leisure, we can seek opportunities to plant more trees which can absorb carbon-dioxide.,简而言之，低碳生活是我们最好的选择，只有这样，我们才能与环境建立和谐的关系。 In brief, low-carbon lifestyle is nothing but the best choice for us and only in this way can we form a harmonious relationship with the environment.,Low-carbon Life
12、 StyleNowadays, there are a large number of individuals prefer to lead a low-carbon lifestyle which find expression in the fact that more and more office worker are using public transportation system in their daily life. Low-carbon life style not only brings numerous benefits to us, but also gives o
13、ur society a lot of advantage. First, it goes beyond that low-carbon life contribute to protect our environment, and it is a strong way to decrease the earths climate change. Whats more, it is significant to our health. We should be charged with that lead a low-carbon life, because it is very import
14、ant. We have plenty ways to deal with environment. The one thing, we should be used the car to minimize, they emission of greenhouse gases. In addition, as world energy is fast reduce, we should bring up the protection of public awareness of the energy. For instance, At a word, low-carbon life is ou
15、r best choice, Only such, we can find harmony with the environment.,Recently, Online Shopping is becoming more and more popular among Internet-users, especially among the younger generation . Many college students have experience of Online Shopping . Online Shopping makes our life more convenient an
16、d comfortable. We are hardly use Internet when we need something so we dont to go outside and search . Besides ,goods sold on the Internet are often cheaper than those in shops. However, Online Shopping still disadvantages. We cant make a face-to-face deal ,thus, the buyer are cheated and the goods
17、may be damaged during the transport. In my opinion, Online Shopping is becoming a fashion .more and more people will prefer it .So, we should take some measures to make it perfect.,Online Shopping Recently, Online Shopping is becoming more and more popular among Internet-users, especially among the
18、younger generation . Mang错别字 college students have experience of Online Shopping . Online Shopping makes our life more convenient and comfortable. We are hardly use（Be动词后请不要加动词原形） Internet when we need someshing（错别字） so we dont to go（dont 后不可加不定式，要加动词原形） outside and search . Besides ,goods sold on t
19、he Internet are often cheaper than those in shops. However, Online Shopping still disadvantages（这句话却了谓语，错误！）. We cant make a face-to-face deal ,thus,the buyer are cheated and the goods may be damaged during the transport（transport是动词！）. In my opinion, Online Shopping is becoming a fashion .more and
20、more people will prefer it .So,we should take some measures to make it perfect.,写作句子,每一个句子都必须围绕中心意思，不需要浪费意思以外的任何词句。 连贯（注意连接性词句的积累）,现象描述型模板学习,The Celebration of Western Festivals 1. 现在国内不少人喜欢过西方的某些节日 2. 产生这种现象的原因 3. 这种现象可能带来的影响,现象描述型模板学习(第一段),Nowadays/in recent years/in modern society, 用一句话表达某种现象, wh
21、ich has/have been brought into focus/aroused great concern. 现象的变现。Moreover/in addition, 现象的进一步表现. The reasons for this phenomenon are varied./There are many different factors deciding/influencing 该现象。 越来越多中国人过某些西方节日 情人节送花 愚人节戏弄人,近些年，越来越多的人喜欢过西方的某些节日。比如说，他们在情人节给他们的爱人送花，在愚人节像西方人一样戏弄自己的朋友。造成这种现象的原因有很多。
22、 Nowadays/in recent years/in modern society, 用一句话表达某种现象, which has/have been brought into focus/aroused great concern. 现象的变现。Moreover/in addition, 现象的进一步表现. The reasons for this phenomenon are varied./There are many different factors deciding/influencing this phenomenon。,1. 现在国内游不少人喜欢过西方的某些节日,In rec
23、ent years, an increasing number of Chinese people are fond of celebrating some western festivals, which has been brought into focus. For example, they send chocolate and flowers to their beloved at Valentines Day. In addition, the make a fool of others as what westerners do at April Fools day. There
24、 are many different factors deciding this phenomenon.,现象描述型模板学习（第二段）,Among all these factors/reasons, 原因一play/plays a critical role. 用一句话解释原因一。Moreover/furthermore/whats more, 原因二. Besides, 原因三。 学习英语使很多人能接触到西方文化和节日。 西方节日能使人们获得轻松舒适的氛围。 商人能从西方节日赚钱，所以他们极力宣传。,产生这种现象的原因,这些原因中，语言学习很关键。越来越多的年轻人通过学习英语能够接触到西
25、方文化和节日。其次，西方节日给人们提供了享受放松和舒适氛围的机会，这吸引了很多中国人。再次，许多商人把西方节日看做赚钱的黄金时机，因此他们急切地推进西方节日的氛围。 Among all these factors/reasons, 原因一play/plays a critical role. 用一句话解释原因一。Moreover/furthermore/whats more, 原因二. Besides, 原因三。,Among all the factors, language learning plays a critical role. More and more younger age g
26、roups are exposed to western culture and festivals through learning English. Moreover, some western festivals offer people an opportunity to enjoy the relaxing and comfortable atmosphere, which attracts a larger number of Chinese people. Besides, many businessmen view foreign festivals as golden opp
27、ortunities to make money, so they may desperately try to boost the atmosphere of foreign festivals.,In my opinion/ As to be, 我的观点。For one thing/ on the one hand, 观点一。For another/ on the other hand, 观点二。To conclude/therefore, 总结全文（可以提出建议） 过西方节日可以给我们相聚和表达爱的机会。 让传统文化地位下降甚至被忘记。 保持平衡,3. 这种现象可能带来的影响,在我看来，
28、中国人过西方节日既有好处又有坏处。一方面，人们可以通过庆祝西方节日获得更多相处和表达爱的机会。另一方面，我们自己节日的关注度可能在某种程度上减弱。因此，我们必须在西方节日和传统节日之间保持平衡。 In my opinion/ As to be, 我的观点。For one thing/ on the one hand, 观点一。For another/ on the other hand, 观点二。To conclude/therefore, 总结全文（可以提出建议）,In my opinion, Chinese people celebrating western festivals has
29、both advantages and disadvantages. For one thing, by celebrating western festivals, people have more opportunities to show their affection to others and meet together. For another, our own home-grown festivals crucial role may be weakened to some extent. Therefore, we must keep a balance between the
30、 western festivals and our traditional festivals.,模板应用举例,2010.6 Due Attention Should Be Given to Spelling 1. 如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写 2. 出现这种情况的原因 3. 为了改变这种状况，我认为,Nowadays, an increasing number of students attach less importance to the spelling of words in the process of English study, which has aroused gr
31、eat concern. Taking a look around, we can find examples too numerous to list. There are many different reasons deciding this phenomenon.,Among all these reasons, exam-oriented education plays a critical role. Students pay their attention to scores rather than spelling. Moreover, some teachers should
32、 also be responsible for it because they dont emphasize the importance of spelling during teaching. Besides, some students are too lazy to recite words.,From my point of view, due attention should be given to spelling. First, exams should be modified to add some factors into it, which would help stu
33、dents pay more attention to spelling. In addition, schools should also set effective mechanisms to help teachers as well as students to avoid spelling mistakes. Only in this way, can we improve our spelling.,In recent years, more and more students didnt attention spelling in English study, which hav
34、e been brought into focus. For example, middle school students are often listening and reading English, but few to spelling. Moreover, increasing number of peoples prefer communication with others face to face than writer an e-mail. The reasons for this phenomenon are varied. Among all these reasons
35、, our educate way play a critical role. Because educate in order to exam, people didnt care spelling in their study life. Besides, they arent know how important in spelling when there are study English. As to me, teachers should tell students how important to spelling every time and everywhere. On t
36、he one hand, teachers should require students spelling anytime. On the other hand, we can communication with each other in an e-mail. Therefore, we should play more attention for spelling.,In modern society , there are a considerable numble of students who seem to attach less improtance to spelling
37、in English learning , which have been brought into focus . For example , a lot of misspellings appear in their assignment , in addition , misspellings lead to loss of marks serious in their exam . There are many different factors deciding this phenomenon . Among all these reasons, for one thing , st
38、udents do less spelling exercises play a critical role ,because they think its no necessary . Whats more the teacher not only dont emphasize but also not finger misspelling out on students assignment . Besides , parents also should focus on their childens study . In my opinion , In order to change t
39、his situation , Students、teachers and parents should cooperate . On the one hand , students should realize the serious consequence of misspelling , thus they should pay more attention to spelling exercises . On the other hand , teachers should focus on spelling teaching and always remind students pa
40、y attention to spelling . Moreover , Parents should strengthen the supervision of the children . I hold to the bilief that they work together is the good way to change this situation .,观点对比型模板,Should the University campus Be Open to Tourists? 名校校园正成为旅游新热点 校园是否应对游客开放，人们看法不同 我认为.,1. When it comes to ,
41、 there is no complete agreement among people. When asked about , different people will give different answers/ offer different views/ have different choices/preferences. 2. Some people take it for granted/ believe/like/choose . 3. However, others maintain/argue/prefer/would rather . 当谈论到大学校园是否应该向游客开
42、放时，大家的意见都不同。有些人认为, 但是还有些人认为,4. Those people who hold the first opinion/ make the former choice/ have the first preference believe. 5. Moreover/in addition, in their eyes/they insist/they maintain/they point out . 6. However, others think differently/ have different choices/ preferences. 7. in their
43、opinions/mind, . 8. Besides, they argue ,Weighing up these two arguments/ choices/ preferences, I prefer/ am inclined to/ would rather choose the former/latter one. As to me, I tend to/ prefer to / am inclined to/ think 10. for one thing, 11. for another/ further more/ moreover/ whats more, 12. cons
44、idering these/ taking the factors mentioned above into consideration, we/ I may reasonably conclude/ I suggest/ I think In a word, .,When it comes to whether the university campus should be open to tourists, there is no complete agreement among people. Some people take it for granted that university
45、 campus should embrace tourists across the country. However, others maintain that the university campus should be closed to tourists.,Those people who hold the first opinion believe that refusing tourists is contradicting universities proclaimed spirit of openness. In addition, they insist that no u
46、niversity has the right to reject taxpayers to enter its grounds because it is public land. However, others think differently. In their opinions, too many tourists will add a burden to the security department of the university. Besides, they argue that these tourists will destroy the quiet environme
47、nt and influence students normal study.,Weighing up these two arguments, I prefer the former opinion. For one thing, by visiting the university, high school students can experience the campus atmosphere and be stimulated to make a better preparation for the college entrance exam. For another, a univ
48、ersity is a public place and should impart the spirit of openness. Considering these, I may reasonably conclude that the university campus should welcome all tourists.,Study Alone or Study with a Companion? 有的人喜欢一个人学习，有的人喜欢与别人一起学习。 分析两种学习习惯各自的好处。 你倾向哪种？为什么？,When asked about the question on study hab
49、it, different people will have different preferences. Some people like to study alone. However, others prefer to study together with other peers.,Both two study habits have their own advantages. When studying alone, one will get less disturbed and more easily concentrate on his study. Whats more, by
50、 studying alone, one can develop and improve his ability to think and solve the problem independently. As to studying together with others, it provides students with more chances for discussion and free exchange of ideas, which is helpful for the solution to difficult problems. Besides, study companions can encourage each other, and they wont feel bored and lonely when studying together.,
