1、知识篇第一部分：天龙八部1. 描述类经典句用法：.很重要，.很必要句型：_ plays an extremely important role._ is of utmost importance.Nothing is more important than _.替换词：important 可以替换词汇：significant （意义深远的） essential（关键的） indispensable（不可替代的） pivotal（中枢作用的）key（关键的）等等。注意：indispensable 不可替代，本身就代表了非常重要，所以千万不要写extremely indispensable.变通：
2、我们也可以换成其他意思，比如 it is of great necessity to do sth. 表示做. 非常必要比如 play a role/part 也可以表示扮演着重要的角色。结合经典开头：There is little doubt that It cannot be denied that It is beyond doubts that It is generally accepted that There is a growing recognition that It has been widely noted that It goes without saying tha
3、t 综合版：(1) 阅读经典书籍非常重要It is generally accepted that nothing can play a more indispensable role than reading classic books.(2) 从网络中获取信息很重要，但是阅读传统书籍也很必要。It is very important to acquire useful information online, but it is still of great necessity to read traditional books.(3) 众所周知，大学在人的培养中扮演者基础的作用，并为高等教
4、育提供了平台（大学排名 My View on University Ranking）。It has been widely noted that university plays a fundamental role in ones cultivation and provides a platform for higher education.(4) 机器人可以展示出人工智能，慢慢进入到我们的视野，并扮演着越来越重要的角色。Robots, which are capable of exhibiting artificial intelligence, have emerged into ou
5、r vision, and tend to play an increasingly important role in our life.(5) 创新对于一个国家发展经济至关重要。如果中国想要在世界舞台扮演其地位，那么我们必须提倡独创性，激发创造力，鼓励创新。It goes without saying that innovation plays a key role in developing national economy. If our country would like to play its role in the world arena, we should promote
6、originality, inspire creativity and encourage innovation.（还记得吗，后面这句就是我微博上#写作素材日积月累# #优格课堂#中的句子！）2. 重视类经典句用法：重视.句型：pay attention to attach importance to lay emphasis/stress on 综合版：(1) 我们应该重视教育。We should pay special attention to education.(2) 我们应该重视好习惯的培养。We should attach great importance to developin
7、g good habits.(3) 我们应该重视环境保护。One should lay great emphasis on environmental protection.(4) 中国正在面临严重的环境问题。作为一个大学生，我们应该重视保护我们的地球。Currently, China is facing a serious environmental issue. As university students, we should attach importance to protecting our planet.(5) 作文一个 90 后，我们应该重视保持健康。As the post-9
8、0s generation, we should pay special attention to maintaining good health.衍生：套句 . capture/draw ones attention一次性塑料袋的使用引起了大量公众关注。The use of disposable plastic bags has captured/drawn a great deal of public attention.套句 much attention has been paid to .大家都很关注如何有效地进行信息处理。Much attention has been paid to
9、 how to process information effectively.3. 议论类经典句用法：.产生了争议句型：(1) there is much controversy over .我们是否该控制物质的欲望，这个议题引起了争议There is much controversy over whether we should control our desire for materialism.(2) has caused quite a stir among the general public.关于我们是否该控制物质的欲望，在公众中引发了很多争议。The issue of whet
10、her we should control our desire for materialism has caused quite a stir among the general public.(3) opinions vary when it comes to .当谈及到我们是否该控制物质的欲望，大家观点不一。Opinions vary when it comes to whether we should control our desire for materialism.综合版：对于学习有没有捷径这个问题，同学们各执一词。（1）There is much controversy ove
11、r whether there is a shortcut to learning.（2）As regards whether there is a shortcut to learning, there is a heated discussion among college students.（3）Opinions vary when it comes to whether there is a shortcut to learning.4. 结果类经典句用法：.对于. 产生了影响句型：exert a positive/negative/great impact on It cannot
12、be denied that economic growth exerts a great impact on our environment.综合版：（1）网络对于我们的日常生活产生了巨大的影响，这是不争的事实。It cannot be denied that the Internet exerts a huge impact on our daily life.（2）环境污染对我们的健康产生了消极的影响。It has been widely noted that environmental pollution can exert a negative influence on our he
13、alth.(3) 我选择为国企工作，因为家庭的教育对我产生了很大的影响。I prefer to work for a state-owned business because family education has exerted a huge impact on my career choice.5. 见证类经典句用法：在某时某地发生了.（该句型实际解释为：.见证了.）句型： witness （用时间和地点做主语）过去几年里，越来越多的父母把孩子送到艺术学校去。（改写成：过去几年见证了越来越多的父母把孩子送到艺术学校去。）The past several years has witness
14、ed an exponential increase in the number of parents who wish to send their kids to art classes.替换词：exponential 表示上升的程度，可以替换成 dramatic / sharp / considerable / striking综合版：（1）过去几年见证了中国经济的腾飞/过去几年见证了欧洲经济的衰退。The past few years has witnessed a burgeoning economy in China.During the past several years, Ch
15、ina has witnessed a rapid economic development.China has experienced a rapid economic development in recent years. （替换）Europe has suffered from a great financial loss in recent years. （替换）注：the past several years 后面接 has 和 have 均可。一方面，一段时间后面用 has 没有问题；另一方面，用 have 也可以，表示这几年年年都见证了。（2）练习：近几年来，中国见证了信息的爆
16、炸。China has witnessed the great information explosion during the past several years.（3）近年来在学生中出现了忽视中文的现象。The past several years have witnessed a thought-provoking phenomenon that we students pay very little attention to the study of Chinese.6. 使动类经典句用法：.使得.句型：enable/allow/render sb. to do 追求物质主义使得我们
17、抛弃希望，放弃梦想，沉浸在物质世界的快乐中。The pursuit of materialism enables/allows one to abandon his hope, give up his dream and indulge himself in the pleasure of the material world.综合版：（1）网络能让我们更有效的沟通。The Internet allows us to communicate more effectively.（2）虚心使人进步（骄傲使人落后）。Modesty enables one to go forward. (Concei
18、t makes one lag behind.)（3）抵制诱惑可以让我们培养好习惯。Resisting temptation allows one to develop good habits.补充经典句型：offer sb. sth. / offer sth. to sb.provide sb. with sth. / provide sth. to sb.bring sb. sth.物质世界能给我们提供快乐的幻觉，而精神世界能给我们提供生活真正的乐趣。Material world could offer us the illusion of happiness, while spiritu
19、al world could provide us withreal pleasure for life.阅读能给我们提供知识。Reading can provide us with sufficient knowledge.因特网能给我们带来很多便利。The Internet can bring us much convenience.7. 引出类经典句用法：.成为了. 重要的社会问题句型：(1) has arisen as one of （很适合开头句）孩子的教育已经成为最重要的社会问题之一。Childrens education has recently arisen as one of
20、 the essential problems.(2) . has become one of .环境保护问题已经成为了对于政客和科学家同等关键的议题。The environmental protection has become one of the key issues for politicians and scientists alike.(3) . emerge into ones vision 进入到.的视野里环境问题进入到了我们的视野中。 The issue of environmental problem has emerged into our vision in recen
21、t years.综合版：（1）信息真伪近来成为了一个重要的问题。The credibility of information has recently arisen as one of the heated topics, as can be found in the columns of many city newspapers.（2）信息安全近来成为了一个重要的问题。The issue of information security has recently arisen as one of the heated topics.此句配合第二步衍生句，可以作为引出主题的句子。8. 趋势类经典
22、句用法：越来越句型：More and more people An increasing/ A growing number of people People in mounting numbers 注意：in mounting numbers 里 numbers 有 s！而 a growing number of 里number 没 s！综合版：（1）越来越多的人开始重视如何有效处理信息。People in mounting numbers are paying much attention to how to process information effectively.（2）随着网络的
23、普及，网络课程越来越受大学生的欢迎。With the popularity of internet, online courses have gradually emerged into our vision and become increasingly prevalent among college students.衍生 1：趋势类有些非常好的句型值得大家学习，意思是“倾向于”，可以翻译成“容易”。引子：冬天容易着凉。In winter, one tends to catch cold.(1) tend to (2) be likely to (3) be inclined to 比如：
24、(1) 如今大学毕业生更想找一份好工作。Nowadays, college undergraduates tend to seek a decent job.(2) 过去人们认为经济发展必定会导致环境污染。In the past, people were likely to believe that rapid economic development will inevitably lead to environmental pollution.(3) 我更倾向于喜欢前者/后者I am inclined to be in favor of the former/the latter.(4)
25、笑容能规避冲突，消除分歧，缩短人和人之间的距离。A sweet smile tends to avoid the conflict, iron out the discrimination and shorten the distance between people.衍生 2：趋势类还有一个短语叫“必定会”，可以翻译成“一定” be bound to 竞争的社会势必会导致找工作的压力A competitive society is bound to make finding a job much difficult.总结：其实天龙八部就是教大家如何模仿句型，学有余力的同学可以继续进行句型仿写
26、的积累，以下举几个例子。1. owe/attribute A to B 将 A 归因 BMany people owe their success not to formal schooling but to self-education.很多人并不将他们的成功归结于正式教育。2. dedicate/devote oneself to 致力于I think it is very noble for him to dedicate himself to public service.我觉得他将自己投身于公共服务这件事非常地高尚。3. stem/result from 源于The pressure
27、 of finding a job among college students stems largely from the population explosion.大学生寻找工作的压力很大程度上来源于人口膨胀。4. lead to/result in/give rise to 导致Technological advances can lead to more efficient uses of natural resources and sustain economic growth.科技的发展可以使我们更有效率地使用自然资源以及维持经济增长。5. in terms of 在某一方面To
28、urism is becoming a global industry, an industry which ranks second to none in terms of size and global influence.旅游业已经成为一个世界产业，一个就规模和全球影响而言都独一无二的产业。第二部分：经典背景句（上过课的同学知道，我们把他成为 wnwdwslm 句）注：今年从 6.5 日开始，我每天会在微博上更新一个句子，使得大家循序渐进背诵。我会在发完十句后发一个汇总贴，并配上音频。以下句子仅供参考。这些句子一般用在引出主题或者观点前，加上背景。比如：人民生活水平显著提高，因此网络越来
29、越重要。网络越来越普及（The Internet has played an increasingly important role.）是观点或者主题，前面可以加上背景，比如随着改革开放，人民的生活水平有显著提高（With the reform and opening-up in recent decades in China, peoples living standard has been very much improved. ）连在一起：With the reform and opening-up in recent decades in China, peoples living s
30、tandard has been very much improved. The Internet has played an increasingly important role in our society.1. With the reform and opening-up in recent decades in China, peoples living standard has been very much improved. 随着改革开放，人民的生活水平有显著提高。2. With the development of economy and society, competitio
31、n is increasingly fierce.随着经济和社会的发展，竞争越来越激烈。3. It is well-known that we exist in a dynamic world with various difficulties. We can do nothing but face them. Attitude is the key point to take the first step.众所周知，我们生活在一个存在很多困难的动态的世界里，我们只能面对他们。态度是迈出第一步的关键点。4. Smartphones have penetrated every aspect of
32、 daily life.智能手机已经渗透入日常生活的方方面面。5. With the accelerated pace of contemporary life, peoples work and life are increasingly stressful. 随着当代生活的节奏加快，人们的工作和生活压力越来越大。6. Resource exhaustion, environment degradation, and aging population constitute the three major national issues confronting human beings.资源耗
33、尽，环境恶化，和老龄化人口组成了人类面临的三大问题。7. Life is ten percent what you make it and ninety percent how you take it. The value of life lies not in the length of days, but in the use we make of them. So having right values in life is very important for us, especially youngsters.生活的 10%在于你如何创造它，90% 在于你如何接受它，生活的价值不在于
34、天的长度，而在于我们的利用，因此具有正确的价值观非常重要，尤其对于年轻人。第三部分：六脉神剑（起承转合独评）我把六脉神剑总结为四个问题，更便于阅读。1. “两点”怎么表述？Firstly, Secondly, To begin with, Furthermore, On the one hand, On the other, In the first place, Besides, 2.“顺接”和“ 转接”怎么表述顺接：as a result / as a consequence / consequently / thus / hence / therefore转接however / neve
35、rtheless / nonetheless3.“总结”怎么表述总结in conclusion, all in all, in a word简而言之in short, in brief, to sum up如前所述as has been mentioned abovegiven the factors I have just outlined4.“个人观点 ”怎么表述in my eyesas for mefrom my perspectiveas far as I am concernedTo my knowledgeFrom my level of understanding附赠六脉神剑完整
36、版：启部：用于引导第一点首先：1. first, firstly, first of all; 2. to begin with, to start with; 3. in the first place, first and foremost一方面：1. on the one hand (on the other); 2. for one thing (for another thing).承部：承接前面观点其次 - second, secondly, third, thirdly进一步 - furthermore, whats more, moreover此外 - besides, in
37、addition结果- consequently, as a consequence/result, thus hence therefore, on this account, in light of this转部：转折语义相反技巧 1：but 改 although/in spite of/despite如：Selecting their favorite lecturer does bring great benefits to students study, but it also cause a number of problems.Although selecting their f
38、avorite lecturer does bring great benefits to students study, it also causes a number of problems.In spite of/despite its great benefits for students study, selecting their favorite lecturer does cause a number of problems.注：很多老师建议 but 改成 in spite of the fact that. 那么那些老师有兴趣去看看 GMAT 语法，这种写法叫 wordy 或
39、者 redundancy（冗长，累赘）。但是如果改成 in spite of this，那还可以。不过前面需要句话句掉。技巧 2：but 改 yet/while/whereas如：Many people argue that the spring festival gala should not be cancelled, but others adopt a completely different view.Many people argue that the spring festival gala should not be cancelled, while others adopt
40、a completely different view.此外还可以用：不幸地：sadly unfortunately相反地：on the contrary, by contrast, conversely事实上：as a matter of fact, in fact然而：nevertheless, nonetheless合部：小结上文中段落的内容总结：in conclusion, all in all, in a word简而言之：in short, in brief, to sum up如前所述：as has been noted / mentioned abovegiven the fa
41、ctors I have just outlinedtaking into account all the above factors (后面主语用 I)独部：个人观点标志词personally speaking 可以用 in my eyes, as for me, as I see itin my opinion 可以用 from my perspectivefrom my point of view 可以用 as far as I am concernedit seems to me that 可以用 from where I stand, my stance is that 评部：在观点
42、前可以加一些副词来评价Interestingly, surprisingly, more importantlyEspecially, particularlyUndoubtedly, apparently, evidently, obviously, conceivably 等等应用篇大家可以看下天龙八部和六脉神剑的威力注：今年我们有一个新的内容，增设真题练习，会用我们教授的套路给大家讲解，我微博和微信号会时时更新，千万不要错过了。应用范例 1：2011 年 12 月For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essa
43、y entitled Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will by commenting on the humorous saying, “Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world. Ive done it hundreds of times.” You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.参考：Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong WillAs a humorous saying go
44、es, “Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world. Ive done it hundreds of times.” This saying intends to inform us that a strong will plays an extremely important role in achieving success （主题）.Why, you may wonder, is a strong will so essential for success. To begin with, with the rapid devel
45、opment of economy, peoples living standard has been very much improved. However, competition is increasingly fierce. A strong will enables us to concentrate on our work and compete with others even in difficult time. Furthermore, it is well-known that we exist in a dynamic world with various new cha
46、nges. A strong will also allows us to persist on the road we choose. Given the factors I have just outlined, I personally argue that it is a strong will that exerts a positive impact on success (学会变换句式 ). As far as I am concerned, if one makes friends with those who have strong wills, he is more lik
47、ely to succeed in the future. 应用范例 2：2016 年 6 月六级For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on living in the virtual world. Try to imagine what will happen when people spend more and more time in the virtual world instead of interacting in the real world.天龙八部+六脉神剑最喜欢这类需要自己写背景段的
48、！第一段参考例文：There is a growing recognition that the Internet has played an increasingly important role in our daily life. It allows us to communicate more effectively, read the latest news, and make transaction online. Consequently, the past several years has witnessed a growing number of individuals w
49、ho are willing to indulge themselves in the virtual world. This will obviously exert a huge impact on our future. (65 words)应用范例 3：2016 年 6 月四级For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to express your thanks to one of your school teachers upon entering college. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. 信只是一个格式，重要的是里面的血肉，天龙八部搞定核心的中间段很轻松！信件的中间段参考：To begin with, I would like to express my sincere gratitude to your generous help. D
