陕西省华阴市2016高考英语二轮复习 写作选编（打包6套）.zip

- 1 -陕西（华阴市）2016 高考英语写作二轮选编（1）书面表达训练假设你是铁人中学的李华，将参加主题为“Please ride Bicycles”的英语演讲比赛。请撰写一份演讲稿，主要内容包括：1.目前汽车带来问题。2.骑自行车的益处。Good morning, everyone,Thank you【参考范文】Good morning, everyone,I’m Li Hua from TieRen Middle School. The topic of my speech is “Please ride Bicycles”.As is known to all, with the improvement of people’s living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport, bringing great convenience to our life. However, they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams.How can we solve the problems then? As far as I’m concerned, riding bicycles is a good solution. For one thing, bicycles don’t need any petrol and they are energy-saving. For another, bicycles are environmentally friendly because they won’t give off waste gas. What’s more, riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise and it is beneficial to our health.Therefore, let’s take the responsibility to build up a low-carbon city by riding bicycles. Come on and join us!Thank you!【2013 界广东省韶关市】基础写作 (共 1 小题，满分 15 分) 假如你是学校的校报记者。以下是南中国海的简介，请你根据以下内容，写一篇英文的简介，发表在校报上。- 2 -地理位置: 位居太平洋和印度洋之间的航运要冲，在经济上、国防上都具有重要的意义。面积 350 多万平方公里，其中属于我国管辖范围的有 210 万平方公里左右。气候特征：终年高温、雨量充沛。资源：中国南海海洋鱼类有 1500 多种，其中很多具有极高的经济价值。由于气候适宜、雨量充沛，生长着 200 多种高等植物。海底资源十分丰富，尤其是海底石油和天然气储量巨大。【写作内容】请根据以上简介，写一篇南中国海的英文简介，内容包括：1.地理位置；2.气候特征；3.资源；【参考词汇】航运要冲 a major shipping juncture 【写作要求】只能使用 5 个英语句子表达全部内容。【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。_______________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】基础写作：The South China Sea, located in the major shipping juncture between the Pacific and the Indian Ocean, has much economic and national defense significance. It has an area of 3,500,000 square km, 2,100,000 of which is officially under the rule of our country. The climate there is typical maritime, with high temperatures and abundant rainfall all year round. Because of this, there are more than 200 advanced plant species flourishing in the area. Moreover, more than 1500 fishes can be found here, most of which have high economic values, and with huge amount of oil and natural gas reserve, the area is exceptionally rich in maritime resources. - 3 -【2013 界广东省韶关市】读写任务（共 1 小题，满分 25 分）阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇 150 词左右的英语短文。The arrival of World Book and Copyright Day always draws public attention to young people's reading, but mere temporary attention cannot increase the popularity of reading. The lack of reading books is becoming an increasingly severe problem in China. According to a survey by the United Nations Educational Scientific and Cultural Organization (UNESCO), Shanghai residents read most in China, with only eight books read a year on average. About 1.3 billion Chinese people read less than one book every year, if textbooks are not taken into account. Nowadays, children's spare time is occupied by attending various tutorial classes, taking exam preparation training, and learning piano, painting, dancing, weiqi, or other techniques. “Childhood is a good period for reading literature. Reading can wake up the true nature of children, and good education should fit children's nature,“ said Zhou Yimin, who is also a teacher. Scholars are also worried about another adverse impact of the lack of reading. “If a child had never read a book from beginning to end before the fourth grade, he or she may lack the ability to read an entire book,“ said Jiang Junjing, an experienced teacher. What is worse, it may result in a lack of the ability to grasp the whole situation. Children who lacked the ability to read an entire book in childhood may end up being unable to grasp the whole picture or manage the whole team when they grow up. 【写作内容】1. 以约 30 个词概括短文的要点。- 4 -2. 以约 120 词表达你就 “阅读书籍”发表看法，并要包括下列要点：（1）你认为阅读书籍重要吗？为什么？（2）请举例说明你的观点。【写作要求】1. 作文中你可以使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不能直接引用原文中的句子。2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。【参考范文】任务写作：Reading booksAccording to a recent survey, the lack of reading books is a serious problem in China. Too busy with school work and tutorial classes, children seldom have chances to read, which raises great concern among the scholars about the serious consequence. I strongly believe that reading books are very important. Firstly, as Francis Bacon put it, “reading makes a full man”. By reading different books, we perfect ourselves mentally. “Histories make men wise; poems witty; the mathematics subtitle; natural philosophy deep; moral grave; logic and rhetoric able to contend”. Secondly, good books can delight, entertain and educate us. The importance of reading books is gaining new insight or perspectives on issues and helps us to have a new understanding of the world around. We can apply the insight in everyday life or as a way of building upon the knowledge that already encompasses our mind and enrich our lives.One of my favorite book is Pride and Prejudice written by Jane Austen. Basically, this is a story of courtship and marriage, but through the humorous, sometimes satirical tone of the author, I get to know about how women lived their lives and what the upper and middle class people centered around in the late18th century England. I smile at the wit of Mr. Bennet, laugh at the mindlessness of Mrs. Bennet. I am totally impressed by Lizzy’s eloquence when she debated with Mr. Darcy, and equally moved when Mr. Darcy finally admitted he had an affection - 5 -for Lizzy. In a word, with this book, I temporarily escape from the 21st century world, entertaining myself and at the same time broadening my horizon. We read books for pleasure. They entertain us. And we read them for profit. They enlighten us. Good books draw us into their imaginative worlds and engage us with the power of their invention. They enlarge our understanding of ourselves and deepen our appreciation of life. Therefore, I think reading books is very important. 【2013 界广东省深圳市一模】基础写作（共 1 小题，满分 15 分）你接受了一项写作任务，要求英语校报写一篇“校史展览馆”的介绍。[写作内容]请根据以下信息，介绍你校“校史展览馆”的基本情况。[写作要求]只能用 5 个句子表达全部内容[评分标准]句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。- 6 -【参考范文】基础写作（共 1 小题，满分 15 分）Located on the 1st floor of the library, the School Exhibition Hall, which covers an area of about 300 square meters, has a history of more than forty years. With varieties of forms like words, pictures, real objects, videos and so on, it gives us a bird view of the development of our school since 1942. Here we can find brief introductions to headmasters of all terms, and the prizes got by outstanding students and teachers. It has also witnessed the advanced teaching concepts and proud achievements. The Hall is a great place for us to see the long history and rich culture of our school，which encourages us to study harder, be grateful to our school and serve our motherland.第一节：一、基础写作评分原则1、本题总分为 15 分，按 3 个方面给分。2、评分时，首先根据文章句子结构的准确性，信息内容的完整性和连贯性, 初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。3、只能使用 5 个句子表达全部的内容。4、评分时，应注意信息内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的准确性、上下文连贯性及语言的得体性。5、拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。6、如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。二、内容要点：（可以有不同的组合）1．图书馆地点、面积及历史；2．展览的多种形式展示的发展；3．校长介绍及师生获奖情况；4．先进的教学理念和成就；5．了解校史的作用。三、评分标准- 7 -7-8 具有很好的语言运用能力；语法和句子结构准确性高，词汇方面使用较好，只有少许错误。5-6 具有较好的语言运用能力；语法和句子结构准确性较好，有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。3-4 语言运用能力一般；语法和句子结构基本准确，语法结构或词汇方面的错误不影响理解。1-2 语言运用能力较差；语法和句子结构基本不够准确，语法结构或词汇方面的错误较多，而且影响了对句子意义的理解。0 语言运用能力很差；语法、句子结构、词汇错误很多，句子意义无法理解。语 言备注 每多或少写一个句子，扣 1 分。5 包括了所有信息内容。4 包括了大部分信息内容。3 包括了基本信息内容。2 包括了小部分信息内容。1 包括了少许信息内容。内 容0 没有包括所提供的信息内容。2 内容连贯，而且结构紧凑。1.5 内容连贯性比较好，而且结构比较紧凑。1 内容连贯性较差，而且结构不够紧凑。连 贯0 内容缺乏连贯性，而且结构松散。备注 文不对题，给 0 分。【参考范文】读写任务（共 1 小题，满分 25 分） Li Yong, once a good student, became a very disappointing one. Having realized that, he carved some encouraging words on the desk to show his determination, which gave Li Hua a mixed feeling. Li Hua, a good friend of Li Yong’s, was moved by his words, for the words - 8 -showed he has realized his fault and decided to change. It also shows he is responsible and can face his mistakes bravely.However, curving on a desk is not right at all. If I were the desk, I would tell him: the knife carving hurts me and makes me look ugly. As the public property of our school, you should love me. You said action speaks louder than words. Why not keep the words in mind and take actions to behave well? As teenage students, we must remember that study comes first. So I often help my classmates with difficulty so that we can make progress together. Also we should encourage each other so as to make our class a better one. Only in this way, can we be good students in school, and make great contribution to the country in the future. 第二节：一、读写任务评分原则1、本试题总分为 25 分，分两部分给分 ① 短文概括 5 分 ② 主题写作 20 分。2、强调内容健康，观点鲜明，说服力强，表述清晰。可参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。3、评分时，选根据文章语言的规范、内容的合适及篇章的连贯性初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。4、语言规范：拼写与标点符号是语言规范的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。5、如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。二、内容要点 1. 以约 30 个词概括以上博文的主要内容。2. 然后以约 120 个词就李勇的做法发表你的看法，内容包括：(1) 李华为何因李勇的行为而感动，并说明其理由；(2) 假如你是“课桌” ，你想对李勇说什么，为什么？(3) 作为学生，你是如何为班级做出自己的贡献的？三、各档次的给分范围和要求：- 9 -项目分值 评分标准5 按照要求概括了原文的全部主要信息，没有增加与原文无关的信息，没有照抄原文的句子。语言结构正确，行文规范。4 基本按照要求概括了原文的主要信息，没有增加与原文无关的信息，没有照抄原文的句子。语言结构正确，行文规范。3 基本按照要求概括了原文的主要信息，但包含一些不相关的信息，有个别句子抄自原文。语言结构基本正确，行文比较规范。2 不能按照要求概括原文的主要信息，包含较多不相关的信息，有较多的抄袭。语言结构不够准确，行文不够规范。概括0-1 没有按照要求概括原文的主要信息，基本是不相关的信息，大多数句子都抄自原文。语言结构不准确，行文不规范。18-20 包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题明确，内容丰富。词汇丰富，用词得当。能有效运用合适的语言结构，而且没有（或极少）语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性好。14-17包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题明确，个别内容不准确或者不相关。词汇较丰富，有个别用词错误。较好地运用了合适的语言结构，有少许的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性较好。写作11-13 包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题比较明确，个别内容不准确或者不相关。词汇较丰富，有个别用词错误。较好地运用了合适的语言结构，有少许的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性较好。- 10 -7-10 包含题目所给的部分内容要点。主题基本明确，有些内容不准确或者不相关。词汇有限，有较多的用词错误。语言结构出现较多的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性一般。4-6 只包含题目所给的个别内容要点。多数内容不相关或者不准确。文章有些地方照抄源文。词汇贫乏，有较多的用词错误。大多数的句子出现语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性差。1-3 只包含与题目所给要点内容有关的一些单词。主题不明确，文章基本照抄原文。词汇极其贫乏，基本不能正确用词。几乎没有正确的句子。篇章结构零乱。0 以下几种情况，给0分：1）完全抄袭原文（或其它文章）2）文不对题3）只写一些零散的单词，完全没有表达完整的内容- 1 -陕西（华阴市）2016 高考英语写作二轮选编（2）为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑 Jamie，收到一封署名为 Worried 的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点如下：1．表示理解并给予安慰；2．提出建议并说明理由。注意：1．词数 120 左右；2．信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；3．信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。参考词汇：temper n. 脾气，情绪Hi Worried，I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a had time at the moment. Yours,Jamie【考点】考察半开放性作文【写作指导】本文属于半开放性作文，要为你编辑 Jamie 的口吻回复 Worried 的求助信，他的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。要注意书信的格式和特殊用词。要点：1.很遗憾听说对方有此问题。并解释每个人都可能会遇见这样的问题，所以不必担心。只有的是要学会控制自己的脾气。2.提出建议：与信任的人进行交流，告诉别人你的困扰，释放自己的压力。同时多参加各种户外活动，和朋友多玩球类运动。保持乐观的心态。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。- 2 -【一句多译】每个人都会有过这样的一段时期，在这时情况都很糟糕，所以你不要太担心了。（1）The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don't have to worry much.（2）It is true that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don't have to worry much.【参考范文】Hi Worried,I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don't have to worry much. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret. Here are three useful tips:First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your ftiends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger. And third, remain optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.I hope you'll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.Yours,Jamie【2013 界广东省潮州市高三上质量检测卷】基础写作（共 1 小题，满分 15 分) 【写作内容】目前，越来越多的青少年参加各类电视节目的才艺表演（talent shows） 。对此，中学生的看法各不相同。赞 同 不 赞 同- 3 -1、丰富社会经验；2、增强自信；3、全面发展。1、模仿多，原创少；2、沉迷于“明星梦” ；3、不利于学习。【写作要求】1、只能使用 5 个句子表达全部内容；2、文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。【参考范文】基础写作（共 1 小题，满分 15 分）At present an increasing number of teenagers are taking part in TV talent shows, about which students’ opinions are divided. Some think that it is a stage to show their talents of art, contributing much to their social experience and self-confidence. What’s more, it’s good for their overall development.However, other students hold the different idea that the teenagers are just imitating others rather than showing something original. Besides, some are such “star dream” followers that they can’t put their heart and soul into their study, thus affecting their study badly.【2013 界广东省潮州市高三上质量检测卷】读写任务（共 1 小题，满分 25 分）阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇 150 词左右的英语短文。A poor boy had one penny left. He was so hungry that he decided to beg for a meal at the next house. A lovely young woman opened the door. She thought he looked hungry and brought him a large glass of milk. He drank it slowly, and then asked, “How much do I owe you？” “You don't owe me anything.” She replied. “Mother - 4 -has taught me never to accept pay for a kindness.” As Howard Kelly left that house, he felt stronger physically and mentally.Years later the young woman became critically ill and was sent to a big hospital. Dr. Howard Kelly, now famous, was called in for the consultation (咨询). He recognized her at once and he was determined to do his best to save her life.After a long struggle, the battle was won. Dr. Kelly requested the business office to pass the final bill to him for approval. He looked at it and then wrote something on it. The bill was sent to her room. She opened it, and the note on the side of the bill caught her attention: “Paid in full with a glass of milk, (signed) Dr. Howard Kelly.”【写作内容】1、以约 30 词概括上文的主要内容；2、以约 120 词谈谈你阅读了该故事后的感受，内容包括：(1) 你从这个故事领悟到什么道理？(2) 举一个例子说明当你遇到困难时，你的朋友是怎么做的？(3) 同时，你是如何报答你朋友的帮助的？【写作要求】 1、在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；2、作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。【参考范文】读写任务（共 1 小题，满分 25 分）When a poor boy was hungry, a young woman gave him a glass of milk. Years later, as a famous doctor, he saved the woman's life and returned the final bill to her in return for her help.- 5 -Greatly inspired by the story, I learn that once helped by others, we should be grateful. If my friend is in need of help, I will comfort him and spare no effort to help him out.It occurred to me that once I was about to go home when it started to rain heavily. Having left my umbrella at home, I could do nothing but stay in the classroom. At this moment, my classmate Henry gave me his umbrella. His kindness and willingness to help greatly impressed me. Several days before an important exam, Henry fell seriously ill. Every day after school, I went to the hospital to accompany him, helping him catch up with his lessons. Eventually, he got a good mark.【2013 界广东省东山中学高三下入学摸底考试】基础写作（共 1 小题，满分 15 分）假设你叫李华，是新浪微博（sina microblog）的一名实名注册用户。最近你在网上看了一部经典的电影《阿甘正传》 （Forrest Gump） ，觉得很值得一看，并在微博中向广大博友推荐该部影片。观看影片：《阿甘正传》 ；出品年份：1994 年；主演：Tom Hanks，获六项奥斯卡大奖内容介绍：阿甘（Forrest Gump）用乐观的态度，面对生活中不确定的因素带来的各种挑战和困难推荐理由：1、树立了一个好榜样，激励我们勇敢面对挑战，永不放弃,对我们高三学生很有指导意义； 2、观看英文影片有利于提高我们英语的听说水平，帮助我们了解更多的外国文化。建议： 博友们介绍几部自己最欣赏的电影，相互交流转发(1154)| 收藏| 评论(950) 今天 15:39 来自新浪微博- 6 -【写作内容】根据以上内容要点，用英语写一篇微博推荐该影片，写作要点：1. 向大家推荐这部制作于 1994 年的经典影片； 2. 推荐的理由；3. 向博友们建议。参考词汇： 奥斯卡 Oscar【写作要求】只能用 5 个句子表达全部内容。 开头已为你写好。 【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。【参考范文】基础写作（共 1 小题，满分 15 分）Dear bloggers，I am glad to share one of my favorite movies, Forest Gump, with you. The film Forest Gump, made in 1994, was starred by a famous actor Tom Hanks and finally won six Oscar prizes. In the movie, Mr. Gump sets us a good example to face challenges bravely and never to give up, which is instructive to us Senior 3 students. Besides, watching English movies is good to improve our listening and speaking skills in English and it can also help us learn more foreign culture. My dear bloggers, I suggest we each recommend several movies so that we can share our favourite.