1、英语写作： How to keep healthy导学案班级姓名【学习内容】英语写作 -How to keep healthy【学习目标】通过此次写作，让学生从词汇、句式和连贯性入手，掌握3 种主要的英语作文的润色技巧，从而提高英语写作水平。矚慫润厲钐瘗睞枥庑赖賃軔。以“健康 ”为话题进行写作训练，强化学生的健康意识，从而养成健康的生活习惯。【学习重难点】三种作文润色技巧的灵活应用，并以“how to keep healthy 为题”，进行限时训练。【学习方法】自主学习与小组合作探究相结合的学习方法。【学习过程】Step 1 Pre-writing .Enjoy a song - “Exerc
2、ise Song ” My Mum and Dad used to tell me, “a healthy mind needs a healthy body 聞.創沟燴鐺”險爱氇谴净祸測。Whats the moral of the story,“have a healthy mind, you should have a healthy残body骛楼諍.锩”瀨濟溆塹籟婭骒。 .BrainstormHow do you keep healthy?Step 2 WritingTask .What are the criteria ( 标准 ) of a good composition? 酽锕
3、极額閉镇桧猪訣锥顧荭。Words and phrases (词汇 ) “记忆大比拼 ”Translate the underlined words and phrases. （ The more, the better） 彈贸摄尔霁毙攬砖卤庑诒尔。1.俗话说 , 健“康是第一财富 ”， “ The first wealth is health”.2.换句话说3.宝贵的，珍贵的4.对 有益5.对 有害6.健康在工作和学习中起重要作用Health in work and study.7.我们应该保持饮食均衡We should keep8.蔬 菜 和 水 果 中 富 含 纤 维 和 维 生 素 Ve
4、getables andfruitvitamins and fibres.9 .（身体）健康謀荞抟箧飆鐸怼类蒋薔點鉍。10. 进行体育锻炼 11）强身健体12）我们可以步行去学校而不是乘车we can walk to the school taking a bus. 厦礴恳蹒骈時盡继價骚卺癩。13）有一个好的生活习惯14）改掉坏习惯Sentences (句式 ) “趁热打铁，佳句活用”1）课文佳句“ Nothing could be better.” (M3U2)亮点提炼比较级的否定表示最高级。1 / 3佳句活用 than health. 没有什么比健康更珍贵。2）课文佳句Anotherbig
5、 quake whichwas almost as strong as the firstone shookTangshan.(M1U4) Weought to combine our ideas and provide a balanced menu with food fullof energy and fibre. (M3U2) It is also a treasure decorated with gold and jewels.(M2U1) 茕桢广鳓鯡选块网羈泪镀齐。亮点提炼从句、形容词短语和分词作后置定语。佳句活用We should eat more vegetables and
6、 fresh fruitsvitaminsand fibre , more foodprotein, but less foodfat. 我们应该多吃富含维生素和纤维的蔬菜水果，多吃含有蛋白质的食物，但少吃高脂肪的食物。鹅娅尽損鹌惨歷茏鴛賴縈诘。3）课文佳句It was my sisterwho/ thatfirst had the idea to cycle along the entire Mekong river.(M3U2) 籟丛妈羥为贍偾蛏练淨槠挞。亮点提炼强调句型：it is/ was +被强调成分 +that/who + 。佳句活用vitamins , fibre and pro
7、tein andhelp the body fight diseases.正是维生素、 纤维和蛋白质帮助骨头和肌肉的生长以及抵抗病魔。預頌圣鉉儐歲龈讶骅籴買闥。4）课文佳句Native English speakers can understand each othereven if they do notspeak thesame kind of English.(M1U2) 渗釤呛俨匀谔鱉调硯錦鋇絨。亮点提炼 even if 引导让步状语从句，此类连词还有even though, though, although. 铙誅卧泻噦圣骋贶頂廡缝勵。佳句活用. 尽管垃圾食品尝起来很好，但它对健康是
8、有害的。5）课文佳句 It was obvious that the manager of the coffee shop was waiting for Li Fang to leave.(M3U1) 擁締凤袜备訊顎轮烂蔷報赢。亮点提炼 it 用作形式主语。另如：it is/was + adj.+ (for sb.) + to do sth.贓熱俣阃歲匱阊邺镓騷鯛汉。佳句活用. 每天进行体育锻炼是必要的。6）课文佳句 They may start as a group of high-school students, for whom practicing their music in so
9、meone s home is the first step to fame. (M2U5)坛摶乡囂忏蒌鍥铃氈淚跻馱。 Women are not only allowed, but (also) play a very important role in gymnastics, athletics,team sports and (M2U2)蜡變黲癟報伥铉锚鈰赘籜葦。亮点提炼动名词用作主语。注意：此时谓语动词用单三形式。并列结构：notonly but (also)買鲷鴯譖昙膚遙闫撷凄届嬌。佳句活用. 体育锻炼不仅能够强身健体，还能放松头脑。7）课文佳句“？ ” (M3U2)亮点提炼 the
10、+比较级 ,the +比较级表示 “越 ，越 ”佳句活用. 我们运动得越多，就会变得越健康。8）课文佳句 They were not cleverer than me , but they did pass their exams.(M1U5) this gift was the Amber room , which was given this name because several tons of amber were used tomake it.綾镝鯛駕櫬鹕踪韦辚糴飙钪。亮点提炼助动词“do(did, does) + 动词原形 ”表示强调。which 引导的非限制性定语从句。 驅踬髏
11、彦浃绥譎饴憂锦諑琼。佳句活用 Igetting rid ofbad habits of smoking, drinking alcohol and staying up, .我的确建议改掉吸烟、酗酒及熬夜等坏习惯，这些对健康有极大的伤害。猫虿驢绘燈鮒诛髅貺庑献鵬。9）课文佳句 Only then did we decide to answer violence with violence. (M1U5) Are youafraid that your friend would not understand what you are going through?锹籁饗迳琐筆襖鸥娅薔嗚訝。亮点提炼
12、“only +状语 ” 放在句首，使用部分倒装。what 引导的宾语从句。2 / 3佳句活用 Only if you stick to aboveto be in an excellent condition. 只要你坚持我上文提到的方法，就必定会身体健康。 構氽頑黉碩饨荠龈话骛門戲。Coherence （连贯性） “形如流水，一气呵成”Try to write thetransitional words.（The more, the better）輒峄陽檉簖疖網儂號泶蛴镧。1. 并列： and,2. 递进： besides, 3. 转折： but,4. 顺序： first, 5. 因果： so, 6.总结 in a word,Task .Write a composition titled尧侧閆繭絳闕绚勵“ How to keep实healthy际演练，体验”成.功“ ”蜆贅瀝纰。Step 3 Post-writingShare your composition with your classmates.【学习反思】1.本节课我的表现自评2.本节课我学会了我还需要提高的地方3 / 3
