1、根据下面提示以Have a healthy lifestyle为题写一篇短文1简述以下现象：（1）健康之重要人尽皆知。（2）许多青少年不注重健康问题，假期尤甚。长时间看电视，通宵上网聊天、 玩游戏。导致的危害如：影响视力，身体虚弱，缺乏人际交往。2简述你的看法，提出你的建议。要求：（1）内容完整，层次清楚，语言流畅。 （2）词数100左右，标题已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：交流communicate 心理健康 mental healthStep1: lead-inJust now I gave out a topic of an essay. Today we will learn how
2、to write an english composition. Step2: What makes a good piece of writing?A. Neat handwriting good first impressionB. Content everything required includedC. Structure well organized and smoothly developedD. Language no chinglish, no grammatical mistakes, exactly used words and relatively changed se
3、ntence patternsStep3: four steps to write A. topic exploring 审题 B. wording and sentence making 构词 成句 C. essay writing 成篇 D. improving 修订 explore the type of the writing explore the tense explore the person explore the main points A. topic exploring the structure Para1. The importance of keeping heal
4、thy Para2. The phenomenon of unhealthy life Para3. My opinion and suggestions B. wording and sentence makinga. wordingas we all know be of importance teenagers pay attention to spend time doing watch TV surf the Internet all night play games chat with others near-sighted become weak lose the chance
5、to communicate with others face to face in my opinion/viewb. Sentence making1. As is known to all, the health is of great importance in our life. Only keep healthy, can we study well. As is known to all, health is of great importance for us. Only when we are healthy, can we study well and enjoy life
6、. 2. They watching TV for a long time or surf the Internet, playing computer games or chatting with others all night. They watch TV for a long time or surf the Internet, playing computer games or chatting with others all night.3. A lot of teenagers not pay attention to healthy problem, especially du
7、ring the holiday. A lot of teenagers dont pay attention to their health, especially during the holiday.4. Also, we can listening music to made ourselves relaxed. Also, they can listen to music to make themselves relaxed.C. preparing a draftD. improving Have a healthy lifestyle As we all know, health
8、 is very important. Only when we are healthy can we study w ell and enjoy life. However, many teenagers dont pay any attention to their health, especially during the holiday. And they spend too much time watching TV, playing games and chatting on the Internet all night, which is bad for their health
9、. Firstly, this may make them get near-sighted. Besides, their bodies become much weaker. Thirdly, they will lose the chance to communicate with others face to face as they never go out, which may have a bad effect on their mental health. In my opinion, instead of spending their time in front of the TV or the computer, they should have a healthy lifestyle, going out to take some exercise, playing some sports and visiting some friends.
