1、高三英语专题复习之五,书面表达 ,NMET对书面表达的要求,要求考生根据所给情景，用英语写一篇100个单词左右的短文 情景包括目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等；提供情景的形式有图画、图表、提纲等。本部分满分25分，所需时间约为30分钟。,NMET书面表达评分原则,1、先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定档次。,第五档. 2125分 第四档. 1620分 第三档. 1115分,第二档. 610分第一档. 15分0分,语言地道，规范,覆盖所有内容要点,2、主要内容：内容要点；词汇和语法的数量和准确性；上下文的连贯；语言的得体性,应用了较多的语法结构和词汇,有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,3、拼写和标点是语言
2、准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。,4、词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去2分。,5、如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。,词汇,句型 （高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）,1.覆盖了所有的要点2. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇3. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑,要点全,连接词,如何算是一篇好文章？,1. 次重点：“内容要点” 中涵盖的内容 2. 大错：句子结构谓语构成词序语态时态,补充解释：,返回,3、小错： 名词单复数 第三人称单数 拼写 标点符号 字母大小写,返回,少量错误：1个大错或34个小错 一些错误：2个大错或56个小错 较多错误：3
3、个大错或78个小错 错误多： 4个大错或910个小错 错误很多 5个大错或10个小错,大错,小错,错误的界定：,提醒注意：,1. “书面表达” 不是真正意义上的写作，只是用文字基本表达出要表达的内容。,2看懂图画或文字说明，其次是找出要点。,People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. (公园是公众休闲的地方）,应用较多的语法结构和词汇,3.要用所学过的语言知识来构思,避免使用没有把握的词,What is more,it will become necessary to build gates and walls.
4、（需建大门、围墙。）,4.要尽量用所学过的句型来表达。(我们所学过的句型足以表达这些内容。),People need a place where theycan rest and enjoy themselves.It will become necessary to build gates and walls,which will do harm to the appearance.,5.在很有把握的情况下，用一两句复合句(如使用状语从句或定语从句,或宾语从句) 如做不到这一点，还不如简单句 ,40% think that fees should becharged because you
5、need money to pay gardeners and other workers. They suggest fees should be charged low.,Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away.What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls.,6.有效地使用连接词,On the other hand,40%think that fees should be charged because you need money
6、 to pay gardeners and other workers,and to buy plants and young trees.They suggest, however, fees should be charged low.,如故事性的文章，一般应使用过去时态，且前后一致。说明性的文章，大体应使用一般现在时态。,7.要注意时态的用法,如果在整篇文章一致使用与过去时间相关的时态，尽量不予扣分；如果混合使用，可酌情扣分,时态运用的一般要求,最近，你校正在参加某英文报的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票？请你根据下表所提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。,题例：,D
7、ear Editor,Im writing to tell you about the discussion weve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.Opinions are divided on the question. 60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees.They believe a public park should be free of charge.,One possible version,People n
8、eed a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more,it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.,On the other hand,40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers,and to buy plants and young trees.They suggest,howerver,fees should be charged low.Yours truly,Li Hua,返回,T H E E N D,2,金亚洲 http:/ zsj352uip,
