1、英语作文讲评,现象类作文此类作文主要要求考生对某一社会现象进行解释并加以评论，其基本结构是：首先说明现状;其次阐述这种现状产生或存在的原因;最后做出分析，指出其影响，提出解决建议或总结观点。 a.现象阐释类作文关键句式Recently, the phenomenon ofhas become the focus of the public concern. 近年来，现象引起公众极大地关注。,It is no easy/simple task to offer the reason for this phenomenon which involves more than one complica
2、ted factor. 要解释该现象的原因并不容易，因为其中涉及到很多复杂的因素。 Among all the important/ convincing reasons for,one should be emphasized在所有重要、有力的原因中，我们应当重点关注 The significant effects of this phenomenon are undeniable, which can be concluded as the following aspects.这一现象的重大影响是不可忽略的，可大致归结为以下几个方面：,On one hand, ; On the other
3、 hand, 一方面，;另一方面， 现象阐释类作文框架Recently, the phenomenon of has become the focus of the public concern. What are the reasons for the phenomenon? On my standpoint, there are several suggestions as follows.,b.问题解决类作文关键句式In recent years, with the development of the economy/society/peoples living standard, w
4、e are facing a serious phenomenon that目前，随着经济/社会的发展/人民生活水平的提高，我们正面临着一个严峻的社会现象，。 In order to solve this problem, it is essential for us to discuss the causes of it. 为了解决这一问题，我们有必要首先分析其原因。,What has caused this problem? It seems to me that there are several reasons as follows. 在我看来主要有如下几条原因：First of al
5、l, (_).What is more, (_).Last but not the least,(_).首先，;其次，;最后， In view of the seriousness of the phenomenon, effective measures should be taken as follows. 考虑到这一现象的严重性，有关部门必须采取如下有效措施。,On one hand, it is high time that people all over China realized the seriousness of the phenomenon; on the other ha
6、nd, the government should issue laws and regulations to put the situation under control.一方面，必须使举国上下意识到这一现象的严重性;另一方面，政府应当制定相应的法律法规来控制这一局面。 In recent years, with the development of the economy/society/peoples living standard, we are facing a serious phenomenon that,In recent years, with the developmen
7、t of the economy/society/peoples living standard, we are facing a serious phenomenon thatWhat has caused this problem? It seems to me that there are several reasons as follows. First of all, (_).What is more, (_).Last but not the least,(_).,In view of the seriousness of the phenomenon, effective mea
8、sures should be taken. On one hand, it is high time that people all over China realized the seriousness of the phenomenon; On the other hand, the government should issue laws and regulations to put the situation under control. Only in these way can we successfully solve the problem.,As an old saying
9、 goes,（题干中的语句）. Nowadays,(描述题干中要求分析的现象). This, however, has made great influence on （对哪些方面产生影响）. No one could deny the fact that.（阐述现象带来的好处）. Nonetheless(也可以用Nevertheless), people are also annoyed by (概述现象带来的坏处). First, the development of （现象）has brought .（列举现象带来的第一个坏处）. For example, .（举例进一步阐述第一个坏处）
10、Second, .(列举现象带来的第二个坏处). Specifically, (进一步具体阐述第二个坏处). Therefore, it can be easily find that,the disadvantages of (现象) outweigh its advantages.In order to remove the disadvantages, we could introduce two main measures. On one hand, we could （提出第一个建议）, which would （简要说明该建议能带来什么影响）. One the other hand
11、, we could（提出第二个建议）, which will probably （概述该建议可能会带来的好处）.,第一段是引入话题即题干中要求分析的现象，第二段辩证分析该现象的影响，若该现象的弊大于利，考生可按照模板中第二段进行描写；若该现象利大于弊，则考生需要把模板中的好处和坏处调换一下，即先简要写一下该现象带来的坏处，之后，笔锋一转，着重分析好处有哪些。分析完利弊之后，在第三段总结全文，给出自己的建议和看法。建议考生在平时练习写作现象分析型题目时，灵活运用上述模板，熟练掌握，在考场上遇到类似的题目能够驾轻就熟，写出好文章。,1、学霸意识； 不是小富即安，而是使自己某科或总体成绩成为无可撼
12、动的霸主。 2、扬长避短； 让优者更优，让弱者尽量跟上。 3、鹤立鸡群。 做带动他人的学习引领者，而不是瞻前顾后、畏手畏脚的被动学习者。就像北大清华的毕业生，不是忙于找工作，而是要为别人创造工作的机会。,返回目录,如何才能多拿一分、多对一题呢？ 1，要养成清算应得而未得的分数的习惯； 2，要清除屡犯重复错误的毛病； 3，克服答题不规范的弊端； 4，改正审题不清、题意理解不准确的错误； 5，留意粗心大意出错的地方； 6，加强识记，保证记忆题的得分； 7，训练答题的速度，学会正确用时；8，提高书写质量； 9，注意答题步骤的规范性和严密性； 10，严格遵守题目的要求。,返回目录,如何进行四项能力训练？ 听：按学校和老师布置的听力训练认真进行训练 说：上课认真听讲，积极开口说。鹤立鸡群可激励自己。 读：坚持做阅读，做试卷，直到高考，不停息； 写：认真写好每次作文。,
