1、Book II Unit 1 Cultural relics writing,By Move Song 2017 11.20,Content,Lead in,Writing,Exercise,Homework,1,2,3,4,书面表达一般步骤,1.认真审题，把握题材 一审体裁（议论文记叙文说明文应用文）二审格式（书信通知演讲稿）三审人称（根据题目需要对人称进行合理的选择定位）四审时态（主要使用什么时态）,2.紧扣主题，组织要点，确定段落，列出提纲 一、确定主题，确保不离题 二、确定要点和段落 三、写出关键词、短语和句子。,3.遣词造句，初步成文 一、确保题材明确，信息全面，要点清晰。 二、根据
2、要点和重点词汇的句法功能和语法规则，按照提示遣词造句。 三、将零散的句子排列成主谓一致，时态呼应，脉络分明，合乎逻辑，内容完整的短文。,4.通读审核，查漏补缺，认真誊写。 一、认真检查，仔细核对，及时修改，（内容要点是否遗漏，字母大小写是否正确，单词拼写是否有误，习惯用语搭配是否恰当，时态是否呼应，主谓是否一致，是否有中式英语出现等） 二、认真誊写，确保书写清晰美观。,Money is more essential than time. Failure is the mother of success. Health is more important than wealth. It is w
3、orth rebuilding Yuanmingyuan.,Do you agree or disagree? Why？,英语书面表达之,一. 写 作 步 骤 : 从正反两个方面来论证某一观点，时态一般用一般现在时。通常分为四个步骤来写： 第一段：文章开头，开门见山，引入话题（提出总论点） 第二段：阐述提纲中列举的第一种看法，给出理由或者举例说明:主题句理由 第三段：阐述提纲中列举的第二种看法，给出理由或者举例说明:主题句理由 第四段：得出结论，画龙点睛，结束全文（表明自己观点）,正反观点式议论文,第1段:Recently weve had a discussion about whether
4、 we should. （导入话题）Our opinions are divided on this topic.（观点有分歧） 第2段:Most of the students are in favour of it.（正方观点）Here are the reasons. First. Second. Finally.(列出 23个赞成的理由) 第3段:However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点)Their reasons are as follows. In the first place. Whats more. In addit
5、ion.(列出23个反对的理由) 第4段:Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.（个人观点）,二写作模板, Nowadays,plays an increasingly important role in our daily life. Recently there is a heated/hot discussion about.When asked about,different peopl
6、e will hold different opinions.People hold/have various opinions/views on.,开头句,三. 基 础 句 型, However, disadvantages are also obvious. (过渡句) on the contrary，正相反 whats more， 而且 most importantly， 最重要的是 on the one hand, . on the other hand, .一方面，另一方面 Every coin has two sides.,过渡句, in my opinion/in my view
7、/as far as I am concerned /personally we should pay attention to. Therefore，I am fully convinced that.我深信 Only in this way can we We should，which, of course, will benefit ,结尾句,四. 衔 接 词 表列举：first(ly), second(ly), third(ly), last(ly); in the first/second/third place; Above all、first of all 表举例：for exa
8、mple, for instance, such as. 表补充：besides、in addition、moreover、whats more、furthermore 表转折让步：but、however、nevertheless、yet、 in spite of、despite、though、although、even though、even if 表对比：on the one handon the other hand； For one thingfor another,表原因：because、 as、since、because of、now that、thanks to、due to、o
9、wing to、as a result of 表结果：therefore、thus、as a result、so 表结论：in a word、in brief、in general、in short、in conclusion、on the whole、to sum up、all in all 表解释：That is (to say)、namely、in other words,五 实 战 演 练,人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见。请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文，介绍人们的不同观点，并表达自己的看法。,注意：1. 文章必须包括表格中的全部内容。 2. 参考词汇： 网络朋友online f
10、riend(s)； 上当受骗to be cheated,【模板展示】Recently our class had a heated discussion over whether(探讨的问题)or not. Different people have different opinions. Some people say yes. They think that(支持的理由一). And(支持的理由二). Besides (支持的理由三，此点略低于前两个).Others, however, think students should not. They say(反对的理由一). And(反对的
11、理由二). In addition,(以别于前面的Besides) (反对的理由三).It is my opinion that(自己的观点)students should place their study, health and safety before other things.(理由一至二).,【佳篇品读】Recently our class had a heated discussion over whether middle school students should make friends on line. Different people have different o
12、pinions. Some people say making friends on line is their favorite. They think that the Internet helps them make more friends. And chatting on line, students can more freely express their feelings and opinions. Besides they may even get help with their foreign language studies.,Others, however, think
13、 students should not make friends on line. They say making friends on line is a waste of time. And they should spend time more meaningfully on study. In addition, some students get cheated on line.It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for
14、friendship, we can easily find it in our classmates and other people around us.,六.书 写 的 重 要 性 良好的书写就是隐形的分数,三段式；排版；字母间距；词间距；斜度一致；笔的粗细；规范格式；笔的颜色；用力大小； 字的大小；整齐漂亮；,考场作文TIPS,取悦评卷人润色文章原则,有清晰的整体脉络 有自然的段间衔接 经典的用词用句 有整齐美观的书写用词“老辣” 用句经典: 倒装、强调、虚拟 名人名言,周记,人们对于重建圆明园持不同意见。请你用英语写一篇关于重建圆明园的短文，介绍人们的不同观点，并表达自己的看法。,注意：1. 文章必须包括表格中的全部内容。 2. 参考词汇： 人力labor,Thank you! Bye！,模仿和背诵是语言学习界的不二法门。 山寨，让我们赢得未来！,
