1、2015 年高三作文专题2010-2014 五年安徽英语高考作文真题2014为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART” 专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑 Jamie，收到一封署名为 Worried 的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点如下：1表示理解并给予安慰；2提出建议并说明理由。注意：1词数 120 左右；2信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；3信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。参考词汇：temper n. 脾气，情绪Hi Worried.:Im sorry to know t
2、hat youre having such a had time at the moment. Yours,JamieOne possible versionHi Worried,Im sorry to know that youre having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong,so you dont have to worry so much.The important thing is
3、 to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything youll regret.Here are three useful tips:First,talk to someone you trust about how you feel.This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself.Second,go outdoors and play games with your friends as ph
4、ysical exsercise is an effective way to get rid of anger.And third,remain optimistic about your future.Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.I hope youll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.2013假设你校英语社团举办以“讲求文明，从我做起”为主题的征文活动，请你以“On the Way to School”为题，写一篇英
5、语短文。内容主要包括：1.遵守交通法规；2.注意举止文明。注意：1.词数 120 左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；4.短文的题目已为你拟好，不计入总词数One possible versionThese days, breaking traffic rues and littering are not uncommon, causing serious harm to life and the environment. Changing this situation required considerable effort on the past
6、of everyone. As for me, it should start on my way to school. I will keep traffic rules in mind all the way. If I ride a bike, Ill always keep to the right and never cross a road until the traffic light turns green. If a walk, Ill never forget to use the pedestrian crossing. Meanwhile, I will regard
7、it as my duty to help keep our environment clean and health. Not only will I keep from littering and spitting anywhere, I will also help clean up the roadside litter whenever possible. I hope my behavior will make a difference. 2012假设美国某中学的学生明天来你校访问交流，主题是高中生对文，理科的选择。请你用英语写一篇发言稿，向他们介绍你所做的选择，并说明选择的理由。
8、注意： 1.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；2.词数 120 左右；3.短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息。参考词汇：文科 arts;理科:scienceGood afternoon, everyone.Welcome to our school!_Thanks!One possible versionGood afternoon, everyone. Welcome to our school! High school students are faced with a choice between arts and science. It was not an easy choice fo
9、r me to make. After careful consideration, I decided on science as my main subject of study. The reasons are as follows. First, science graduates are in greater demand than arts ones in China. Second, the science major can help me achieve my childhood dream of becoming a scientist. Third, my parents
10、 wish me to study science at college because they believe I will have a brighter future as a science student. Last but not least, my physics teacher is my role model, whose influence on me had a lot to do with my decision.It is for these reasons that I finally made my choice.Thanks.2011某校英文报开辟了一个专栏：
11、Experience.本期话题是如何解决学习中遇到的困难。请你以“My Approach to Difficulties in Learning”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈自己的一些做法。注意：1词数 100 左右；2短文中不能出现本人相关信息。One possible versionMy Approach to Difficulties in LearningAs high school students, we run into one difficulty after another in the process of learning. Everyone has their own
12、way to deal with them. Here I would like to share mine.When I am faced with a difficulty, I usually choose to refer to relevant learning materials or Web pages. In this way, I can not only work it out but also improve my ability to overcome problems all by myself.However, when it is something beyond
13、 my competence, I turn to my classmates or teachers for help. Sometimes I also turn to my parents for advice. As a result, I have made steady progress in my studies.2010假设你将参加某英语杂志社开展的一次征文活动，征文的内容要求你在电视、手机（cell ）和网络三者中，放弃期中一个兵陈述理由。请你以“Which would you give up: TV, cell, or Web?”为题，写一篇英语短文。注意：1.字数 100
14、 左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。One possible versionWe are now living in an information age, in which TV, cells and the Web are widely used. It seems that many people cannot enjoy themselves without them.However, if I had to give up one of them, I would turn off the TV rather than switch off my cell or cut of
15、f the Internet. I could do without TV because few shows take my fancy and therere too many commercials. Besides, most programs on TV are also available elsewhere.As for cells and the Web, they are more necessary to me. I need a cell to keep in touch with my friends and family, and almost all informa
16、tion can be gathered on the Internet.2. 高考高分作文写法指导从 2013 年安徽高考英语作文谈如何写出高分作文考试说明在英语作文（书面表达）部分中指出：“根据所给情景，写一篇 120 个单词左右的书面材料。情景包括目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等；提供情景的形式有图画、图表、提纲、短文等”。同时对考生英语作文的要求是：1）切中题意；）语言准确、得当；）条理清楚。在高考英语试题中，惟有英语作文最能反映考生综合运用英语能力的素质。它通过限时的简单写作来考查学生的写作水平能否达到中学英语教学大纲所规定的写作要求。同时考查考生的英语表达是否合乎英语习惯能否达到传递
17、信息的目的，能否进行思想交流。在考场中有限的时间内如何写出一篇既能覆盖所有内容要点，又要保证文理通顺，语言准确得当，同时，也是最重要的，还要争取得高分。下面就 2013 年安徽英语高考的审题构思、学生在作文当中存在的问题以及在平时的作文训练中如何帮助学生写出高分作文提出以下看法和建议，以供参考。 2013 安徽高考英语作文题目就是以“讲文明，从我做起”为题目而要求大家进行英语作文。 假设你校英语社团举办以“讲求文明，从我做起”为主题的征文活动，请你以“On the Way to School”为题，写一篇英语短文。内容主要包括：1.遵守交通法规;2.注意举止文明。注意：1.词数 120 左右;
18、2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3.短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息;4.短文的题目已为你拟好，不计入总词数我认为 2013 安徽的英语高考作文与往年相比难度有所下降。一看到这个作文命题就会有一股新鲜的气息扑面而来，是一个时髦的话题。因为命题迎合了当下中国兴起的“讲文明、树新风”的高潮，是一次创新性的考查。而且命题老师也考虑到英语作文的局限性，把一个大的话题浓缩到一个学生熟悉的语境当中。是同学们所熟悉的话题，学生们有话可说。但是想要得高分，必须要注意用词精准、避免中式英语、语法结构准确、围绕一个中心意思清楚连贯地表达文章的主题。这样才能写出好文章。那么下面我就谈谈我对这篇作文的写作思路。首先
19、审题，主题是讲求文明，从我做起。 内容第一点是遵守交通法规，第二点是注意举止文明，要想到用这些内容用英语怎样表达， 在草稿纸上写下来你能想到的一些词语如 civilization, start from / obey the traffic rules / well-behave 然后开始以下几步：Step1. 根据作文的要求，在一分钟之内进行 brainstorm,想一下生活中有哪些行为违反遵守交通规则 以短语或句子的形式写在草稿纸上 1. run red lights (Do not be hurry when reds signals occur.) 2 zebra crossing (
20、be cautious at crossroads.) 3.overspeed 同样的方式想一下在生活中不文明举止有哪些 如 1.Spitting 2. littering 3.making noise (Do not make chaos on the way) 4.smoking in public 5.Lend others a helping hand if someone is in need.这样做是为了在写Body part 这一部分进行内容筛选，使文章更有条理性。Step 2. Plot . 因为作文给了一个题目是 On the way to school 因此可以设定一个在上
21、学路上的情节，把这两方面结合起来去写。使得内容充实。Step 3. Opening paragraph 好的开头是成功的一半，作文当中也不例外。一个好的开头，给阅卷老师一个好印象。能够吸引阅卷老师的眼球。比如 A nations civilization starts from its citizens.就是一个非常好的句子。Step 4. Body part 这部分也要有 Topic sentence 。还要有 Supporting 句子来支持，并借助一些句型提升作文的档次。要让阅卷老师在索然无味的“白开水”当中去欣赏你的“柠檬茶” 。而且要注意句子链接要紧凑。过渡词的恰当使用使得文章浑然一
22、体。但是应注意避免词语的重复。如遵守最好不要总是用 obey ，可以换他的同义词如 abide/ observe 等。红灯转换成绿灯用 switch 这个词就比较恰当。同时从句、 时态、非谓语动词、倒装句 强调句的运用要准确。因此提醒学生一定要用自己有把握的句式，不要弄巧成拙。但要切记长句有风险，使用需谨慎。句子越长，结构越复杂，表达就越容易失控。中学生驾驭长句的能力有限，如果达不到一定的火候，就容易犯错误。我的个人建议是，没有金刚钻别揽瓷器活，如果没有十足驾驭长句的把握，倒不如把长句拆分几个短句，也可以去收到异曲同工之妙。Step 5.总结段，和开篇段一样，尽可能展示自己的亮点，起到画龙点睛
23、的作用，既总结全文又回应主题，画上一个圆满的句号。比如可以写 Only when we all behave well can we have a civilized society完成了以上分析，最后就可以开始着手去写这篇文章了。学生对文章主题的理解和把握也有他们自己独特的想法，可以按照自己的理解写出自己的文章，只要符合文章要求，踩点到位，有自己的亮点能展示展现自己的英语水平、达到新课程标准的都是一篇好文章。书面表达在英语考试中分值 25 分，很多同学得分不高，为赋新词强说愁，是很多学生写作文时最容易犯的通病。这些学生喜欢卖弄一些高级词汇和复杂结构，误以为高级词汇和复杂结构越多，作文就会显得
24、越有档次。于是在写作文时，就一门心思地堆砌辞藻，刻意制造复杂句，把简单的问题复杂化，结果弄巧成拙，不是造成行文晦涩难懂，就是有故意炫耀之嫌，给阅卷老师留下班门弄斧的坏印象。得分不高的原因有以下几个原因：1. 吃不透高级词汇的用法、表达高级，但词不达意。句子越长，越容易失控。平时重视不够，忽视平时练习，写作时时间匆匆应付。2 掌握一定的词汇和句法，但是到考试时想不起来用了。3.考试时间分配不合理，前面的题目用时过多，后面的作文只能敷衍两句、甚至有些同学没有时间完成作文。4.书写潦草，不规范，卷面不干净。给人一种敷衍了事的感觉。以上原因主要是平时练习不够、语法句式不能深入脑海，不能熟练到拿来就用的
25、程度。那么在平时的教学当中我们应怎样训练学生的书面表达呢？1.平时要多背范文，多积累好的句式以及文章或话题的模板。如 so .that 、 倒装、强调句、非限定性从句、非谓语形式等等。熟练掌握这些加分句子才能在考试用好用对。比如下表是表达重要性的简单表达和高级表达。简单表达 高级表达Education is important. Education is of much importance.The work he does is important. The work he does is absolutely vital.A good diet is important for us. A
26、 good diet is essential for everyone.Education is important to our future. Education is critical to our future.Money is the only thing thats important to him.Money is the only thing that matters to him.First impressions are very important. First impressions really do count.Parents are important in c
27、hildrens learning Parents play an important role in childrens learning.Childrens education is very important for Chinese parents.Chinese parents attach much importance to childrens education.2经常做汉译英的练习，并注意一句多译。争取熟练掌握一些高级句型，写出出彩的句子。如： a. This is such an interesting book that everyone wants to read it
28、. b. This is so interesting a book that everyone wants to read it. c. This book is so interesting that everyone wants to read it. d. So interesting is the book that everyone wants to read it. 在这四个句子当中，很明显 d 句最高级，阅卷老师会更喜欢。3.平时练习作文时，各种话题都要有所准备，这样在考试作文中不会被内容所受限而无话可说或临时构思会耽误时间。把你要写的内容先用汉语写出 10 句话，然后想每一句
29、话怎样写出彩，然后再加上过渡词就是一篇好文章了。另外一定不要求写作文的的量数多，把一篇文章反复修改、多次写也有利于作文的提升，建议让老师或同学读读，让他们指出一些错误和改进的建议。4、限时练习作文，要求学生在规定的时间内完成作文。5、要求学生写完后要自己检查一下，避免一些低级错误。平时也可以把学生作文抄在黑板上，全班一起改作文，可以纠正一些典型错误。6.最后要求学生书写工整、规范、美观。常言道：“字好文一半”。这种说法在高考英语书面表达中虽然有些言过其实，但书的好坏，卷面的整洁与否直接影响考生的成绩，却是不争的事实。这点其实很重要，高考阅卷是扫面试卷然后在电脑阅卷，所以书写和卷面要赢得阅卷老师
30、的好印象。这点也是学生自己平时多加注意就可以做好，标准很简单：clean and clear.最后，要想在高考中写出高分英语作文，不是一朝一夕的事，只有我们在平时重视了，付出了努力和劳动，在考试时我们才会胸有成竹，胜券在握，做到人无我有，人有我优。才能写出让自己满意并赢得阅卷老师青睐的高分作文。3. 高考英语作文预测模拟题第六模块 书面表达1（2014 届浙江省象山普通高中高三第一次模拟）假设你叫李华。你的英国朋友 Andrew 下月要来你校学习两个月。他来信请你对他上学期间的交通方式提出建议。现在，请你用英语回一封信，按以下各点答复。1.建议骑自行车上学；2. 自行车是学生常用交通工具；3.
31、 骑自行车的一些好处；4.骑自行车需注意的问题。注意：1. 词数 100 左右，信的开头和结束语已为你写好（不计入总词数）2. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯。Dear Andrew, Very happy to hear from you and youre welcome to study in our school for the next two months._ _Hopefully, what Ive mentioned above could be helpful and wish you a fun time in our school.Yours,Li HuaOne
32、possible version:Dear Andrew,Very happy to learn from you and youre welcome to study in our school for the next two months. As for the question about the transportation to and from school, Id like to recommend your riding a bicycle. Here are some reasons. Firstly, riding a bike to and from school is
33、 very common among the students, for buying or repairing a bicycle doesnt cost a lot. Next, parking a bicycle is easy and convenient in our school, no matter who busy the traffic could be. Actually, bicycle-riding is also a practical way to do exercise and protect the environment. What you should do
34、 carefully is just to keep an appropriate speed while riding and lock it after youre off it. In this way, youll feel it simple and relaxing to ride a bicycle while youre here.(112 words)Hopefully, what Ive mentioned above could be helpful and wish you a fun time in our school. Yours sincerely,Li Hua
35、2（2014 届湖北省襄阳四中、龙泉中学、荆州中学高三 10 月联考）请根据以下提示，结合一则人生励志故事，用英语写一篇短文。Regardless of what happened yesterday and what may or may not happen tomorrow, the present moment is where we are.注意：无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；除诗歌外，文体不限；文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；词数为 120 左右。One possible version:Regarded as a lecture master, Nick Vujicic, wi
36、thout arms and legs by birth, is the very person Ive been admiring. Disabled as he is, he has proved to the world that he can live as rich and full a life as a normal person. He never sat around feeling sorry for himself, nor did he worry about his future. On the contrary, owing to his optimism and
37、perseverance, not only has he succeeded in caring for himself and playing sports, but he also graduated with distinction and completed a double degree. What amazes and inspires me most is that he is keen on delivering speeches and has even started a non-profit organization, Life Without Limbs, to he
38、lp others like him attain their ambitions. On his life journey, Nick has sought after the best himself despite his disabilities. Similarly, We are what we are, not what we were or what we will be. Cherish the present, develop our limitless potential, and well also lead a more meaningful life. 3（2014
39、 届广东广州执信、广雅、六中高三 9 月三校联考）假设你所在小区的物业管理中心就目前存在的问题张贴告示，如下所述：告示亲爱的业主：目前，小区饲养宠物的人越来越多，宠物粪便随处可见，且难以清除。为防止含有有害细菌的粪便传播疾病，所以就此提醒宠物应受到严格限制，且宠物主须牢记：1、须到相关部门办理宠物饲养许可证；2、须在宠物年满四个月后的 30 天内为其接种疫苗，并在一年内再次接种疫苗。物业管理中心2013 年 9 月 11 日【写作内容】1、描述目前小区出现的问题；2、物业管理中心的提醒；3、宠物主须牢记的两点；4、张贴此告示的目的。【写作要求】1、开头与结尾已给出；2、只能用 5 个句子表达全
40、部内容。【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。提示词：vaccinate 给 接种疫苗Notice Sept 11th, 2013Dear residents,Hence, every pet owner should consciously take good care of your pet in a right way.Property Management CentreOne possible version:Notice Sept 11th, 2013Dear residents,Since there are so many pets in our community,
41、we can see pet waste everywhere,which is so hard to remove.For this matter,we require pets should be strictly restricted and that the following details also kept in heart.Firstly ,you should license your pet at the relative authority.Secondly,you have to have your pet vaccinated within 30 days after
42、 it reaches four months of age and revaccinated within one year.To prevent pet waste containing harmful bacteria from spreading diseases,we have sensible reasons to do so.Hence, every pet owner should consciously take good care of your pet in a right way.Property Management Centre4（2014 届天津市六校高三上期第一
43、次联考）假设你是李华。最近，你校学生会组织开展了“构建低碳校园”活动。请你围绕“ 节约资源，低碳生活”的主题，根据以下提示，用英语写一封倡议书。日常出行时怎样减少碳排放；在餐厅就餐时怎样节约粮食；在寝室和教室如何节约水、电。注意：词数：不少于 100 词；倡议书的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数；可适当增加情节，以使行文连贯。Dear fellow students,Our school advocates that we should build a low-carbon campus in order to protect the earth. _Dear fellow students,
44、 lets start right now and spare no effort to do every little thing we can from now on!One possible version:Our school advocates that we should build a low-carbon campus in order to protect the earth.I think it is everyones duty to work hard to achieve this goal. Here is what I think we should do: Fi
45、rst of all, we should walk or ride bikes instead of riding in cars or school buses to reduce the amount of pollution. Secondly, when we eat the food in the school cafeteria, we should eat up what we buy and not waste the food. Thirdly, it is important for us to save electricity and water. We should
46、not leave the lights on in the daytime or leave water running after washing. Instead, we should turn off lights as soon as we leave the classroom and dormitories.In a word, if we can make small changes in our way of life, we can make a big difference to the earth!Dear fellow students, lets start rig
47、ht now and spare no effort to do every little thing we can from now on!Li Hua5（2014 届甘肃省部分普通高中高三目标诊断）假定你是是的业余气象员李华，请你在晚上 600 根据电台天气预报节目中得知的天气情况，通过广播用英语向全体学生作天气预报，并提出忠告。要点如下表：项目 时段 午夜凌晨 200 明天早晨 上午天气情况 大风、降温 5 8 阴有小雪 要求与忠告 离开教室时关好门窗；起床时多穿衣服，注意保暖，以防感冒。注意：1必须包括所给的要点，但不可逐条翻译；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯3. 词数 100 左右。One possible version:May I have your attention please, everyone? Its now 6 o clock in the evening Here
