1、Letters of apology,What makes a good writing?,structure,content,language,Is the essay divided into parts?,Does each part have a topic sentence?,Are all the details stated?,Is everything to the point?,Are there any mistakes?,Does the writer use any linking words?,Are there any good sentence patterns
2、?,是指因过失或疏忽等做错了事，给别人带来了麻烦或损失，发觉后给对方赔礼道歉并请求对方原谅的信件。通常包括以下三部分内容： 1: 开门见山，表明写信目的，表示歉意。 2: 说明出现差错的原因，提出弥补措施。 3: 再次致歉，请求原谅，希望得到理解 （语言要诚挚，解释的理由要真实）。,道歉信：,Which one would you like better?,attach importance to handwritiing,A good beginning is half done.,I am writing to apologize for,I am writing to say sorry
3、 for,I regret to inform you that I am unable to,Thank you for, but I am sorry to say that,Tense,broke,carelessness,order,guilty,happier,Dear Bill,Im sorry to say that I have broken the clock on the wall in our room. Yesterday, looking up, I occasionally found the face of the clock was dirty when swe
4、eping the floor, so I took it down and cleaned it with a piece of soft cloth. Unexpectedly, when I put the clock back where it belongs, it fell off the wall and dropped onto the ground. Whats worse, it didnt work. In order not to influence our use of the clock and time management, I will use my pock
5、et money to buy a new one to replace it.Please accept my apology. I promise that it wont happen again.,常用语块,1. 因某事向某人道歉_ 2.向说对不起_ 3.接受我的道歉_ 4.为某事原谅某人_ 5.并非故意做某事_ 6.弥补，偿还_ 7.赔偿，偿还_ 8.给你带来不便_ 9.给你带来许多麻烦_ 10.更加小心_ 11.犯这样愚蠢的错误_,apologize to sb for sth / make an apology to sb for sth,say sorry to,accept
6、my apology,forgive sb for sth,have no intention to do sth,make up for,pay for / compensate for,cause your inconvenience,make such a stupid mistake,cause you much trouble,be more careful,套用句式,1.我写这封信的因向你道歉。2.请接受我真诚的道歉。3.对于我说的话/做的事,我确实感到很抱歉。但请相信，我并非故意要,I am writing to apologize for/I am writing to say
7、 sorry for,Please accept my sincere apology.,I am indeed very sorry for what I said/ did, but please believe I had no intention to,4.我真心希望你能理解我的处境/设身处地地位我考虑，并接受我的道歉。5.对于造成的不便我再次表示歉意。,I sincerely hope you can understand my situation/think in my position and accept my apology.,Once again, I am sorry f
8、or any inconvenience caused.,假定你是李华，寒假中作为交流生短期去英国培训，回国时因为匆忙，把房东Bob的音乐光盘夹在行李中带了回来。现在请你给Bob写一封道歉信，要点如下： 1.对自己带走音乐光盘表示歉意。 2.提出解决的办法。 3.再次请求原谅。,Dear Bob, _Yours sincerely,Li Hua,I am writing to make an apology to you for I forgot to return a music CD which I borrowed from you last week. Yesterday I came
9、 back from England and found it in my luggage. I am so sorry that you cannot listen to it at present.The CD which I borrowed from you is made in England, so I believe you can find another one in your local store. How about your buying another CD by yourself and I will pay for it? If you cannot find a similar one, I would sent it back to you through a post office. And if there are any other solutions you like, please let me know.I am terribly sorry again for my carelessness. Please forgive me for any inconvenience caused.I am looking forward to your reply.,
