1、读后续写导练 1 学案【示例 1】A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day. As he walked along Park Avenue near the First National Bank, he heard the sound of someone trying to start a car. He tried again and again but couldnt get the car moving. Arthur turned and looked inside at the
2、face of a young man who looked worried. Arthur stopped and asked, “It looks like youve got a problem,” Arthur said.“Im afraid so. Im in a big hurry and I cant start my car.”“Is there something I can do to help?” Arthur asked. The young man looked at the two suitcases in the back seat and then said,
3、” Thanks. If youre sure it wouldnt be too much trouble,you could help me get these suitcases into a taxi.”“No trouble at all. Id be glad to help.”The young man got out and took one of the suitcases from the back seat. After placing it on the ground, he turned to get the other one. Just as Arthur pic
4、ked up the first suitcase and started walking, he heard the loud noise of an alarm. It was from the bank. There had been a robbery (抢劫)!Park Avenue had been quiet a moment before. Now the air was filled with the sound of the alarm and the shouts of people running from all directions. Cars stopped an
5、d the passengers joined the crowd in front of the bank. People asked each other, “What happened?” But everyone had a different answer.Arthur,still carrying the suitcase, turned to look at the bank and walked right into the young woman in front of him.She looked at the suitcase and then at him. Arthu
6、r was surprised. “Why is she looking at me like that?” He thought. “The suitcase! She thinks Im the bank thief!”Arthur looked around at the crowd of people. He became frightened, and without another thought, he started to run.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右;2.应使用 5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续
7、写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1 :As he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind, “Stop, stop!”_Paragraph 2 :The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur. _导学 1:原文内容摘要情节 1Arthur to work, Park Avenue情节 2a young man couldnt start a car, worried; two suitcases were in the
8、back seatThe young man accepted offer of help情节 3Arthur heard loud noise of an alarmThe bank, robbery; the shouts of people情节 4a young woman in front thinks Arthur is the bank thiefArthur ran away导学 2:续写情节推理Paragraph 1:可能的情节发展 从 Arthur 和 the young woman 不可能是罪犯,可推知:the young man was the bank thief 从
9、paragraph 2 的段首语可知:Arthur took a taxigo to the police station 从生活常识可推知:Arthur into a taxiSuitcase into the taxiArthur 和 taxi driver 之间会有对话可用词汇及篇章技巧1. 可用的关键词the young man, the bank thief, suitcase2. 其他可用词语realize,catch a taxi,quickly go to the police station3. 在描写两人对话时,要注意引号的使用Paragraph 2:可能的情节发展 从 A
10、rthur 拿着 suitcase 直奔 直奔 police station 可推出,Arthur would:report details hand in the suitcaseask the police to arrest the young man “隐藏”的情节The police had already known the robbery可用词汇及篇章技巧1. 可用的关键词the bank, robbery, suitcase2. 其他可用词语commit a crime, punishment, arrest, contain the money3. 在描写 Arthur 汇报
11、的内容时,要斟酌好内容和顺序导学 3:续写微作文1. Arthur 没有停下,而是继续往前跑,直到他赶上了前面的一辆出租车。 (使用 until)_2. Arthur 和警察说,这个箱子里可能装满了从银行里偷来的钱,此时,警察已经知晓了银行抢劫案的事情。 (用两个定语从句)_导学 4: 根据前面的指导,完成示例 1 的读后续写_【读后续写导练学案 1 参考答案】导学 3:续写微作文1. Arthur didnt stop, but continued to run until he caught a taxi in front of him.2. Arthur said to the poli
12、ce who had already known that bank robbery, “This suitcase may be filled with the money which is stolen from the bank”导学 4: 根据前面的指导,完成示例 1 的读后续写One possible version: As he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind, “Stop, stop!” Arthur immediately realized that the young man was the ba
13、nk robber. So Arthur didnt stop, but continued to run until he saw and caught a taxi in front of him. He quickly put the suitcase in the car and said to the driver, “Please hurry to the Police Station. I have a case to report to the police. The man shouting behind is the bank thief! The taxi raced a
14、way to the Police Station like an arrow. The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur said to the police who had been waiting and who had already received the robbery report, this suitcase is that of the bank robber. It may be filled with the money stolen from the bank, I hand it to yo
15、u. Please get ready to arrest the man. ”Another possible version: As he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind, “Stop, stop!” And also at the moment, Arthur suddenly realized that the young man might be the bank robber. So Arthur didnt stop, but continued to run until he saw a taxi.
16、 He stopped it, jumped in with the suitcase and said to the driver, “Go to the police station, please. The man shouting behind is the bank thief! The taxi raced away like the wind. The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur told the police what had happened. Obviously, the police had
17、 already learned about the robbery. They opened the suitcase and there was a large sum of money inside, as Arthur had expected. Then the police asked Arthur to describe the young man and the other suitcase. Later, with the information, the police caught the robber. The police and the bank both thanked Arthur a lot.