1、1第三编要想作文得高分，首先要让作文的亮点飞。如果作文没有一点萤萤亮点，那作文只能在基础等级徘徊。如何营造些许亮点，本部分从两大方面 词汇、句式 、18 个角度给予细化讲解。第一讲 词汇营造亮点 4 角度扮亮词汇(一) 特别的爱给特别的你名词名词属于实词，名词表示人、事物、地点或抽象概念的名称，名词同时也分为专有名词和普通名词。名词用得好更能出众脱俗，让阅卷老师眼前一亮。 名词的种类：普通名词 专有名词可数名词 不可数名词个体名词 集体名词 物质名词 抽象名词专门指代某一人、物、地点等的名词典题 1 (一般词)Now we have a chance to develop a greater
2、understanding of each other.(高级词)Now we have an opportunity to develop a greater understanding of each other.现在我们有一个好机会，可以大大增进对彼此的了解。典题 2 (一般词)There are four basic choices; they are described briefly below.(高级词)There are four basic alternatives; they are described briefly below.有四个基本的选择，简述如下。高中阶段常见的
3、名词及名词短语类写作高级词汇机会 chanceopportunity选择 choicealternative课程 coursecurriculum影响 effectinfluence/impact后果 resultconsequence缺点 shortcomingdrawback方法 wayapproach职业 careerprofession2建议 adviceguidance老人 old peoplethe old/the elderly/the aged/senior citizens青少年 young peopleyoungsters/youths/adolescents几天前 a f
4、ew days agothe other day一个表现好的孩子 a child who behaves in a proper waya wellbehaved child专题过关训练先用所给的词补全句子，然后对该词进行升级1因此，我没有足够的时间去锻炼。As_a_result,_I dont have enough time to take exercise.(result)As_a_consequence,_I dont have enough time to take exercise.2所有学校都设有音乐和舞蹈课。All the schools have music and danc
5、ing classes as_parts_of_the_course.(course)All the schools have music and dancing classes as_parts_of_the_curriculum.3他们称他们期望这次会议会对国家的未来产生显著影响。They say they expect the meeting to have_a_marked_effect_on_the_future of_the_country.(effect)They say they expect the meeting to have_a_marked_impact/influe
6、nce_on_the_future_of_the_country.4(2018全国卷书面表达)最重要的是，老人通常是最先品尝桌上食物的人，因为他们在中国受到很好的尊重。Most importantly, old_people_are_usually_the_first_to_taste the food served on the table because they are well respected in China.(old people)Most importantly, the_old/the_elderly/the_aged/senior_citizens_are_usually
7、_the_first_to_taste the food served on the table because they are well respected in China.5(2018天津高考书面表达)因此，我认为这不仅是你展示自己才华的黄金机会，同时也可以为我们提供建议。Therefore, I think not_only_will_it_be_a_golden_chance_for_you_to_show_your great_talent,_but_also_you_can_offer_us_advice.(chance, advice)Therefore, I think n
8、ot_only_will_it_be_a_golden_opportunity_for_you_to_show_your 3great_talent,_but_also_you_can_offer_us_guidance.6在这类职业中，只有 20%的岗位是由女性担任的。Only_20_percent_of_jobs_in_the_careers are held by women.(career)Only_20_percent_of_jobs_in_the_professions are held by women.7激励这些年轻人的不是对成就的渴望，而是对失败的恐惧。These_young
9、_people_are_motivated not by a desire to achieve, but by fear of failure.(young people)These_youngsters/youths/adolescents_are_motivated not by a desire to achieve, but by fear of failure.8我们将探索收集信息的不同方法。We will be exploring different_ways_to_gather_information.(way)We will be exploring different_ap
10、proaches_to_gathering_information.扮亮词汇(二) 炫酷亮闪你的眼动词(短语)动词根据其后是否能跟宾语，可分为两类，分别是：及物动词( Transitive Verb)、不及物动词( Intransitive Verb)，缩写形式分别为 vt.和 vi.。典题 1 (一般词)He likes playing football, which is his favourite.(高级词)He is fond of playing football, which is his favourite.他喜欢踢足球，这是他最喜欢的运动。典题 2 (一般词)As for me
11、, I believe that the number of tourists should be limited for the following reasons.(高级词)As for me, Im firmly convinced that the number of tourists should be limited for the following reasons.就我而言，我坚定地认为游客的数量应得到限制，理由如下。高中阶段常见的动词及动词短语类写作高级词汇看见 seecatch sight of遇见 meetcome across引起 causelead to/result
12、 in/give rise to拥有 havepossess提高 develop/improvepromote替代 replacesubstitute面对 facebe faced with容忍 bearput up with4处理 do withdeal with/cope with决定 decidedetermine/make up ones mind考虑 considertake into account/consideration应该 shouldbe supposed to理解 understandmake sense of/figure out使用 useemploy/make u
13、se of/take advantage of道歉 apologizemake an apology记住 rememberkeep in mind发生 happenoccur/come about想起 think ofoccur to/come up with感谢 thankappreciate帮助某人 help sb.do sb.a favor节省 saveset aside21 参观 visittour/pay a visit to22 分发 hand outdistribute23 站起来 stand upget to ones feet24 习惯于 be used tobe accus
14、tomed to25 一定 be sure tobe bound to26 为做准备 prepare formake preparations for/be prepared for27 反对 be againstobject to28 厌烦 be bored withbe fed up with/be tired of29 忙于 be busy in (with)be occupied in (with)/be buried in/be engaged in30 闻名 be famous forhave a reputation for31 感到舒服 feel comfortablefeel
15、 at ease32 美化学校 make the school beautifulbeautify the school33 置若罔闻 refuse to listen toturn a deaf ear to34 成功做某事 succeed in doing sth.make it35 想做某事 want to do sth.seek/intend/desire to do sth.36 5照看 look afterattend to37 尽力做某事 try ones best to do sth.spare no effort to do sth.38 向某人寻求帮助 ask someon
16、e for helpturn to sb.for help39 我认为 I thinkin my opinion/as far as Im concerned40 专题过关训练.选用方框中的短语替换下列句中加黑部分put up with， consist of， be devoted to， make use of， fix ones eyes upon1The little boy looked at the picture on the wall.fixed_his_eyes_upon2The small group has six people.consists_of3She was a
17、fraid she couldnt bear the pain.put_up_with4All his life was given to the Partys educational cause.was_devoted_to5We will use her vast experience.make_use_of.请用高级词汇替换下列句中加黑部分1(20186 月浙江高考写作)I will be grateful if you could offer me the opportunity.give_me_a_kind_consideration2(2016北京高考书面表达)Our class
18、thought of the idea to make better use of used materials.came_up_with3(2015湖南高考书面表达)At the same time, I decided to study harder rather than waste precious time on those useless things.made_up_my_mind4Well try our best to develop the traditional friendship between us.promote5Would you please help me
19、to turn down the radio？do_me_a_favor6Developing very quickly, the Internet causes the breakdown of facetoface communication.gives_rise_to7When you are bored with the people sometimes, youd better find a quiet place, listening to some classical music.fed_up_with8So far as I know, everyone of them wan
20、ts to be a model student.intends_to.用所给动词的高级词汇补全句子1几天前我在你的店铺买了一部手机。6I purchased_a_cellphone_at_your_store the other day.(buy)2更糟的是，暴力电子游戏可能导致进攻性行为，这比暴力电影更有害。Whats worse, violent video games can_lead_to/result_in_aggressive_behaviours,_which is more harmful than violent movies.(cause)3所有的游客都被要求不能在公园内
21、乱扔垃圾。All the visitors were_requested_not_to_throw_litter_about in the park.(ask)4或许我们能想到解决这个问题的更好的办法。Maybe we can_come_up_with_a_better_solution_to_the_problem.(think of)5我们将全力以赴赶超发达的工业国家。Well_spare_no_effort_to_catch_up_with the developed industrial countries.(try ones best)6我们应该尝试彻底解决这个问题。We shoul
22、d_make_an_attempt/attempt_to_thoroughly_solve_this_problem.(try)扮亮词汇(三) 浓妆淡抹总相宜形容词(短语)形容词是很多语言中均有的主要词类中的一种。形容词是描述人或事物的特征、性质、属性及状态的一种开放性词类。形容词主要用来修饰名词和代词。典题 1 (一般词)Sports are helpful to building our bodies.(高级词)Sports are beneficial to building our bodies.体育运动有益于增强我们的体质。典题 2 (一般词)He is an excellent s
23、cientist, who has made a great contribution to our country.(高级词)He is an outstanding scientist, who has made a great contribution to our country.他是一位杰出的科学家，对我们国家做出了巨大贡献。高中阶段常见的形容词及形容词短语类写作高级词汇令人惊奇的 surprisingamazing/astonishing/shocking贫穷的 poorneedy/povertystricken优秀的 excellentoutstanding明显的 obvious
24、apparent/evident常见的 commonuniversal充足的 enoughadequate勤奋的 hardworkingdiligent7可用的 useableavailable困难的 difficultchallenging坚强的 strongtough重要的 importantvital/significant不可能的 impossibleout of the question有趣的 interestingabsorbing/striking/appealing小心谨慎的 carefulcautious幸运的 luckyfortunate巨大的 largeenormous合
25、适的 properappropriate丰富的 richabundant古老的 oldancient唯一的 onlyunique全部的 wholeentire21 富裕的 richwealthy22 有意义的 meaningfulrewarding23 许多的 manya large quantity of24 有吸引力的 attractiveappealing25 有空的 freeavailable26 有益处的 be usefulbe of benefit27 不同种类的 different/kinds ofa variety of/various28 高兴的 gladdelighted2
26、9 激动的 excitedthrilled30 专题过关训练.请用高级词汇替换下列句中加黑部分1(2018天津高考书面表达)The training schedule, apart from regular training, includes joining in various activities, such as participating in some national competitions.a_variety_of2(2017全国卷书面表达)I am very glad to know you are interested in Tang poems.more_than_de
27、lighted3(2016全国卷书面表达)I should be free any time after school next 8week.available4In the coming three years, our school life will be difficult.challenging5Developing a good habit is also very important.of_great_importance/significance6I was excited when I heard the good news.thrilled 7She is energeti
28、c, clever and lively.intelligent8To our great glad, not only are our classes lively and attractive, but our school life is also rich and colorful.delighted,_appealing,_abundant.用所给形容词的高级词汇补全句子1我的同桌是一个动人的、文雅的女孩。My deskmate is a_charming/attractive_and_elegant_girl.(beautiful)2我的薪水不够维持一家的生活。My salary
29、is_not_adequate_to_support_my_family.(enough)3改变这种情形需要每个人付出很大的努力。Changing this situation requires_enormous_effort on the part of everyone.(large)4她是一位辛勤的老师，她工作非常勤奋。She is a_diligent_teacher and she is_diligent_in_her_work.(hardworking)5所获得的经验对我们有很大价值。The experience gained will_be_of_great_value_to_u
30、s.(valuable)6我的手机非常有用。My mobile phone is_of_great_benefit.(useful)7由于夜里休息不好，课堂上我总是感到筋疲力尽。Not sleeping well, I always feel_exhausted in class.(tired)8学好英语对你未来就业至关重要。Learning English well is_significant/vital_to_your_future_employment.(important)扮亮词汇(四) 不想太低调，副词及其他词放大招大众化的词汇、平庸的表达已使长时间工作的阅卷老师产生了视觉疲劳。写
31、作时恰当得体地使用高中学过的、别人可能想不到的高级词汇，会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉，从而可以提高文章的得分档次。典题 1 (一般词)If there is anything I can do for you, I would be very glad to help.(高级词)If there is anything I can do for you, I would be more than glad to 9help.如果有什么我能为你做的，我将非常乐意帮忙。典题 2 (一般词)He comes to our room for a chat sometimes.(高级词)He comes
32、to our room for a chat once in a while/occasionally.他偶尔来我们房中闲谈。高中阶段常见的副词及其他写作高级词汇突然 suddenlyall of a sudden立即 immediatelyin a flash有时 sometimesoccasionally/once in a while/from time to time另外；况且 besidesin addition/whats more/moreover因此 sotherefore第一，首先 firstto begin/start with第二，其次 secondin addition
33、/whats more最终 finallyeventually和，也 andas well as大多数 mostthe majority许多 a lot ofa large quantity/amount of/endless完成 finishaccomplish事实上 in factas a matter of fact/actually也 tooas well几天前 a few days agothe other day故意 on purposedeliberately/by design因为 because ofon account of/due to/owing to/thanks t
34、o总之 in a wordto sum up/in conclusion/in summary由 构成 be made up ofconsist of越来越多 more and morean increasing number of否则 orotherwise/or else21 应当 shouldbe supposed to22 如果 ifsuppose/supposing/on condition that23 即将到来 coming soonaround/round the corner24 使某人意识到 make sb. realizeraise sb.s awareness of25
35、 10专题过关训练.请用高级词汇替换下列句子中的加黑部分1(2018浙江高考写作)And I treasure this as a good chance to broaden my perspective and improve my spoken English.as_well_as2(2017全国卷书面表达)In fact, I am very fond of Tang poems.Actually3A few days ago, I went out and I almost had an accident.The_other_day4You must have noticed how
36、 tired he sometimes looks.occasionally/once_in_a_while5The most of the interviewees prefer watching TV at home to going to the cinema.majority 6As high school students, we should be neatly dressed at school.are_supposed_to.用所给词的高级词汇补全句子1我们的人口在增长，因此我们需要更多的食物。We have a growing population and therefore
37、_we_need_more_food.(so)2抓住这个机会，否则你会后悔的。Seize the chance, otherwise/or_else_youll_regret_it.(or)3这次比赛不仅职业运动员可以参加，而且业余运动员也可以参加。The tournament is open to amateurs_as_well_as_professionals.(and)4第三，你们说如果我提前付费的话就可以给我打折。Thirdly, you say that there is a discount suppose/supposing_(that)_I_pay_in_advance.(i
38、f)5我喜欢踢足球，也喜欢游泳。I like playing football and I_enjoy_swimming_as_well.(too).请用高级词汇升格下面的考生作文假定你是中学生李华，家住泉州。你的英国笔友 Jason 来信谈到了他的家乡伦敦，并希望了解你的家乡泉州的情况。请你用英文给他写一封回信。内容包括：1自然情况：地理位置优越、气候风景宜人等；2发展成就：经济发展迅速、城市高楼林立等；3存在问题：交通拥堵现象、空气污染问题等；4对泉州发展的看法：内容由考生自己拟定。注意：1.词数 100 左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：高层建筑 highrise bui
39、lding11考生作文Dear Jason，Im very happy to hear from you and know about your beautiful home city London.Now Id like to tell you something about my hometown Quanzhou.Quanzhou is a beautiful place for people to live in.Its economy has been developing fast during the past ten years.New bridges and roads ha
40、ve been built, with highrise buildings standing in many parts of the city.More and more schools and hospitals are useful for the native people.It is developing into a modern and beautiful city.But there are still some problems, such as heavy traffic in rush hours and serious air pollution, which hav
41、e a bad effect on peoples daily life.I think Quanzhou should develop healthily and scientifically, so that we could have a better hometown in the future.Yours，Li Hua升格作文Dear Jason，Im more_than happy to hear from you and know about your beautiful home city London.Now Id like to tell you something abo
42、ut my hometown Quanzhou.Quanzhou is a beautiful place for people to live in.Its economy has been developing rapidly during the past ten years.New bridges and roads have been set_up,_with highrise buildings standing in many parts of the city.An_increasing_number_of schools and hospitals are available
43、 for the native people.It is developing into a modern and attractive/charming city.However,_there are still some problems, such as heavy traffic in rush hours and severe air pollution, which have a bad influence/impact on peoples daily life.In_my_opinion/As_far_as_I_am_concerned,_Quanzhou should develop healthily and scientifically, so that we could have a better hometown in the future.Yours，Li Hua12
