1、Writing Skills and common problems,On How to Succeed in a Job Interview,Title 标题,大写小写要分清(冠词，介词不大写）: How to Succeed in a Job Interview 名词词组/介词词组或者完整的句子做标题 Interview (Tang Yantao) 题目要具体(要能概括、揭示或统领正文) The Effect of Interview during Applying for a Job (Li Yuhao),Dont dot everywhere! 不要到处都是点点点 一句话完了打句号，句
2、号后面新句子开头的首字母要大写！(Shi Feng) E.g: But how can one succeed in a job interview. (Fu Qishan) 并列词组之间用逗号连接，最后一个用and, 或者or 并列句子之间用分号连接，最后一个用and, or，或者but A job interview is necessary important for both the job candidate and the company. You should let the interview or know that youre sincere and serious, yo
3、u really want to get this job. (Lai Junju) They can know much better about the company, the job also,Punctuation 标点符号,However和therefore前面要么用句号要么用分号 Our behavior can show our ability, therefore, we should learn to speak（Guo Kunhua) For example, , , , and (and so on). Such as, , , and (and so on). 注：并
4、列一定要在形式上并列：要么都是名词词组，要么都是句子 Such as: I think there are many factors, such as:appearance, manners, expression and professional and professional knowledge, self confidence factualness. (He Wei),Punctuation 标点符号,Spelling错误太多，学习要细致啊,refferrefer constrution construction admite admit tast test confidente c
5、onfident Past the interview pass,名词要戴帽子，注意冠词的正确使用,As we all know, job interview plays an important role in finding job. (Xie Shaoyu) Succeeding in a job interview means succeeding in search of the job. (Xu Zhaoneng). The key to having a good job interview is the confidence and manner. (Xu Zhaoneng)
6、A job interview is very important for employer and applicant.(Gao Yingqi),词形勿用错，名词形容词动词要分清,How to success in a job interview (Zhang Yuhua) Need to be confidence if they are suit for the job Make sure you are able to competent the job (Gong Rui) You should politely to everyone/ a deeply impression Ho
7、w to pass a job interview successful (Ma Jun) A wonderful interview is the determinant for find a job to your hearts desire. (Chen Yaofeng) Somethings (something, some things) Be careful about your dress/ a neat dress As we all known,搭配别乱套,You must keep neat and take the suitable clothes. Your profe
8、ssional skills must be outstanding which can really fill the need in the job. (Feng Jiaxin) Dont tell lies on others A good presentation in the interview is the key to get a job. Having access to know what they are interested (Zhao Yiping),句子结构,1, because不能独立成句 Such as : First of all, you must pay a
9、ttention . Because a tidy appearance can make the employer feels that youre so difference. 2, 只有词组不能成句： Besides, major knowledge, self-confidence and be yourself. 3， 被动态要慎用 4, 一个句子不能有两个谓语动词 A wonderful interview help you to find a good job and the details, in fact, help you to make a wonderful inter
10、view. (Chen Yaofeng) Believe yourself can win the job. (Gu Tianji),句子结构,5, 注意疑问句和陈述句中的主谓语倒装 Interviewees should plan what they are going to wear and make sure they know where are they going. (Song Guizhen) 6, 句子结束了就要用句号： Secondly, the applicants should show confidence, it can help them to overcome t
11、he difficulties in the future work. (Zhou Yufeng) 7，不能缺主语(除非默认主语为you,在instruction中才使用) And then decides which person is the right one for their company. （Fu Qishan) 8,It is that 强调句型It is the first impression going to the interviewer. (Zhao Yiyun),句子结构,9,only 开始的强调句型,主句要用倒装 Only in this way can you
12、do sth Only by doing sth can you do sth Only when you do sth can you do sth 改错： Only in this way you can be more charming. (Tang Yantao) Only you have full confidence did anyone else would trust you. (Zhao Yiping),连词使用要准确,As well, a job interview is of great help to a company. Final, you should talk
13、 about your short plan. (Zhong) To summer up, (Chen Yaofeng) In a conclusion, Its all known that (Huang Jiaer) Except these, the ability, the action can also make influence in an interview. .,注意人称要一致数要一致,1， So it is of great importance for us to master some skills on interview. In order to get the j
14、ob you want, I think the follows are what you cant ignore. (Li Chaoyan) 2, If someone notice these factors and do it well, it would have a good ending. (Huan Shifeng) As before the interview we never contact with each other. (Xu Haodi) Through the interview a company can have a much better understan
15、ding of the candidate, so that it can choose the best. All of these is your advantages. (Jiang Dandan) The opportunity only waits for the one who have a good preparation. (Gao yingqi),注意chinglish,1, 慎用make或let Good appearance is the most important to make the interview succeed. (Xie Tuo) Success in
16、a job interview makes one get a position. (Zhong Chuhong) Dont be too nervous and try to make yourself polite from the very beginning. (Zhen Yi) A fairly confident performance can let you become more outstanding in a job interview. 2, 不要用there are some people do sth的句型 There are some advices may hel
17、p you. (Mai Jielan) There are many factors can contribute to the success of an interview. (Ma Jun),避免空泛的套话空话,Nowadays, along with the fantastic development of culture and economy. The Job interview plays an important role in our society. How to succeed in a job interview ? Theres always some controv
18、ersy over the job interview. (Reng Jincheng) The following are the factors. (不完整句子，空句）,Ending 避免太主观，避免引入新论点,If you can get the points above, you will beat others and get the job. I advise you to follow the following suggestions to succeed in a job interview. However, for different people, everyone h
19、as his own way. (Bi Jianghao),避免太口语化表达,Do you know what we should pay attention to in the interview? Now Ill tell you. (Li Qiongqiong) So how to succeed in a job interview is vital to all candidates. Lets talk about it. (Zhang Yuhua),Point of view视角要清晰,So how to succeed in a job interview becomes a
20、question to job hunters. / A job interview is necessary for both the job candidates and the company. (Gu Tianji) Without interview, the company would choose the people difficult. People can build confidence and know many details about the work such as the pay. (Su Jiajie),单词，词组重复率过高,More and more Mo
21、re and more serious -(increasingly serious)More and more problems - (a growing number of problems) Many a lot of, lots of, a great number of , large/huge number of,Important Guidelines to Win,1，题目别乱给 2， 三段段落分明：引入段+论述段+结尾段 3， 每段要有主题句+2-3个supporting details 4，使用连词，结构更清晰（注意正确使用） 5，词、句重在变化，避免太多相邻句子句式太多的一致(例如论述段，通篇you must / 祈使句） 6，扬长避短：只说自己会说的！如果有经典句，想办法绕都要绕着用上几句,作文的要求,1. 30minutes； 120words 2. 段落清楚，有明显的开头，主体和结论部分。 3. 内容切题：每一段的主题句要切题，在三段当中每一段主题句都要切题 4.条理清楚， 结构完整，匀称利落，整体美感：段落分明，长短合理 5. 句与句，段与段之间语义紧凑，衔接顺畅； 注意使用过渡性词语 6. 卷面整洁,
