1、初中英语写作,初中英语写作,初中英语作文要求要求学生在20分钟内写出80个词左右的短文，并且质量高、内容全、形式正确。这样形成习惯，考试时就能得心应手。,应试策略,实战演练,1. 审题目：要切中题意。中考考试说明指出，书面表达要切中题意。,要仔细看清题目要求的内容，在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面，确定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下笔，看懂题意，根据图画、图表、提纲或短文提供的资料和信息来审题。审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。,此外，在审题的时候一定要保证自己确定的观点是正确的，不能带有任何歧视种族或团体的言论，最好观点不要太偏激，尽量中立一些。例如，题目如果问watc
2、hing TV 好不好，这时就要圆滑些，看得太过分不好，但是电视是我们获取信息的一个渠道，可以适量地看，但不能影响学习和工作。,2. 圈要点：防止遗漏要点。要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点，同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力，把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出。,这里指的要点也就是说尽量将题目给的信息都要写到，此外还可在此基础上适当地扩展。,3. 列提纲：为写作做好准备。 这里并不是一定要求说要具体地在纸上列提纲，因为这样很浪费时间，我们可以适当地站在脑海中“分段”，明确自己要分几个段落，每个段落写什么内容，重心应该是在哪一段。,4. 定基调：定出时态、人称、顺序、开头、结尾。,初中
3、英语作文考察学生的一个重要能力是英语的时态的用法，因为初中的一个重点就是学习英语的时态。所以在写作文之前一定要确定好自己的时态然后再动笔。,想清楚5个W: when where who why what,5. 写全文：到真正开始写作文时要做到以下六个方面：,(1)避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用，以避免重复和呆板。,(2)多用简单句型，记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当多使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用或少用非谓语或情态动词等较复杂的句型。,(3)注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。1）语态、时态要准确无误。2）主谓语要一致，主语的人称和数要和谓语一致
4、。3）注意人称代词的宾格形式。4）注意冠词用法，例如： He is an honest student.中的an 不能写成a。5）注意拼写、标点符号和大小写，例如：receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。,(4)描写人物时，要生动具体，例如： 1）外表特征：tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。 2）服饰颜色：red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。 3）内心境界：glad, happy, sad
5、, excited, anxious, interested 等。 4）感情描写：love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。 5）动作描写：come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。,(5)上下文要连贯。上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条原则，因此同学们应把写好的句子，根据故事情节，事情发生的先后次序（时间或空间），使用一些表示并列、递进等过渡词进行加工整理，使文章连贯、自然、流畅。同学们应注意下面过渡的用法： 1）表示并列关系的：and, as well as, or 2）表示转折关系的：but,
6、 yet, however 3）表示时间关系的：when, while, after, before, then, after that 4）表示因果关系的：so, therefore ,as a result 5）表示目的的：in order to, in order that , so as to, so that6）表示列举的：for example , such as 7）表示总结性的：in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking,(6)不会表达，另辟蹊径。中考作文给分是以要点和语言准确度而定，不以文采打分。如遇到个别要点表达不出来
7、或难以表达，可采用变通的办法，化难为易，化繁为简。总之，所造句子要正确、得体、符合英语表达习惯。,例如高楼大厦不会写，可以直接写high building（高楼）,7）检查并改正错误：认真检查，改正错误。中考作文时，由于时间紧、内容多，同学们出错在所难免。因此，改错这一环节必不可少。中考作文评卷是根据要点、语言准确性、上下文的连贯性来给分，根据错误多少来扣分。因此，中考时尽量花几分钟时间用来检查错误显得尤为重要。检查错误应从以下几个方面入手： 1）格式是否有错。 2）拼写有无错误。 3）语言是否用错。 4）时态、语态错误。 5）标点错误。 6）人称是否用错。,（2004年陕西省中考试题） VI
8、I. 书面表达（共1题，计10分） 假如你叫张强。请根据下面美国朋友Bob的来信内容，结合你自己的情况写一篇语言连惯、符合逻辑的英文回信。 要求：1. 认真阅读来信的内容，从中获得你需要的信息。 2. 词数：80左右。回信的开头、结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。 注意：回信中不得出现你的真实地址和所在学校的名称。 Dear friend, Hello！Im your new friend. My name is Bob. Im fifteen. Im American. I live in New York. I am a middle school student. Im good at mat
9、hs. It is very interesting. My favourite sport is basketball. And I am not only a basketball fan but also a good player. I like pop music. My friends and I often sing pop songs together. After school, I am interested in getting on-line. I have known a lot about China from the Internet. Now Im learni
10、ng Chinese. I hope I will visit your country one day. Please write to me and tell me something about your life. Im looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Bob Dear Bob,4、写全文： Dear Bob,I got your letter yesterday. Im very glad to be your pen friend. My name is Zhang Qiang. Im fifteen years old, t
11、oo. I live in Shaanxi.Im a middle school student, too. I like English and physics very much. I also like sports, but Im good at drawing. I know a little about America. Could you tell me something more about your country in your next letter? I hope well meet in China some day. Im sure well have a goo
12、d time together. Please write (to) me soon. Yours, Zhang Qiang,1.审题目：通过审题目我们可以知道：本篇书面表达应是写一封回信，写信人是张强，收信人是Bob，信的内容应是介绍张强自己的情况。,2. 圈要点：根据来信判断，写回信必须包括以下要点：1、收到对方的来信；2、愿意和对方交朋友；3、自己的姓名、年龄和住址；4、自己的身份、特长和爱好； 5、自己的希望。,5、改病句：认真复查一边，如有错误，加以改正。,根据前面提到第六个步骤，我们来写一下这篇书面表达。,3、定基调：1. 时态：收到来信用一般过去时，介绍情况用一般现在时，希望用一
13、般将来时。2. 人称用第一人称。3.可按提纲的顺序来写。4. 开头和结尾题目已经给出。,在议论一种观点的时候有一个比较管用的句型： In my opinion, we should ./we shouldnt There are some reasons: First,; Second,; Third, . In a word, .,下面我们就可以就前面说过的你觉得watching TV好不好论述一下。 范文：Every corn has two sidesAs every corn has two sides, watching TV has its advantages and disad
14、vantages. However, I think watching TV can somehow help us improve ourselves.There are two reasons: First, we can get much information through watching TV; Second, watching TV can bring us much more laughing and happiness.In a word, I think its good for us to watch TV properly. But we cannot deny th
15、at watching TV too much is not good. We shouldnt spend so much time in watching TV , so that we can spend more time on our study and work.,两张观点选择型模板Recently , we may hear quite different opinions.Most people think thatHowever , others argue that.As to me , I preferOn the one hand,On the other hand,T
16、herefore,.,问题解决型模板With the development of society ,.(问题出现的背景) It is important for us to.Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly, In conclusion, ,活到老,学到老. Live and learn. 贪多必失. All cover, all lost. 生活是可爱的. Life is sweet. 骄傲必败. Pride goes before a fall. 昨日不复来. No one can call back yesterday. 天下无难事,只怕有心人. It is dog
17、ged that does it. 读书如蜜蜂采花. Use a book as a bee does flowers. 光阴一去不复返. All time is no time when it is past. 万事开头难. It is the first step that costs. 良好的开端是成功的一半. Well begun is half done. 熟能生巧. Practice makes perfect. 人生有限,学问无涯. Art is long, but life is short. 有志者,事竟成. Where there is will, there is a w
18、ay. 患难见真情. A friend in need in a friend indeed. 知识源于勤奋. Knowledge comes from diligence. 落后须奋进. Far behind must follow the faster. 不劳则不获. No pains, No gains.,做事不可半途而费. Never do things by halves. 学无止境. There is no ending to learning. 独木不成林. One tree cannot make a wood. 只会用功不会玩,聪明的孩子也变傻. All work and n
19、o play makes Jack a dull boy. 人人为我,我为人人. All for me, one for all. 时间就是金钱. Time is money. 人应为生而食,不应为食而生. One should eat to live, not live to eat. 时间就是生命. Time is life. 思考就是明白. To think is to see. 没有汗水,没有幸福. No sweet without sweat. 常用的钥匙不生锈. The used key is always bright. 工作时工作,娱乐是娱乐. Work while you w
20、ork, play while you play. 生活是绘画,不是做算术. Life is painting, a picture, not doing a sum. 天生我才必有用. All things in their being are good for something.,My friend (我的朋友)I have many friends. One of them is my classmate Ma Hua. He is a League member and one of the best students in my class. He is fond of Engli
21、sh and good at it. He often practices reading aloud. So he has a good pronunciation.He is always ready to help others. With his help I have made great progress. I have made up my mind to catch up with him and to join the League in the near future.,My aim我的志向Whatever a mans status is (may be), he sho
22、uld have an aim. If not, he can hardly stand on his own two feet in the world. No matter how important fame and wealth may be, we must not let them become our object in life. We should aim at doing something useful to the society. If my aim can come true, I hope (wish) to be a teacher. However, teaching is by no means an easy thing. I must apply myself closely to my studies so as to be able to cope with my duties (as a teacher).,
