1、Writing,英语专业四级考试(TEM4)写作大纲：英语专业四级考试共有六项（听写、听力理解、完型填空、语法词汇和阅读、写作 ），写作占25%。 1.测试要求：a.作文(15%)要求根据所出的题目和列出的提纲或图表、数字统计表等 （也附有写作提纲）写一篇200字左右的短文，能做到内容切题完整，条理清楚，文章结构严谨，语法正确，语言通顺恰 当。时间35分钟。作文题目主要属于叙述文，说明文，议论文的范围。,b. 便条(10%)便条要求根据提示写大约5060词的通知、便条、请柬等,要求格式正确，语言得体。（10分钟）2.测试目的：按照教学大纲要求测试学生在基础阶段末期用英语书面表达的能力。,评分标
2、准,1.思想内容（50%）：观点清楚，前后无矛盾，并有充分恰当的例子说明自己的观点 2.组织结构（10%）：细节安排有条理，叙述层次清楚，段落之间联系自然，句子连贯。 3.语言（40%）： （a） 语法（20%）：没有句子结构上的重大错误，拼写、标点、大小写等正确，引用原文适度，不超过作者文章的10%。 （b） 用词（15%）：用词，包括习惯用语正确恰当。 （c） 得体（5%）：语言得体，语气恰当，以理服人，有说服力。,TEM 4 便条写作,Writing,4,2019/6/9,5,2019/6/9,Notes Writing of TEM 4,A. 便条写作概况及专四新大纲要求,6,2019
3、/6/9,Notes Writing of TEM 4,便条是一种简单的书信。虽然内容简单，但却有其独特的风格。主要目的是为了尽快地把最新的信息、通知、要求或者活动的时间、地点转告给对方。常见的便条有感谢、留言和通知等。,7,2019/6/9,Notes Writing of TEM 4,特点：1. 文内语言尽量通俗简约，清楚明了，直截了当，无需使用过多客套语言。 2. 便条虽简单，但中心务必突出，更要注明活动的时间及地点要素。 3. 便条不需邮寄，不用信封。通常请人代为转交。有时可写在留言板和留言簿上。,8,2019/6/9,Notes Writing of TEM 4,专四新大纲要求：要求
4、根据提示写大约50-60词的通知、便条、请贴等。要求格式正确，语言得体。考试时间10分钟。,9,2019/6/9,Notes Writing of TEM 4,基本写作格式：便条内容和类型不尽相同，可以灵活变通。但各类便条必须包括以下几个基本要素；1）Date：便条日期 2）Salutation：称呼 3）Body：正文 4) Complementary Close 结语 5）Signature：署名,1. Date: month + dateJanuary 1 (or: January 1st), or: Jan. 1February 2 (or: February 2nd), or: Fe
5、b. 2March 3 (or: March 3rd), no short formApril 4 (or: April 4th), no short formMay 5 (or: May 5th), no short formJune 6 (or: June 6th), no short formJuly 7 (or: July 7th), no short formAugust 8 (or: August 8th), or Aug.8September 9 (or: September 9th), or: Sept.9 or: Sep. 9October 10 (or: October 1
6、0th), or: Oct. 10November 11 (or: November 11th), or: Nov. 11December 12 (or: December 12th), or Dec. 12,2. Salutation: Dear Mr. -,Dear Miss -,Dear Mrs. -,Dear Ms. -,Dear Prof. -,Dear Doc. -,Dear Sir or Madam,Dear David,3. Body (50-60 words): As required.4. Complementary Close: Yours,Sincerely (your
7、s),Your student,5. Signature: As suggested.,12,2019/6/9,Notes Writing of TEM 4,B. 历年试题分析,13,2019/6/9,Notes Writing of TEM 4,从历年真题的便条题目来看，便条的题材主要是围绕学生们日常生活中常发生的情况来命题。 常见的体裁有告示、祝贺、道歉、请求、拒绝、安慰、留言、邀请等简单的应用文。,14,2019/6/9,Notes Writing of TEM 4,2002（询问）,Write on ANSWER SHEET ONE a note of about 50-60 word
8、s based on the following situation:You have heard that your friend, Jack, wishes to sell his walkman. Write him a note expressing your interest in it, asking him about its condition and offering a price for it.Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriacy.,16,2019/6/9,Note
9、s Writing of TEM 4,C. 八大类便条写作详解,17,2019/6/9,Notes Writing of TEM 4,1. 告示类别便条告示类便条具有很强的实用性，它可以用来表达转让信息，也可以表达求购信息。清楚简约地表达是该类便条写作的关键。1998年：入场券转让；1995年：自行车出售,18,2019/6/9,Notes Writing of TEM 4,常用句型：I write to inform you that we have found your bag. A fax has just come to hand saying that All the student
10、s are invited to attend the party to be held at 8 p.m. tomorrow。All the party members of the university are requested to attend the meeting All students who are interested in calligraphy are warmly welcome. Please notify the others concerned,19,2019/6/9,Notes Writing of TEM 4,真题示例：1995年真题（自行车出售）,20,
11、2019/6/9,Notes Writing of TEM 4,March 12, 2007Dear fellow students,Im very happy to announce you that Id like to sell my bike to anyone who might need it. It is a blue one, half new, and still in good condition. I only charge 100 yuan for it. Those who are interested please go to Room 303, Huai Shu
12、Building.If you need any further information, please dont hesitate to call me up. My telephone number is 15988888888.Sincerely yoursMartin,21,2019/6/9,Notes Writing of TEM 4,2. 道歉类别便条在你不小心损坏他人东西时，在你失约时，在你违背自己的诺言时，你需要向别人道歉。道歉类便条的要领是：真诚地表达你的歉意；措辞规范、表达真切、释义明了。 1997（为没邀请某人而道歉）；2001（失约）,22,2019/6/9,Notes
13、 Writing of TEM 4,常用句型：I do apologize for having to send you this letter about I am sorry that I had to cancel our appointment yesterday. I am sorry for not answering your letter promptly.I sincerely hope the postponement of our meeting do not bring you much inconvenience.l am very sorry indeed to h
14、ave to refuse your request as it is quite beyond my power to do so.,23,2019/6/9,Notes Writing of TEM 4,常用句型：l am very sorry indeed to have to refuse your request as it is quite beyond my power to do so. I am sorry that I have delayed in answering your letter. I must apologize for my delay in answeri
15、ng your kind letter. I am sorry to have put you to so much trouble. Again I apologize for the need to Please contact me as soon as possible so that we can,24,2019/6/9,Notes Writing of TEM 4,真题示例：1997年真题（为没邀请某人而道歉）,25,2019/6/9,Notes Writing of TEM 4,December 15, 2007Dear Victoria,I am excessively sor
16、ry for not inviting you to my party. Please accept my sincere apology with gratitude. I hope you will understand me and excuse me for my carelessness. It all happened by accident. Before the party, I wrote down the names of the guests on a sheet of paper and asked my sister to inform them one by one
17、. But my sister got all the things mixed up.I wish you would forgive me. Sincerely yours,Clauia,26,2019/6/9,Notes Writing of TEM 4,3. 安慰类别便条安慰类的便条比较常见，因为生活中难免有失意之处，如生病、考试失败、竞选没有成功等，都能引起学生们的伤感和失望。该类便条的要点是：语气真切；态度积极。专四真题中有两次涉及，分别为1999年（安慰病人）和2004年（对同学考试失利安慰）。,27,2019/6/9,Notes Writing of TEM 4,常用句型：I
18、m very sorry to hear the news that I am very concerned about your health these days. If you take it easy, you may soon get wellEverything has two sides. Think about the positive side. Cheer up! Dont be so depressed. You still have another chance.,28,2019/6/9,Notes Writing of TEM 4,真题示例：2004年真题（对同学考试
19、失利安慰）,29,2019/6/9,Notes Writing of TEM 4,June 27, 2004Dear Jane,Ive just learned from the others that you were unhappy for failing in the final exam. Im very sorry to hear the news.Im very concerned about your mood. I just want you not to be so depressed and not to lose your heart. Cheer up, my dear
20、 friend. You still have another chance. I will see you as soon as I can.Sincerely yours，Paul,30,2019/6/9,Notes Writing of TEM 4,4. 询问类别便条欲向他人咨询某事而所要咨询的人不在时使用。写作要领：注意清楚简洁地阐释自己的问题，注意对细节的提问。2002年（询问所转让的随身听的情况）；2006年（希望参加短途旅行并询问两个细节）,31,2019/6/9,Notes Writing of TEM 4,常用句型：With reference to your adverti
21、sement on the local newspaper I want to know more about I have learned from my friend that it will be held a party on Monday. I just want to know specifically about It is reported that,32,2019/6/9,Notes Writing of TEM 4,常用句型：Would you please be so kind as / kindly to give me more information about？I
22、 would appreciate your kindness if you can provide me with more details about I would be very grateful to you if you let me know Thank you for your time and efforts,33,2019/6/9,Notes Writing of TEM 4,真题示例：2006年（希望参加短途旅行并询问两个细节）,34,2019/6/9,Notes Writing of TEM 4,June 22, 2007Dear Michael,I am deligh
23、ted to learn that you are organizing a weekend excursion for the class. Im very interested in such outdoor activities. III join the trip. But I dont know some specific details. What should we bring? Where shall we meet?Would you please be so kind as to let me know more about it? I am looking forward
24、 to your answerSincerely yours,Wayne,35,2019/6/9,Notes Writing of TEM 4,5. 拒绝类别便条当你收到来自同学、家人或朋友的邀请或其他请求并无法做到时，那么你必须委婉地表达你的拒绝之意。这时，你就需要写一张拒绝类便条。该类便条的语体特征是客气、委婉。2003年（婉拒晚会邀请）；2007年（婉拒加入游泳会的邀请）,36,2019/6/9,Notes Writing of TEM 4,常用句型：I would like to accept , but I can not due to I am writing to apologi
25、ze for being unable to I want to thank you for the consideration and courtesy given to me. Anyway I feel sorry for disappointing you! I hope and am sure we will have opportunity to cooperate in the future.,37,2019/6/9,Notes Writing of TEM 4,真题示例：2003年 (婉拒晚会邀请),September 1, 2007Dear Lance,Thank you v
26、ery much for your invitation. Congratulations on your moving into the new house. However, I have decided not to join your house-warming party.One reason contributes to my declining your invitation. I have to be in Beijing on business trip this Friday and will return until next Monday.Im sincerely lo
27、oking forward to your understanding. I do wish that your party will be successful.Sincerely yours,Adam,38,2019/6/9,39,2019/6/9,Notes Writing of TEM 4,6. 祝贺类别便条祝贺类便条的写作步骤为：表祝贺之情，然后说明所做事情的意义，最后表达白己的祝福。该类便条在语体上的要求为：欢快、分享喜悦、流畅,40,2019/6/9,Notes Writing of TEM 4,常用句型：It is the most joyful news I have hea
28、rd for a long time. I wish you all possible joy and happiness in the world.I was pleasantly surprised to read in the newspaper that you We hope you will have nothing but joy and happiness in your life and in your career.,41,2019/6/9,Notes Writing of TEM 4,常用句型：Congratulations on your promotiongradua
29、tion successprogress achievements. Wish you the best luck and every happiness. Wish you a Merry Christmas and Happy New Year！Here is a word of cheer on your birthday from a warm friend. Congratulations and all good wishes to you!,42,2019/6/9,Notes Writing of TEM 4,真题示例：1996年的便条便是祝贺同学演讲获奖,43,2019/6/9
30、,Notes Writing of TEM 4,January 19, 1996Dear Gary,I have learned with delight that you won the second prize in the Municipal English Speech Contest. I would like to extend to you my utmost congratulations on your success.I know this is surely owing to your diligence. It is a reward you richly deserve for your long term efforts.My best wishes for your further success.Sincerely yours,Tom,
