1、Welcome,Proof-reading,20042008年浙江高考短文改错考点分布统计表,项目,塘栖中学二轮短文改错专项练习错误统计表,项目,1.Anyone can borrow books if he or she wish. ( 2006安徽卷) 2.I read your e-mail to my parents and show them the photo you sent to me.(2006江西卷) 3. Im glad to learn that youve been settled down in Boston and are getting used to the
2、local way of life. (2006山东卷),wishes,showed,4.What may surprise you are that Im going to the US this July on a summer camp! (2006山东卷) 5. After autumn arrives, the city looks like an old man with leaves fallen from the trees. (2006重庆卷) 6.Ill also do plenty of exercise , which wont give me any harm too
3、.(2005广东卷),is,falling,do,1.He thought the poor animal was injured, but the kind farmer took off his jacket and put iton the animal. ( 2007四川卷) 2. He and she should make the class very active by joking with the students. (2006辽宁卷) 3. Im getting much too fat. The doctor told me that Id probably had a
4、heart attack while I started eating less. (2005广东卷),so,unless,or,4. Leaving him at home all day, we would return at night to hear that hed picked up from the radio in the day. (2005江苏卷) 5. I was only about six that he held his hand out to me. (2007全国卷) 6. I have already studied English for eight yea
5、rs, I cant use it very well. ( 2008天津卷)7. They did not want breakfast because that they were going out early in the morning. (2006全国卷I),what,when,but/yet/and,Three steps of doing proof-reading:,1. Go through the whole passage to get a general idea .,2. Read the passage sentence by sentence and find
6、the mistakes.,3. Read the passage for the third time, check the answers and correct the difficult ones.,This passage is about_.,A. Liu Qians family. B. Liu Qian will give us a new show. C. How Liu Qian became a magician. D. Liu Qian is the most popular magician in China.,C,Liu Qian is an magician fr
7、om Taiwan. For the CCTV Spring Festival Gala (春晚) he put on two magic show. They were very success. Now everyone wants to know what to do a trick! Liu didnt go to any magic school. He learned of himself. Now he is a great magician. When Liu is seven, he saw a coin trick in a store. At that moment Li
8、u decided to learn magic. Liu practiced hard improve his skills. Then one day she was able to put on a show for his class. “I saw the surprise on everyones face. It was cool.”Liu still practices hard in today. He may spend three years work on a new show.,The main idea of this passage is _.,Its very
9、hard for university graduates to find jobs. Civil service jobs attract people seeking employment, including University graduates. The unemployment rate is increasing in China.,B,Iron rice bowl or not, civil service jobs are in hot demand. The Chinese government is considering put an end in the syste
10、m of lifelong employment that have long been the advantages, and the disadvantages, of civil service. But that does not make government jobs any more attractive to the seven millions college graduates who are seeking employment this year. Handsome housing subsidies, permanent social welfare, or good social status are some of the obviously reasons that civil service jobs remained popular, especially at a time that the unemployment rate is soaring and private companies are laying down workers.,Thank you!,
