1、,1. Born on the 18th of January, 1979 in Taiwan, he was raised by his mother and was shy and quiet during his childhood. 2. Showing interest in music, he began learning to play the piano at the age of 3. 3. When his first album was released in 2000, he got the worlds attention. 4. His popularity sky
2、-rocketed (急速上升), and he has received many awards for his songs. 5. His own unique Chinese R&B style is unparalleled by others and he continues to make breakthroughs as he takes risks in attempting new things., Born on the 18th of January, 1979 in Taiwan, Jay Chou, a famous singer, was raised by his
3、 mother and was shy and quiet during his childhood.,分词结构,同位语,身份与生平,尽量用分词短语、同位语结构，使文章简洁，通顺,Showing interest in music, he began learning to play the piano at the age of 3. When Jays first album was released in 2000, he got the worlds attention. His popularity sky-rocketed (急速上升), which allowed him to
4、receive many awards for his songs.,经历,省略句,状语从句,定语从句,注意尽量用非谓语动词, 使文章精炼,尽量用复合句,倒装,非限定定语从句等，润色文章, His own unique Chinese R&B style is unparalleled by others and he continues to make breakthroughs as he takes risk in attempting new things.,评价,注意运用一些动词、形容词等短语、词组,Thomas EdisonBorn in America, Thomas Ediso
5、n was a great scientist and inventor. He was once thought to be a boy who was not worth educating. In fact, he was a man full of imagination. I admire Edison a lot because of his great contribution to the world. He had more than 1,000 inventions. In his lifetime, he was always eager to know how thin
6、gs worked, which helped him to earn the nickname “the Wizard of Melo Park”. He was also so diligent that he worked day and night. And this explained why he had so many inventions. What impresses me most is his famous saying, “Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration.” P
7、robably I cannot be an Edison myself, but I can be a hardworking learner. From him, I realize the secret to success is not when and where you were born, but what you are doing and how you do it in your life. （湖南 2008）,根据下面表格中的要点写一篇有关美国残疾女作家海伦凯勒（Helen Keller）的短文。,词数：150左右； 参考词汇： the deaf-mute聋哑人,Born
8、 in 1880, Helen Keller is a well-known American woman writer with disabilities. At the age of 19 months, it was unexpected that Helen Keller was robbed by illness of sight and hearing, which caused her to become mute. Fortunately, when Helen was 7 years old, she met Miss Sullivan who is very kind-he
9、arted and helpful. Miss Sullivan managed to help Helen learn to read, write and talk. With the help of Miss Sullivan, Helen went to study at Radcliff College and graduated from it with honors at the age of 24. During her whole life, Helen wrote some excellent books, such as The Story of My Life and
10、Let Us Have Faith. Besides, she devoted all her lifetime to working for the blind and the deaf-mute both at home and abroad. All in all, Helens example has encouraged a lot of people whether they are normal or disabled.,请根据以下信息写一篇介绍霍英东的文章., In May 1923, Dr Huo Yingdong was born from a poor family in
11、 Hong Kong. At the age of ten, his father died. After 1955, he was engaged in architecture, shipping, petroleum and became a famous person at home and abroad. Since the beginning of the reform and open policy, he had donated over 10 billion dollars to sponsor education, culture, sports, and public welfare in Mainland. He has made great contributions to constructing and benefiting our country, which makes him a Moving China hero.,
