1、 010-58818067 58818068 第 1 页 共 7 页 2012 高考总复习（8）：短文改错精讲精练专题训练(一)I have noticed that much of the fiction and nonfiction works publishing in Teen Magazine have a happy endingWhile these are pleasantly to read，one has to ask how it is possible that there is so much optimismIm all for positive thinking，
2、and readers should also be exposed by the darker side of lifeWhy publish a story about someone whose experiences a tragedy and gets nothing in return? After all，thats lifeNot every story have a happy endingI think this would benefit from Teen Magazines readers to see both kinds：happy and real(二) Whe
3、n I was a senior in a high school，I had a teacher calling Mrs SmithShe taught English and she has an important effect on meShe was fill of love for usShe had our class to make posters and hang it around the schoolShe taught us that one kindly act can go long wayWell ，Mrs Smith passed away just a cou
4、ple of year ago after a long battle with the breast cancerI ll never forget how a wonderful and sweet lady she wasI am truly blessed to have been known herI am going to be a teacher like her and Ill always remember her kindness(三) China is an ancient civilization with cultures dating hack more than
5、4000 yearBasic elements for the modern world such as paper，gunpowder，paper money，or compasses originated in ChinaToday ，China is again at the forefront of world，with Chinese goods reach all parts of the worldThe Chinese culture have also fascinated many peopleIn the Shaolin Monasteries，the Great Wal
6、l of China or the Forbidden City of Beijing，China has its unique arts and architectures that what draw thousands of visitors every yearThe Chinese food is equal popular around the world and it is loved by much non-ChineseBut in China，the food can found in great varieties and is different in region t
7、o regionSo join us and experience all these(四)At first I was not quite willing to sit down and watched the 90-minute football matchUsually I just checked the results because I thought that was dull to watch a game in that players kicked a ball to each otherTherefore，my father loves football During t
8、he World Cup in 2006，my dad stays up late just to watch his favourite sportSeeing him strong interest in this game of 22 men run after a ball，I decided to sit down to watch the game，I found game exciting，and my dad explained for the rulesWe shared our joyFootball is not too badly as long as I watch
9、it with my dad!(五)When Jack bowed to someone，he always did it much too quicklyThey neednt to wait any longer after he finished nodding his headSo he was bland for no mannerThen a warm- 010-58818067 58818068 第 2 页 共 7 页 hearted man teaches him， “When you bow to somebody next time，you can count the Ja
10、nuary，February，March，until DecemberThen you can lift your bodyThus，the ceremony will almost perfect”The next day，he met his uncle，but be did as the man told him toThe bow was too long that it made his uncle escape soon with a surprising lookWhen Jack looked down，he found his uncle goneSo he asked a
11、passer-by， “In which month did she go away?”(六)In order to be successful，you should first of all never give up whatever happenIf you fail， you should never lose heartIn the contrary，you must build up your confidence or work even harderYou should always remember that working hard was the key to succe
12、ss， Besides，you should pay a great attention to your working methodsThat is necessary for you to take every chance improve themFinally，you should try to get along well with your co-workers，cared for each other and helping each other If you follow these rule，you will certain achieve great success in
13、the 010-58818067 58818068 第 3 页 共 7 页 答案与解析部分(一) I have noticed that much of the fiction and nonfiction works publishing in Teenmany publishedMagazine have a happy endingWhile these are pleasantly to read ，one has to askpleasanthow it is possible that there is so much optimismIm all for positive th
14、inking，andbutreaders should also be exposed by the darker side of lifeWhy publish a story aboutto notsomeone whose experiences a tragedy and gets nothing in return? After all，thats life who/thatNot every story have a happy endingI think this would benefit Teenhas itMagazines readers to see both kind
15、s：happy and real.答案解析：第一处：works 指“作品”时为可数名词，应该用 many 而不是 much 修饰；第二处：publishing in Teen Magazine 作为 works 的定语，跟所修饰的名词为被动关系，该用过去分词；第三处：做表语应该用形容词而不是副词，把 pleasantly 改为 pleasant.第四处：and 的上下文是转折而不是并列关系，把 and 改为 but.第五处：be exposed to 为固定搭配，意为 “遭受,暴露于” 。第六处：Why not.? 是表示提建议的固定句型，所以在 why 后加上 not.第七处：在这个定语从句
16、 someone whose experiences a tragedy and gets nothing in return?中，需要关系代词而不是 whose 充当从句的主语，把 whose 改为 who/ that.第八处：every story 为单数名词，谓语应该用单数，把 have 改为 has.第九处：在本句中，it 为形式宾语，真正的宾语为后面的不定式， this 不能做形式宾语，改为 it.第十处：benefit 做动词意为 “有益于, 得益” ；benefit from 意为“从受益” ，去掉from.(二) When I was a senior in a high sc
17、hool，I had a teacher calling Mrs SmithShecalledtaught English and she has an important effect on meShe was fill of love for usShehad fullhad our class make posters and hang it around the schoolShe taught us that 010-58818067 58818068 第 4 页 共 7 页 themkindly act can go long way Well，Mrs Smith passed
18、away just a couple of year agokind a yearsafter a long battle with the breast cancerIll never forget how a wonderful and sweetwhatlady she wasI am truly blessed to have known herI am going to be a teacherlike her and Ill always remember her kindness答案解析：第一处：calling Mrs Smith 做 teacher 的定语，和被修饰的名词是被动
19、关系，用过去分词；第二处：本文讲述的过去的事情，应该用过去式第三处：fill 为动词；be full of 为固定搭配；第四处：本句的结构为 have sb do sth（让做） ，应该省略 to.第五处：指代前面 posters 用复数代词 them;第六处：修饰名词 act 应该用形容词 kind 而不是副词;第七处：a long way 一段很长的路程，加上 a;第八处：a couple of 修饰复数名词， years 应该改为复数。第九处：forget 所带宾语从句中的表语部分用 what, how 的后面应该紧跟形容词或副词。第十处：此处应该是“主动”了解她，故应该用 to do
20、的主动完成形式 to have known.(三) China is an ancient civilization with cultures dating hack more than 4000 yearyearsBasic elements for the modern world such as paper，gunpowder，paper money， or andcompasses originated in ChinaToday，China is again at the forefront of world，withtheChinese goods reach all parts
21、 of the worldThe Chinese culture have also fascinatedreaching hasmany peopleIn the Shaolin Monasteries，the Great Wall of China or the ForbiddenCity of Beijing，China has its unique arts and architectures that draw thousandsof visitors every yearThe Chinese food is equal popular around the world and i
22、t isequallyloved by much non-Chinese But in China，the food can found in great varieties and ismany bedifferent in region to regionSo join us and experience all 010-58818067 58818068 第 5 页 共 7 页 答案解析：第一处：4000 年应该用 year 的复试形式 years，因为此处不是做主语表一段时间。第二处：“四大发明”之间是并列关系而不是选择关系，把 or 改为 and.第三处：此处 world 指前文出
23、现过的 the modern world，第二次出现该加 the，第四处：在本句中，with 为介词，Chinese goods 是介词的宾语，作为介词宾语的补语应该用非谓语形式而不是谓语形式。第五处：“The Chinese culture”是单数概念，谓语形式用单数 has。第六处：关系代词 that 在本句中充当定语从句的主语，不能再用 what 充当从句的主语，是为重复。第七处：此处修饰 be popular 的 应为副词 equally, 因为形容词修饰名词代词，副词修饰动词、副词等。第八处：non-Chinese 指“非中国人” ，是可数名词，表示复数,用 many 限定。第九处：
24、本句的主语为 the food，是“被发现” ，在句中作谓语，用被动语态的谓语结构 can be done.第十处：from region to region ”是“从一个地区到另一个地区”的意思。(四)At first I was not quite willing to sit down and watched the 90-minute footballwatchmatchUsually I just checked the results because I thought that was dull to watch aitgame in that players kicked a
25、ball to each otherTherefore，my father loves footballwhich HoweverDuring the World Cup in 2006，my dad stays up late just to watch his favouritestayedsportSeeing him strong interest in this game of 22 men run after a ball，I decided torunningsit down to watch the game，I found game exciting，and my dad e
26、xplained thetherulesWe shared our joyFootball is not too badly as long as I watch it with my dad!bad答案解析：第一处：and 连接并列的不定式结构，应用动词原形。第二处：it 在 thought 后面的宾语从句中作形式主语。第三处：in which 构成介词加关系代词型的定语从句。第四处：however 表示转折，放在句首、句中或句末，通常用逗号与句子其他成分隔开。第五处：本文主体时态是一般过去时。 010-58818067 58818068 第 6 页 共 7 页 第六处：his 修饰后面的名
27、词 interest。第七处：running after a ball 是现在分词短语修饰 men。第八处：found 后加 the，the game 特指前面的足球运动。第九处：explain 为及物动词，for 应删除。第十处：形容词修饰名词。(五)When Jack bowed to someone，he always did it much too quicklyThey needn t wait any longer after he finished nodding his headSo he was bland for no mannermannersThen a warm-he
28、arted man teaches him， “When you bow to somebody next time，taughtyou can count January，February ，March，until DecemberThen you can lift your bodyThus，the ceremony will almost perfect ”The next day，he met his uncle，be but be did as the man told him toThe bow was too long that it made his uncle and so
29、escape soon with a surprising lookWhen Jack looked down，he found his uncle surprised up goneSo he asked a passer-by， “In which month did she go away?”he答案解析：第一处：此处用了 neednt，表明用作情态动词，情态动词后接动词原形，去掉 to.第二处：manner 意为“态度、礼貌”是用复数形式。第三处：本文讲述的是过去发生的事情，老师是“过去”教他，用过去的动词谓语，teach 改为 taught.第四处：月份的前面不需要定冠词，去掉 th
30、e.第五处：引号中的话为直接引语，will 为助动词，perfect 为形容词，需要补充 be 动词，构成将来时的“主系表”结构。第六处：“.he met his uncle”和“he did as.”两个动作之间是承接关系而不是转折关系，用and 不用 but.第七处：本句的句子结构为“so.that.”句型结构，把 too 改为 so.第八处：从上文看，应该是带着一副“感到惊奇”的表情，用 surprised.第九处：结合上文逻辑，Jack 是低着头的，他只有“ looked up”，才发现情况。第十处：根据上文，离开的是 uncle，用 he 指代。 010-58818067 58818
31、068 第 7 页 共 7 页 (六)In order to be successful ，you should first of all never give up whatever happenhappensIf you fail，you should never lose heartIn the contrary，you must build up yourOnconfidence or work even harderYou should always remember that working hard wasand isthe key to success，Besides， you
32、 should pay great attention to your working methodsThat is necessary for you to take every chance improve themFinally ，you should tryIt toto get along well with your co-workers， cared for each other and helping each othercaringIf you follow these rule，you will certain achieve great success in the fu
33、turerules certainly答案解析：第一处：在 give up 所带宾语从句中，whatever 是从句主语，谓语应该用“三单”形式，happens.第二处：On the contrary 为固定搭配。第三处：“build up your confidence”和“work even harder”之间是承接关系，用 and代替 or.第四处：本文所述道理为一般道理，用现在时态，把 was 改为 is.第五处：pay attention to 为固定短语，不含有不定代词 a.第六处：本句的真正主语为不定式短语，只能用 it 而不是 that 来做形式主语，把 that改为 it.第七处：take every chance 的目的是“improve them” ，插入 to 做目的状语。第八处：本句已有谓语 should try，那么 care 只能做伴随状语，对句子的主语而言是“主动”关爱彼此，用现在分词形式。第九处：上文列举几条规则，则此处 rule 应用复数形式 rules.第十处：谓语部分为 will achieve，修饰谓语的词应为副词，故用 certainly 代替 certain.
