1、,英语四级作文讲练,应用文(记叙文,书信,广告等) 议论文 说明文(图表作文),记叙文,要求考生写一篇记叙文，描述事件发生的时间、地点、原因、人物及结果，最后对事件进行简单分析。这类题型，通常分为三个步骤来写：,第一段、总结描述 交代清楚故事涉及的人物、时间、地点： 主题句 第二段、具体描述 具体描述事件发生的原因、经过和结果 起因经过结果 第三段、对事件的分析 分析句1+分析句2+分析3,实战演练Directions：For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic The Da
2、y My Classmate Fell Ill.1、简单描述一下这位同学生病的情况；2、同学、老师和我是如何帮助他的；3、人和人之间的这种相互关爱给我的感受是,模板,第一段：开篇句：About _ Oclock one evening in _, _.扩展句：_. (展开描述一下事件)第二段：主题句：Without hesitation, _. It wasnt long before _.扩展句：1、One _.2、Another _.3、Our teacher _.第三段： 结尾句：Is _? Who can tell ? But _.扩展句：1、When _ , people showe
3、d _ spirit regardless of _.2、This kind of care between persons is the very kind giving, unselfish and priceless devotion or sacrifice.3、And it is just because of this care that we can have warm families, a happy life and a beautiful world.,范文About nine Oclock one evening in May, my roommate Li Ming
4、was lying in bed, trembling with cold and having a cough.His head was aching so intensely that he kept groaning. His forehead felt very hot. We took his temperature. It was 38.5.Without hesitation, I dialed “120“. It wasnt long before an ambulance arrived. One roommate brought a blanket for him. Ano
5、ther supported him in the ambulance. Our teacher insisted on giving him some money.Is he a suspected SARS patient? Who can tell ? But we didt retreat. When the savage SARS was spreading, people showed fearless spirit regardless of dangers to their own health.This kind of care between persons is the
6、very kind giving, unselfish and priceless devotion or sacrifice.And it is just because of this care that we can have warm families, a happy life and a beautiful world.,议论文,一、对立观点型 二、比较利弊型 三、问题解决型 四、热点话题型 五、阐述主题型,对立观点型1：Some people believe (argue,recognize, think) that 观点1. But other people take an o
7、pposite side. They firmly believe that 观点2. As for me, I agree to the former/latter idea.There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief. First of all, 论据1.More importantly, 论据2. Most important of all, 论据3.As a college student, there are many choices.In summary, 总结观点. As a college student, I am suppos
8、ed to 表决心.或 From above, we can predict that 预测.,对立观点型2：People hold different views about X. Some people are of the opinion that 观点1, while others point out that 观点2. As far as I am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds more weight. For one thing, 论据1. For another, 论据2. Last but not the least, 论
9、据3. To conclude, 总结观点. As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心. 或 From above, we can predict that 预测.,对立观点型3： There is no consensus of opinions among people about X（争论的焦点）。Some people are of the view that 观点1，while others take an opposite side, firmly believing that 观点2。As far as I am concerned,
10、the former/latter notion is preferable in many senses. The reasons are obvious. First of all, 论据1。 Furthermore, 论据2。 Among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest. That is, 论据3。A natural conclusion from the above discussion is that总结观点。 As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心. 或 Fro
11、m above, we can predict that 预测.,比较利弊型,引出主题，陈述正面观点（1、2、3）负面观点（1、2、3)。利弊对比，并陈述原因（1、2、3）。陈述自己观点（提供论据并举例），并给出解决办法（展望）。,Recently the issue of whether or not_(讨论话题) has been in the limelight and has aroused wide concern in the public. There are two major arguments that can be made for_. For one thing, _c
12、an bring _ to_(优点一). For another, it is widely hold that people usually _when _(优点二). But we must not lose sight of the fact that there are also drawbacks to_, among which are _(列举缺点). For instance, it can be _to _(举例说明). In addition, many people find it _(形容词)to _（第二个缺点） When asked to _, I tend to
13、_. This is because I _ (原因一). Furthermore, _ (原因二). Finally, _(原因三).,Advantages and Disadvantages of the Internet Nowadays, the Internet is playing a more and more important role in peoples daily life. However, peoples opinions are still divided on this point. Those who are in favor of the Internet
14、claim that it has a lot of advantages. Firstly, information searching is no longer a tough job with the help of all kinds of search engines. Secondly, we can contact friends or business partners via e-mails or software such as Internet Meeting and Yahoo Messenger. Last but not least, we can take par
15、t in groups or mailing lists to talk with friends of the same interest. Those who are opposed to the Internet hold that disadvantages are many. In the first place, the Internet costs considerable time, money and energy especially for those with less self-control. In the second place, surfing on the
16、Internet for a long time harms the eyes a lot. Finally, more and more young people are indulged in online games, Internet chat and even pornography, which are extremely harmful to their future development. All in all, we can safely come to the conclusion that the pros outweigh the cons. The past twe
17、nty years witnessed the fast development of the Internet along with national economy. A brighter future is awaiting us if we make good use of the Internet.,模板点评 这是一篇非常典型的利弊类作文。首段中先写因特网在人们生活中占有越来越重要的地位。而后又以however转折说明人们的观点有分歧。第二段和第三段分别以支持者和反对者的口吻说出了其优点和缺点，各分三个方面。 最后一段包括三句话，先说因特网的优点大于缺点，而后说其发展很快，最后说其前
18、景美好。有许多值得学习的模板。第一句是下结论常用的句子，all in all既可用in a word, in summary, to sum up或in conclusion替代，也可用from what we have discussed above或from all that has been discussed above这样较复杂的结构替换。动词outweigh表示“比.重要”，隐含这是比较之后的结果，而pros and cons非常简单，效果却等同于advantages、disadvantages或positive aspects、negative aspects等。第二句中动词wi
19、tness的用法很生动。最后一句是条件状语从句，同时请注意await（相当于wait for）和make good use of的用法。 妙笔生花 第二段分三点来说，第一点中的“search engine”表示“搜索引擎”。第二点中的via表示“通过”。第三点中的“mailing list”表示“邮件列表”。 三段也分三点来说。第一点中的considerable指“大量的”，self-control表示“自控、自制”。第二点中的surfing表示“冲浪”，这里表示“网上冲浪”。第三点中的“be indulged in”表示“沉迷于、沉溺于”，而online games、Internet cha
20、t和pornography分别指网上游戏、网络聊天和色情。,文中之思 这篇文章极为典型，开头与结尾都是如此。开头只说此问题突出，自然后面的过渡句可紧随其后人们持不同意见。这样又与二、三段首句的整齐相呼应，非常精妙。二、三段首句均采用those who的句型，这样就不必再使用别的手段来连接就可表示对比（主要的效果是二、三段间不必加一句话过渡的话），非常简洁。最后一段在首句说利大于弊一定不能就此结束，这点请大家细细琢磨。 这个题目还可以考成图表题，写作方法有所不同首段是描述图表，次段很可能是说明因特网发展的原因（与其优点相结合），三段可能是问题与解决办法，最后作结。在看了这篇范文后，这样的图表作文
21、大家写来应该是没有问题的。 精雕细刻 1注意二、三段中连接词的使用。 2注意二、三段首句分别使用claim和hold。 3注意二、三段首句中in favor of与be opposed to可用多种变化。 4学习第二段第二句中的句型no longerwith the help of。 5学习第三段第二句中的词汇self-control。 6第三段末句中的be indulged in可换用be addicted to。 7学习最后一段中的后两句的写法。,问题解决型,引出问题（数据或举例，突出其严重性）分析其成因（1、2、3)。解决办法（1、2、3)。,模板These days we often
22、hear that It is common that Why does such circumstance occur in spite of social protects? For one thing , For another, What is more, since ,it is natural that To solve the problem is not easy at all ,but is worth trying .We should dosomething such as to improve the present situation ,and I do believ
23、e everything will be better in the future .,pollution of environment These days we often hear that (our living conditions are getting more and more serious because of the destruction of our environment ).It is common that (many trees and animals are near extinction, and the all-important food chain
24、has been destroyed .). Why does such circumstance occur in spite of social protects? For one thing ,(the population of the world is increasing so rapidly that the world has been so crowded. ).For another,(the overuse of natural resources has influenced the balance of natural ecology ). What is more
25、, since ( the industrial revolution ) ,it is natural that (a great number of factories have been springing up like mushrooms .The smoke and harmful chemicals released from factories also pollute the environment ). To solve the problem is not easy at all ,but is worth trying .We should do something s
26、uch as (planting more trees , equipping cars with pollution-control devices and learning to recycling natural resources )to improve the present situation ,and I do believe everything will be better in the future .,热点话题型,（1）人们针对X的态度和举措 （2）归纳现状 （1）第一个原因 （2）第二个原因 （3）第三个原因（*）重申自己观点及改进方法,模板In recent year
27、s , x has caused a heated debate on The factors for First of all ,Then , there comes a case that Moreover , Especially when Indeed, these unique points can be collected to remind people that In this way ,we should behave just like .,The impact of Television In recent years , with the development of
28、science and technology ,80 percent of all homes in China have satellite TV , offering as many as 50 channels .It has caused a heated debate on (the impact of television on children ). Many parents are worried about the impact of so much television on children. The factors for (parents worry is that
29、children are indulged in television and spend too much time on it .) .First of all ,(with so many programs to choose from , children are not getting as much exercise as they should ).Then , there comes a case that ( some studies have show that excessive watching of television by millions of children
30、 has lowered their ability to achieve in school ). Moreover , ( the effect on childrens minds are more serious than the effect on childrens bodies ) . Especially when ( the children are too small to judge what programs are suit to them ) . Indeed, these unique points can be connected to remind paren
31、ts that ( they should pay close attention to and take more responsibilities for supervising their childrens TV viewing ).In this way ,children will not be influenced too deeply.,阐述主题型,引出主题并加以解释。举例（1、2）论证主题中心思想。结合自身，突出主题并进行展望。,图表式作文,一、图表说明二、分析图表（原因）三、趋势预测,It is obvious in the graphic/table that the r
32、ate/number/amount of Y has undergone dramatic changes. It has gone up/grown/fallen /dropped considerably in recent years (as X varies).At the point of X1, Y reaches its peak value of (多少).,What is the reason for this change? Mainly there are (多少) reasons behind the situation reflected in the graphic
33、/table.First of all, (第一个原因).More importantly, (第二个原因).Most important of all, (第三个原因).,From the above discussions, we have enough reasons to predict what will happen in the near future. The trend described in the graphic /table will continue for quite a long time (if necessary measures are not taken
34、括号里的使用于那些不太好的变化趋势).,第一段、说明图表 主题句图表说明1图表说明2图表说明3 第二段、说明引起变化的原因 主题句原因1原因2原因3第三段、说明影响或者提出解决办法 主题句+建议+前景预测,Directions：For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic People Below Poverty Line. 1、下图所示为1978年，1985年1997年中国贫困线以下人口的变化情况，请先描述其变化。 2、请说明发生这些变化的原因（可从改革开放、高科技在生产中的
35、应用等） 3、你认为解决目前中国贫困人口还有什么困难或者问题。DIY写作模板：架构阶段 第一段：说明图表 开篇句：As the bar chart shows, _ during the years of _ to _. 扩展句：1、As early as _. 2、Then _ years later, _. 3、And arriving in the year _, _. 第二段：解释图表变化原因 主题句：Several factors contribute to _. 扩展句：1、_. (原因1) 2、And _.(原因2) 3、Furthermore, _ (原因3) 4、All th
36、ese result in _.第三段：提出解决办法 结尾句： However, _ is faced with some problems. 扩展句：1、With _, _, the effect of which is not only discouraging, but also challenging. 2、So my principle is to pay due attention to _, but not just to _.,第一段：说明图表 开篇句：As the bar chart shows, the number of people below the poverty
37、line decreased dramatically during the years of 1978 to 1997. 扩展句：1、As early as 1978, about 250 million people were under the poverty line. 2、Then seven years later, the number became three fifths that of 1978. 3、And arriving in the year 1997, the number was reduced to 50 millions. 第二段：解释图表变化原因 主题句：
38、Several factors contribute to the sharp decrease of the below-poverty population. 扩展句：1、The reform and opening following 1978 enabled the peasants to become much better off. (原因1) 2、And with the development of Chinese economy, that policy also improved city dwellers lives greatly.(原因2) 3、Furthermore
39、, the high-tech introduced made it possible for the countrys economy as a whole to take off. (原因3) 4、All these result in the great fall of the Chinese population below the poverty line.第三段：提出解决办法 结尾句： However, a further decrease in the number of poverty-stricken people is faced with some problems. 扩
40、展句：1、With quite few employees being laid off, the effect of which is not only discouraging, but also challenging. 2、So my principle is to pay due attention to the “newcomers“, but not just to care for the poor, say , in remote mountain areas.,第三部分、范文 As the bar chart shows, the number of people belo
41、w the poverty line decreased dramatically during the years of 1978 to 1997.As early as 1978, about 250 million people were under the poverty line. Then seven years later, the number became three fifths that of 1978.And arriving in the year 1997, the number was reduced to 50 millions. Several factors
42、 contribute to the sharp decrease of the below-poverty population. The reform and opening following 1978 enabled the peasants to become much better off. And with the development of Chinese economy, that policy also omproved city dwellers lives greatly. Furthermore, the high-tech introduced made it p
43、ossible for the countrys economy as a whole to take off. All these result in the great fall of the Chinese population below the poverty line.However, a further decrease in the number of poverty-stricken people is faced with some problems. With quite few employees being laid off, the effect of which
44、is not only discouraging, but also challenging. So my principle is to pay due attention to the “newcomers“, but not just to care for the poor, say , in remote mountain areas.,英文信函题型,要求考生根据提纲写一封英文书信，如2005年12月六级作文、2005年1月四六级作文、2004年6月四六级作文、2004年1月四级作文。对这类题型，通常分为5个步骤来写： 第一段、文章开头：称呼 第二段、寒暄语句，引出写信的目的： 寒暄
45、句主题句（注：寒暄句和主题句可以是同一个句子） 第三段、根据提纲扩展主体段落： 主题句扩展句1+扩展句2+扩展句3 第四段、表明自己的观点，并结束书信主体段落 在最后要他谈自己的看法 第五段、寒暄句+落款Directions：For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topicA Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service Campus. You should write at least 120 words
46、 and you should base your composition on the outline below: 假如你是李明，请你就本学校食堂的状况给校长写一封信，内容应包括：食堂的饭菜质量、价格、环境、服务等，可以是表扬，也可以是批评建议，也可以都有。,写作模板：架构阶段 第一段：称呼 Dear Mr. President, 第二段：引出写信的目的 主题句： This letter comes to you from _. 扩展句： In it, some opinions are put forward for you to reflect upon. 第三段：对学校食堂正面的看法
47、 主题句：As you know, _ . But unfortunately, _. 扩展句：1、_. (举例)As a result, _. 2、Besides, _. 3、And whats more,_. 第四段：对学校食堂负面的看法 主题句：Some people may argue that _. 扩展句：1、For instance, _ and _. 2、But in my opinon, _. 第五段：结尾，表明自己看法 结尾句：To be belief, though a bit dissatisfied with _. 扩展句：I do believe that, wit
48、h the efforts of all people concerned, we can solved the problems there. Thanks.Li Ming,写作模板：填充阶段 第一段：称呼 Dear Mr. President, 第二段：引出写信的目的 主题句： This letter comes to you from one of your students. 扩展句： In it, some opinions are put forward for you to reflect upon. 第三段：对学校食堂的看法 主题句：As you know, our stude
49、nts are the main customers of the university canteen. But unfortunately, we dont find the service there satisfying sometimes. 扩展句：1、The food is not as nutritious as it should be. (举例)As a result, some of us become thinner and weaker at university. 2、Besides, sometimes the canteen people just bring u
50、s steamed bread with their dirty bare hands. 3、And whats more, the fare is also a little higher at university. 第四段：别人对食堂看法 主题句：Some people may argue that measures have been taken and things are improving there. 扩展句：1、For instance,Ic cardshave taken the place of money in the canteed, and the attitude
51、 of the service people is also changing. 2、But in my opinon, progress is not so quick and thorough. 第五段：结尾，表明自己看法 结尾句：To be belief, though a bit dissatisfied with the present canteen conditions, 扩展句：I do believe that, with the efforts of all people concerned, we can solved the problems there. Thanks.,
