1、六级强化写作,刘业平/Amy ,课程主要内容,如何得高分,作文现存问题,1,十年六级作文 题目分析,New Oriental Education & Technology Group,1.时间与字数,30分钟,180-200词,2.六级作文答题卡使用说明,3.写作时间安排,5+20+5,4.改卷,New Oriental Education & Technology Group Domestic Dept. Wuhan 430000,New Oriental Education & Technology Group Domestic Dept. Dalian,New Oriental Educ
2、ation & Technology Group Domestic Dept. Wuhan 430000,2006-12 The Importance of Reading Classics2007-06 Should One Expect a Reward When Doing a Good Deed? 2007-12 Digital Age2008-06 Will E-books Replace Traditional Books?2008-12 How To Improve Students Mental Health? 2009-06 On the Importance of a Na
3、me 2009-12 Should Parents Send Their Kids to Art Classes? 2010-06 Due Attention Should Be Given to the Study of Chinese?2010-12 My Views on University Ranking. 2011-06 The Certificate Craze2011-12 The Way to Success,New Oriental Education & Technology Group Domestic Dept. Wuhan 430000,New Oriental E
4、ducation & Technology Group Domestic Dept. Wuhan,New Oriental Education & Technology Group Domestic Dept. Dalian,2006-06 近年来越多越多的人选择出境旅游（数字） 2006-12 阅读经典书籍对人的成长至关重要 2007-06 应不应该向雷锋学习，做好事不求回报 2007-12 如今数字化产品越来越广泛的使用，并举例 2008-06 电子图书越来越多,会不会取代纸质书籍 2008-12 大学生的心理健康十分重要 2009-06 有人说名字或名称很重要 2009-12 家长应不应
5、该送孩子参加各种艺术班 2010-06 近年来在学生中出现了忽视中文学习的现象 2010-12 对于目前高校排名相当盛行的看法 2011-06 现在许多人热衷于各类证书考试 2011-12 通往成功之路（谚语类）,New Oriental Education & Technology Group Domestic Dept. Wuhan 430000,New Oriental Education & Technology Group Domestic Dept. Dalian,议论文,2006-06 近年来越多越多的人选择出境旅游（数字） 2006-12 阅读经典书籍对人的成长至关重要 200
6、7-06 应不应该向雷锋学习，做好事不求回报 2007-12 如今数字化产品越来越广泛的使用，并举例 2008-06 电子图书越来越多,会不会取代纸质书籍 2008-12 大学生的心理健康十分重要 2009-06 有人说名字或名称很重要 2009-12 家长应不应该送孩子参加各种艺术班 2010-06 近年来在学生中出现了忽视中文学习的现象 2010-12 对于目前高校排名相当盛行的看法 2011-06 现在许多人热衷于各类证书考试 2011-12 通往成功之路,New Oriental Education & Technology Group Domestic Dept. Wuhan 430
7、000,New Oriental Education & Technology Group Domestic Dept. Dalian,说明文,2006-06 越来越多的人出国旅游（表格）2005-12 委婉拒绝公司的职位（书信）,New Oriental Education & Technology Group Domestic Dept. Wuhan 430000,New Oriental Education & Technology Group Domestic Dept. Dalian,议论文（Argumentation) 说明文（Exposition) 图表类 书信类,New Ori
8、ental Education & Technology Group Domestic Dept. Wuhan 430000,New Oriental Education & Technology Group Domestic Dept. Dalian,评分标准 14分 切题。表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯性较好。基本上无语言错误,仅有个别小错。 11分 切题。表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误。 8分 基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚, 文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多,其中有一些是严重错误。 5分 基本切题。表达思想不清楚,连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。 2分 条理不清,思路紊乱,语言
9、支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误,且多数为严重错误,New Oriental Education & Technology Group Domestic Dept. Wuhan 430000,New Oriental Education & Technology Group Domestic Dept. Dalian,书写潦草 小强词汇 句式简单 结构混乱,New Oriental Education & Technology Group Domestic Dept. Wuhan 430000,New Oriental Education & Technology Group Domestic D
10、ept. Dalian,书写问题,相亲这件事，7分靠语气，2分靠表情，1分靠内容，剩下90分都看长相。,2. 小强词汇 拼写： shink idear develope creat seperate,New Oriental Education & Technology Group Domestic Dept. Wuhan 430000,New Oriental Education & Technology Group Domestic Dept. Dalian,enviroment goverment 词性： succeed success,compete competition compe
11、tent competence competitive competitiveness,2. 小强词汇think important get make good,New Oriental Education & Technology Group Domestic Dept. Wuhan 430000,New Oriental Education & Technology Group Domestic Dept. Dalian,Look before you leap.,New Oriental Education & Technology Group Domestic Dept. Wuhan
12、430000,New Oriental Education & Technology Group Domestic Dept. Dalian,高分策略字迹清楚、段落明朗内容完整、紧扣提纲首保正确、再求闪光先总后分、连词用上,单词替换,important 重要的significant crucial vital of great/tremendous importance key,单词替换,对于我来说，意识到这一点是最显著的突破之一。For me, that realization is one of the most significant breakthroughs.,单词替换,我们相信委员
13、会正在调查的这个问题对国家来说是至关重要的。We believe that the question being investigated by the Commission is of crucial importance to the country.,单词替换,common 普遍的universal public shared ubiquitous,单词替换,不管是出于需要，还是出于兴趣爱好，人们重返学校是为了一个共同的目标-提高自己。Out of necessity or out of interests, people go back to school for the shared
14、 goal, that is to improve themselves.,单词替换,opinion 观点perspective standpoint view outlook,单词替换,关于友谊的说法可能有很多种，这使得我们能从别人的观点里看到我们自己。There is much that might be said about friendships. They allow us to see ourselves from the perspective of another.,单词替换,think 想，认为consider argue discuss comment acknowledg
15、e,单词替换,教育对经济上取得成功的重要性是举世公认的一条真理。It is a truth universally acknowledged that education is the key to economic success.,单词替换,good 好的accepted recognized established acknowledged,单词替换,对于大多数的发达国家，把废弃物运输到发展中国家是一个不错的选择。For most developed countries, dumping the waste to the developing countries seems to be
16、an accepted choice.,单词替换,often/always 经常地frequently regularly repeatedly habitually,单词替换,我仍然相信这一点，尽管我承认美国在现实中的做法与其理想经常相去甚远。I still believe this even though I recognize how short the US has frequently come of its ideals.,单词替换,sure/certainly 肯定的absolutely completely undeniably of great certainty uncon
17、ditionally,单词替换,如果你不这样做，你就很可能是错的群众中肯定是存在一些智慧的。If you do not, you may well be wrong there is undeniably some wisdom in crowds.,作文检查,单词拼写检查 语法检查 a/an 句式结构检查 because/so although/butnot only/but alsoyes.,句子改写,基本句子结构基本句型一：SV（主谓） 基本句型二：SVP（主谓表） 基本句型三：SVO（主谓宾） 基本句型四：SVoO（主谓间宾直宾） 基本句型五：SVOC（主谓宾宾补）,句子改写,简单句
18、并列句 复合句,简单句,A(a+) + B(b+) + C(c+)主 谓 宾 主 系 表,所有句型结构都依托这两点 倒过来是倒装 省掉一部分可能变成独立主格结构 中间一部分变化，非谓语动词，从句等,A(a+) + B(b+) + C(c+)主 谓 宾主 系 表,A(a+) + B(b+) + C(c+)主 谓 宾主 系 表,名词形容词介词短语,A(a+) + B(b+) + C(c+)主 谓 宾主 系 表,I am a boyI am hungryWe are in the classroom,A(a+) + B(b+) + C(c+)主 谓 宾主 系 表,名词形容词介词短语,中文:睡觉 V-
19、ingto do,A(a+) + B(b+) + C(c+)主 谓 宾主 系 表,名词形容词介词短语,V-ing to do 从句(表语从句),A(a+) + B(b+) + C(c+)主 谓 宾主 系 表,名词形容词 分词(从动词里分出来当adj.)介词短语,V-ing to do 从句(表语从句),中文: 破 v. 破坏了 adj. 破杯子,English: break broken a broken cupbreaking a breaking(破坏性的) news,A(a+) + B(b+) + C(c+)主 谓 宾主 系 表,名词形容词 分词(从动词里分出来当adj.)介词短语(介宾
20、短语),V-ing to do 从句(表语从句),The patient is out of danger.,1. 并列句,两个或两个以上的简单句用等立连词或用分号、冒号、逗号 等连在一起构成的句子叫并列句。常用的等立连词: and, or, but, so, for, neither, nor, while, whereas 等,Some people waste food. Others have not enough. (while) (whereas),Some people waste food,while others have not enough. (while) (where
21、as),New Oriental Education & Technology Group,2. 复合句(1/4),由一个主句和一个或一个以上的从句所构成的句子结构叫做 复合句，也叫主从复合句。从句可以分为: 主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句、定语从句、状语从句、 同位语从句。,They need more help in English. That is quite obvious.,由一个主句和一个或一个以上的从句所构成的句子结构叫做 复合句，也叫主从复合句。从句可以分为: 主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句、定语从句、状语从句、 同位语从句。,It is quite obvious that th
22、ey need more help in English.,New Oriental Education & Technology Group,2006年12月六级写作真题,众所周知，阅读经典书籍对人的成长至关重要。It is universally acknowledged that reading classic books is vital to a persons growth.,2. 复合句(2/4),由一个主句和一个或一个以上的从句所构成的句子结构叫做 复合句，也叫主从复合句。从句可以分为: 主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句、定语从句、状语从句、 同位语从句。,He is growin
23、g fat. Nothing can hide the fact.,由一个主句和一个或一个以上的从句所构成的句子结构叫做 复合句，也叫主从复合句。从句可以分为: 主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句、定语从句、状语从句、 同位语从句。,Nothing can hide the fact that he is growing fat.,New Oriental Education & Technology Group,2007年12月六级写作,数字产品，信息革命的产物，被越来越广泛的使用。Digital products, the result of the information revolution
24、, has been put into broader use in recent years.,2. 复合句(3/4),由一个主句和一个或一个以上的从句所构成的句子结构叫做 复合句，也叫主从复合句。从句可以分为: 主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句、定语从句、状语从句、 同位语从句。,He is a handsome young man. A lot of girls are attracted to him.,由一个主句和一个或一个以上的从句所构成的句子结构叫做 复合句，也叫主从复合句。从句可以分为: 主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句、定语从句、状语从句、 同位语从句。,He is a handso
25、me young man who is liked by a considerable number of girls.,New Oriental Education & Technology Group,2. 复合句(4/4),由一个主句和一个或一个以上的从句所构成的句子结构叫做 复合句，也叫主从复合句。从句可以分为: 主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句、定语从句、状语从句、 同位语从句。,as long as, on condition that, lest, sothat, suchthat in case, as if, now that, whetheror, however,由一个主句和
26、一个或一个以上的从句所构成的句子结构叫做 复合句，也叫主从复合句。从句可以分为: 主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句、定语从句、状语从句、 同位语从句。,as long as, on condition that, lest, sothat, suchthat in case, as if, now that, whetheror, however,as long as, on condition that, lest, sothat, suchthat in case, as if, now that, whetheror, however,as long as, on condition tha
27、t, lest, sothat, suchthat in case, as if, now that, whetheror, however,as long as, on condition that, lest, sothat, suchthat in case, as if, now that, whetheror, however,as long as, on condition that, lest, sothat, suchthat in case, as if, now that, whetheror, however,as long as, on condition that,
28、lest, sothat, suchthat in case, as if, now that, whetheror, however,as long as, on condition that, lest, sothat, suchthat in case, as if, now that, whetheror, however,as long as, on condition that, lest, sothat, suchthatin case, as if, now that, whetheror,however,New Oriental Education & Technology
29、Group,3. 状语从句(1/2),起伴随或补充说明作用的从句。简单句或并列谓语往往可以 改写为“with+名词+分词/形容词/介词词组”结构做状语。,As all his savings were gone, he started to look for a job.,With all his savings gone, he started to look for a job.,New Oriental Education & Technology Group,3. 状语从句(2/2),两个句子的主语一致时，其中一个往往可以改成分词结构 作状语。,If you study hard, y
30、ou will succeed.,Studying hard, you will succeed.,New Oriental Education & Technology Group,Looking out of the window, I realized that a storm was around the corner.Looking out of the window, the wind was roaring as if it intended to destroy everything that was in its way.,句子改写,状语+主语从句+同位语+定语从句+副词I
31、love Amy. I love Amy and I want to marry her. Although Amy was pursued by many intelligible young men, I love Amy and I want to marry her. Although Amy was pursued by many intelligible young men, I love Amy who is attractive in the most obvious way, and I want to marry her.,句子改写,状语+主语从句+同位语+定语从句+副词A
32、lthough Amy was pursued by many intelligible young men, it is known to all that I love Amy who is attractive in the most obvious way, and I want to marry her in a beautiful chapel where she will be wearing a pure, white dress, even if my dream will not come true, my love for her will not fade away.
33、It will last forever.,Brain Storm,堵车 坏人 有男/女朋友的坏处,Names are important.,Names are significant to everybody and without it, the world will be in chaos.Names, the unique symbol of each person, are significant to everybody and without it, the world will be in chaos.,Names are important.,With the creatio
34、n of the language, names, one of the most important usage of the language and the unique symbol of each person, are significant to everybody, therefore, without it, the world will be in chaos.,2006-06 近年来越多越多的人选择出境旅游（数字） 2006-12 阅读经典书籍对人的成长至关重要 2007-06 应不应该向雷锋学习，做好事不求回报 2007-12 如今数字化产品越来越广泛的使用，并举例 2
35、008-06 电子图书越来越多,会不会取代纸质书籍 2008-12 大学生的心理健康十分重要 2009-06 有人说名字或名称很重要 2009-12 家长应不应该送孩子参加各种艺术班 2010-06 近年来在学生中出现了忽视中文学习的现象 2010-12 对于目前高校排名相当盛行的看法 2011-06 现在许多人热衷于各类证书考试 2011-12 通往成功之路（谚语类）,New Oriental Education & Technology Group Domestic Dept. Wuhan 430000,New Oriental Education & Technology Group D
36、omestic Dept. Dalian,议论文,六级写作-议论文,观点对立型开头描述现象 中间阐述两种观点 结尾阐述自己的观点,支持 VS 反对,support believe in favor of assert stick to adhere to be devoted to abide by,claim state declare appeal to,开头段-描述现象,The 近来的现象 that XX（题目的现象）has 引起巨大的 attention from the public and it 引起 a 热烈的 争论/讨论 among the people. 近来的 recent
37、 current present existing,现象 phenomenon fact occurrence statement,2. 复合句(1/4),由一个主句和一个或一个以上的从句所构成的句子结构叫做 复合句，也叫主从复合句。从句可以分为: 主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句、定语从句、状语从句、 同位语从句。,They need more help in English. That is quite obvious.,由一个主句和一个或一个以上的从句所构成的句子结构叫做 复合句，也叫主从复合句。从句可以分为: 主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句、定语从句、状语从句、 同位语从句。,It is q
38、uite obvious that they need more help in English.,New Oriental Education & Technology Group,2006年12月六级写作真题,众所周知，阅读经典书籍对人的成长至关重要。It is universally acknowledged that reading classic books is vital to a persons growth.,开头段-描述现象,The 近来的现象 that XX（题目的现象）has 引起巨大的 attention from the public and it 引起 a 热烈的
39、 争论/讨论 among the people. 引起 cause trigger initiate set off bring about,巨大的，程度高的 dramatic tremendous remarkable noticeable evident,开头段-描述现象,The 近来的现象 that XX（题目的现象）has 引起巨大的 attention from the public and it 引起 a 热烈的 争论/讨论 among the people. 热烈的 heated intense drastic radical,争论/讨论 discussion debate ar
40、gument,开头段-描述现象,The 近来的现象 that XX（题目的现象）has 引起巨大的 attention from the public and it has 引起 a 热烈的 争论/讨论 among people. 真题演练 2007年6月写作真题,开头段-描述现象,真题演练 2007年6月写作真题 The current phenomenon that whether one should expect reward when doing a good deed has triggered tremendous attention from the public and it
41、 has brought about a heated discussion among people.,开头段-结尾,有两种观点存在。 （接描述）Therefore, there exists two distinct 观点 concerning this phenomenon. Therefore, two different 观点 come into being/existence.,中间段第一种看法+原因,首先, some people 认为 最重要的事 在当下的时间throughout the whole society is (that) 第一种观点。 首先 firstly to
42、begin/start with first of all,现在 nowadays at present time at the moment currently in our time,中间段第一种看法+原因,首先, some people 认为 最重要的事 在当下的时间throughout the whole society is (that) 第一种观点。 真题演练 2009年6月六级写作,中间段第一种看法,首先, some people 认为 that 最重要的(事情) 在当下的时间through out the whole society is (that) 第一种观点。 To be
43、gin with, some people argued that the most vital issue at present throughout the whole society is that abundant emphasis should be placed on the importance of names.,中间段第一种看法,更重要的是, XX can 在某种程度上 help 涉及的人 to maintain 一种品质. 更重要的是 what is more furthermore moreover in addition besides,在某种程度上，以某种方式 in
44、a way to some extent to some degree somewhat,中间段第一种看法,更重要的是, XX can 在某种程度上 help 涉及的人 to maintain 一种品质. 真题演练 2009年6月六级写作,中间段第一种看法,更重要的是, XX can 在某种程度上 help 涉及的人 to maintain 一种品质.what is more, names, can in a way help people to maintain their individuality.,中间段第一种看法,更重要的是, XX can 在某种程度上 help 涉及的人 to m
45、aintain 一种品质.what is more, names, the symbol of each persons characteristics can in a way help people who desire to remain unique to maintain their individuality.,中间段-第二种看法,相反的, other people hold the 观点 that 主题 should not be taken so seriously /should not be given so much 重要性. 相反的 on the contrary in
46、 contrast 重要性 attention,重要性：far-reaching/eventful effects profound attention,中间段-第二种看法,相反的, other people hold the 观点 that 主题 should not be taken so seriously /should not be given so much 重要性. 真题演练 2009年12月六级写作,The recent statement that Name is important has attracted remarkable attention from the Pu
47、blic 大写：句首，国家名，人名，机构名称，书名,the importance of a name: whether the name is important or not should parents send their children to art classes: parents decision of sending their children to art classes.,给别人留下深刻印象： impress sb.: To a woman this is a far better indicator of the person you are in real life
48、because you are not actively trying to impress or hit on her.,给别人留下深刻印象： leave an impression on/upon sb.: You should be conservative in descriptions of your success, lest you leave the impression that you are bragging, or have something to prove.,不要在纸面上随便点点儿。,中间段-第二种看法,人的品质的词语： 勤奋的： diligent, studio
49、us, industrious, assiduous He is assiduous in his studies.,中间段-第二种看法,人的品质的词语： 认真的，谨慎的 conscientious, cautious 冷静的，清醒的 sober, reasonable, sensible, rational 聪明的，有才智的 intelligent，bright，wise，brilliant,中间段-第二种看法,相反的, other people hold the 观点 that 主题 should not be taken so seriously /should not be given so much 重要性.On the contrary, other people hold the standpoint that children attending art classes should not be given so much attention.,
