1、六级写作专题,六级作文简介 主题阐述型写作 观点对立型写作 图表作文写作 应用文写作 总结,内容提要,一 六级作文简介,六级作文命题类型,(1). 现象类作文a.现象阐释类b.问题解决类 (2). 观点类作文a.观点选择类作文b.观点论证类作文,4,(3). 图表类作文a.影响分析类b.问题解决类 (4). 应用类作文a.书信b.演讲,现象解释型,问题解决型,观点对比型,文章总体构建,写作五条黄金法则,印象给分（2 5 8 11 14） 1. 提纲要点翻译成英文各段中心句 2. 惊艳学会制造亮点（尤其第一段） 3. 清晰学会使用标志词（尤其是主体段） 4. 卷面保持清楚 再次强调：文章分成三段
2、,单词替换,1.名词化,1.1 形容词名词翻译：知识非常重要。 Knowledge is very important.Knowledge is of great importance.*The importance of knowledge is obvious.,名词化,1.2 动词名词We should take measures to save wild animals.We should take measures for the safety of wild animals.,名词化,Summary1.1 be adj be of + n n is 1.2 to do sth fo
3、r sth,2. 表达“人们”,万恶的“people”Some people believe that education is important. Other people do not agree. However, all people need to study, because no people can grow without it. 4.1 直接去掉 people Some believe that education is important. Others do not agree. However, all need to study, because none can
4、 grow without it.,表达“人们”,“人们”作主语的时候翻译：一些人认为电子书对孩子是有好处的。 Some people believe that E-book is beneficial for kids.individuals,表达“人们”,表达“在人们中”这个问题引起了人们热烈的讨论。 This has aroused hot discussion among people. the society the general public.,表达“人们”,Summarypeople 4.1 直接去掉 4.2 the society/ the general public 4.
5、3 individuals 4.4 human being,3. 表达“重要”,表达“重大，显著”翻译：iPod是苹果公司最重大的发明之一 One of the most _ inventions of Apple company is iPod.significant remarkable,表达“重要”,表达“关键的” 翻译：勤奋是成功的关键 Hard work is _ to success.essential,表达“重要”,一个黄金词组 翻译：互联网对开阔我们的眼界至关重要。 The Internet plays a _ role in widening our eyes.vital w
6、iden ones eyes? broaden ones horizons widen knowledge; enrich experience;,表达“重要”,Summaryimportant 3.1 significant/ remarkable 3.2 essential 3.3 indispensable 3.4 play critical/ crucial/ vital role,4. 表达“将会”,will/ would?翻译：石油资源会在未来几十年被耗尽。 Petrol resource will be used up in a few decades.6.1 is likely
7、 to 6.2 tends to,Exercise 1,翻译：大多数人认为，英语会变得更重要。Most people think that English will become more important.According to most individuals, the significance of English tends to increase.,5. 表达“许多”,翻译：很多人在金融危机中损失了很多钱。可数：numerous; a large number of 不可数：mass; a vast amount ofA large number of investors had
8、 lost a vast amount of money in the financial crisis. Numerous investors had gain a mass profit.,6. 表达“现在”,Nowadays, environmentally friendly products are becoming more and more popular.currently in contemporary society in this day and age,Exercise 2,翻译：现在，很多人过上了比以前更好的生活。Nowadays, many people live a
9、 better life than before.Currently, a vast number of individuals live a relatively decent life compared with the past.,7. 表达“越来越”,越来越多的刚刚毕业的大学生发现越来越难找到好工作。菜鸟级 More and more college graduates who have just graduated from university find that finding a good job is more and more difficult.,表达“越来越”,越来越多
10、的刚刚毕业的大学生发现越来越难找到好工作。大鸟级 A growing number of fresh graduates find that obtaining a decent job is increasingly difficult.,表达“越来越”,more and more adj= increasingly adj= n is on the risemore and more n = a growing number of nthe number of n is growing,8. 表达“好”,表达“对有好处”翻译：上艺术班对孩子们是有好处的 Attending art clas
11、ses is _good_ for kids.beneficialprofitable,表达“好”,表达“优秀”（好学生、好产品）a good studentoutstanding extraordinary,Exercise,开头句大众脸：With the development of science and technology, our life is more and more convenient. 开头句明星脸：With the expansion of IT implication, our life is of increasing convenience.,二 主题阐述型写作
12、 （现象解释型&问题解决型）,1.近年来在学生中出现了忽视中文学习的现象； 2.出现这种现象的原因和后果； 3.我认为,Due Attention Should Be Given to the Study of Chinese,习作讲解-现象解释型,写作分析,第一步：审题（2分钟） 1. 题目：学生忽视中文学习的现象 2. 三个段首句： A段. 引出现象及造成的影响。 B段. 指出造成这种现象的原因。 C段. 表明你的个人观点及建议,第二步：布局（15分钟） 1. 用英语铺设三个段首句： A段： People, especially the youths, pay much more atte
13、ntion to foreign language acquisition than Chinese study. B段：Various factors can account for this situation. C段： In view of this situation, effective measures should be taken to change it.,2. 列出三段各自框架及语言要点：（只写出基本句型结构和句子主要素） A段：拓展句： With Chinas opening up, intercultural communication has become more
14、and more frequent between Chinese and foreigners. B 段：拓展句： A. some students B. universities,C段：拓展句： The whole society should emphasize the importance of Chinese language B. Schools should promote Chinese language study and research. C. We individuals should contribute our own efforts to the study an
15、d protection of Chinese language. 结尾句：To conclude, we should pay great attention to Chinese language, since the importance of it is never too great to be exaggerated.,Sample:近年来在学生中出现了忽视中文学习的现象 With Chinas opening up, intercultural communication hasbecome more and more frequent between Chinese and f
16、oreigners. A good command of at least one foreign language has increasingly been an essential skill for us. People, especially the youths, pay much more attention to foreign language acquisition than Chinese study.,句型转换,Various factors can account for this situation. First of all, a good command of
17、a foreign language may help young peopleto get a good job while Chinese skills may be of no significance in ones job hunting and even their career. Consequently, some students may not treasure Chinese language any longer. Apart from that, nowadays fewer and fewer universities stimulate Chinese langu
18、age study in campus, which has caused it to be marginalized. Under this circumstance,Chinese language becomes less and less popular in universities.It is clear that professors in the field of Chinese study are not so respected than they were before.,Sample:出现这种现象的原因和后果,In view of this situation, eff
19、ective measures should be taken to change it. First, the whole society should emphasize the importance of Chinese language in order to make it clear that it is one indispensable part of Chinese culture and Chinese race. Second, schools should promote Chinese language study and research. In addition,
20、 we individuals should contribute our own efforts to the study and protection of Chinese language. To conclude, we should pay great attention to Chinese language, since the importance of it is never too great to be exaggerated.,Sample:我认为,With the development of modern society, more and more peopleT
21、hus, has aroused wide concern among college students. According to, people, especially college students, are showing more and more interest in As society develops, people are attaching much importance to. Therefore, gradually becomes a heated discussion in the society. Recently the rise in problem o
22、f/(phenomenon of) . has cause/arousedpublic/popular/wide/worldwide concern. Now there is a growing awareness/recognition of the necessity to Now people become increasingly aware/conscious of the importance of In recent years there exists an increasingly serious social and economicproblem of,开头句,Ther
23、e are numerous reasons why. And I would like to explore a few of the most important ones here. Firstly; Secondly; Finally.Why such phenomenon is so heated recently? Id like to present two explanations for this. For one thing; For another. There are a couple of reasons producing this problem. This ph
24、enomenon exists for a number of reasons. First,Second,Third, I quite agree with the statement thatThe reasons are chiefly as follows.,表原因,For the reasons listed above, I think effective measures should be taken to prevent things getting worse. It is high time that we put an end to the (trend). It is
25、 time to take the advice ofand to put special emphasis on the improvement of There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of Obviously, if we want to do sth, it is essential that Only in this way can we It must be realized that ,结尾段,first, second, third, last firstly, secondly,
26、thirdly, finally the first, the second, the third, the last in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly to begin with, then, furthermore, finally（强烈推荐） to start with, next, in addition, finally（强烈推荐） first and foremost, besides, last but not least（强烈推荐） most important of all,
27、 moreover, finally on the one hand, on the other hand（适用于两点的情况） for one thing, for another thing（适用于两点的情况）,连接词,Nowadays/In recent years/In modern society, 描述问题，which has/have been brought into focus/aroused great concern . (进一步描述问题或变化) The reasons for this phenomenon are varied. Among all these reas
28、ons,原因一 plays/play a critical role. Moreover/Furthermore/Whats more,原因二. Besides, 原因三. In view of the seriousness of the problem, effective measures must be taken before things get worse. /Considering the seriousness of the problem, it is an urgent thing or us to take effective measures to 解决该 问题. F
29、irst of all, 方法一. Moreover, 方法二. In addition, 方法三. Onlythrough these ways/Only in this way该问题才能解决.,现象解释型作文模板,Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a short essay entitled Reduce Waste on Campus. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:有些大学校园浪
30、费的现象日益严重 浪费的危害 杜绝浪费，从我做起,习作讲解-问题解决型,Nobody could have failed to notice the fact that wasting has been a grave problem with which we are confronted. Taking a look around, we can find examples too numerousto list: in the dining hall, much food are left in the plates and dumped into the trash can; in t
31、he classroom, blank pieces of paper are left on the desks; in the dorm building,taps are left open and water left running all the time.,Wasting is bound to generate severe consequences if we keep turning a blind eye to it. First and foremost, it put strains on the already short supply of food, water
32、, electricity and the like. Besides, it goes against traditional virtue of hard work and simple living and may leads to a luxurious life style, which is dangerous to the souls of mankind.,In view of the seriousness of this problem, effective measures must be taken before things get worse. First, it
33、is essential that regulations be worked out and enforced to ban wasting. Secondly, students should enhance their awareness of saving resources. With proper laws and an alert public, it will only be a matter of time for wasting to become a thing of the past.,Confronted with this issue/problem/phenome
34、non, we should take a series of effective measures. A great number of solutions are being offered. There are several measures for us to adopt. People have already figured out many ways to solve this issue/problem/phenomenon.,表建议,As is known to all, waste on campus has become a more and more serious
35、problem. We can easily see many students dump a lot of food in the garbage can. Some students spend thousands of yuan buying fashionable clothes and so on.The negative effects of waste can be shown in the following aspects. Inthe first place, it makes some students dependent on their parents for mon
36、ey, which is harmful to their development. If they dont learn to support themselves, they will be “useless people” when they graduate. In the second place, it is not easy for our parents to arrange for our schooling. Last but not the least important, there is no denying the fact that our country is
37、still poor. There are many people who cannot go to university and many poor people still need our help.As far as I am concerned, I should set a good example to reduce waste on campus. First of all, I will refrain from wasting anything, fromfood to stationery. Whats more, Im determined to call on mor
38、e schoolmates to fight against waste. Only through these measures can we hope to reduce waste on campus.,解决问题In view of the seriousness of the phenomenon, effective measures should be taken. On one hand, it is high time that people all over China realized the seriousness of the phenomenon; On the ot
39、her hand, the government should issue laws and regulations to put the situation under control. Only in these way can we successfully solve the problem.,提出问题Nobody could have failed to notice the fact that 问题 have been a grave problem with which we are confronted.,分析问题危害 问题 are bound to generate seve
40、re consequences if we keep turning a blind eye to them. First and foremost, Besides, Last but not least, .,问题解决型模板,Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic My View on Fake Commodities. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition
41、 on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1. 假冒伪劣商品的危害 2. 怎样杜绝假冒伪劣商品,Homework,9. My View on Fake CommoditiesNobody could have failed to notice the fact that fake commodities have been a grave problem with which we are confronted. Fake and shoddy goods flood the market.Taking a look around, we can fi
42、nd examples too numerous to list: pirated editions of books and films, food and drinks of poor quality and the like.,Fake and shoddy goods are bound to generate severe consequences if we keep turning a blind eye to them. First andforemost, they directly infringe upon consumers rights, wasting their
43、money and threatening their health and even lives. Besides, the production and sale of fake goods cause serious losses on the part of honest and lawful producers. Last but not least, the destruction of fake commodities means a grievous waste of the nations resources.,In view of the seriousness of th
44、is problem, effective measures must be taken before things get worse. First, it is essential that laws and regulations be worked out and enforced to ban the manufacture and circulation of fake and shoddy goods. Secondly, the public should enhance their awareness of identifying and refusing sub-stand
45、ard commodities. With proper laws and an alert public, it will only be a matter of time for fake and shoddy goods to become things of the past. / With these measures taken, it is reasonable for us to believe that the problem will be solved in the near future.,三 观点对立型,1995年6月 Directions: For this par
46、t, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Should Firecrackers Be Banned? You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:有人认为放鞭炮是好事，为什么?有人认为放鞭炮是坏事，为什么?我的看法,观点对比型：辨析两种对立观点,习作讲解,There is no denying the fact that s
47、etting off firecrackers has been a hotly debated topic in China. Peoples opinionsdiffer sharply on this issue. Some hold the positive view. They say that it is an ancient Chinese custom which shouldbe preserved. They also claim that firecrackers make festivals and holiday occasions more colorful and
48、 entertaining for both adults and children. Without firecrackers, festivals would become dull and cheerless.,Others, however, hold the opposite view. They maintain that firecrackers should be banned. They point out that firecrackers are responsible for fires, which destroy, property, and for injurie
49、s suffered both by the people whoset them off and by innocent bystanders. They also argue that firecrackers are a waste of money and resources.,Personally, I believe that we should not go to extremes. On the one hand, we should preserve the old custom of Letting off firecrackers; on the other hand,
50、we should make it harmless. This can be done by banning firecrackersfrom public places. In addition, the setting off of firecrackers should be restricted to festival days.,There has sprung up a heated debate as to whether . Some maintain that. However, others believe that There is a public debate today over . Some people believe. Others claim that Peoples opinions vary when they talk about . Some maintain that. Others believe that There is no consensus of opinion in society about,
