1、Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship.Tips: Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.,Recently, theres a hot debate on the issue that telling the truth or not is the most important consid
2、eration in the relationship between people . For my experience , I think telling a truth is the most important consideration in peoples relationships . In the following , I will illustrate my opinion. First of all, Secondly, On the contrary To sum up.,The Basic Version,Some people believe that it is
3、 one of the most important values in many relationships to tell the truth all the time. However ,it cannot always be the best choice to tell the truth in many situations. Sometimes white lies are indispensable to keep relationships more lively and delightingly . There are some examples to support th
4、is idea.,Firstly,in the relationships between lovers, it is often essential to compliment their lovers on their appearance and their behavior. Even though they do not think that their boy/girlfriend looks good on their new shoes and new clothes, it will always diss them by telling the truth. On the
5、other hand, little complements will make them confident and happy thus making their relationships more tight.,Secondly, parents need to encourage their children by telling lies. Even if they are doing bad work on studying or exercising, telling the truth will hurt their hearts. What they need is a l
6、ittle encouraging words instead of truthful words.Thirdly, for some patients telling them their current state of their disease will probably desperate them. It is accepted publically not to,let the patients know the truth. They may be able to have hope to overcome their disease without knowing the t
7、ruth.In conclusion, it is not always better to tell the truth than lies. Some lies are acceptable in terms of making peoples life more frofusely. Not everybody has to know the truth, and it will lead them happier by not knowing it. In these cases, white lies are worthy of being regarded as a virtue
8、of peoples relationships.,Raters Comments:,This essay focuses on explaining why “white lies” are sometimes appropriate. The explanations here are “some what” developed. Each example supports the writers main point, but in every case, the writer does not say why the positive effect of the” white lie”
9、 outweighs any negative effect. Theres a inconsistent control of structure and vocabulary, with some errors in both structure and vocabulary obscuring meaning ”keep relationsgilightly,” “will propably desperate them” “making peoples life more profusely,” “it will lead them happier not knowing it” et
10、c. These weaknesses and errors earn this essay less scores.,The Premium Version,Dishonesty Kills Reliability.,There are certain considerations or factors that everyone takes into consideration in a relationship. People may look for honesty, altruism, understanding, loyalty, being thoughtful, etc! Ev
11、eryone would more or less wish that the person s/he is dealing with, has some of these virtues above. Putting them in an order according to their importance, however can be very subjective and relative.,When someone asks him/herself the question “What do I consider to be the most important thing in
12、my relationsip ?”The answer depends on a lot of factors such as how his/her earlier relationships were.After stating that everyones opinion can be different about this , for my honesty , in other words , always telling the truth is the most important consideration in a relationship . Opposite of thi
13、s is,inarguably lying and if someone needs to lie , either s/he is hiding something or is afraid of telling me something.In any relationship of mine , I would wish that first of all , the person Im dealing with is honest . Even though s/he thinks that s/he did something wrong that I wouldnt like , s
14、/hed better tell me the truth and not lie about it . Later on if I find out about a lie or hear the truth from someone else , thatd be much more unpleasant . In that case how,can I ever believe or trust that person again ? How can I ever believe that this person has enough confidence in me to forgiv
15、e him/her and carry on with the relationship from there? So if I cannot trust a person any more , if the person doesnt think I can handle the truth , theres no point in continuing that relationship. Although I would like to see altruistic , understanding , being thoughtful , and loyal behavior from
16、people , an instance of the,opposite of these behaviors would not upset me as much as dishonesty would . Among all the possible behaviors , dishonesty is the only one for me which terminates how I feel about a persons reliability . Therefore honesty would be my first concern and the most important c
17、onsideration in a relationship.,Raters Comments:,In this response the writer first approaches the topic by underscoring that a number of character traits are important to a relationship . The writer then effectively develops an argument that unlikes other negative behaviors , dishonesty or unwilling
18、ness to fully disclose some bad action that cannot be forgiven and can be the most important factor in destroying a relationship . The writers language is fluent , accurate , and varied enough to effectively support the progression and connection of ideas . Theres a variety of sentence structures ,
19、including rhetorical questions . The essay is not mechanically perfect , but as long as such errors are occasional , minor , and do not interfere with the readers understanding , an essay like this can still earn a top score.,Tips to all students: 句子应写成葡萄串式,多用一些定语从句,同谓语从句,插入语来提高句子的档次. e.g. Why, you
20、may wonder, To some people ,in there minds eye,I,to go abroad to continue my studies, willing to go to generally speakingdubiously speaking frankly speakingseemingly enoughstrangely enough 开头几句无关痛痒的话尽量不要写,以免影响整篇文章的档次. e.g. Recently, theres a hot debate on the issue that telling the truth or not is the most important consideration in the relationship between people . (这样就等于把话题再重复了一遍，直接导致阅卷老师不想看）,关于终极模板： 每个人都要有个性化的模板，只等参考给定的模板，不能完全依赖它。,Thank You!信息65班 王龙 06052131 王浙波 06052132,
