1、大学英语六级写作,六级考试的总体要求：大学英语六级考试作文的目的旨在考核学生书面英语表达的能力。作文考试时间为30分钟，要求写出不少于150个词的短文。从中我们可以解读出什么信息？,1 书面英语 2 30分钟 3 150词,书面英语： 在交通事故见证书的写作当中，用到了警察的概念。 Police Cop Itsit is Ill I will sth,30分钟时间 好作文是准备出来的，不是在考场上写出来的,150词-200 从绝望中寻找希望，人生终将辉煌,写作文有什么感觉？ 很难！ 什么地方难？,词汇 内容 语法 结构 句型,关于词汇： 今天天气很好 Good Nice Fine,Sunny
2、形象而具体,我去了一家很好的餐馆。 Good? Delicious?,Luxurious Exotic Magnificent Romantic,谁说记不住单词？ 没有不好使的记性，只有克服不了的懒惰 不要给自己找接口,语法,刀是用来切割的工具 Knife is used to cut be a tool The knife is to cutting Cut v,A knife is a tool for cutting.,要求大家掌握的三项语法： 时态： 总共有16种，只要求掌握其中的6种即可。 一般现在时 一般将来时 一般过去时 现在进行时 现在完成时 过去完成时,为什么会在时态上出现很
3、多错误？ 汉语有没有时态？,昨天我去了滇池。 明天我要去滇池。,汉语的时态变化不需要通过对谓语动词在形式上做改变来实现。 英语的时态变化就是要改变谓语动词的形式。,本来应该用其它时态的句子被我们误用为一般现在时态。,语态： 主动语态 被动语态,Be + V-ed时态 ：be + v-ing 语态: be + v-edbe+ being+ v-ed,Am/is/are +V-ed Was/were +V-ed,时态：be +V-ing 语态： be+ V-edbe+ being + V-edHave been V-ed,从句结构 从句总共有几种？,第一类：名词性从句：主语从句宾语从句表语从句同位
4、语从句 第二类：形容词性从句：定语从句 第三类：副词性从句：状语从句,句子 写作文的最基本的单位应该是什么？,按照难易程度，句子可以分为几类？,简单句 并列句 复杂句,简单句：只包含有一套主谓结构的句子 并列句： 复合句：,哪一类句子上错误最多？ 复合句？,简单句！ 并列句和复合句都是由简单句组合而成的。,如何写好简单句？,主谓 主谓宾 主谓双宾 主谓宾宾补 主系表 There be,水会蒸发。 人生意味着拼搏。 大卫贝克汉姆真的很酷。 女朋友给我买了一双皮鞋和一件T恤。 老师指定王小虎做我们班长。 有很多学生出国学习。 Evaporate struggle appoint,Water can
5、 evaporate. Water evaporates.,Life means struggle. Life means struggling. DB Dove David beckham is really cool. Reallyextremely, totally, Cool- attractive, charming Is- looks, appears,DB David Beckham is really cool Ck GF Girlfriend,Reallyextremely,Coolattractive Coolcharming,Islooks Isappears,David
6、 Beckham appears extremely attractive.,(my) girlfriend bought a pair of leather shoes and a T-shirt for me.,Our teacher appointed Wang Xiaohu as our monitor. Wang Xiaohu was appointed as our monitor.,Many students go abroad to study. There are many students go abroad to study. There are many student
7、s going abroad to study. There are many students who go abroad to study. 第二册 1-24,复合句： 复合句=两个简单句+逻辑关系 写一个复合句的过程可以分解为写两个简单句，然后在把两个简单句按照一定的逻辑关系进行叠加。 以定语从句为例：,人类最先有什么词？ 动词？ 名词？ 形容词？,名词 数词 形容词,形容词拿来做定语，用来说明的名词的某些特征。 用一个句子拿来做定语。,站在那边的那个帅小伙是我的室友。,That handsome boy is my roommate.,That handsome boy is stan
8、ding there.,That handsome boy who is standing there is my roommate.,Those passengers and suitcases that are still waiting have to be transferred to another flight.July and August are months when=in which it is very hot.,That man is Li Lu. We saw/met that man. That man whom/who/that we saw/met is Li
9、Lu.,Called Named,That man whom we saw just now is called Li Lu.,Water can lead to serious illness. Water is not pure. Water is impure. Water that is impure can lead to serious illness.,The water that is impure can lead to serious illness. Cause Result in Give rise to,Boys stand up Boys standed up Bo
10、ys stood upBoys have been called their names. Boys names have been called. Boys were called their names. Boys names were called,Those boys whose names were called stood up.,Those passengers and their luggage/baggage Suitcases Must Have to Should Transferred Be transferred Plane Flight,Those passenge
11、rs and suitcases that are still waiting have to be transferred to another flight.,July and August are months. The months are very hot. The weather is very hot.,July and August are months when the weather is very hot.,名词性从句 由连词that引导的名词性从句,It is obvious that you need more practice.,(That) you need mo
12、re practice is obvious.,由连接代词what, who引导的名词性从句： 他告诉我们的是对的。 The thing that he told us is true. The thing that=what What he told us is true.,人们普遍认为自然资源是有限的。 越来越多的人们达成共识：克隆人体器官是不合伦理的。Consensus organ unethical 有人建议大城市应该限制私家车来解决能源短缺的问题。 现阶段人们更加关心的是政府能否创造更多的就业机会。,There is a growing consensus that to clone
13、 human organs is unethical.What people are more concerned with at this stage is whether our can create more job opportunities.,连接副词 when where why how Job hopping This is why many white collars regard job hopping as an opportunity to explore their potentials.,What people are more concerned with at t
14、his stage is whether our authorities can create more job opportunities. Be concerned with Whether children should be given pocket money has sparked a heated argument. spark,Some people suggest that big cities should limit private cars to solve the issue of energy shortage. It is suggested that priva
15、te cars should be restricted in big cities to. This is why many white collars regard job-hopping as an opportunity to tap their potentials.,It is widely accepted that natural resources are limited. It has been long accepted that It is suggested that private cars should be restricted in the big citie
16、s to solve the issue of energy shortage. There is a growing consensus that it is unethical to clone human organs. There is a suggestion that,Whether (or not) 该不该给小孩零花钱引发了激烈的争论。 Whether or not children should be given pocket money has sparked a heated argument.,连接代词 Who What What he told us is true.,
17、状语从句： 时间状语从句 地点状语从句 原因状语从句 让步状语从句,这就是许多白领视跳槽为挖掘自身的潜能的机会的原因。,内容： 把简单的内容用丰富多彩的语言表达出来。结构： 三段式,议论文,“现象+议论”类型的议论文是现阶段最有可能考到的一种类型。 因为这种文体可以同时考到描述和议论两种段落的写作。,Say No to Pirated Products. 1 目前盗版的现象比较严重（现象的描述） 2 造成这种现象的原因及危害（议论部分） 3 我们应该怎么做（解决的方案）2005年6月试题,这篇文章可以分为三个自然段，每个自然段完成题目给出的一个写作任务。 通过这篇文章的学习，我们可以掌握三种重
18、要的功能段落的写作方法。 第一个自然段的写作任务是现象描述。一般来说，这个自然段有两个写作的任务：一个是引入话题，一个是对话题进行适当的拓展。,这篇文章我们在引入主题的时候可以说： 现在，盗版问题在中国变得越来越严重了。 语句的顺序问题： 明天一大早我们将在码头为他送行。 时间状语 主语 地点状语 宾语 谓语 We will meet him,Nowadays, the problem of piracy has become more and more serious in china. Nowadays, one of the fundamental problems china is f
19、aced with is Nowadays, the phenomenon of has become more and more popular on campus. 六级作文考到的主题要么是跟社会现象有关，要么是跟学校生活相关。 Be confronted with,除了上述的两种功能句，我们还可以记住如下的两个句子： Recently the issue of/ the problem of / the phenomenon of has been brought into focus on a large scale. In our daily life, there are more
20、 and more 上述的四个句子能够帮助我们很好的引出主题。,第二句话的主要目的在于对题目进行适当的展开，用以支撑第一句话。 常用的方法有两种： 一种是举例子 一种是列数字,首先看举例子的方式： 就这篇作文而言，我们可以列举在日常生活当中，都有哪些东西被盗版了，例如：盗版书，盗版磁带，盗版软件。都是我们的学生生活当中最常见的。,书，磁带，软件和其它高科技产品已经被非法复制了。 Tapes Software Illegally Reproduce,Books, tapes, software and other high-technology products have been illega
21、lly reproduced.,如果在这里还希望对盗版现象做出更近一步的拓展，我们还可以说： 有时候，甚至在新产品正式推出之前，盗版产品就已经出现在了市场上了。 In some cases Formally Introduce,In some cases, even before a new product is formally introduced to the public, its pirated counterpart has already been found in the market.,一般来说，对现象的展开不宜太多，否则的话容易造成整篇文章结构的不均衡。 现象描述段一般不会
22、超过三句话。,在对现象进行拓展的时候，还有一种常用的方法就引述数字。这种做法的好处在于一方面可以增加字数，另一方面可以使得自己的文章更加具有权威性。 引述数字的时候常用的表达方式： According to a recent survey,如果为了增加字数，我们可以写成： According to a recent survey made by,Dr. Wang, the dean of our department CCTV, the most authoritative television station in China CHINA DAILY, one of the most aut
23、horitative newspapers in China,合理的使用插入语，会大大的增加我们的作文字数： 我通过了大学英语六级考试。I passed the CET-6. I, Wang Xiaohu, such an NB boy, passed the CET-6, the most BT exam of the world，with a high mark,第二段，分析原因。 第一句肯定是作为这一段的topic sentence来统领全段。,The reason that accounts for this problem is obvious. This problem/pheno
24、menon may arise from the following factors. Some reasons are responsible for this. There are lots of reasons for the dramatic growth/decrease. The phenomenon/change in mainly results from the fact that Why have there been so many? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.,产生盗版的最主要的原因是什么呢？当然是钱！ “钱是
25、万能的” 坏事跟钱有关系，好事跟钱也有关系 It is money, but not anything others, that give rise to 万能套句,如何从钱的角度结合盗版的实例来阐述呢？ 非法生产商可以获得巨大的利益，因为他们能够以极低的价格（ at a very low cost ），用一份正版的产品（ with one authorized copy ）来生产很多的假货。并且，他们不需要花费任何的钱在宣传和促销上。（spendon sth; spendin doing sth）,Authorized copy-copyrighted ones Advertiseadver
26、tising Promote -promotion,illegal producers can make/gain huge profits, as they can make thousands of fake ones at a very low cost just with one authorized copy and they dont spend any money on advertising and promotions.,政府也是万能的： Although central government have formulated numerous measures to loca
27、l governments think little of/ brush over/take no count of/ignored,前面讲的是盗版产品本身，还可以对盗版和正版进行对比。与正版相比较，盗版产品是更加便宜的，同时它也吸引了那些只关注价格的消费者。,Compare-compared with sth,compared with copyrighted ones, the pirated products are always much cheaper, attracting customers who only care about a good price. compared w
28、ith copyrighted ones, the pirated products are always much cheaper, attracting customers who care about nothing but a good price.,于是就会导致一个后果，这个后果是什么呢？结果，尽管质量很差，盗版产品还是比正版的卖的好。,As a result, in spite of their poor quality, pirated products sell better than the genuine ones.,那么，更深一层的影响是什么呢？ 就是越来越多的人加入了盗
29、版的行列中，而没有考虑到对社会造成的危害。 被盗版产品巨大的利益所诱惑，越来越多的人们加入到非法生产的行列当中，忽视了对于社会所带来的巨大危害。 Tempt Get into Illegal business,Tempted by the huge profits, more and more people get into the illegal business, ignoring how much danger it will bring to the society.,考虑一下危害有哪些？ 比如，对原厂家（original producers）发明者 （inventors）和作者（wr
30、iters） 使得他们没有动力再去研发新的产品 动力-motivation,最后一段来讲我们应该如何做。 这种功能段我们称之为“建议解决段”。 盗版已经蔓延的如此之广，以至于它已经严重的阻碍了国家经济的发展。是每个人都开始抵制盗版的时候了。 Widespread adj spread v hinder,Piracy has become so widespread that it has severely hindered the development of the nations economy. Its high time that everyone started the battle
31、 against piracy.,首先，消费者应该进行抵制。 消费者应当提升他们的抵制盗版产品的意识 Customer Consciousness,First, customers should develop their consciousness to resist the pirated products.,动词不定式在句中充当一定的语法成分 资助艺术家和音乐家是保护传统文化的明智措施。 如何解决严重的交通问题对于政府而言是个棘手的问题。 我倾向于同意前者的观点。 本文将从不同角度分析这一复杂的现象。,学生的唯一任务就是获得将来工作所需的知识和技能。 我们要做到的是取其精髓，弃其糟粕。
32、互联网是传播信息的经济的途径。,To subsidize artists and musicians is a wise measure to preserve the traditional culture. How to solve the heavy traffic problem is a thorny problem for our government. I prefer to side with the former opinion. This essay aims to analyze this complicated phenomenon from different(div
33、erse) perspectives.,The sole task of students is to acquire the knowledge and skills essential to their future careers. Be of the essence Count for much What we should do/make sure is to absorb the essence and discard the dregs. The internet is an economical way to convey information.,其次，政府应该做点什么 政府
34、应该制定更加严格的法律去惩罚那些参与非法生产的人。 Make strict laws Get involved in,Second, our government/authorities should make strict laws to punish anyone who gets involved in the illegal business.,最后要结尾了，一定要有力量！ 强调，倒装加插入语 只有通过这种方式，我相信，我们才能够让盗版产品远离我们的生活。,Only in this way can we keep the pirated products away from our l
35、ife. Only in these cooperative efforts, I believe, will the problem be efficiently resolved. Only in these way, I believe, can we hope a brighter future.,用于阐述说明对象的背景,Nowadays, with the development of society,has become increasingly serious. has aroused much concern in china. Now there is growing awa
36、reness that,Recently the rise in problem of/phenomenon of has caused/aroused public/popular/wide/worldwide concern. Recently the issue of the problem of / the phenomenon of has been brought into focus/to public attention.,阐述对象的重要性和地位, plays an important role (part) in It is well-known (clear, true,
37、said) that Its very important for to Nothing can be more important than,阐释原因的主题句,Some reasons are responsible for this. There are lots of reasons for the dramatic growth/decrease. The phenomenon/change in mainly results from the fact that Why have there been so many? Maybe the reasons can be listed
38、as follows.,常用关联词,To start with, next, in addition, finally To begin with, then, furthermore, finally On the one hand, on the other hand Most important of all, moreover, finally First and foremost, besides, the last but not the least,表示列举,For example/instance Take for example/instance can serve as a
39、n example is just a case in point,表示对照的表达方式,In contrast Contrary to In opposite On the contrary Every coin has two sides,表示转折,Nevertheless But, we should also take the other side of the coin into consideration. There are also some disadvantages/problems in,表示原因： Because of, because, as, for, owing t
40、o, due to, thanks to 表示结果： So, therefore, as a result, consequently, in consequence,结尾段落常用句型,In a word (in conclusion/ to sum up), we should do our best in It is imperative for us to take effective measures to Thus, mankind must put an end to; otherwise, will put an end to mankind.,There is no immed
41、iate solution to the problem of but might be helpful. In order to make our world a better place, we must learn to ,It is high time that we put considerable emphasis on Taking into consideration all these factors, we may safely reach the conclusion that It goes without saying that,We should not let t
42、he golden opportunity slip by. On the contrary, we should seize any opportunity and face the challenge with confidence, courage and wisdom. For my part (as far as I am concerned) ,I believe that there is no simple solution to the issue of ,but might be practical.,Why college students take a part-tim
43、e job 1 最近几年越来越多的大学生加入打工的队伍 2 为什么大学生要打工 3 大学生打工的意义,According to a recent survey, about 56 percent of Chinese college students held a temporary job in 2000, compared with nearly zero in 1990, and this figure may increase to 70 percent this year. College students are working as tutors, salespersons, e
44、ngineers and doing whatever work they can find.,Why do they want odd jobs-jobs usually requiring little skill and knowledge? The primary reason, I think, is money. Feeling the financial pressure as books, movies and bus fares have all gone up in price, there is scarcely a young boy or girl who does
45、not want to learn a little money to help cover the increasingly higher college costs they have long desired.,In this way they hope to be financially independent and avoid the indignity of having to ask for money again and again. Besides they want to gain some experience in the ways of society. Stude
46、nts growing up from nursery school to college only know about books and have trouble dealing with realities.,Working on a part-time basis can provide them with a rare opportunity to know the outside world and prepare them for a future career.,The significance of college students doing a part-time job means more than money and experience: it will broaden their outlook and exert a profound influence on their personality and life.,书信作文,六级考试时间分配,谢谢大家！,
