1、The beauty of writing,“Reading makes a full man; conference a ready man; and writing an _man.” -Francis Bacon,exact,阅读使人充实，交谈使人机智，写作使人精确。 -培根,阅卷老师喜欢的句子,、同位语结构、with复合结构，使文章简洁、通顺；尽量使用动词短语和词组、定语从句等复合句，修辞润色文章。,使用分词短语(非谓语动词）,Non- finite Verbsin writing非谓语动词在写作中的应用,1. Seeing from the top of mountain, thec
2、ity is beautiful .2. In my opinion, climb mountain is an enjoyable thing. 3. Which team is good at cooking? A team called itself the supper cook.,Correction,写作中非谓语动词常见的错误,Seen,climbing,calling,1. When she heard the news, she burst into crying. _ the news, she burst into crying. 2. Australia is locat
3、ed on the west coast of the Pacific. Australia is the largest country in Oceania. Australia， _ _ the west coast of the Pacific， is the largest country in Oceania.,用非谓语结构改写句子,Hearing,located on,3. Though I admit what he has said, I still doubt he didnt do his best._ _ _ _ _, I still doubt he didnt do
4、 his best.4. Because I missed the bus, I went to school late. _ _ _, I went to school late.,Admitting what he has,said,Missing the bus,5.When I was walking in the street , I saw him._ in the street , I saw him. 6.If you work hard, _hard , you will succeed.,Walking,Working,7.Although he had failed ma
5、ny times , he didnt lose heart._many times , he didnt lose heart.8.As she was scolded by the teacher, the girl sat there without lifting her head. _ ,the girl sat there without lifting her head.,Having failed,Scolded by the teacher,例文(1)： Getting back what you have lost would be an unforgettable exp
6、erience. Last Monday, I lost my expensive cellphone, on which my name was inscribed(刻). Fortunately, it was returned. That morning, I rushed out of my house and jumped into a taxi, for I would be late for the final examination. On arriving at school, I headed to my classroom quickly, not noticing th
7、at I had left my cellphone on the back seat.,Enjoy two essays,There is always someone behind us, caring about us .On everyday morning, walking out of the doorway to go to school,we may be told to pay attention tothe traffic, not to fight or quarrel withothers, and may even be told to chew slowly at
8、table. Being a child ,we may feel tired of those words.when we come home after school, she has tried her best to provide what she has for us. Even if what we need is just a glass of water, she will alsokeep it in mind.,例文(2),When noticing her grey hairs and the wrinkles around her eyes, I realize I
9、have grown up while she is no longer young. Its time that I should do something for her, even only giving her back some massage or making a cup of tea for her can make her feel that she seems to bethe happiest woman in the world. Do you know who she is? She is our Mom.,Fun time! Pick out a picture a
10、nd finish the task,play music,make,happy,Playing music makes them happy.,make a sentence using nonfinite verbs,_ by the reporter from CCTV, the man said he was very happy. (interview),Interviewed,Finish the sentence using nonfinite verbs,e.g. Having finished my homework, I wenton to help my parents.
11、,listen to /burst out laughing,Having listened to the song called “Gangnam style”, we burst out laughing.,Follow the example and make a sentence.,3. Moyan stood there and was surrounded by many reporters.Moyan stood there surrounded by manyreporters.,用非谓语结构改写和美化句子,Combine the following sentences,1.
12、As soon as they arrived at the school. They felt the happy atmosphere.,Arriving at the school, they felt the happy atmosphere.,2. If I am given another chance. I will succeed.,Given another chance, I will succeed.,3. He wants to improve his English(目的) He studies harder.,To improve his English, he s
13、tudies harder.,4.When he left the classroom, he didnt say goodbye to me.5. Because he is ill, he cant attend the meeting.,When leaving the classroom, he didnt say goodbye to me.,Being ill, he cant attend the meeting.,6.The policeman saw the thief who was stealing a bike.7. The boys who swam in the r
14、iver were in danger.,The policeman saw the thief stealing a bike.,The boys swimming in the river were in danger,8.Because he hadnt seen the film before, he went to the cinema.,Not having seen the film before, he went to the cinema.,用非谓语结构改写和美化句子,1.因为在这国家没有朋友，她觉得要想找到工作是不可能的。 用连词because Because she ha
15、s no friend in the country, she found it impossible to find a job.用非谓语结构 Having no friend in the country, she found it impossible to find a job.,2.这本用简易英语写成的书很容易读懂 用定语从句 The book, is easy to understand.用非谓语结构 The book , is easy to understand,用非谓语结构改写和美化句子,which was written in simple English,written
16、in simple English,3. 他们是来自于几个国家的游客。用定语从句 They are visitors who come from several countries.用非谓语结构 They are visitors coming from several countries.,用非谓语结构改写和美化句子,4.发现他好朋友沮丧，他竭尽所能让他朋友开心。 用并列句 He found his best friend frustrated and he did everything he could to make him happy.用非谓语结构 Finding his best f
17、riend frustrated, he did everything he could to make him happy.,用非谓语结构改写和美化句子, It is high time we took part in some activities. We want to make ourselves more healthy.,It is high time we took part in some activities to make ourselves more healthy.,4. 用非谓语结构合并下列句子,用非谓语结构改写和美化句子,Nowadays, some student
18、s often cheat in exams .It is popular among students who are lazy and dont work hard at their lessons. They cheat for they want to get higher marks so that they can be praised or even admired. Also, some students who work hard at their lessons will cheat in exams because they are afraid of failing i
19、n exams.,用非谓语结构美化文章,Nowadays, some students often cheat in exams .It is popular among students who are lazy and dont work hard at their lessons.,Nowadays, cheating in exams is popular among students who are lazy and dont work hard at their lessons.,用非谓语结构美化文章,They cheat for they want to get higher m
20、arks so that they can be praised or even admired.,They cheat to get higher marks so that they can be praised or even admired.,用非谓语结构美化文章,Also, some students who work hard at their lessons will cheat in exams because they are afraid of failing in exams.,Being afraid of failing in exams, some students
21、 who work hard at their lessons will also cheat in exams,用非谓语结构美化文章,Nowadays, cheating in exams is popular among students who are lazy and dont work hard at their lessons. They cheat to get higher marks so that they can be praised or even admired. Being afraid of failing in exams, some students who
22、work hard at their lessons will also cheat in exams.,用非谓语结构美化后的文章,要求：1. 用2- 3句话表达表格内容2. 2- 3句话要有连贯性,necessary,an effective way to improve our learning in the class.,the base for our further study and work.,（2011高考模拟）高考临近，保持良好的心态有助于减轻焦虑，还能增强克服困难的勇气 。,Having a try,翻译: 高考临近，保持良好的心态有助于减轻焦虑，还能增强克服困难的勇气 。
23、,Step1：拆分成几个简单句(中文),高考临近。 (National College Entrance Examination) 保持良好的心态很重要。 (have a right attitude) 它有助于减轻焦虑（relax）和勇敢地克服困难。,Step2：分别翻译这几个简单句,National College Entrance Examination is coming., It is important to have a right attitude., It helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.,Having
24、a try,Step3：合并句子,With National College Entrance Examination coming, it is important to have a right attitude to relax and overcome difficulties bravely., National College Entrance Examination is coming., It is important to have a right attitude., It helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravel
25、y.,Sentence1:,Having a try,Step3：合并句子,With College Entrance Examination coming, it is important to have a right attitude which helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.,College Entrance Examination is coming., It is important to have a right attitude., It helps us to relax and overcome di
26、fficulties bravely.,Sentence2:,Tip: Try to use different ways to express.,Having a try,要求：1. 用2- 3句话表达表格内容2. 2- 3句话要有连贯性（2011高考模拟）,Having a try,necessary,an effective way to improve our learning in the class.,the base for our further study and work.,Having a try,It is necessary to have enough sleep
27、. Having enough sleep is necessary.,It will be an effective way to improve our learning in the class.,Keeping healthy is the base for our further study and work.,To Keep healthy is the base for our further study and work.,Passage：Having enough sleep is necessary, because it will be an effective way
28、to improve our learning in the class. Moreover, to keep healthy is the base for our further study and work.,Tip: Never ignore the conjunction.,Having a try,With College Entrance Examination coming, it is important to have a right attitude which helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely. Ha
29、ving enough sleep is necessary, because it will be an effective way to improve our learning in the class. Moreover, to keep healthy is the base for our further study and work. Besides, doing exercise regularly is of great benefit to our health. Last but not least, it is very important to keep a bala
30、nced diet.,二. 使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档,三. 巧用倒装增强句子表现力,四. 尝试多 样化表达方式,一.使用较高级词汇使文章增加吸引力,强调句,With短语复合结构,定语从句,名词性从句(主宾表同从句),各种状语从句,被动语态,1. beggar, lie, sleep 2. Mr. Li, hurry, pay no attention to 3. stick out，trip over(绊倒) , angry,A beggar,1. 一天，一个乞丐在路边讨钱，但是李先生匆忙赶路上班，没有注意到那个乞丐。 2. 结果这个乞丐很生气，伸出拐杖，差点把李先生绊倒了。 3. 意识到
31、他是个残疾人，李先生想给他一些钱。 4.于是他拿出了一张百元钞票,突然一阵风把钞票吹到了空中。 5. 看到被风吹到空中的百元钞票，乞丐迅速跳起来去追那张钞票，使李先生非常惊讶。,实战演练：用五个句子写出下列信息点，注意非谓语和复合句的运用。,A beggar,Writing,2. Mr Li hurried home, paying no attention to a beggar.,1. The beggar lay on the ground, sleeping.,3. Suddenly, the beggar stuck out his legs , tripping over Mr L
32、i, which made him very angry.,Make an ending,Exchange and discuss your partners composition, following the criteria.,Pair work,A beggarOne day, hurrying home, Mr. Li paid no attention to the beggar who lay on the ground, sleeping. Suddenly, the beggar stuck out his legs , tripping Mr. Li over, which
33、 made him very angry. Realizing the beggar was a disabled person, Mr. Li began to search for some money in his pocket to give him. He took out a 100-yuan note, which was suddenly blown into the air by the wind. Seeing this, the beggar jumped quickly to run after the note, making Mr. Li so surprised
34、that he stood there with his mouth open.,基础写作：,用英语写一篇关于四川地震的简介：写作内容： 2008年5月12日，一场特大地震袭击了四川省，造成了成千上万人无家可归。大量的人员受伤，甚至丧命。为了营救那些受困和被埋的人，政府及时采取有效的措施，派遣士兵到受灾地区。听到这个噩耗后，全世界的人们都伸出了援助之手。 尽管他们失去了一切，但他们正全力以赴，克服重重困难，重建家园。 参考词汇： 袭击：hit/strike 受灾地区: the earthquake-stricken area,On May 12th,2008, a worst earthqua
35、ke struck Sichuan Province，causing thousands of people homeless. A great number of people were injured or even killed. To rescue the trapped and buried people, the government immediately took effective measures, sending the soldiers to the earthquake-stricken areas. Hearing the terrible news, the people all over the world came together to help them. Although having lost everything, they are trying their best to overcome all kinds of difficulties to rebuild their home.,
