1、- 1 -专题检测卷(三十二) 短文改错(建议用时: 40 分钟)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文, 文中共有 10 处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (), 并在其下面写出该加的词。删除: 把多余的词用斜线( )划掉。修改: 在错的词下画一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 ; 2. 只允许修改 10 处, 多者(从第 11 处起) 不计分。1(2013哈尔滨模拟)Skiing is my favorite sport, even thoug
2、h I had only skied for four days in my whole life! Last year my father promised that because my brother Victor did well in his exams, he would bring us for a special holiday. When Victor got straight As, Dad said, “I promised a special holiday. I think I should keep my words. ”Victors dream was to s
3、ee really snow. So we flew to Seoul at Christmas vacation, and then took a bus to Muju Resort. As we climb up the mountain, we saw some snow on the trees. We began to play snow! No one in my family had ever touched snow before. We were all like the little children. We picked it up, made snowballs, a
4、nd threw it at each other. 2The first time I decide to leave home was when I was upon graduation in high school. I was having trouble get along with my parents. I had about fifty dollar in my pockets, and I thought about leaving home. It took me only two weeks away from home while I started to feel
5、homesick. Living on my own is a total different experience for three main reasons: being more responsible, more decisive and more creative. Because of Im on my own, I get to deal with my duties without being told. I have to be more careful because my parents are not here to give me their advices. In
6、 the other hand, I can make my own future plan. I have made rules for me to follow. 3(2013绵阳模拟)Last Saturday, our school had organized all of the Senior 1 students to visit the children at a local orphanage. We took many books that was popular among children, as well as many kinds of school supplies
7、 and toys, to children. They were delighted to receive these gift. We played some games together and give performances. Before leave the orphanage we took photos with them and gave them our contact details but we could keep in touch with one another. That day, each one of us had an enjoyable time. W
8、e gave the children their care and help; for return, they gave us their smiles and love. These voluntary activities made a deeply impression on us. 4(2013辽宁模拟)Nowadays Grade 3 students are general faced with a lot of pressure, which is rather common. To reduce it, the followed suggestions may help.
9、First of all, know exactly what lead to your pressure, and then you can take measures to deal with it. Secondly, set up a goal what is not too high, in another words, dont put too much pressure on yourself. Thirdly, find a way to relax you occasionally, for example, you can listen to music, go swim
10、or just simply go walking. Lastly, make friend with others, such as, your classmates, your teachers, your parents. - 2 -They will understand you and come to your help when you are really in the trouble. In a word, never get yourself stuck in the pressure for “impossible is nothing”. 答案解析1.答案：Skiing
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13、 like the little children. We picked it up, made snowballs, and threw it at themeach other. 1. 【解析】第一句 hadhave。主句谓语动词是一般现在时态 , 所以, 状语从句的谓语动词应该是现在完成时态, 不可能是过去完成时态。2. 【解析 】第二句 becauseif 。在 that 引导的宾语从句中 , 又包含一个条件状语从句。在爸爸许诺时, 考试还没进行, 所以, 应该用 if 引导条件状语从句。3. 【解析】第二句 bringtake 。此处的 take 表示“带我们去”, 不能用 brin
14、g。4. 【解析】第四句 wordsword。keep ones word 是固定词组, 意为“遵守诺言”。5. 【解析】第五句 reallyreal。用形容词修饰名词。6. 【解析】第六句 atfor。for Christmas vacation 意为“ 去度圣诞假期”。7. 【解析】第七句 climbclimbed。文章叙述的是过去的事情, 故应用一般过去时态。8. 【解析】第八句 play 后面加 with。play with snow 意为“玩雪”。9. 【解析】第十句去掉 the。little children 表示泛指, 其前面不用定冠词。10. 【解析】第十一句第二个 itthe
15、m。此处的 them 指的是 snowballs, 而不是 snow。2. 答案：The first time I decide to leave home was when I was upon graduation in highdecidedschool. I was having trouble get along with my parents. I had about fifty dollar ingetting dollarsmy pockets, and I thought about leaving home. It took me only two weeks awayfr
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18、hile 改为 when。when 就在这时，并列连词。5. 【解析】将第五句中的 total 改为 totally。修饰后面的形容词用副词。6. 【解析】将第六句中的 of 去掉。这里是 because 引导原因状语从句。7. 【解析】在第六句中的 told 后面加上 to。不定式省略，但不定式符号 to 需保留。8. 【解析】将第七句中的 advices 改为 advice。advice 为不可数名词。9. 【解析】将第八句中的 In 改为 On。on the other hand 固定词组，另一方面。10. 【解析】将第九句中的 me 改为 myself。这里是为自己的意思。3. 答案：
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21、heir smiles and love. These voluntary activities made a deeply impression on deepus. 1. 【解析】将第一句中的 had 去掉。Last Saturday 是一般过去时的时间状语。2. 【解析 】将第二句中的 was 改为 were。that 引导的定语从句修饰先行词 many books, 在从句中作主语，谓语动词用复数。3. 【解析】在第二句中的 to 后面加上 the。特指那些孩子们。4. 【解析】将第三句中的 gift 改为 gifts。前面是 these。5. 【解析】将第四句中的 give 改为 g
22、ave。与前面的 played 为并列谓语。6. 【解析】将第五句中的 leave 改为 leaving。before 是介词，后面应用动名词。7. 【解析】将第五句中的 but 改为 so。这里是因果关系。8. 【解析】将第七句中的第一个 their 改为 our。与前面的 we 呼应。9. 【解析】将第七句中的 for 改为 in。in return 作为回报。10. 【解析】将第八句中的 deeply 改为 deep。impression 是名词，用形容词修饰。4. 答案：- 4 -Nowadays Grade 3 students are general faced with a lo
23、t of pressure, which isgenerallyrather common. To reduce it, the followed suggestions may help. First of all, knowfollowingexactly what lead to your pressure, and then you can take measures to deal with it.leadsSecondly, set up a goal what is not too high, in another words, dont put too muchthat/whi
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25、 to your help when you are really in the trouble. In a word, never get yourself stuck in the pressure for “impossible is nothing”. 1. 【解析】将第一句中的 general 改为 generally。这里使用副词，修饰动词短语 be faced with。2. 【解析】将第二句中的 followed 改为 following。使用形容词 following 作名词的定语，意思是“下面的”。3. 【解析】将第三句的 lead 改为 leads。主语是 what，谓语
26、动词用单数形式。4. 【解析】将第四句中的 what 改为 that 或者 which。这里是一个定语从句，that/which 在从句中作主语。5. 【解析】将第四句中的 another 改为 other。这里是一个固定词组， in other words 换句话说。6. 【解析】将第五句中的 you 改为 yourself。使自己放松。7. 【解析】将第五句中的 swim 改为 swimming。go swimming 是一个固定词组，去游泳。8. 【解析】将第六句中的 friend 改为 friends。make friends with 与交朋友，是一个固定形式。9. 【解析】在第六句中的 your parents 前面加上 and 或者 or。起连接作用。10. 【解析】把第七句中的 the 去掉。in trouble 是一个固定词组，表示陷入麻烦。
