1、Writing,主讲人 周雪婷,Lecture,Part I,Teaching task: Note Writing,考试大纲对便条写作的要求,格式正确 语言得体 题材主要围绕学生们日常生活常发生的情况来命题,祝贺类便条,表祝贺,说明意义,表达祝福,Date Dear, 1I have learned with delight that you. 2 I would like to extend to you my utmost congratulations on ,3 I know this is surely owing to 4 It is a reward you richly de
2、serve for your5 With your, I am sure that you will be a success in whatever you undertake. 6 My best wishes for your further success.Sincerely yours,Signature,Your friend Tom has been elected Chairman of the students union. Write a note to congratulate him.,Exercise: Write a note of about 50-60 word
3、s based on the following situation,Date Dear,1 Im very happy to announce you that 2.3 Those who are interested please go to 4 If you need any further information, please,2 告示、通知类便条,Part II,Dont hesitate to call me up. 5 My telephone number isSincerely yours,Signature,Exercise,Before you leave univer
4、sity you want to sell your bike. Write a not e describing the condition of your bike, how much you would like for it, and where you can be contacted.,3 安慰类便条,Date Dear.,1 Ive just learned from.that2 Im very sorry to hear this news. 3 Im very concerned about your4 I just want you not to be so depress
5、ed and not to lose heart. 5 Hope you will recover soon. 6 I will see you as soon as I can.Sincerely yoursSignature,Exercise,Your friend, Jane, has failed in exam, and is feeling very unhappy about itl. Write a note to comfort her and give her some encouragement.,4 道歉类便条,Date Dear, 1 I am excessively
6、 sorry to say/ tell you that2 please accept my sincere apology with gratitude. 3 I hope you will understand me and excuse me for. 4 描述具体原因 5 Naturally, I want to suggest6 I shall be obliged if you will kindly write and tell me when and where you,7 We may meet again and I hope to see you soon.Sincere
7、ly yours,Signature,Exercise,You are Peter/ Mary. You had a party at your home recently, but you unintentionally neglected to invite a close friend of yours-Victoria. Write her a note apologizing for this and explaining how the mistake came about.,5 邀请类便条,Date Dear., 1.2 It would be pleasant/ an hono
8、r to have you here. 3 Will you join us/ give me the pleasure of your company? 4 I know/ believe that you will be very interested in. 5 The .will begin at . Is it possible for us to meet at ?6 We do hope you can come.Sincerely yoursSignature,Exercise,You have got two tickets to a concert given by a f
9、amous pop band/ orchestra. Write a note to your friend, Hilda/ Mike, describing briefly what it is and inviting her/ him to come with you.,6 婉拒类便条,Date Dear,1 Thank you very much for2 However, I have decided not to.3 Two reasons contribute to my declining.4 On one hand, .5 On the other hand,6 In vie
10、w of these, I regret.7 Im sincerely looking forward to 8 I do wish that.Sincerely yours,Signature,Exercise,Your friend Clare has invited you to her house-warming party this weekend. However, you will be away then. Write her a note politely declining her invitation and expressing your best wishes to
11、her.,7 建议类便条,Date Dear,1 I am delighted to learn that2 It.3 In my opinion,4 On one hand, 5 On the other hand, 6 Please inform me. 7I am looking forward toSincerely yours,Signature,Exercise,Your next door neighbor, John, always makes a noisy music. Write a note suggesting that he turn down the music
12、a bit.,8 询问类便条,Date Dear,1 I am delighted to learn that.2 Im very interested in But I dont know some specific details. 3 What ? 4 Where? 5 Would you please be so kind as to let me know more about it? 6 Please inform me 7 I am looking forward to Sincerely yours,Signature,Exercise,You have heard that
13、your friend, Jack, wishes to sell his walkman. Write him a note expressing your interest in it, asking him about its condition and offering a price for it.,9 感谢类便条,Date Dear.,I am now writing these lines to express my sincere thanks for 2 Id like you to know how much your meant to me. 3I. 4 How nice
14、 it would be to see you again and I am looking forward to seeing you next time! 5 I repeat my thanks again for your.Yours truly,Signature,Exercise,You have enjoyed very much the party held at your friend-Mikes home. Write to him a note to thank him for his hospitality and express your hope for more
15、of such kind of parties to be held.,10 抱怨类便条,Date Dear,1 I am.2 I am writing to bring your attention to3 The focus of the complaint is.4 For one thing, . 5 For another,6 All in all, there is much room for improvement.7 I do hope.8Thank you for your time and kind consideration.Sincerely yours,Signatu
16、re,Exercise,Several days ago, you received bad service in a hotel when you spent your holiday. Write a note about your complaint to the manager, Jim.,11 求职类便条,DateDear,1 I am applying for the position ofadvertised in 2 I major in .3 My training in. definitely meet your qualifications.4 My complete r
17、esume is attached.5 I hope that you will consider me for your position.6 May I have a personal interview at your convenience?,7 I can be reached by telephoneSincerely yours,Signature,Exercise,You saw an advertisement for an editor in China Daily. You need write a note to the chiefeditor to introduce
18、 yourself simply.,立场选择型作文,1997 More Pressure from Academic Studies does (or does no) Good to Us 1999 A Major Advantage/ Disadvantage of Advertising on Television 2004 Will Phones Kill Letter Writing? 2006 Saving Money or Using Tomorrows Money? 2007 Is It Wise to Make Friends Online?,立场型作文基本结构是,首先对要评
19、论的事物或现象进行整体介绍,然后提出自己的观点;然后用一到两个论证来支持自己的观点;之后表明自己的观点或结论。 模板一1 When asked about/ When it comes to 事物、问题,different people will offer different opinions.,2 Some people take it for granted that 观点一。 In their opinion, 观点一的理由。 However, others hold that 观点二。 They maintain that 观点二的理由一。Weighing up these two
20、arguments, I think观点一、 观点二。 For one thing/ On one hand, 理由一。 For example, 举例说明理由一。,9 For another/ On the other hand, 理由二。 10 For instance, 举例说明理由二。11 Therefore, as stated above, 重申观点。,模板二,Different people have different views on 看法、 问题。 Some prefer 一种看法、观点。Other tend to 另一种看法、观点。 As to me, I agree t
21、o the first/ second opinion.5The following reasons can account for my preference ( for“我”赞同的观点)。 The main reason is that支持观点的理由一。 A good example to illustrate is that 支持理由一的例子。 In addition/ Moreover/ Whats more, 支持观点的理由,二。From the foregoing,重申观点。当场写作文 We see advertisements on television every day. Some people think that TV advertising brings us benefits, but others dont think so. What is your opinion?,a):,b):,c):,d):,e):,.,Part III,THANK YOU!,