1、四级作文,15%,评分细则,14分标准：切题，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性好，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。 11分标准: 切题，表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。 8分标准：基本切题，有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯，语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。 5分标准：基本切题，表达思想不清楚，连贯性差，有较多的严重语言错误。 2分标准：条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子都有错误，且多数为严重错误。,除了以上五个主要标准之外，评分时还考虑以下三个因素： 白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想，则给零分。 字数不足者酌情扣分，所计字数不包括卷面上已
2、给主题句。 只写一段者04分，只写两段者09分。下面通过五份样卷详细介绍四级作文的评分原则和标准。,技巧,1、 卷面整洁，书写清楚 2、 构思简单，少犯错误 3、 中心突出，层次分明 4、 固定经典，名言注目 5、 重在变化，宁简勿滥,四级作文类型,1、 正反论证 2、 原因现象描述类 3、 图表 4、 名言谚语 5 、书信作文,写作步骤,审题: 体裁 确定主题句 确保文章条理清楚 保证作文符合字数的十二句作文法,总结原则,不守实原则 主题句原则 一二三原则 短语优先原则 多实少虚原则 多变句式原则,万能开头,数字统计开头 According to a recent survey, about
3、 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation. A recent statistics shows that ,万能开头,名人名言 A proverb says, “ You are only young once.” As everyone knows, No one can deny that,具体开头,Recently , has become the focus of the society . has been playing an increasingly im
4、portant role in our day-to-day life . Nowadays there is a growing concern for Nowadays it is common to hear /see has become a common occurrence in our daily life .,具体开头,Nowadays more and more people are beginning to be aware of the seriousness of It is only during the last /past few years that man h
5、as become generally aware that There is an old / popular saying / proverb which says / goes In recent years , there is a general tendency Nowadays has become a problem we have to face .,描述图表,As is shown in the graph above, we can see clearly that great changes have taken place in fromto As the graph
6、 depicts , From the cartoon /picture , we can see that According to the statistics shown in the first /second graph , The table shows / indicates / reveals that It can be seen /concluded from the picture / table / figures that ,主体,举实例 To take as an example, One example is, Another example is, for ex
7、ample 做比较 相似的比较： in comparison, likewise, similarly 相反的比较： on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with , 换言之 in more difficult language, in simpler words, put it more simply,具体主体句型,The change inmainly results from The increase ini
8、s due to the fact that Many people would claim that One of the reasons given for is that There are a variety of reasons for this dramatic growth in First Second Finally,具体主体句型,Why are (is/do/did)? For one thing For another History is filled with the examples of As is shown in the table released by t
9、he government, it can be learned that There is (no) good evidence to We must admit the undeniable fact that No one can deny the fact that Experience (Evidence) suggests that,结 尾 (核心句型),1.It is high time that we placed great emphasis on the improvement of 2.It is high time that we put an end to the u
10、nhealthy situation (tendency/phenomenon) of 3.There is no easy solution to the problem of, but might be useful. 4. Unless there is a common realization of, it is very likely that 5.It is essential that effective measures should be taken to prevent the situation.,结 尾 (核心句型),6.It is suggested that gre
11、at efforts should be made to control the growth of 7.It is hoped that great efforts should be focused on finding (developing/improving) 8.Anyway, more publicity should be given to the potential effects of 9.To control the tendency is not an easy job, and it involves a different state of attitude tow
12、ards 10.To put all into a nutshell, I,套用句型 1,表示原因1） There are three reasons for this 2）The reasons for this are as follows 3）The reason for this is obvious 4）The reason for this is not far to seek 5）The reason for this is that 6）We have good reason to believe that,套用句型 2,表示好处 1）It has the following
13、advantages 2）It does us a lot of good 3）It benefits us quite a lot 4）It is beneficial to us 5）It is of great benefit to us,套用句型 3,表示坏处 1）It has more disadvantages than advantages 2）It does us much harm 3）It is harmful to us,套用句型 4,表示重要、必要、困难、方便、可能 1）It is important（necessary，difficult，convenient， po
14、ssible）for sbto do sth 2）We think it necessary to do sth 3）It plays an important role in our life,套用句型 5,表示措施 1）We should take some effective measures 2）We should try our best to overcome（conquer）the difficulties 3）We should do our utmost in doing sth 4）We should solve the problems that we are confr
15、onted（faced with),套用句型 6,表示变化 1）Some changes have taken place in the past five years 2）A great change will certainly be produced in the worlds communications 3）The computer has brought about many changes in education,套用句型 7,表示事实、现状 1）We cannot ignore the fact that 2）No one can deny the fact that 3）T
16、here is no denying the fact that 4）This is a phenomenon that many people are interested in 5）However，thats not the case,套用句型 8,表示比较 1）Compared with A，B 2）I prefer to read rather than watch TV 3）There is a striking contrast between them,套用句型 9,表示数量 1）It has increased（decreased） from to 2）The populati
17、on in this city has now increased （decreased）to 800，000 3）The output of July in this factory increased by 15 compared with that of January,套用句型 10,表示看法 1）People have（take，adopt，assume）different attitudes towards sth 2）People have different opinions on this problem 3）People take different views of（on
18、）the question 4）Some people believe thatOthers argue that,套用句型 11,表示结论 1）In short，it can be said that 2）It may be briefly summed up as follows 3）From what has been mentioned above，we can come to the conclusion that ,套用句型,套语 1）Its well known to us that 2）As is known to us， 3）This is a topic that is b
19、eing widely talked about 4）From the graph（table，chart）listed above，it can be seen that 5）As a proverb says，“Where there is a will，there is a way,模板(现象解释1),模板(现象解释2),模板(对比选择1),模板(对比选择2),模板(问题解决1),模板(问题解决2),模板(观点论证型1),模板(观点论证型2),模板(建议信),模板(抱怨,投诉信),记叙文例文,最难忘的人 Directions: For this part you are allowed
20、30 minutes to write a composition on the topic The most unforgettable Person I ever Know. You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline below:1、 我生活中最难忘的人是2、 为什么他(或她)令我难以忘怀3、 结论,记叙文例文,In my life I have met many people who are really worth recalling. But perhaps the mos
21、t unforgettable person I ever know is my English teacher.,记叙文例文,What frequently brings back memories of my school teacher is his special qualities. First of all, he gave us the greatest gift a teacher can offeran awakening of a passion for learning. He not only led us to an appreciation of the beaut
22、y and perfection of English language and literature, but also aroused our great interest in exploring something deeper in this field. Second, I was attracted by his lively wit. I remember that we students always anticipated his class with great eagerness because his lecture were humorously delivered
23、, never failing to provoke chuckles or loud laughs.,记叙文例文,Although it is nearly two years since I attended his last class, he is the talk of our old classmates, and I know part of him has already stayed in my heart.,注意事项,考试试卷，答题卡千万不要折叠。会影响网上评卷。一旦机器读不出来，责任归考试人。 作文答题一定要用黑色或者蓝色的水笔或者钢笔，因为作文是扫描到电脑里面的，切忌乱涂乱画，一定要字体工整，这是作文得高分的重要因素。,Wish You Good Luck!,
