1、1高 考 英 语 作 文【全国卷 I 海南、宁夏】 【试题回放】假定你是李华，正在英国接受英语培训，住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东 Mrs. Wilson 不在家，你准备外出，请给 Mrs. Wilson 写一留言条，内容包括： 1.外出购物 2.替房东还书 3.Tracy 来电话留言： 1)咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee) 见面取消 2)此事已告知 Susan 3) 尽快回电 注意：1. 词数 100 左右; 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Mrs. Wilson, Im going out shopping, and wont be back until about 5:00 p
2、m. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 oclock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldnt meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could se
3、t some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change.Yours,Li Hua名师点评 本文属于提纲式要点作文，是学生比较熟悉的题材，体现了英语学习应该注意实用性，生活型的原则。行文人称、时态运用恰当、准确，各个要点间逻辑连贯，行文通顺。提纲类书面表达不是简单的逐条翻译，而是将所给的几个要点合理的组成比较通顺的语句，因此要仔细组织语言，合理安排结构。在语言方面，要特别注意简洁明
4、了，开头要开门见山。【北京卷】【试题回放】情景作文假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为响应绿化祖国的号召，你班四月十二日去郊区植树，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍植树活动的全过程，给某英文杂志的“ 绿色行动 ”专栏写一篇以“Green Action in Our Class”为题的英文稿件。注意：词数不少于 60提示词：郊区 suburbsApril 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day. In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to
5、plant trees, talking and laughing all the way. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately. Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and planting young trees. Others were watering . After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees. Before leaving we took some ph
6、otos to record our green action. Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel its our duty to protect and beautify our environment.2【名师点评】本文是设计巧妙的提纲要点式作文，与环保结合，立意较好。文章思路清晰，要点连贯，在语言的表达上选词新颖，同时运用了分词短语作状语等较好的句式表达。【江苏卷】【试题回放】鼠标是计算机时代最佳的人机交互工具之一。它极大地方便了人们的计算机操作。但是，过分依赖鼠标的习惯也会带来一些
7、不利影响。请你以鼠标为切入点，根据下表所提示的信息，用英语写一篇短文。鼠标的必要性对多数人来说，操作计算机，上网冲浪鼠标的便捷性点击、移动、插入、拷贝、删除编辑文本，搜索信息收发邮件，选购商品点播音乐，下载电影如果过分依赖鼠标 (请考生结合自身感受，列举两到三点)注意：1.对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。2.词数 150 左右。开头已经写好，不计人总词数。3.作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。The mouse is a most effective device used by people to communicate with a computer.For most pe
8、ople, its almost impossible to operate a computer without a mouse, let alone surf the Internet. A well-chosen mouse is really handy, flexible and convenient in controlling the screen. With the functions of inserting, deleting, moving and copying, it enables us to edit test, browse web page and downl
9、oad what we want. It can even bring us a flood of music, movies and PC games. Just imagine, all this can be done with a cute mouse.A convenient tool can certainly make our work easier, but it doesnt always help in a positive way. Too much ready information on our fingertips leaves little room for kn
10、owledge pursuing. Too many ready answers make us less excited in finding truth. Relying too much on mouse clicking makes us lazier and less creative both mentally and physically.【名师点评】本文为提纲式说明文体裁，所选内容与我们生活相关，考生只要把所给要点逐条陈述，适度发挥，不要逐条翻译即可。文章说理清楚，语言流畅，句式表达多样，用词恰当、准确。不失为一篇满分作文。【北京卷】【试题回放】假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李
11、华，为校刊英语园地写一篇题为“Our Spring Outing” 的英文稿件。 请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，叙述上周你们班从准备春游到春游结束的完整过程。注意： 词数不少于 60.3提示词： 游乐园 amusement park 垃圾箱 binLast Thursday, we had a class meeting to discuss where to go for our spring outing. We came up with several choices such as going boating, climbing a mountain, and going to an a
12、musement park. Finally, we decided to go mountain climbing.The next day, we set off early in the morning. While climbing the mountain, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view. However, when we reached the top, we were shocked to see litter here and there, such as bottles and banana peels.
13、Then we started to pick up the litter and put the rubbish into the nearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin respectively.We were tired but happy.【名师点评】本情景作文的内容要点如下：1.讨论;2.爬山;3.检拾别人的垃圾;4.投放垃圾。内容要点可用不同方式表达。本文覆盖了所有内容要点，较好地完成了试题规定的任务。其中，写作主题突出，详略得当，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，而且有效的使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文机构紧凑。本文叙述清楚，描写细致，准确
14、运用了很多富有表现力的词和句型，例如：“set off early”， “enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view”, ”were shocked to see litter here and there “等，将活动的情形很形象地描述了出来。积累卡片英汉互译好词 1 set off 出发 2. litter n.废弃物 3.respectively adv.分别地好句 1.While climbing the mountain, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view.在爬山时，我
15、们享受着温暖的阳光和美丽的风景。1. However, when we reached the top, we were shocked to see litter here and there, such as bottles and banana peels.然而，当我们登上山顶，被眼前的一幕惊呆了：瓶子和香蕉皮这样的废弃物到处都是。评析：细节描写，生动形象。 “shock”一词也用得生动传神。【江苏卷】【试题回放】实现有效的沟通，建立良好的人际关系，不仅要善于言表，更要学会倾听。请你根据下表中所提供的信息，写一篇题为 “Being a Good Listener” 的英文演讲稿。为何倾听
16、表示尊重，增进理解，建立良好的人际关系谁来倾听家长倾听孩子理解孩子，消除代沟，老师倾听学生了解学生，满足需求，同学相互倾听增进友谊，互帮互学，怎样倾听(请考生联系自己拟定内容，列举两至三点。)注意：1、 对所给要点，逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。42、 词数 150 左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。3、 演讲稿中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。Good afternoon, everyone.The topic of my speech today is “Being a Good Listener”.Good listening can always show respect,
17、promote understanding, and improve interpersonal relationship.Many people suggest that parents should listen more to their children, so they will understand them better, and find it easy to narrow the generation gap; teachers should listen more to their students, then they can meet their needs bette
18、r, and place themselves in a good relationship with their students; students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.What I want to stress is that each of us should listen to others. Show your respect and never st
19、op others till they finish their talk; show you are interested by a supportive silence or a knowing smile; be open-minded to different opinions even though you dont like them. In a word, good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other.Thank you for your listening!【名师点评】这是一篇感情真挚、热情洋溢的
20、演讲稿，文中大量运用排比句型，不但准确流畅地表达出题目中所提供的信息，而且体现出作者熟练运用英语的能力以及不俗的文采。第三段中所使用的相同结构的复合句式，将倾听的对象及其作用阐述得淋漓尽致;而第四段中用一系列的祈使句议论应如何倾听，则更进一步地增强了这篇演说稿的说服力。积累卡片英汉互译好词 1.promote v .促进 2. interpersonal adj.人际的 3. generation gap. 代沟4. open-minded adj. 虚心的好句 1. students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will
21、 help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.2. What I want to stress is that each of us should listen to others.高考作文练习练习一近些年来，中国很多大城市开始流行过西方的节日。对于这种现象，上周你和你班的同学展开了一次讨论。请根据以下内容写一篇关于此次讨论的报告。1、一些同学认为：此现象反映了不同民族的人们之间关系正变得紧密，世界也变得越来越小。这种现象很正常也是必然趋势。2、大多数的看法：传播我们自己的文化是很有必要、很有意
22、义的。3、最终的共识：我们应该以传承自己的节日为主。要求：1、100 词左右。2、可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯。参考词汇：现象 phenomenon; 使相传 passdown; 必然的 inevitable.Nowadays, a phenomenon appears that the western customs are spreading rapidly 5in our country. Many Chinese who live in big cities enjoy themselves at western festivals. We held a discussion abou
23、t this phenomenon last week.Some students said that such a phenomenon showed that people of different nationalities were getting closer gradually and that the world was becoming smaller and smaller as well. In their opinion, its a normal phenomenon as well as an inevitable trend.However, most studen
24、ts held the opinion that the spread of our own cultures is very necessary and meaningful.In the end, all the students agreed on the idea that we should mainly pass our own festivals down.练习二众所周知，食物是给我们供应能量的源泉。良好的饮食习惯对我们的健康饮食生活有着举足轻重的作用。请根据下列要点，以“How to Keep a Good Habit”为题，写一篇短文。1、吃更多的水果和蔬菜而不是饼干、汉堡等
25、；2、少吃快餐和甜品，每天必吃四种食物：肉类、水果蔬菜、谷类、乳制品；3、饭前洗手，三餐准时； 4、饭间不要说太多话，也不要喝大量的茶和咖啡。注意：100 词左右，可适当增加内容，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：cereal 谷类， diary products 乳制品As we all know, foods can give us energy, so we must develop a good eating habit to keep healthy. First, we should eat more fruit and vegetables instead of biscuits, ham
26、burgers and so on. Second, we should eat fewer snacks and candies and we should have four kinds of foods every day-meat, fruit and vegetables, cereals and diary products, which are very good for us and can make us healthy. Third, we should wash our hands before dinner and have three meals on time. L
27、ast but not least, we shouldnt talk too much when we are eating, nor should we drink lots of tea and coffee.I believe that we can form a good eating habit as long as we stick to doing something as mentioned above.练习三酒后驾驶是最近热议的话题，每年的交通事故中都有相当大的比例是因酒后驾驶所引发的。请根据以下要点，用英语写一篇短文，说明酒后驾驶的危害及为避免酒后驾车应采取的措施。注意：
28、100 词左右，可适当增加内容，以使行文连贯。1、危害：a. 容易照成交通事故，威胁司机、乘客、行人的安全；b. 处理交通事故造成时间、金钱和资源的浪费。2、措施：a. 法律要严惩酒后驾驶； b. 提高司机的公共安全意识。3、呼吁：为了你和家人的幸福，请勿酒后驾车。As is known to us all, drunk driving can cause great damage. Drunk driving will 6directly threaten the safety of drivers, passengers and pedestrians, resulting in traf
29、fic accidents, injuries and even deaths. Whats more, treating the injured and repairing broken cars mean a great waste of money, time and resources.In order to prevent drivers from drunk driving, effective measures must be taken before things get worse. First, it is essential that laws and regulatio
30、ns should be strengthened to punish those performing drunk driving. Secondly, drivers must improve their awareness of public safety.For the safety of yourself and for the happiness of your family, never do drunk driving in your life. 练习四假如你是你话，住在中国西北地区。最近你通过网络参加了绿色环保组织发起的有关环境话题的征文活动。请以你所住地区较常见的沙尘暴为话
31、题，写一篇 100 词左右的英语短文，包括以下内容：1、沙尘暴的危害；2、当前采取的措施； 3、你的一些看法。Sandstorms are a major environmental problem in Northwest China. They appear in every spring, polluting the air. As a result, people there suffer from many kinds of illness caused by sandstorms.Luckily, more and more people have realized the imp
32、ortance of preventing sandstorms. Great efforts have been made to deal with them. For example, trees have been planted to the west of Beijing to prevent the desert coming nearer and make the air clean. At the same time, scientists have found out more ways to solve the problem and more money has been
33、 put into environmental protection. In my opinion, everyone should devote themselves to protecting the environment and improving the air condition around us. 练习五尽管中国的经济在高速发展，但仍有一些贫穷落后地区，那里的孩子们甚至上不起学，请你写一篇英文演讲稿，号召校内的学生从一些小事做起来帮助这些失学的孩子们。提示：1、剩下零用钱捐助希望工程；2、和失学儿童用信件联系，鼓励他们努力奋斗；3、向人们进行宣传，鼓励人们伸出友爱之手。要求：感
34、情真挚，语言正确流畅，100 词左右。Dear friends,Today were here to talk abut a serious topic-dropouts. Although our motherland is developing fast, there are still some places where people live a poor life. Some families even cant afford the tuition for their children. I think its our duty to do something to help th
35、em. Then what can we do?On the one hand, we can do some things. For example, we can eat fewer snacks to save money for Project Hope or keep in touch with some of the children by writing letters to encourage them to fight against their difficulties. On the other hand, we 7should grasp every chance to
36、 persuade more people to help the dropouts.I believe if everyone helps do a little, we will make a big difference.Thats all. Thank you!练习六在中国，有些家长只管给孩子零花钱，但不注重直到孩子怎样花钱，对孩子的理财教育存在误区。请你对此发表自己的看法，100 词左右。内容要点如下：1、家长应给孩子一些零花钱；2、同时家长要指导孩子如何花钱。Almost all Chinese parents give their children pocket money bu
37、t some of them dont direct their children how to spend the money.In my opinion, parents should give their children some pocket money because they are not old enough to be independent. At the sane time, parents should be aware of the way the money is spent. For one thing, some children probably dont
38、spend their pocket money properly. For another, too much pocket money may do harm to the growth of children.In a word, it is necessary for parents to control the amount of pocket money and children should make good use of it.练习七假如你是李华，就读于某校高一年级。本学期你调整了学习方法并取得了进步，请你针对下表写一篇 100 词左右的英语短文，并简单做成总结。学习方法 结
39、果上学期 每晚熬夜复习白天所学；白天上课困倦，漏了许多要点考试成绩差本学期 每晚保证充足睡眠；白天上课经历充沛；即使向老师请教问题。成绩跟上了其他同学。结论注意：100 词左右，可适当增加内容，以使行文连贯。When I entered high school, there were so many subjects that I had to stay up every night to review what I had learned in the daytime, which made sleepy and miss many key points in class. As a res
40、ult, I did poorly in the exam last term.At present, I go to bed before ten 10 oclock every night to make sure of plenty of sleep. So I keep energetic and work hard during the class. If I have questions, Ill turn to teachers for help in time. I can keep up with others now.I have different learning me
41、thods this term and have different results. In my opinion, it is important to form a good habit of study.练习八现如今，媒体已经成为人们生活中重要的一部分。有人认为媒体的主要特点是：1、快捷；2、丰富；3、方便；4、难缠。请你写一篇短文，试从以上角度谈谈媒体对人们生活的影响，并表明你的看法。注意：100 词左右，可适当增加内容，以使行文连贯。With the development of economy and technology, the media have become one of
42、 8the most important parts of our daily lives. As we all know, the media always inform people of all kinds of news in time. Besides, there is lots of material for us to use and study. And whats more, it is more convenient for us to keep in touch, and even to buy what we want through them. However, s
43、ome people suffer form computer games and some false information from the media.In my opinion, we should make full use of the media to serve us. But meanwhile, we, especially teenagers, had better be far away from computer games and the harmful information on the media.练习九报纸和网站是当今两大主要媒体形式。最近你班里的同学们对
44、他们的优缺点进行了热烈的讨论，请根据以下内容做一个简介，100 词左右。报纸：1、传统媒体，信息可靠，保存时间长；2、携带方便，可随时随地阅读；3、只有文字和图片。网站：1、新兴媒体，信息量大，更新速度快；依赖电脑和互联网；还有音频和视频。Newspapers and WebsitesNewspapers and websites are two major medium in the world today, both of which can provide us with a lot of news and information. But they differ in some way
45、s.Newspapers enjoy a longer history with more reliable news and information. Besides, they can be kept for a long time and can be carried and read wherever you like. But they only contain texts and photographs.In contrast, websites are the latest form of media and popular especially among young peop
46、le. They have not only texts with pictures but also audios and videos, which make people more pleased. Whats more, they are updated from second to second and people can choose to read whatever they are interested in. But sometimes, they are not convenient for people without computers connected with
47、the Internet. In a word, newspaper and websites both have advantages and disadvantages. People can choose them according to their needs.练习十随着全球环境的恶化，越来越多的人选择过“低碳生活” ，即减少二氧化碳的排放，低能量、低消耗、地开支的生活。请写一篇英文短文，倡议你的同学们加入“低碳一族” ，要点如下：1、用手洗衣服；2、夺走楼梯，少用电梯；3、去超市自备购物袋；4、步行或骑自行车上学。注意：100 词左右，可适当增加内容，以使行文连贯。With the
48、 global warming worse, more people choose to live a low-carbon life for the purpose of reducing greenhouse gases. As students, we have the responsibility to change our lifestyle to fit the world better. The following are some small things that may lead to big improvement of the environment.Firstly,
49、wash your clothes by hand instead of using washing machines. Secondly, dont take elevators unless it is necessary. Using stairs does good to both your health and the environment. Thirdly, remember to bring your own shopping bags when you 9go to the supermarket. Lastly, go to school on foot or by bicycle. Buses produce carbon, too.Lets take action and be low-carbon people! 练习十一假如你是李华，最近你在网上认识了一位英国高中生 Jack，你打算写一封E-mail 请他介绍一下英国学生的日常生活。你主要想了解一下几个方面的内容：1、在学校的情况；2、日常娱乐活动；3、与父母的关系。注意：100 词左右，可适当增加内容，以使行文连贯。Dear Jack,How time flies! It has been two mo
