1、【安徽省江淮十校 2019 届高三第二次联考】假定你是李华，你校上周刚举办了“汉服节”( the Hanfu Festival)活动，你的外国朋友 Peter 对此非常感兴趣，请你给他写封信。信的内容包括：1活动的目的：了解汉服，传承传统文化；2活动内容安排：主题讲座，汉服舞蹈表演等；3活动在同学中引发的反响。注意：1.词数 100 左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【答案】Dear Peter,How are you these days? Last week , our school held the Hanfu Fcstival successfully. Aware that
2、you are interested in it, I d like to give you a brief introduction.To enrich our students knowledge of the traditional Han style costumes and promote classic Chinese culture, scvcral activitics were condueted. We allended a theme. lecture, which introdueed us to the different styles and featunres o
3、f Hanfu. Besides, some dancing programs played by students wearing Hanfu also gained our applause. (或 Moreover. ,an exhibition of fantastic Hanfu from different dynasties amazed us. as a feast for the eyes. )The festival has won good comments. Moved by the beauty of Hanfu , we take pride in our ance
4、stors intelli-gence and the charm traditional culture. ( 或Under the influence of the activities , many students begin to learn in depth about Hanfu and the culture it carries. )I m sure you will also be struck by it.Best wishes.Yours,L Hua【解析】【分析】这篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。第三步：确定关键词汇和短语：the Hanfu Fcstival，
5、brief introduction，be interested in , promote classic Chinese culture,enrich ,Han style costumes, theme lecture,e different styles and features,gain our applause,fantastic, be struck by .第四步：确定较为高级的句子：Aware that you are interested in it, I d like to give you a brief introduction. We attended a theme
6、 lecture, which introduced us to the different styles and features of Hanfu. , some dancing programs played by students wearing Hanfu also gained our applause. Moved by the beauty of Hanfu , we take pride in our ancestors intelligence and the charm of traditional culture.Under the influence of the a
7、ctivities , many students begin to learn in depth about Hanfu and the culture it carries.第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接:Last week, Besides,Moreover,Under the influence of the activities.第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。【点睛】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式如:Aware that you are interested in it, I d like to giv
8、e you a brief introduction. We attended a theme lecture, which introduced us to the different styles and features of Hanfu. , some dancing programs played by students wearing Hanfu also gained our applause. Moved by the beauty of Hanfu , we take pride in our ancestors intelligence and the charm of t
9、raditional culture.Under the influence of the activities , many students begin to learn in depth about Hanfu and the culture it carries.高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次。整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。【安徽省黄山市普通高中 2019 届高三 11 月“八校联考” 】52.假如你是李华。你下周四因故不能出席外教 Smith 的英语文学课，打算向他请假。请给Smith 写一封邮件，内容包括：1.写信目的；2.原因及歉意；3.弥补措施；4.希望批准；注意：
10、1. 词数 100 左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【答案】Dear Mr. Smith, Id like to ask for a leave of absence from your lecture on English literature next Thursday for a personal reason.A British friend who has never been to China is scheduled to arrive then, so Im obliged to meet him at the airport. Words cant convey m
11、y apology and pity that Ill miss your enlightening class. To make up the missed class, I wonder if it could be recorded for me.Im sorry for any inconvenience caused and Id appreciate it if you could approve my request.【解析】【详解】书信写作的五点要求：开门见山说意图，咨询/建议/原因 1、2、3，不同内容可分段，感谢客气不可少，期待回信成老套。本文第一段首先开门见山，说明写信的
12、意图即为“下周四因故不能出席外教 Smith 的英语文学课，打算向他请假” 。因此可以用短语请假（ask for a leave ） ，缺席（be absent from.或 absence from） 。第二段说明原因及歉意。本段中自己可以展开想象，只要合理即可。还要写出自己对此表示歉意。接着再给出弥补这次爽约的措施。这一点也给了作者发挥的空间。最后一段表达自己期待对方的回信。文章的语言是礼貌委婉，让人易于接受。同时句子要灵活多变。还有一点就是写完后要再次阅读一遍检查是否有汉语式英语，是否的拼错现象。【河北衡水中学 2019 届高三上学期期中】假如你是李华，衡水中学学生会主席( Chairm
13、an of the Student Union)，近日你校收到美 国友好交流学校 Roger Manverz School 学生会主席 John 的邮件，希望你校捐赠一批传统文化书籍，供该校对此有兴趣的同学阅读，请你代表学校给 John 回复一封邮件，邮件中需要包含以下内容：1.自我介绍；2.捐赠图书的具体信息；3.询问对方的收件地址和联系信息。注意：1. 词数 100 左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear John,_Yours faithfully,Li Hua【答案】Dear John,I am Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union
14、of Hengshui High School. I am writing this letter on behalf of our school that we are more than glad to donate to your school some books on Chinese traditional culture.After discussion, we plan to donate about a hundred books, whose topics vary from Chinese ancient philosophy, Chinese traditional pa
15、inting and calligraphy to Chinese classical literature.We plan to wrap them in a big parcel and post to your school. So I hope you can offer me the accurate address of your school as well as the name of the person in charge of receiving the parcel.Looking forward to your reply.Yours faithfully,Li Hu
16、a【解析】【分析】本文为说明文。作为衡水中学学生会主席，近日你校收到美国友好交流学校 Roger Manverz School 学生会主席 John 的邮件，希望你校捐赠一批传统文化书籍，供该校对此有兴趣的同学阅读，请你代表学校给 John 回复一封邮件，邮件中需要包含以下内容：1.自我介绍；2.捐赠图书的具体信息；3.询问对方的收件地址和联系信息。【点睛】本文要点完整，层次分明。文中运用了许多高级词汇，如：on behalf of, more than glad, donate to, vary from, as well as., in charge of.等。句式相对比较灵活。文中运用了
17、名词从句：I am writing this letter on behalf of our school that we are more than glad to donate to your school some books on Chinese traditional culture.；定语从句：we plan to donate about a hundred books, whose topics vary from Chinese ancient philosophy, 和由 so 引导的状语从句：We plan to wrap them in a big parcel and
18、 post to your school. So I hope you can offer me the accurate address of your school 【河南省开封市 2019 届高三 10 月定位考试】假定你是李华，你的英国笔友 Emily 打算参加她所在的中文俱乐部举办的中文诗歌朗诵比赛，向你寻求参赛建议，请你用英语给她写一封邮件。内容包括：1充分理解所要背诵的诗歌；2纠正发音；3多交中国朋友。注意：1词数 100 左右（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数） ；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Emily，_Yours，Li Hua【答案】Dear Emily,I
19、m delighted to know you are going to take part in a Chinese poetry reciting contest. The fact that you are so interested in Chinese culture makes me happy. Now Id like to offer you some practical advice.Firstly, you should have a better understanding of what you are going to read. Only by doing this
20、 can you appreciate its beauty. Secondly. correct your pronunciation by listening to Chinese radio programs because all the announcers speak standard Chinese. Whats more, it is a good idea to make some Chinese friends and communicate with them as often as possible, which can improve your spoken Chin
21、ese.I hope that my opinions are of help to you, and wish you good luck and success!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本书面表达是一篇提纲类作文。要求以李华的名义给英国笔友 Emily 写一封电子邮件。然后写出单个句子，使用正确的连词，连句成段。具体来说，写这篇文章时，要注意文中给出的细节都要包括，不要遗漏。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文章思连贯，符全逻辑关系，不能出现文
22、章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。【点睛】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一简较好的范文。这简短文使用了大量的短语，为文章增色不少，如：be delighted to，take part in，have a better understanding of，communicate with。还使用了名词性从句 The fact that you are so interested in Chinese culture makes me happy. 倒装句 Only by doing this can you appreciate i
23、ts beauty.和定语从句 Whats more, it is a good idea to make some Chinese friends and communicate with them as often as possible, which can improve your spoken Chinese.等多种句式结构 ，增加了文章的可读性。【甘肃省兰州第一中学 2019 届高三上学期期中】假定你是李华，在你校就读的美国交换生Tom 邀请你本周六下午参加他的生日聚会，但你因故不能参加，请你给他写一封电子邮件。内容主要包括：1.表示歉意；2. 说明原因； 3. 表达祝愿。注意：1
24、. 词数 100 左右。 2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。_【答案】Dear Tom,Im terribly sorry to tell you that I cant go to your birthday party. My uncle will come to Beijing from America on Saturday afternoon. My parents want me to go to the airport with them to pick him up. So its a pity that I cant have fun with you. I wish you
25、 a happy birthday and hope everything goes well. By the way, I have bought a best-selling novel for you as a birthday gift and I will give it to you next Monday. I think itll be good for your Chinese learning.Best wishes.YoursLi Hua【解析】【分析】本文为材料作文。这是一篇邮件，文章要点已给出。邮件一般开门见山，交代写邮件的原因，便于读信人了解邮件重点。接着交代写信原
26、因，如本文中“因故不能参加派对”最后表达祝愿。注意文章要以一定的逻辑顺序进行叙述，既能满足题目要求，又能把意思表述清楚。可以适当增加细节，使行文流畅。【湖南省三湘名校教育联盟 2019 届高三第一次大联考】假如你是李华，最近，你校学生会准备举办一场主题为“国学经典”的读书交流会。你得知美国交换生 Bob 对此很感兴趣。现请你代表学生会给他写一封英文邮件，介绍并邀请他参加。邮件包括以下内容：1.时间：星期四下午 3:00;2.地点：报告厅（lecture hall)；3.内容：阅读经典名著，交流读书体会等。注意:1.词数 100 左右，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2.文章开头和结尾已给出，不
27、计入总词数。Dear Bob,Im glad that youre interested in the reading seminar to be held in our school._Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Bob,Im glad that youre interested in the reading seminar to be held in our school. Now. I d like tointroduce something about it to you.It will be held at 3:00 on Thursday afemoon in the
28、 lecture hall. Some famous writers in our eity andmany Chinese teachers in our school are invited to attend this seminar. l The participants will read someclassical works like Tang poetry and some ritten by Confucius. Besides, theyll share their thoughts andcomprehension of the classical works.There
29、s no doubt that the seminar will help you understand Chinese culture and learn Chinese well.Would you like to join us?Im looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】这篇书面表达属于应用类作文，要求写一封电子邮件。第 3 步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第 4 步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】
30、作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如：Theres no doubt that 毫无疑问。本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。【广东省肇庆市 2019 届高三第一次统测】假定你是李华，你的美国笔友 Smith 来信说对中医感兴趣，想来中国学习。请你给他写回信，内容如下：1. 支持他的决定；2. 简单介绍中医及其优点。注意：1. 词数 100 左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Smith,_Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Smith,I am
31、 more than delighted to know that you intend to learn traditional Chinese medicine in China. Im writing to extend my heartfelt support for your choice and share with you my ideas.Considered as a crown jewel shining in Chinese ancient culture,traditional Chinese medicine has now been enjoying greater
32、 popularity at home and abroad. By learning it, not only will you be able to devote yourself to peoples physical well-being, but you also have a precious opportunity to get a financially rewarding career.Therefore, it is wise of you to learn it .Traditional Chinese Medicine has been practised in Chi
33、na for the last 2500 years. It treats the body as a whole and it is effective.When it comes to the benefits of traditional Chinese medicine,whats worth mentioning is- its mildness. Slowly though it works, t does less harm to peoples health and improves peoples health condition .In contrast to wester
34、n medicine, it is aimed at curing your illnesses at source and helping to prevent your body from the potential health problems. Moreover, the herbs used all come from nature, which prove to have fewer side-effects. I am convinced that you will not regret making this decision and I hope that you can
35、have a good command of it. Looking forward to your reply!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】李华的美国笔友 Smith 来信说对中医感兴趣，想来中国学习。要求给他写回信，内容如下：1. 支持他的决定；2. 简单介绍中医及其优点。【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如宾语从句 that you intend to learn traditional Chinese medicine in China. that you will not regret making this deci
36、sion 和 that you can have a good command of it.倒装句 not only will you be able to devote yourself to peoples physical well-being 和 Slowly though it works.主语从句 whats worth mentioning.定语从句which prove to have fewer side-effects.全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。【山东省师大附中 2019 届高三上学期第二次模拟考试】假定你是李华，你的美国朋友 Jim将作为交换生来中国学习，他来信向你询问如何更好地融入到寄宿家庭和应该注意的餐桌礼仪方面的问题，请你就此内容给他写一封回信。注意：1.词数 100 左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Jim,_
