1、第五学时 Writing计 划 与 愿 望 未 来 的 生 活【写作素材】提示:黑体部分用本单元词汇表达。1我对未来的生活感到非常乐观。到那时我们生存的环境将更加舒适漂亮。_答案:Im optimistic about life in the future. By that time the surroundings where we live will be more convenient and beautiful.2人们再也不会为缺乏能源而发愁,因为到那时,太阳能、风能、潮汐能(tidal energy)已经得到充分利用 ,海水将取代石油转化成能源。_答案:People will not
2、 worry about lack of energy any longer because solar energy, wind energy and tidal energy will have been made full use of and sea water will be switched into energy as well,taking the place of oil.3家家都有机器人。机器人可以帮助人们打扫卫生、做饭、照看孩子等。_答案: There will be robots in every family,which can help people sweep u
3、p the houses,cook meals, look after the babies and so on.4只需按一下开关,悬浮汽车就可以飞往四面八方。_答案:Only by pressing a switch can hover cars fly in all directions.5这就是我们未来的生活。_答案:This is what our life will be like in the future.【连句成篇】可选用 not.any longer,and so on,only状语等将以上句子连成一篇短文。_答案:Im optimistic about life in th
4、e future.By that time the surroundings where we live will be more convenient and beautiful.People will not worry about lack of energy any longer because solar energy, wind energy and tidal energy will have been made full use of and sea water will be switched into energy as well,taking the place of o
5、il.There will be robots in every family,which can help people sweep up the houses,cook meals,look after the babies and so on.Only by pressing a switch can hover cars fly in all directions.This is what our life will be like in the future.【短文改错】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误,每处错误仅涉及一
6、个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。And now ladies and gentlemen, we are the “environment area”. People are used to collect waste in dustbin. Then the rubbish sent to be buried or burned, am I right? (We
7、nodded.) Well, now theres a system which the waste is disposed of used the principles of ecology. A giant machine, always greedy for more, swallow all the waste available. The rubbish is turned into several grades of use material, such as “fertilizer” for the fields and “soil” for deserts. Nothing w
8、asted,and everything, even plastic bags, is recycled. An great idea, isnt it?答案:And now ladies and gentlemen, we are the “environment area”People are used to collect waste in .Then the rubbish ,was) sent to be buried or burned, am I dustbindustbinsright? (We nodded.) Well, now theres a system the wa
9、ste is whichwheredisposed of the principles of ecology.A giant machine, always usedusinggreedy for more, all the waste available.The rubbish is swallowswallowsturned into several grades of material, such as “fertilizer” useusefulfor the fields and “soil” for deserts.Nothing ,is) wasted, and everythi
10、ng, even plastic bags, is recycled. great idea, isnt it?如 何 写 想 象 类 作 文技巧点拨想象类作文是一种创造型写作,属于开放式作文的一种。此类写作一般会给学生一定的素材或主题,让学生在此基础上自由发挥、创作。它不受“文体形式、内容要点” 的限制,不但考查学生的语言能力,而且对学生的想象能力、发散思维、思辨能力等也有很高的要求。想象类作文,因涉及到未来事物,因此描写时主要以一般将来时为主。另外,想象类作文中可能会用到较多比较难的词汇和句型,一定要注意避免出现拼写错误。虽然高考中鼓励同学们使用一些较为复杂的句式,但一味追求句式的复杂,反
11、而不自然。可以长短句结合,这样可以避免出现过多的错误。还有,这类作文多为提纲性作文范畴。题目要求对未来生活进行展望,在进行描写的同时,要立足文章所给的要点,在此基础上可进行适当的发挥,但切记不可天马行空,任意发挥。写好想象类文,要做到以下几点:1观察生活,表现生活。想象不是胡编乱造,要源于生活实际。只有熟悉生活,仔细地观察生活,才能有想象的原材料。2明确中心,展开想象。动笔写想象性作文之前先要明确中心,即写作目的。在这个基础上列好提纲,写出主题句。写主题句时要注意:一个段落只能有一个主题句;主题句的范围必须最大限度地缩小、具体化;尽可能选择准确、充分、档次高的关键词概括自己的观点和看法。3想象
12、美好,立意深刻。想象类作文必须要有一个“美好” 的中心思想。如果只是瞎编一个热闹离奇的故事,就失去了想象的意义。4语言规范,表达地道。选用自己熟悉的词汇和句型来组织语言进行表达,如:will,probably ,possibly,maybe,likely,may,might,could,would, Its possible/probable/likely that.,I often dream about.,Perhaps we will be able to.等都是该种作文中常会用到的。最近你班将举行一场题为“Life in the future” 的讨论会,请根据以下要点,写一篇发言稿。
13、1随着医学的发展,人类的平均寿命会到达 120 岁。2由于新能源的出现,污染问题将得到控制。3人们的日常生活也将有很大的变化。如机器人可以为你做家务;椅子的颜色能够随着你所穿衣服的颜色而改变;手机可以戴在手腕上,通话时可以看到对方;可以乘坐新型的电梯进入太空度假等。注意:1.词数 100 左右。2可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Life in the future_答案:Life in the futureIn my opinion, in the future, mans life will be very different from what it is today.First, wit
14、h the development of medicine, on average, a person will live to the age of about 120.Second, because of the discovery of new energy, the environmental pollution will be under control.Third, peoples daily life will change greatly, too.For example, robots will do all your housework for you; Your chai
15、r will change its color to match what you are wearing; you can also put your mobile phone around your wrist and can see the caller while speaking; you can even take a new elevator into space for your holidays, where there will be no traffic accidents or pollution at all.Life in the future sounds quite comfortable.What a wonderful life it will be!