1、 1 / 8高一英语短文改错1.Having a dream is of great importance. Your dreams are ordinary and realistic. I hope I will admitted into a top university and become a good doctor after I will graduate from university. I hoped one day I can find a cure for cancer. I hope those whom love me and those whom I love wi
2、ll be healthy and live happy every day. To realize my dreams, I will take more exercises to build up my body. I will try my best to focus time and energy to my study. I must work hard at my lessons or be fully preparing for the entrance exam. 【小题 1】通篇都在讲我的梦想，因此代词 Your- My。【小题 2】w ill 加动词原形， “被录取” be
3、 admitted into ,w ill 后面加 be.2.One night, I was on my way home for my Christmas holiday when my car broke down. It was complete dead, and I was a few miles away from my home in that cold, wet night. I decided to walk around a little after accepting that Id have to spend the night in the car. Maybe I
4、 can find a telephone. Actually, I didnt have to walk far before I found the small house standing in a field with a light shone from the sitting room. I knocked the door was delighted when a pleasant old man opened the door and listened to my story carefully. He said he had no telephone and that it
5、wasnt any within walking distance, but the old man who offered to go to repair my car.【答案】1. complete 改为 completely 2. in 改为 on 3.after 改为 before4. can 改为 could 5.the 改为 a 6. shone 改为 shining 7.knocked 后加 at/ on2 / 88.was 前加 and 9.it 改为 there 10. who 删掉3.My name is Li Hua. I was born in Qingdao，Shan
6、dong province on February 1995I started the school in 2001 when I was six. I studied happy in Guangming Primary School from 2001 to 2007. After that I went to No. 39 Middle School of Qingdao and graduate last summer The main subjects I study at schoo1 included Chinese，maths ，English ，physics，chemist
7、ry and computer I like English and computer best and I am very good at it .Last year I winned first prize in the school computer competition. In my spare time I enjoy listening popular music and collecting stamp My favourite sports is swimming in summer and skating in winter【答案】 【小题 1】on-in 【小题 2】去掉
8、 the 【小题 3】happy- happily【小题 4】graduate- graduated 【小题 5】study- studied 【小题 6】it-them【小题 7】winned-won【小题 8】listening- listening to【小题 9】stamp- stamps 【小题 10】is-are 【解析】4.Mary is a high school student, who devoted herself to her lessons every day. Last Saturday,as usual, she went to several class. In
9、 the evening, she continued to study until deeply into night.She was too sleepy and tired that she couldnt work effectively. On the Sunday morning, she wasabout to do her lessons while her father came up and advised her to take a break. Soon they came up a good idea. We decided to go cycling in the
10、countryside. Mary enjoyed herself, competing and chatting with her father, and felt relaxing in the open air. On Monday, Mary was energetic but active in class.3 / 8【答案】 【小题 1】devoted 改为 devotes【小题 2】class 改为 classes【小题 3】deeply 改为 deep【小题 4】too 改为 so 【小题 5】去掉 the【小题 6】while 改为 when 【小题 7】加上 with 【小
11、题 8】We 改为 They【小题 9】relaxing 改为 relaxed 【小题 10】but 改为 and5.Last weekend we went mountain-climbing. Even the heavy rain can not stop us. We set off early and went along an extreme narrow road, all in high spirit. On either side of the road was green fields. We could hear the sound of the rain mixing
12、with our laughter. At noon we reached to the top of the mountain, there we were amazed by the beauty of the scenes. After short rest, we started going down It rained more harder. We were wet all over, and we still felt happy.【答案】 【小题 1】can 改为 could【小题 2】extreme 改为 extremely【小题 3】spirit 改为 spirits【小题
13、 4】was 改为 were【小题 5】mixing 改为 mixed【小题 6】去掉 top【小题 7】theres 改为 where【小题 8】加上 a【小题 9】more 改为 much【小题 10】and 改为 but6.Even today, a man with good manner will politely open the door for a lady, help her put on her coat when necessary and see her safely to the door of her home before a date. When a man t
14、akes a woman out for a dinner, it is considered impolite to help her with her chair when she gets up or sits down. On a crowding train or bus, it is proper for a man offer a woman his seat, particular if she is old or carries a baby. Even when it comes to shake hands, ladies come first. It is impoli
15、te for a man to extend his hand for a handshake upon first greeting. Unless a woman does not extend her hand to the man first, the man shouldnt offer theirs.4 / 87.Dear Mike,How are you doing? Thank you for your help and good treat while I was stayed in Sydney last summer vacation. You were so kindl
16、y and friendly to treat me to the local food, and take us to do a lot of sightseeing. Its really nice to visit Sydney, which beautiful scenery and delicious food gave me a better impression. I have a great time here and learned a lot about Sydney. Mike, are you free these days? I would like to invit
17、e you visit China. Ill act like a guide to show you around the places of interests in my hometown.Yours,Li Hua【答案】 【小题 1】was 去掉【小题 2】kindly-kind【小题 3】us-me【小题 4】which-whose 【小题 5】better-good【小题 6】have-had 【小题 7】here-there【小题 8】to visit【小题 9】like-as【小题 10】interests-interest8.5 / 8When I was a child,
18、I spent more than ten years learn the violin. Therefore. I couldnt understand “real music” After I graduated from high school, the friend of mine suggested that we started to learn the guitar because we all thought it was cool. I will never forget the day on that we went to buy guitars in the guitar
19、 store. Here I saw a guitar player playing the guitar, which I really enjoyed. He became my first guitar teacher. There were too many wonderful models to choose that it took me a long time to buy one Now the guitar is the most importantly part of my life and I practice it every day. 9.This morning ,
20、 I go to the store near my home to do some shopping.I was walking down the passage while I gave a violent cough. The woman standing 6 / 8next to me was so shocking that she consequently dropped a jar of oil. For that very moment, a girl was walking by. She slipped on the oil, fell onto the broke gla
21、ss and hit her head on the floor. After a while ,there were blood pour down her face. I felt really guilty and sent the girl to the nearest hospital without the delay. The doctor examined her wound carefully. To my relief, it was not serious. The girl had a little smile on her face before the doctor
22、 dressed wound. 【答案】 【小题 1】go-went【小题 2】while-when【小题 3】shocking-shocked,【小题 4】For-At,【小题 5】broke-broken, 【小题 6】were-was,【小题 7】pour-pouring,【小题 8】the delay 去 the,【小题 9】before-after，【小题 10】wound 前加 the/her10.Dear schoolmates，In order to get high school students to attaching importance to the environm
23、ent and raise our awareness to protect the environment，and China Daily is planning to hold an interestingly knowledge contestA contest starts on October 14th and end on 31 st Remember, you can take the contest in China Daily newspaper, that is very popular among high school studentThe answer sheet m
24、ust cut from the newspaper and sent to China Daily after the deadlinePlease pay more attention to the related information of the contest and take an active part in them on timeStudents Union【答案】【小题 1】attaching 改为 attach 【小题 2】第二行 and 去掉 【小题 3】interestingly 改为 interesting【小题 4】第三行 A 改为 The7 / 8【小题 5】
25、end 后面加 s【小题 6】第四行 that 改为 which 【小题 7】student 后面加 s【小题 8】must 后面加 be 【小题 9】after 改为 before 10.最后一句 them 改为 it11.Dear Andy,Im glad to hear from you. You ask about my health in your last email. So Im going to tell you about diet. Im a very health person. Thats why we live near the sea and we often ha
26、ve fish. I dont know exactly what my mother will cook for us tonight, and there will probable be fish and vegetables. And of course there will also be some rices. If you come to visit me in China on one day, you wont eat many sweets. So I hope you dont have sweet tooth.Im going to ask my father to t
27、ake some photos for the football match and Ill email them to you. I think youll like our teams clothes.12.Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. Thirty minutes past, but no bus came. Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner h
28、ad I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more 8 / 8minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now when
29、ever I am close to lose my patience, Ill think of this experience.【答案】 【小题 1】添加 for【小题 2】past 改为 pasted 【小题 3】feet 改为 foot【小题 4】when 改为 than【小题 5】a 改为 the【小题 6】other 改为 another【小题 7】do 改为 did【小题 8】possible 改为 possibly【小题 9】去掉 it【小题 10】lose 改为 losing13.The winter holiday is coming, which made me exci
30、ted. I have been looking forward at relaxing myself. Id like to go skating, climb mountains and see several movie. I think I can play the basketball with my classmates. How a wonderful time Ill have during the winter holiday! However, my parents think different. They dont want me go out. They are af
31、raid Ill be knocked down by a truck, fallen off a tree, or fight with others. Beside, they are afraid I will lose my way. I hate being treated like a bird keeping in a cage. To get more freedom, I will try to persuade them.【答案】 【小题 1】made 改为 makes；【小题 2】at 改为 to；【小题 3】movie 改为 movies【小题 4】去掉 the；【小题 5】How 改为 What；【小题 6】different 改为 differently【小题 7】加 to；【小题 8】fallen 改为 fall；【小题 9】Beside 改为 Besides；【小题 10】keeping 改为 kept；
