1、高考英语写作技巧,Im sorry to tell you that I cant go to the cinema with you this Sunday. I feel terrible that I will break my promise and miss the chance to have fun.The reason for this is that I just heard of an amazing calligraphy exhibition which will be held in our city that day. Its said that this exhi
2、bition will gather a large number of well-known works created by top masters. Its definitely a brilliant opportunity for us to experience the charm of Chinese calligraphy and enrich our knowledge about Chinese culture. Since you are fascinated by Chinese culture, I sincerely hope that you can come w
3、ith me together. Im sure you will benefit a lot from the exhibition. Im looking forward to your reply!,语言地道，规范,覆盖所有内容要点,1、主要内容：内容要点；词汇和语法的数量和准确性；上下文的连贯；语言的得体性,应用了较多的语法结构和词汇,有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,2、拼写和标点是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。,3、词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去2分。从Dear 开始往下数13行，收手,4、如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。,给阅卷
4、人以好的第一直观印象,整体三部分,Beginning （2.5行） 自我介绍？+写作目的 2. Body 覆盖要点（语气，交际目的） 3. Ending （2.5行） 首尾呼应+感谢？+希望,1. More than delighted to learn from that you, Im writing with pleasure to/in the hope that,书信体开头的四种精彩开头,自我介绍：I am Li Hua, a senior three student from China./ I am Li Hua, a senior three student who comes
5、 from/would like to/feels it a great honor to,2. Deeply fascinated by, I am writing with pleasure to/in the hope that,3. Knowing fromthat, I am writing with pleasure to/in the hope that,4. Words fail to convey mywhen. (句号) I am writing to/in the hope that,ask for sb.s help do sb. a favor ask for fur
6、ther/specific/detailed information recommend sth. recommendation make a brief introduction about offer some advice about apply for sth./apply to do complain (to sb.) about apologize (to sb.) for (doing) sth. congratulate sb. on (doing) sth.,书信体结尾句型,1. It is my sincere hope that you will . 2. Your pr
7、ompt attention to my writing will be highly appreciated! 不需要感谢,3. I would fully appreciate it if you could . 4. Looking forward to your early reply! 需要感谢,5. If you have any question, do feel free to ask me. 不超字数，可以写,假设你是新华高级中学学生李华，在网上得知澳大利亚籍中学生David想来中国沿古代丝绸之路游览，他向网友征集驴友兼向导。你有兴趣做他的旅伴，请给David写一封自荐信，内
8、容要点如下： 1.自我介绍； 2.你的优势； 3.希望能想成为David的驴友。,假设你是新华高级中学学生李华，在网上得知澳大利亚籍中学生David想来中国沿古代丝绸之路游览，他向网友征集驴友兼向导。你有兴趣做他的旅伴，请给David写一封自荐信，内容要点如下： 1.自我介绍； 2.你的优势； 3.希望能想成为David的驴友。,假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教Mr Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format） 注意：1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。,词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量
9、英语水平的一个重要标志。,运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉 。,使用恰当连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。,增强书面表达效果的技巧,1. Below are my reasons for (doing) sth. / why(从句） For one thing, For another.2.With reference to/when it comes to, I do believe that. Besides,3. As a newcomer, I do hope Besides,.,三. 上下文怎么过渡？,More tha
10、n delighted to learn that you together with your family will pay a visit to China this summer vacation, I am writing to recommend the city of Xian as your tourist destination.It is my sincere hope that you will find my recommendation and suggestions helpful and useful. Looking forward to your early
11、reply.,Below are the reasons why I recommend it. For one thing, it is home to a variety of tasty snacks. For another, it used to the capital of ancient China and you are likely to increase your knowledge about the long history of China. With reference to what preparations you should make, I do hope
12、you read some books about Chinese culture and adapt yourself to using chopsticks. Besides, a little bit Chinese will definitely help you a lot. (结构+过渡）,Below are the reasons why I recommend it. For one thing, it is home to a variety of tasty snacks. For another, it used to the capital of ancient Chi
13、na and you are likely to increase your knowledge about the long history of China. With reference to what preparations you should make, I do hope you read some books about Chinese culture and adapt yourself to using chopsticks. Besides, a little bit Chinese will definitely help you a lot. (高级词汇+短语）,B
14、elow are the reasons why I recommend it. For one thing, it is home to a variety of tasty snacks. For another, it used to the capital of ancient China，where you are likely to increase your knowledge about the long history of China. With reference to what preparations you should make, I do hope you re
15、ad some books about Chinese culture and adapt yourself to using chopsticks. Besides, a little bit Chinese will definitely help you a lot.,4. 表示递进;在同一话题上补充内容另外，还有： besides; moreover; in addition 5. 表示转折关系但是， 然而， 相反： however; nevertheless（上下句） but, yet (句中）,6.表示因果关系因为，因此，所以: therefore; accordingly (上下
16、句）since; as; in that （句中）,练习一： 准备好了申请信，请求修改！,I have finished my application letter. However, I am not sure whether there are any mistakes in it. Would you please be so kind as to correct them for me?,谓语动词的时态语态：固定句式,I (walk) when a crazy dog bit me. This is the first time I (be) to China. This was th
17、e first time I (be) to China. It is high time you (get) down to you school work. My mom is the kindest person I (see). Tom was the kindest person I (see).,谓语动词的时态语态：句意,Tom says he (visit) China next week. Tom said he (visit) China the next week. Tom says he (finish) his homework and no mistake is fo
18、und in it. Tom said he (finish) his homework and no mistake was found in it.,假如你是李华，准备邮寄一张书写布（handwriting cloth）给美国朋友David，供他练习中国书法（calligraphy），请发电子邮件告诉他相关情况，要点如下： 介绍书写布特点：蘸（dip）水即可书写；能反复使用； 请他告知详细收货地址。,假如你是李华，你校正准备开一个书法展，请写一封电子邮件给外教James，请求他提供一副作品。 作品字数限制； 作品内容励志； 截稿日期及作品提交地点。,改错： 1. 动词时态 (100%概率)
19、 2. 介词 (100%概率) 3. 冠词(a/an/the) (100%概率) 4. and, or, so, but( because.so, since.so) 宾语从句引导词,定语从句关系代词/关系副词 (100%概率) 5. 词性误用:名词-形容词-副词 (100%概率) 6. 名词单复数及所有格 (75%概率) 7. 代词(一致性,主宾格) (75%概率) 8. 动词语态(50%概率) (一般现在时,一般过去时, 现在完成时,过去完成时的被动语态),语篇填空： 谓语动词 2个（一般现在时/一般过去式主被动语态） 非谓语动词1-2个 （doing, to do, done） 词性转换
20、1-2个 ( 形容词，名词，副词） 名词复数 1个 定语从句 1个 冠词+介词 2个,Below are the detailed requirements about the work. For one thing, the number of words should be limited to eight. For another, what you write down are supposed to be inspiring. Most importantly, do remember to hand in your work before July 1 at the school
21、office.,More than delighted to learn that you have a good command of Chinese calligraphy, I am writing in the hope that you can provide a work of yours for our school calligraphy show.,I would fully appreciate it if you could offer your work on time. If you have any question, do feel free to ask me.
22、,中间段的结构与过渡： Below are the 总结词 . For one thing,. For another,. Most importantly, I do hope that you. Besides,.,练习二：不能一同去观看龙舟赛，说明原因。,The university I have a preference for is going to have an interview with me next Friday. Therefore, I have to apologize to you for not being able to watch the Dragon Bo
23、at match with you.,练习三： 你的英国笔友通过汉语水平三级考试（HSK 3），请写信表示祝贺。,More than delighted to learn that you have passed HSK 3, I am writing to convey my sincere congratulations.Words fail to convey my congratulations when news comes that you have passed HSK 3.,练习四： 你的英国笔友未能通过汉语水平三级考试（HSK），请写信表示安慰并提出建议。,More than
24、 sad to learn that you failed HSK 3, I am writing to convey my comfort and offer some advice.Words fail to convey my sadness when news comes that you failed HSK 3. I am writing to offer my advice.,练习五： 你在英国做交换生期间，你的英国朋友Tom对你提供了很多帮助，现表示感谢。,I am grateful to you for the great help you provided when I w
25、as studying in Britain as an exchange student.show gratitude (to sb.) for sth./doing sth.,练习六： 外教即将回国，表示祝福。,It is my sincere hope that everything is going well with you and may you have a bright future!,1. 告知详细地址。2. 可以了解其他国家。3. 绿水青山就是金山银山。4. 我喜欢阅读.5. 留下联系电话和电子邮箱地址。,You can contact me at 12345678 or
26、.,I am wondering if you could tell me your detailed address.,一、怎样使用较高级句式,We all think it a terrific opportunity to learn about other countries.,The importance of a good environment with clean water and green mountains cant be overemphasized.,Nothing in the world can delight me so much as reading boo
27、ks.,6. 孝敬父母。7. 我尊重我的父母。8. 请帮助我。9. 我喜欢旅游和阅读.10.说明见面时间和地点。,Of all the people I know, perhaps none deserves my respect more than my parents.,We should show respect and love for our parents, without whom we would not be living a happy life.,I am wondering if you can lend me a hand.,I have a preference f
28、or travelling as well as reading.,I am wondering if we could meet at the school gate at 2 p.m. on July 1 .,假如你是李华，现受邀参加国际中学生环保大会，请你写一篇关于“垃圾分类回收”的发言稿。 垃圾分类回收的原因； 列举一个具体做法； 发出倡议。 垃圾分类：garbage classification,Good morning, girls and boys! I feel it a great honor to stand here, talking about garbage clas
29、sification.As you know, the importance of classifying rubbish can not be overemphasized. For one thing, recyclable rubbish can be made use of again to save natural resources. For another, non-recyclable rubbish will be collected to prevent environmental pollution. When it comes to what we can do, I
30、do believe that two rubbish cans should be placed in each classroom so that it can be recycled respectively.It is my sincere hope that all of you can take action now and do your part. Thats all! Thanks for listening!,感叹句 我多么不愿意放弃这次宝贵的机会去。How unwilling I am to give up such a precious chance to!多么宝贵的一
31、次经历啊！What an valuable experience it is!,二、使用丰富的句式：,利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思,能增加文章的文采。,2. 强调句 无论何时深处麻烦中，我的同学小明都会帮助我。It was my classmate Xiaoming that/who would come to my assistance whenever I was in trouble. 我真的认为我具有必要的资格。I do believe I have the qualifications needed.,3、 倒装句 只有这样，我们才能创建一个更加和谐和繁荣的社会。Only in t
32、his way are we able to build a more harmonious and prosperous society.,4、 not onlybut also 西安历史悠久，美食众多。Not only does the city of Xian have a long history, but it is also home to a variety of tasty snacks.,5、 with短语 随着高考临近，我很有信心，因为做好了充分准备。 With Gaokao drawing near, I find myself more and more confide
33、nt in that I have made full preparations.随着经济发展，越来越多的家长开车接送小孩上学。With the development of economy, an increasing number of parents choose to drive their kids to and from school.,6、 定语从句 我认为，我们学校应该进行垃圾回收利用。From my perspective, our school should be a place where rubbish can be classified and recycled af
34、terwards.我英语很好，和外国人交谈容易。 I have a good command of both spoken and written English, which makes it a piece of cake for us to communicate with foreigners.,7、 各种名词性从句 我们要为周围的人树立榜样。 What we can do is do our part and set a good example to others surrounding me.我们要竭尽全力，使得家乡更美更宜居。We should do whatever is w
35、orth doing to make our hometowns beautiful and comfortable.,8、 各种状语从句穿越马路时，我们应该选择斑马线。 When crossing the street, we ought to choose the zebra crossing.只要遵守交通规则，更少的交通事故会发生。So long as we obey the traffic rules, our city will be a place where there is fewer traffic accidents.,Do call me before hand so t
36、hat I can meet you at the airport. They had to wait in that the rain was getting more and more heavy.,9. 使用并列句,继续努力，你会取得进步的。,Carry on and you will make great efforts.,学习使用筷子，更好适应中国的生活。,Learn how to use chopsticks and youll adapt yourself to the life here.,高考作文类型：,A. 图表数据说明类文章 B. 提示议论文类文章 C. 看图说话类文章
37、D. 书信类,写作基本步骤： 仔细审题，列举大纲。 围绕要点，写出句子。 添加过度，确保连贯。 先求正确，再求灵活。 认真眷写，卷面整洁。,Practice 书面表达：,Ladies and gentlemen,Welcome to our school !, This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people.,It used to be very poor.,However,it has changed a lot since 1978 ,and has been devel
38、oping very fast.,People here live a much better life than before .,Now it is taking,on a new look.,In the past, the school here was very small and most children couldnt afford to go to school. ,But now it has been rebuilt and, which has 4 storeys is the most beautiful one in the village.,All the sch
39、ool-age children can study here., Whats more,they enjoy free education., May you enjoy your stay here.,the newly built teaching building,/ May you have a pleasant time here!,Thank you.,Ladies and gentlemen,Welcome to our school ! This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and abo
40、ut 500 people. It used to be very poor. However, it has changed a lot since 1978 and has been developing very fast. People here live a much better life than before . Now it is taking on a new look.In the past, the school here was very small and most children couldnt afford to go to school. But now i
41、t has been rebuilt and the newly built teaching building which has 4 storeys is the most beautiful one in the village. All the school-age children can study here. Whats more, they enjoy free education. May you enjoy your stay here. Thank you.,现在正是春暖花开的春游时节。你校学生以“高三学生要不要参加春游活动”展开了讨论。请根据以下讨论结果，写一篇短文。,
42、How to write a good composition,The outline of the writing:,Conclusion paragraph: ,Introduction paragraph: ,主题句的内容要明确具体，语言简洁，开门见山，句式力争多样性,How will you start you passage? 问句： 从句： Introduction:（sample） Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing? We have had a heated discussion.,巧用过渡句，过渡词
43、，理顺文章的逻辑关系,Pay special attention to the transition sentences: Opinions are divided on the question.,The body part,Point1: 65%的人认为应该春游（亮明观点） Sentence pattern: Most of us (about 65%) hold the opinion that,since it tends to,which is unfavorable to Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that Senior
44、3 students should go spring outing.,Reason1：接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空气，有利健康,Sentence pattern:They think it good to do sth/ sth do good to sthIn their opinion, it is of great benefit to do sth Eg:They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air,Reason 2:活动是精神放松，大脑休息，有利于学习,（注意：两个
45、观点之间的连接） 递进 whats more ；besides ; moreover ; in addition；furthermore Eg: they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic.,Conclusion: 小段总结，进一步亮明观点，前后呼应。,Eg: They think it will do good to their students.,Point 2:的学生认为不应该春游（亮明观点） 注意：使用过渡句，自然衔接句子和段落（承上启下）
46、 Sentence pattern: However, others prefer to Some others have just the opposite opinion On the other hand. Eg: On the other hand, about 35% students are against the idea.,Reason 1:高考临近，没有心情玩 Sentence pattern: They say/believe/hold the opinion that.Eg: They say that with college entrance examination
47、drawing near, they dont feel like going anywhere.,Reason 2:春游耽误学习 （注意：两个观点之间的连接） Eg:Besides, they think going spring outing will take at least a day off. They cant afford the time. They think they should fix their attention on their studies,Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing? W
48、e have had a heated discussion. Opinions are divided on the question. Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing. They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air and whats more, they can relax themselves for a while
49、and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic. They think it will do good to their students.On the other hand, about 35% students are against the idea. They say that with college entrance examination drawing near, they dont feel like going anywhere. Besides, they think going spring outing will take at least a day off. They cant afford the time. They think they should fix their attention on their studies,
