1、第 47 讲 书面表达(2014，杭州)假设你是李平，最近你学习上遇到困惑。请用英语给你的英国朋友南希(Nancy)写一封电子邮件，讲述你的问题并寻求她的帮助。注意：1.邮件必须包括下面三幅画所描述的内容。2词数 80 左右，开头和结尾已给出(不计词数) 。参考词汇：考试不及格 fail the exam 熬夜 stay up lateOne_possible_version：Hi Nancy，How are you？Hope youre well.I_have_a_problem_and_need_your_help.I_failed_the_maths_exam_yesterday.My_
2、mom_was_really_mad_with_me.In_order_to_do_better_next_time，I_stayed_up_last_night_doing_my_maths_homework.Since_I_didnt_get_enough_sleep，I_felt_sleepy_this _morning.My_teacher_noticed_it.She_came_up_and_asked_what_was_wrong_with_me，but _I_didnt_tell_her_the_truth.What_should_I_do？Can_you_giv e_me_so
3、me_advice?Im really looking forward to receiving your reply soon.Love，Li Ping书面表达题主要考查学生在特定的语境中综合运用语言进行表达的能力；同时，还考查学生英文书写的规范性、美观性等。一、常见的书面表达题型1根据文体归类：日记、书信、通知、便条、启事、贺卡、发言稿、调查报告、记叙文、说明文及议论文等。然而许多试题都将记叙、议论、说明等表达方式融为一体，形成复合型的写作。2根据所提供的材料：图画作文、图表作文、提纲作文及命题作文等。这样的测试形式既有一定的控制性，又有一定的开放性，为考生展示其写作能力提供了发挥的空间。
4、二、如何写出优美的文章1选准词语。语言是交流的工具。要使用通用的、合乎习惯的词语，切忌使用生硬的词汇。选词要达意，英语有许多同义但用法不同的词汇或短语，切忌混淆用法。用词要简明扼要，在不确定的情况下，宁可用常用词简单明了地表达信息。2写好句子。运用所学词汇、短语，结合一定的语法知识，按照句子结构特点，直接用英语写出相应句子。运用固定句式表达信息：把比较复杂的句子分成两个或两个以上的句子，减少写错句的几率。把两个简单句用一个复合句或较复杂的简单句表达出来，这样可提高文章的可读性，但在没有把握的情况下慎用。遇见生词或不熟悉的表达时，可以在保留原意的基础上，用不同的表达方式写出来。3设计段落。一个完
5、整的段落要有主题句、拓展句及结尾句。正确运用连接词使语言衔接自然、行文流畅。4书写规范、卷面整洁。三、如何提升写作1熟悉五种基本句式及一些使用频率较高的句式。2收集优秀范文并大声朗读来扩展思路及培养语感。3坚持常规练习。即：词词组句子段落篇章。切记：简单句是主菜，要做到运用自如；复杂句是佐料，有之增色，缺之乏味，但不可舍本逐末，以免弄巧成拙。4仔细审题，要点齐全，人称及时态正确运用。【例 1】 (2014，丽水)暑假即将来临，对于如何安排孩子初中毕业后的第一个假期，家长们和孩子自己有着各自的想法。请根据下表提示，写一篇英语短文，描述他们的不同看法，同时发表你自己对暑期安排的观点。Parents
6、 opinions get ready for high schooldo some housework.Kids opinions have a good restdo some sightseeing.Your opinion .注意：1.表格中的观点仅供参考，允许适当发挥；2开头已经给出，不计入总词数；3文中不得出现真实姓名和校名等信息；4词数：80100。How will you spend the coming summer vacation？Parents and kids have their own opinions._点拨：第一步，根据提示的情景，设身处地思考，完成表格中需要
7、补充完整的地方。第二步，根据表格的内容，遣词造句，连句成文。第三步 ， 通读全文，纠正错误，书写整洁。注意：1.阐明观点看法常用句型“. think that 从句” ；should，be supposed to 等。2文章阐明观点应具有积极的意义，凸现出正能量。参考范文：How_will_you_spend_the_coming_summer_vacation？Parents_and_kids_have _their_own_opinions.Some parents think kids should get ready for high school in the summer，so i
8、ts necessary to take summer courses.They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills.But many children disagree.They think its time to take a good rest.They need to hang out with their friends and do some sightseeing.In my opinion，we children can have a talk with our parents.All
9、work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.We need to relax ourselves after working so hard at school.Its good for us to have a trip or do some sports.精彩再现：文章内容完整，表达清楚，要点一目了然。恰当地使用副词 so，also，but 等，让父母与孩子的观点对比鲜明。经典句型：Some parents think.But many children disagree.In my opinion，.All work and no play makes
10、Jack a dull boy.【例 2】 (2014，呼和浩特)良好的生活与学习习惯对我们的成长是非常重要的。请从以下的习惯中选择一个你以前做得不够好，但现在已具备的好习惯，谈一谈你养成这个习惯的过程及收益。要求：1)不使用真实的校名、人名等相关信息；2)内容完整，书写整齐；3)80 词左右；4)文章的开头已给出，但不计入总词数。Sleeping habits Eating habits Learning habits My Good Habit_is my good habit._点拨：第一步，根据提示从提供的习惯中选取一个。第二步，仔细审题，构思作文，注意这个好习惯是从坏习惯转变为好习惯
11、的。第三步 ，通读 全文，纠正错误，注意英语表达习惯。注意：谈这一习惯的转变时，以前的坏习惯用一般过去时态或 used to 表达，而现在的状况要用一般现在时态。参考范文：My Good HabitEarly to bed and early to rise is_my_good_habitTwo years ago，when I was a Grade 7 student， I liked reading books in bed.Every day after I finished my homework，I lay in bed until 12 oclock at night.The
12、next day I couldnt get up on time.I used to be late for school，and I felt tired in class.It was too bad.With the help of my teacher and my parents，I gave up the bad habit.Ever since then I go to bed early and get up early.I never go to school late again.As a result，Im much stronger and doing better
13、in school now.精彩再现：文章内容完整，由“晚睡，迟到，疲惫早睡早起”转变自然，更突出好习惯养成的不易及让人受益。合理地运用“used to，as a result 和 with the help of.”等短语，让文章增色不少。经典句型：Early to bed and early to rise is my good habit.It was too bad.Im much stronger and doing better in school now.(一)(2014，湖州)合理安排闲暇时间有助于养成良好的生活习惯。最近你们班同学就 How to Spend Free Tim
14、e 进行了交流 ，请结合下图所提供的信息，用英语写一篇短文，并谈谈你的看法。要求：1.短文必须包括图中全部信息，可适当发挥；2条理清晰，能表明自己的观点并说明理由；380100 词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；4短文中不能出现真实姓名、校名、地名等信息。One_possible_version：How to Spend Free TimeRecently my classmates have talked about how to spend our free time.Everyone_has_his_own_way.Alan_likes_going_online_because_it_hel
15、ps_him_relax_a_lot.Sometimes_he_does_some_reading.Sonia_doesnt_help_her_parents_with_the_housework_much.Instead，she_spends _most_of_her_time_watching_TV.I_think_it_a_waste_of_time_to_watch_TV_or_go_online_often.I_prefer_reading_some_interesting_books，which_can_make_my _life_enjoyable.At_the_same_tim
16、e，sports_are_also_my_favourite.Of_course，when_my_parents_are_busy，I_w ill_help_do_the_chores.All_in_all，its_important_to_make_good_use_of_our_free_time.Better_habits，healthier _life.(二)(2014，梅州)请仔细阅读下面这篇短文，再根据短文后面的内容要点完成写作。This is my favourite school.It starts at 9 am and finishes at 3 pm.We have mu
17、sic and art lessons every day because they are very interesting to us.There are only 25 students in each class.We only have half an hour of homework on weekdays.There is a park， a shopping mall，a tennis court and a swimming pool.We have a big library with lots of useful books.There are lots of clubs
18、 and afterschool activities.Every month，we go on a school trip to a museum or a theater.为了使同学们更加健康快乐地成长，学校决定向同学们征求建议。假如你是刘波，请根据下面表格提示，以“Suggestions for a Better School Life”为题，用英语向校长写一封 80 词左右的建议信。注意：文中应包含所有要点，可适当发挥；语句连贯，不得照搬原文；不能出现真实的校名和姓名；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Our school *open the library more often*org
19、anize more afterclass activities*give us more time for sports*organize fewer testsOurteacher *make classes more interesting*talk less but more clearly in class*finish classes on time*give us less homeworkOne_possible_version：Suggestions for a Better School LifeDear Headmaster，Im very glad to write a
20、 letter to you.These days we are talking about how to have a better school life.Here are some of my suggestions.First，I hope our school will open the library more often.Second，I think our school can organize more afterclass activities.Next I hope our school will give us more time for sports，art and
21、music.And I suggest our school should organize fewer tests as well.As for our teachers，I hope they will be our friends and make classes more interesting.And if they can talk less but more clearly in class，we will be more interested in studying and have more time to practise.Whats more，I hope they wi
22、ll give us less homework and finish classes on time.Hope my suggestions will be helpful.Thanks for reading my letter!Yours sincerely，Liu Bo(三)(2014，温州)假如你是林思，要去澳大利亚的墨尔本高中(Melbourne High School)留学，需要在当地找一个寄宿家庭(host family)。请按要求写一封约 100 词的电子邮件给寄宿家庭中介公司的经理 Mr Porter。内容包括：(1)简单介绍自己的个人情况，如语言，爱好等；(2)提出自己对
23、寄宿家庭的要求( 如下表所示)。Family member English speaker，no smokerHousing near the school，a bedroom with a bathroomOthers cooking by myself.注意：邮件需涵盖以上所有要点，可适当发挥；开头和结尾已给出(不计入总词汇) ；文中不能出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息。One_possible_version：Dear Mr Porter，My name is Lin Si.Im a 16yearold boy from China.Im going to study in Melbour
24、ne High School.I like making friends.English is my favourite subject but Im weak in spoken English.Thats why I want to find a host family who are native English speakers.In this way，I will have more chances to practise English in daily life.I hope its a family without smokers.Moreover，its better if
25、the family lives within a twentyminute walk from school and provides a bedroom with a bathroom.As for the meals，Id like to cook by herself because Im fond of cooking.Looking forward to your early reply.Best wishes，Lin Si(四)(2014，黔南)假设你叫张玲(Zhang Ling)，前些天收到笔友戴维(Dave)的电子邮件(email)，信中说他不久要来中国学习中文。他想了解如何
26、学好中文。请你用英文给他回复一封电子邮件，提出一些如何学好中文的建议。内容要求：1中文有用，外国人对它感兴趣，学习它；2中英文不同，学习困难；3学好中文的建议：多记忆、多读写、看电视、听广播、找人交流等；4不仅能从书上学到，也能通过其他方法学好中文。要求：1)必须用以上所有信息 ，可适当发挥；2)要求句子连贯，语句通顺， 书写规范；3)词数不少于 80 词，信的开头和结尾部分已给出 ，不计入总词数；4)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。参考词汇：useful，foreigner，different from，difficult，learn.by heart，listen to the r
27、adio， not only.but also.One_possible_version：Dear Dave，Im glad youll come to China to learn Chinese.Chinese_is_becoming_more_and_more_useful.Many_foreigners_are_interested_in_it_and_studying_it_now.It_may_be_difficult_for_you_because_its_really_different_from_English.You_have_to_learn_more_Chinese_w
28、ords_by_heart_and_remember_as_many_Chinese_words_as_possible.Its_also_important_to_do_some_reading_and_writing.You_can_watch_TV_and_listen_to_the_radio_to_practise_your_listening.Its_a_good_way_to_catch_every_chance_to_talk_in_Chinese.You_can_learn_Chinese_not_only_from_books_but_also_from_people_ar
29、ound_you.If_you_have_any_questions，please_let_me_know.Im_sure_youll_learn_Chinese_well.Hope to see you soon.Yours，Zhang Ling(五)(2014，兰州)学会自我保护是青少年需要具备的一种意识和能力。请根据以下学校安全教育周收集的自我保护小贴士，并结合自己的观点，以“How Can We Protect Ourselves？”为题，写一篇90 词左右的短文，谈谈在生活中青少年应该怎样自我保护。要求：句子结构准确，要点齐全，内容合理，篇章结构连贯。One_possible_ver
30、sion：How_Can_We_Protect_Ourselves?Selfprotection is one of the most important skills for teenagers.But how can we protect ourselves？Here are some of my suggestions.First，we should be careful when we make friends，especially on line.Second，if we are in danger，we must call the police for help in time s
31、o that we can keep ourselves safe.Also，we ought to eat healthily and safely.Besides，we shouldnt crowd each other when we go upstairs or downstairs at school.Last but not least，summer is coming.We must remember its dangerous to swim alone.In short，everyone needs to learn how to protect ourselves and
32、stay away from danger.(六)(2014，福州)假设英语课上将以“家乡的名胜”为话题展开讨论。请你根据下面表格中的信息。用英语写一篇发言稿，介绍中国十大历史文化名街之一的福州三坊七巷。三坊七巷Three Lanes andSeven Alleys位置：市中心 交通：便利特色 老式建筑；明清风格名人故居；保护完好民俗展示，传承文化美食特产，品种丰富感想 (写 12 点)要点：1)内容完整，意思连贯 ，语句通顺，书写规范；2)请不要逐字翻译；词数 90 左右，不包含已给出的句子的词数。参考词汇：便利的 convenient 明清风格 the style of the Ming
33、and Qing Dynasty 故居former home 民俗 folk custom 传承 pass on 特产 special local productOne_possible_version：Three Lanes and Seven Alleys in Fuzhou is among the top ten historical and cultural streets of China.It_lies_in_the_city_center_and_the_traffic_is_convenient.Its_famous_for_old_buildings_in_the_styl
34、e_of_the_Ming_and_Qing_Dynasty.Many_famous_persons_in_history_used_to_live_here.Their_former_homes_are_well_protected_and_attract_lots_of_people_from_home_and_abroad.Therere_wonderful_folk_custom_shows_that_pass_on_the_culture_of_Fuzhou.Besides，the_tourists_can_enjoy_different_kinds_of_delicious_foo
35、ds_and_special_local_products.Im_proud_of_this_great_place_of_interest_in_my_hometown.Its_well_worth_visiting.(七)(2014，随州)假如你是李明，你的朋友彼得(Peter)即将面临中考，然而他却深感压力巨大 ，寝食不安，情绪低落，学习效率低下。请你写一封信给他提一些有益的建议，帮助他调整心态，提高学习效率，轻松迎考。要点如下：1学会放松(体育锻炼，听音乐 )2健康饮食3充足睡眠4学会沟通注意：1.词数：80 词左右。(文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)2可适当发挥，但必须包含以上
36、要点。One_possible_version：Dear Peter，Dont worry about your study too much.First，you should learn_how_to_relax_yourself.I_think_doing_more_sports_is_good_for_your_health.Listening_to_music_is_also_a_good_way_to_relax.And_I_think_its_necessary_to_have_healthy_eating_habits.Please_remember_to_have_breakf
37、ast_every_morning.It_can_give_you_enough_energy_to_study_for_the_whole_morning.Youd_better_go_to_bed_early_and_have_enough_sleep.It_will_keep_you_active_during_the_day.Finally_I_think_you_should_talk_with_your_friends，parents_or_teachers_often.Tell_them_about_your_thoughts_and_feelings.Try_to_get_he
38、lp_from_them.I hope you can stay in good spirits and study better.Yours，Li Ming(八)(2014，烟台)两个月前，胶东在线对我校初四学生毕业后的人生规划进行了一次问卷调查，请根据图表中提供的数据信息，写一篇 100120 词的调查报告，并结合实际谈谈你的观点和毕业后的人生理想。要求：1.行文不得出现真实姓名和校名；2.开头已给出，不计入总词数。One_possible_version：Two months ago，Jiaodong Online made a survey on what junior Grade 4
39、 students would do after graduation.Here is the result.65% of us hope to be admitted to the senior schools.About 20% would like to learn useful skills at technical schools so as to get jobs easily after graduation.And 10% of the students will find jobs to make money to support their families.Only 5%
40、 are not quite sure about their aims.I think they should make it clear what to do next.In my opinion，we teenagers should have a definite design for our future life.Different students have different aims and of course they change with the time.My dream is to be a doctor to serve the patients.So，I am determined to work hard at all my lessons so that I can enter Beijing Medical University.Im ready for a hard but colourful senior school life.
