1、How to correct a composition,短文改错,得法者，事半功倍,动词形，名词数，还要注意形和副；非谓语，细辨别，代词格，细领悟；介词短语常常考，习惯用法要记住；句子成分多分析，逻辑错误须关注，冠词连词常光顾。,短文改错口诀：,一、动词形,主要包括两类错误：动词的时态和语态错误，以及主、谓不一致的错误。,2007四川卷：When he gets home, he saw the animal waiting at the door, still wearing his jacket with the wallet in the pocket. 2007天津卷：In Grad
2、e Eight I took physics. In one test I get only 36 percent of the answers correct.,got,got,2006安徽卷： Anyone can borrow books if he or she wish. 2006安徽卷： You can sit at the desk and read the daily newspapers, magazines and the other books, but you are not permit to take them out,wishes,permitted,1.Afte
3、r they had chose the books they wished to read, the instructor told them the principal points he wanted them to note.,2. Not only the students but also the teacher like the film.,chosen,likes,3.I will like to know where you were born. 4.I would like you read it again. 5.My father mustnt have said su
4、ch a thing.,would,to,couldnt /cant,6.When our six children were young ,suppertime is always being interrupted .7.Growing up is not easy. Sometimes all that is need is someone to rely on .8.The bike outside my house is belonged to Tom.,was,needed,解决方案 (1) 通读全文，搞清文中动词时态的主旋律 . (2) 结合语境，灵活运用时态形式 . (3) 认
5、真推敲，准确把握主动与被动 ., 考点剖析 此类题的错误设置一般包括以下几个方面： (1) 短文中时态的使用前后不一致 . (2) 在特定语境条件下时态的误用(如含有状语从句的复合句中，主句用将来时态，而从句中则用一般现在时态) . (3) 主动语态和被动语态的混用 .,二、名词数,指名词单、复数形式的用法错误。,2007陕西卷：Personally, I found most lesson rather uninteresting. 2008浙江卷：A nearby company was looking for students with good handwriting to write
6、 addresses on evenlope .The pay was 10 cents per envelope.,lessons,evenlopes,2006福建卷：If you have interests in it, reply to me soon. 2006陕西卷：They have all sorts of course. Im sure you will find one you like it. 2006重庆卷： In summer, the sea under the blue skies is even more beautiful.,interest,courses,
7、sky,1.The book will give you all the informations you need. 2. He is on good term with me. 3. He is a generous fellow, and will soon make friend with you again. They did not want me to do any work at family,furniture,fun,homework,paper,news,progress,trouble,work（工作），advice等,information,terms,friends
8、,home,4. He sent his daughter to a girls high school. 5. Give me three spoonful of sugar.6. Aunt Mary returned home after ten years absence.7.He had no ideas that the kitchen was not for guests .,girls,spoonfuls,years,idea, 考点剖析 此类题的错误设置一般包括以下几个方面： (1) 可名词与不可数名词的混用. (2) 用于固定词组中的一些名词的 用法 . (3) 同义词或反义
9、词的混用 .,解决方案,1. 理清可数与不可数名词之间的区别与联系 . 2. 记清一些用于固定词组中名词的特殊用法 . 3.结合语境认真分辨同义名词或近义名词 .,三、还要注意形和副,注意形容词和副词在句子中的作用和具体用法。这也是高考短文改错题的常考点。,2007浙江卷：I got to the finishing line first. I won the race. I felt very proudly of myself. 2006福建卷：We can hear birds singing happy all around.,proud,happily,修饰名词，be动词，系动词要用
10、形容词 修饰动词，形容词，整个句子用副词 比较级和最高级的使用,2008全国卷： I will learn more about the history of the Olmpics as good as the 2008 Olmpic games. 2006辽宁卷： She was usual patient with her students and never made them disappointed.,usually,well,1.Unfortunate，there are too manypeople in my family. 2. You should be respecta
11、ble towards your teachers. 3. I am absolutely uncapable to tell a lie.,Unfortunately,fortunately，luckily，obviously，natrually，interestingly,respectful,incapable,4. You must make your parents happily. 5. He looked differently after his return from Europe.6.The number of girls is very few.,happy,differ
12、ent,small,7.They came back lately and had some tea . 8.The two men threw all their equipment into the water to make the balloon light. 9.The new person on the job feels more better after he or she has played tennis with other people in the office.,late,lighter,much/even/rather,考点剖析 : (1) 形容词和副词的混用，是
13、短文改错中常见的考点之一 . (2)比较级和最高级的混用或误用.(3)比较级和最高级修饰语的误用 以及近义词的误用 .,解决方案 (1) 熟知形容词和副词的句法功能 . (2) 理清短文中形容词和副词比较 等级的关系 . (3) 结合短文内容，准确使用形容词和副词.,四、非谓语，细辨别,这是考查最多的错误形式之一。主要有现在分词、过去分词，动名词和不定式错误。,2007浙江卷： I could not to run very fast and fell behind.2007宁夏卷：Li Meng came see me every day.,to,2008重庆卷： And there wer
14、e many meaningful things2008辽宁卷： We all enjoyed this precious day greatly , remember the time we spent together and the people they were familiar with.,remembering,that were worth think of,thinking,1.He has never been heard speak ill of others. 2. We hear it say frequently that what present-day men
15、most desire is security. 3.It is difficult to make yourself understand in English.,to,said,understood,4.On his way home,he suddenly heard his name calling.5. But then there are always more mysteries look into.6. After learn the basics of the subject, nothing else seemed very practical to me .,called
16、,to,learning,7.That is, a game of tennis making him very busy. 8.He didn t want share things with other people.9.Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper.10. My parents love me dearly of course and will do all they can make sure that I get a good education.,made,to,talking,to,11.The air keeps t
17、he balloon up was escaping quickly and the balloon was coming down. 12. I just want to thank you for helping me becoming a different person .13. They wanted one child or another to come out and played.,keeping,become,play,考点剖析 此类题的错误设置一般包括以下几个方面： (1) 谓语动词与非谓语动词的混用. (2) 非谓语动词之间的混用. (3) 在并列结构中非谓语动词的误用
18、.,解决方案,(1) 纵观全文或全句，明确句中动词所作的句子成分. (2) 系统掌握非谓语动词的句法功能. (3) 前后联系，整体把握 .,六、 代词格，细领悟,高考链接6：I heard that Mr. Wang wouldteach our English this term.,us,1. 人称代词主格和宾格，物主代词的使用 反身代词oneself 的使用 3不定代词的使用 4Both,all,either,neither,none的使用. 5. Whose 和whos，its和 its的区别,五、 代词格，细领悟,（ 2007全国I）I was only about six when
19、he held his hand out to me. I took it in me and we walked.,mine,Finally, the men threw away most of his clothes to save themselves .,their,2008全国II： I should be able to tell visitors about our history and culture and show them their great achievement. 2007陕西：Just at that time I woke up and found me
20、still in bed!,our,myself,1.Knowledge is there for whomever will seek it. 2.Whom do you think is the writer of this book? 3.His brothers case is quite different from me.,whoever,who,mine,4.People find increasingly difficult to make their living. 5.He is taller than any one in his class.6. I spoke a m
21、an who I thought to be my cousin.,it,else,to,7.I read your e-mail to my parents and showed them the photo you sent it to me . 8. I hope that both you two could come and visit us some time soon . 9. Those fresh men finally learned to solve the problems by them.,themselves,考点剖析 此类题的错误设置一般包括以下几个方面： 1)
22、代词指代的人或事物前后不一致的错误. 2) “it” 一词的不当使用(包括用于从句中或作形式主语或宾语). 3) 不定代词或反身代词的误用.,解决方案 (1) 顺藤摸瓜，理清短文中代词的指代关系，注意联系上下文。 (2) 系统掌握it的各种用法 . (3)准确把握不定代词在文中的正确使用。,主要考查习惯搭配方面的基础知识，其错误表现形式主要有三种：多词、少词和搭配错误。,catch a sight oflose my heart in hurry in Sunday afternoonsuch many peoplein a short,a,on,so,六、习惯用法要记住,考点剖析 : (1)
23、 在一些固定短语中，介词的误用 是很常见的题型 . (2) 介词与连词或副词的混用. (3) 及物动词之后介词的多用或不及物动词之后介词的漏用.,解析方案: (1) 平时的学习中注意积累语言知识，特别是一些固定搭配的记忆 . (2) 强化语法训练，分清连词，副词和介词之间的区别和句法功能 . (3)语法知识的记忆和语感的培养结合起来 .,七、句子成分多分析,不同的句子成分要用不同的词类；不同的语境要选择不同的词语。只有对句子结构和成分作细致的分析，才能找出用词不当的错误。,2008年安徽卷 : She looked at me and started to laugh. “How are yo
24、u laughing?”I asked. 2007天津卷：I was lucky enough to have ateacher which didnt take my bad grades as a judgement of my abilities, but ,who / that,Why,1. My roommate lives in a small town in central Missouri, a quiet town which I would like to live myself. 2. The United States is composed of fifty stat
25、es, two of those are separated from the others by land or water. 3. These photos will show you how our village looks like . 4.I cannot make sense of that he said at the meeting.,where,which,what,what,八、逻辑错误须关注,与句子的上、下文不一致，甚至相矛盾，属于逻辑性错误，如称谓上的张冠李戴。,2006四川卷：That night，we sat down to what they thought w
26、ould be a pleasant, uninterrupted meals.NMET 2005: Some students may also save up for our college or future use.,we,their,3.I came into the living room and saw one of them just go through the kitchen door but turn on the light. 4.He will stay there one and two days. 5. There may not be much choice b
27、etween this one or that.,and,or,and,考点剖析:(1) 并列连but ,and ,or, so 等词的混用，常常出现在改错题中。 (2) 并列连词和从属连词的混用。 (3) 平行结构方面的错误。,常考的错误形式有：连词but， and， or和so的用法错误，以及冠词的用法错误等。,2oo7全国II：I meant to write long letter and tell you all the things Im doing at the school 2007四川卷：An Australian farmer found the kangaroo caug
28、ht in the fence around his farms.,a,a,九、冠词、连词常光顾,2007浙江卷：Today I was having a PE lesson while I fell down and hurt my foot.2006辽宁卷：She always made sure that our homework was finished on time, but she marked strictly on our actual performance.2007四川卷： He thought the poor animal was injured, but the k
29、ind farmer took off his jacket and put on the animal.,when,and,so,1.30 percent of girls would like to become teachers when only 5 percent of boys want to do this job. 2.We become more and more impatient of interruptions when the years go on. 3.It was not until it began to rain when I noticed his umb
30、rella left in my car.,while,as,that,冗词的多用,1.Last summer ,I went to Beijing, my first time trip to the city. 2.Two years later, he returned back home. 3. It is about 200 miles far away from London.,【解题步骤】,1 浏览全文，掌握大意,2 分句阅读，逐行找错,3 检查核对，攻克难点,4 规范答题 不留空白,短文改错口诀：,动词形，名词数，还要注意形和副；非谓语，细辨别，代词格，细领悟；介词短语常常考，
31、习惯用法要记住；句子成分多分析，逻辑错误须关注，冠词连词常光顾。,短篇练习,At Christmas Eve, Jim went with his 1._ father to choose a Christmas tree. They choose 2._ a big one. It was almost as taller as the room! 3._ They put them in the corner of the sitting 4._,_,on,_,chose,_,tall,_,it,动词形,介词短语常常考，习惯用法要记住,还要注意形和副,代词格，细领悟,2009高考英语短文改
32、错模拟训练,room. Kate was covered it with a lot of 5._ Christmas light. The sitting room looked 6. _ really beautifully at the moment. There was 7. _ a fire burn in the fire place, and the Christmas 8. _ tree lights were shinning brightly. Jim or his 9. _ parents singing and dancing happily. 10._,_,light
33、s,_,beautiful,were,动词形,还要注意形和副,动词形,名词数,2009高考英语短文改错模拟训练,逻辑错误须关注,and,非谓语，细辨别,burning,四不改： 1. 单词拼写不改 . 2. 大小写不改 . 3. 词序不改 . 4. 标点符号不改 .,Dear Alice, I have just got some good news to tell to you. 1._ I win a national prize for painting last week. 2. _ My father was so pleasing that he suggested 3. _ I
34、go to England for a holiday. Id like to staying 4. _ there for half a month, visiting place of interest 5. _ or practicing my English as well. Weve been 6. _,第二个to删去,win-won,pleasing-pleased,staying-stay,place-places,or-and,Writing to each for nearly a year now. I have 7. _ often dreamed of talk face to face with you. 8. _ I imagine youll be at vacation yourself by that 9. _ time. Perhaps we could go out to do some 10. _ sightseeing together. Best wishes！Lily,each后加other,talk-talking,at-on,
