1、学优中考网 2012 中考英语专题训练（书面表达及参考范文） （杭州市 4 月）1. 母亲节-英语作文范文按照内容要求，写一篇以“我的母亲”为题，120140 词的英语作文。【1】. 你母亲是个农村妇女，50 多岁，没上过学，但懂得年轻人掌握知识的重要性，她很关心你的学习情况；【2】. 你的母亲为了让你有更多的时间学习，总是竭尽全力来照顾你。一次，当你听说母亲病重，回家看她时，她正带病坚持为你做新衣，你激动得热泪盈眶；【3】. 你母亲就是这样一位妇女，善良、勤劳，永远值得你尊敬和爱戴。My mother is a village woman， who is already in her fif
2、ties. She had very little school education， but she knows that knowledge is of great importance to young people. She often asks me how I get along with my studies and encourages me to study hard.My mother takes good care of me and does everything she can for me， so that I can spend more time on my s
3、tudy.Once she was badly ill and had stayed in bed for several days. When I got home to see her at night， I found the light was still on and mother was sitting in bed， making new clothes for me ！ I was so deeply moved that tears came to my eyes.Such is my mother， a kind and hard-working woman. Ill re
4、spect and love her forever.学优中考网 2. 中考英语作文 预测 烦恼这类作文难度较大，掌握基本句式，背诵范文非常必要。典型例句1.I am sorry to hear that2. You should learn to forget3.you had better4 you should learn to relax5.you can ask your teacher for help例文（陕西省卷）假如你是 Han Mei, 下面是一封你的笔友 Alice 给你发来的 e-mail,请你根据 e-mail 的内容给她写一封回信，与她交流看法，并帮她排忧解难。提示
5、词语：listen to, mothers love, care about, communicate with, get along with, smile写作要求：1. 语句通顺，书写工整； 2.可用所给提示词语，也可以适当发挥； 3.词数在 60-80 左右Dear Han Mei,Im afraid Ive got a big problem recently. My mother talks too much to me. She always tells me, “Be careful while crossing the street.“ “Put on more clothes
6、.“ “Did you do a good job at school?“ and so on. Im annoyed(烦恼)。What shall I do? AliceDear Alice,As a teenager, I met the same problem as you. But now I can get along better with my mother. Here are some ideas for you.Your mother talks much, because she cares about you. Maybe its not a good way, but
7、 it shows your mothers love. So I think you should listen to her. 学优中考网 If your opinions are different from your mothers, you can communicate with her, and tell her what you are thinking about.If your mother doesnt take your advice, just keep silent and give her a smile.I hope what I say here can he
8、lp you a lot.3、书面表达 目前中小学生早餐问题引起社会关注，你所在的学校就在 5 月 20 日“全国学生营养日”进行问卷调查，结果如下。请你根据调查结果写一篇短文，倡导营养早餐。学生比例 早餐情况 健康状况52% 有规律地吃早餐 身体健康，精力充沛30% 吃垃圾食品 营养不良18% 没有吃早餐 有饥饿感，注意力不集中要求：1. 文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息；2. 所写内容必须包括表格中所提供的信息，并发表自己的看法，可适当发挥;3. 词数 80-100. 短文题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：learn, spend, be interested in, be b
9、usy with Breakfast is importantBreakfast is important .But not all the students have realized its importance. Here is result of our survey. About 52% percent of the students_学优中考网 _参考范文*书面表达Breakfast is important .But not all the students have realized its importance. Here is result of our survey. A
10、bout 52% percent of the students have breakfast regularly every day. They keep healthy and look active. 30% of them just have junk food instead. They dont have a balanced diet. 18% percent of the students go to school without breakfast. As a result, these students often feel hungry in class and cant
11、 listen to teachers carefully. Whats worse, theyll get ill easily.Its important for us to have breakfast and we should also have the right kinds of food for breakfast.(一)评分原则：1. 本题总分为 15 分，按 5 个档次给分。2. 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言的表达初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。3. 评分时，应注意的主要内容为:内容要点，参考词汇的应用和语法结构的数量和正确性、上下
12、文的连贯性及语言的得体性。4. 拼写、书写、标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响度予以考虑。5. 英美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。学优中考网 (二)各档次的给分范围和要求：第五档：(1315 分)包含内容要点；语言基本无误；行文连贯，能使用修饰词或表示顺序、逻辑关系的连接词，表达清楚。文字优美，语言精彩，略有拼写等错误的，可不扣分。第四档：（1012 分)基本包含内容要点，语言有少量错误，行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚。第三档：(79 分)包含部分要点；语言虽有较多错误，尚能达意。第二档：（36 分)语言错误多，影响意思表达；错误百出，不知所云。第一档： (02 分)白卷或文不对
13、题，只抄了提示词。*4、中考英语作文预测 健康问题健康问题是中考常考的话题，出题形式多样，有必要下苦功掌握。典型例句*1. It is very important to keep healthy。*2. How can we keep healthy?*3. We cant go to sleep too late. We cant get up too late。*4. We should eat the food healthily。*5. We should do more exercise。*6. Last Tuesday I got a cold and had a pain in
14、 my head。*7. I didnt feel like eating anything。*8. I decided to see the doctor。*9. In the doctors office, the doctor looks over me carefully。*10. He said,“Nothing serious.“ And he told me to take a rest and drink more water。学优中考网 *11. A nurse gave me an injection. It was a little painful。*12. The do
15、ctor asked me to take the medicine three times a day。*13. A few days later, I felt better. From then on I believe that keeping healthy is the most important thing in the world。例文*1、根据图示，简要介绍一下如何才能保持健康，并展开想象，适当发挥。要求：词数 80 左右。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考答案：All of us want to be healthy. First，we should get enough
16、 sleep during the night. We can go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late is bad for our health. Second, we must have the right kinds of food. We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat. We should drink a lot of water. We should have healthy eating habits. Third, we should do more
17、 exercise to build up our bodies. Finally, we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day. If we dont feel well, we should go to see the doctor at once.*5、 、基础写作很快就要初中毕业了，中考完后每个人都有自己的计划或者愿望。下课时，有几位同学谈了自己的想法，有人想学习，有人想旅游，你又有什么想法呢？请根据提示写一篇短文介绍一下吧：Jim 以前很忙，没有时间玩，想去北京旅游放松一下，并且学习更多中国历史。
18、Amy 对电脑感兴趣，考完试后去学习电脑, 这样能在电脑上做很多事情。You 提示词：used to travel learn more about after the exam hope 学优中考网 要求：1）所有提示词都应用上，语言运用准确得当，句子通顺，表达符合语言逻辑，可发挥适当想像，字数 80 左右。2）不得出现真实姓名及所在学校名称等个人相关信息。_参考范文*基础写作Jim used to be very busy and hardly had time to play. After the exam, he would like to travel to Beijing to r
19、elax himself. He thinks its a beautiful city. He can learn more history about China at the same time. Amy, a girl who is interested in computer, hopes to learn how to use the computer after the exam. Then she can do many things on computer. As for me, I would like to do something different. Maybe I
20、will volunteer my time to help other people in the poor area. Im sure Ill be happy when I help them. ( 此部分为考生自主发挥部分)写作第三节评分要求：1） 采用总体评分法：考生能否根据写作提示，较好地将写作相关内容进行归纳、提炼、运用来完成书面表达任务。评分时，先确定所属档次，然后以档次的要求进行微调，最后给分。学优中考网 2） 注重内容的完整及语言表达的准确，语法、单词拼写和标点符号错误，每处扣0.5 分。评分档次和标准：第五档 1720 分。内容涵盖所有的要点，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑，只有个别语言错误。第四档 1316 分。内容涵盖所有的要点，表达清楚，意思连贯，符合逻辑，但有少数语言错误。第三档 912 分。内容涵盖大部分的要点，表达较为清楚、连贯，基本符合逻辑，但有一些语言错误。第二档 58 分。内容涵盖部分的要点，能写出少量正确的句子，但整体表达不太连贯，而且语言错误较多。第一档 04 分。只能写出一些单词，不成完整的句子，语言表达缺乏逻辑性，错误很多。
