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2、l of a great amount of,可数,不可数,3. Spelling,英美词汇差异,The impact of tourism on these traditional neighbourhoods must be analysed.The impact of tourism on these traditional neighborhoods must be analyzed.,英式 美式se ze/ ce analyse analyzecivilise civilizepractise practiceglobalise globalize,v.,英式 美式our orcol
3、our colorneighbour neighborfavourite favorite,n.,英式 美式长 短storey storydialogue dialog archaeology archeologyjewellry jewelrytraveller traveler,词汇长短,4. 词汇没有特色,例句1 Serious crimes harm peoples lives., severe offense / criminal act damage / destroy undermine / jeopardize individuals / man / mankind,serio
4、us,crime,harm,people,例句2The advantages of space research are more than its Disadvantages.,例句2The advantages of space research are more than its Disadvantages.,be more than outweigh,例句3Our world is becoming more and more reliant on modern Technology.,more and more increasingly + adj on a rise,5. 句子无衔
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6、 serve as a sound information channel, which leads to a better solution to a problem.,2. Opinions from different people will help us finish our works better and faster, because their opinions can serve as a sound information channel, which leads to a better solution to a problem.,6. 感情色彩过于强烈 love le
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