1、Section Writing介绍学校生活写作技法指导文 体 指 导 介绍学校生活,一般分为两种:一种是给出表达的主题、提纲材料;另一种是开放性作文,只给出主题或简单的提示。第一种作文较简单一些,只要按照所给材料把主题表达清楚,不遗漏要点即可;第二种作文复杂一些,要发挥主观想象,但不能偏离主题。这就要求在写作文之前要列出写作要点,关键词汇和句型。若写具体活动时,还需注意以下基本要求:1主题明确,内容充实。文章中的故事要有头有尾,要有高潮,要把何人、何事、何地、何因等几方面交代清楚,避免空乏、笼统的话。通过对人物、事物和景物的描写,表现出故事的主题和作者的思想感情。2层次分明,有条有理。记叙文除
2、了有开头语及高潮性的结尾外,还要注意描写的层次要清楚,挑选一些典型事例或细节加以合理安排,用最简单易行的方法,按时间的先后顺序进行描写。3主次分明,详略得当。叙述时还应注意主题鲜明、清楚、具体,内容真实感人,抓住典型事例。对中心事件和最能表现中心思想的地方,即主要情节加以详细描写,对次要情节则少写,不重要的东西可不写。亮 点 句 式 1How time flies!2Ive made friends with .3Ive made rapid/great progress (in .)4We did.in our spare time.5I took part in different/all
3、 kinds of afterschool activities.6When looking back at .7I was impressed with .8I won the competition.9I stood out in the English Speech Contest.10I tried out for (参加选拔) afterschool interest groups.满分佳作构建写 作 任 务 中学生英文报正在举办征文活动,请你以我理想的高中生活为题写一篇短文参与投稿。短文内容必须包括:(1)你的个人信息:姓名(李萍)、年龄、所在班级、你最喜欢的科目、学校类型(比如大
4、型的还是小型的)、你认为时间表怎样安排较为合理;(2)你认为学校应该有什么样的体育或课外活动;(3)学校有什么特殊活动。词数:100 左右审 题 谋 篇 体裁 说明文话题 高中生活时态 一般现在时,一般将来时人称 第三人称遣 词 造 句 .对接模块词汇1ability 能力2activity 活动3prom 班级舞会4in ones opinion 在某人看来.巧用模块句式、语法(一)完成句子1我感觉我最喜欢数学和物理。I find myself liking maths and physics most.(find宾语宾补)2学生们的确喜欢更多的自由时间来做他们想做的。Students do
5、 enjoy more free time to do what they want.(do/does/did 强调谓语动词)。3这是一个不错的主意,在学校里一定要有很多课外活动这。Its a good idea that in the school there must be a lot of outofclass activities.(Its a good idea that.句式)4应该有一个我们能看很多不同国家电影的社团。There should be a film society where we could see lots of films from different cou
6、ntries.(定语从句)5直到考试失败我们才会意识到我们在高中刻苦学习是最重要的事情。It is not until we fail in the exam that we can realize studying hard and doing well at school are the most important things for senior high school students.(not.until 强调句)(二)句式升级6In my view,there should be a film society for us students.We could see films
7、 from lots of different countries.(合并成一个句子)In my view,the school should set up a film society for us students where we can see lots of films from different countries.7It will be nice if there is a senir prom for the final year students.(改为虚拟语气) 【导学号:75142013】It would be nice if there was a senior pr
8、om for the final year students.妙 笔 成 篇 【参考范文】My name is Li Ping,aged seventeen and studying in Class 2,Junior 3.My favourite subjects are maths and physics.My ideal senior high school should be an individualized one.Students should enjoy more free time to do what they want,such as reading in the lib
9、rary,listening to music,walking in the school yard and so on.In the school there must be a lot of afterschool activities.Besides,there should be a film society where we could see lots of films from different countries.It would be nice if there was a senior prom for the final year students.Of course,studying hard and doing well at school are the most important things for senior high school students.