1、浙江余姚市 2016中考英语写作训练及参考范文【中考先睹为快】Passage A中考书面表达 学校来了一批美国交换生，班主任要求你向这些外国朋友们宣传和介绍扬州，请根据表格中的提示，以 Beautiful Yangzhou 为题用英文写出你的介绍内容。扬州简介 位于长江北岸，气候宜人，城市干净，交通便利。扬州特色 1. 扬州园林风格独特2. 扬州美食闻名于世3. 扬州美好祝愿 【参考范文】Beautiful YangzhouHi, everybody! Welcome to Yangzhou. Now, ld like to introduce this beautiful city to y
2、ou.Yangzhou is one of the most beautiful cities in Jiangsu province. Its popular in China not only because of its convenient traffic, but also the pleasant weather since it lies on the north bank of Yangzi River.Yangzhou is also famous for lots of own styles : the gardens in Yangzhou are quite diffe
3、rent from those in other places. Ge garden, He garden attract people all over the word . the delicious food such as Yangzhou fried rice, Fuchun Baozi ,Lion head ( meat ball) are unforgettable if you test once, a lot of ancient buildings show that Yangzhou is also a city with long and cultural histor
4、y .If you want to know more about the city, Walk around and experience its beauty by yourselves. Wish you good luck and enjoy yourselves in Yangzhou!【解析】试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，要求写一篇介绍扬州的短文。题目中给出的材料较为详细，动笔前应根据材料内容组织语言，列出简单提纲，确定句子的时态，关键单词等问题。注意不要遗漏要点，注意文后要适当表达自己的感想。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文主要是一般现在时态，注意时态与时间状语的搭配问题。写作中注意语义
5、通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。考点：本题考查提纲类作文点评：做英语书面表达时，只要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词；为丰富文章的文采，可以多用一些复合句。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误，写好后多读多修改。中考书面表达（5）书面表达（共 1 小题，满分 15 分）用微笑播撒阳光，用行动践行梦想，用一种无形的精神力量感染着身边的每一个人，为同学们树立了一个个积极向上的榜样这就是“阳光少年”某中学自开展“向阳光少年学习”的活动以来，我们的身边涌现了许许多多的“阳光少年”，请你以“A Sunshine T
6、eenager” 为题写一篇英语短文，介绍一位你身边的“阳光少年”（假如这位阳光少年名叫 Xiao Hui） 要点提示：来源:gkstk.Com1诚实善良、团结友爱、乐于助人；2热情、活泼、开朗、乐观向上；3热爱劳动、不怕困难、心怀感恩，积极为父母、师长分忧；4勤奋好学，积极参加各种文体活动参考词汇：friendly；be ready；warm hearted；outgoing； active； housework； be afraid； share；take an active part in；写作要求：1词数不少于 90（开头已给出，不计入总数） ；2内容完整，语言流畅，不要逐句翻译，可适
7、当发挥；3短文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名【考点】提纲作文来源:gkstk.Com【分析】本文是按照提纲作文的要求，介绍身边的阳光少年，要从诚实善良、热爱劳动、和勤奋好学等方面来书写，用一般现在时态来表达，主要用第三人称单数形式，注意写作的连贯性和语言的通顺【参考范文】Hello!My name is Xiao MingIm studying in No.1 Middle SchoolOur school had an activity“Learn fromSunshine Teenagers”From then on，there are many sunshine teenagers arou
8、nd usXiao Hui is one of themHe is honest and kindHe gets on well with othersHe is always ready to not only help others but also go to the old peoples home to do something for the oldsHe reads newspapers for them，cleans their rooms and washes their clothesAlso he is warmhearted，active and outgoingHe
9、always shares all kinds of his parentshousework，like doing the dishes，sweeping the floor and making dinnerHe is never afraid of different difficultiesHe works very hard and he likes readingAnd he takes an active in all kinds of sportsAfter school，he plays football with his teammates And he joins the
10、 school clubs，like music，art and chessHe learns a lot from his all activitiesXiao Hui is my good sunshine teenagerI should learn from him【点评】本篇是提纲作文，要抓住文章的主题阳光少年来书写，要首尾呼应，层次清楚，做到内容完整，语言流畅Passage B写作阅读所给材料，根据写作要点和要求完成作文，并将答案写在答题卡的相应位置上。中考(high school entrance exams)结束后，有一个英国中学生代表团到你母校访问。你受 邀回校给英国学生谈谈
11、你的中考备考情况，请你就以下要点写一篇演讲稿。【写作要点】中考时间：每年 6 月 17 日至 19 日 考试科目：八门 你的做法：学习中有问题，上网找案、与同学讨论等，拉小提琴和听音乐来放松，从不晚睡，常早起复习，其他做法：【写作要求】 词数 90 左右； 短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 文中需包括所有写作要点，但不要逐字翻译，可适当加入过渡语句，使短文通顺、 连贯； 文中不能出现考生真实姓名和学校名称。Good morning, everyone! I m very proud that I can tell you something about my high school en
12、trance exams._I wish you enjoy your trip in China. Thank you!【参考范文】Good morning, everyone! I m very proud that I can tell you something about my high school entrance exams.The exams are held from June 17th to 19th every year and we take the exams in eight subjects. When I had problems in my study, I
13、 could look for answers on the Internet or discuss them with my classmates. And it was important to have some hobbies. I liked to play the violin and listen to music to help me relax. Also, I never went to bed late in order to revise for my tests. I preferred to get up early. I often wrote down my m
14、istakes in a notebook too. In this way, I made great progress.I wish you enjoy your trip in China. Thank you!Passage C书面表达（满分 15 分）91.“安全你我他，幸福千万家”，关爱生命，确保平安，让我们的生活更加幸福安康。请以“Keeping safe_ (at home/ at school /on the road)为题写一篇80词左右的英语短文。要求：补全标题：条理清晰，语言流畅；文中不得出现真实姓名、校名。内容包括：(1) Is it important to kee
15、p safe.?(2) Why do you think so?, (3)How can you be safe.? 91. Possible version:Keeping safe at schoolIts important for us to keep safe at school and it will make us study better and live more happily. In order to keep safe at school, we must do like these.First, be in order when we are going upstai
16、rs or downstairs. Second, make sure to be safe when we are doing sports. Try not to be hurt. Third, know about some knowledge of safety. Its helpful to us.If we follow the advice, well make ourselves safe at school.Passage D中考书面表达 书面表达（计 15分)假定你是王林，你的英国笔友 Heleri在做有关也界各国中学生如何过周未的调查。她给你发了一封电子邮件，想了解相关情
17、况。请认真阅读下面的邮件，根据邮件中的内容和你的实际情况用英语回复，可适当发挥。注意：1. 不少于 60词，开头和结尾已经写好，不计人总词数。2. 回复中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。Subject: Weekends From: HelenDear Wang Lin,Im doing a survey on how students spend their weekends around the world. I need your help. Could you please answer the following questions?来源:学优高考网 gkstk(
18、A)How do you usually relax yourself on weekends?(B)Do you do chores at home? Why or why not?(C)What do you wamt to do most? And why?Thanks,HelenSubjcct: Weekends From: Wang LinDear Helen,Thank you for your email. I would like to answer your questions.Best wishes, Wang Lin【参考范文】One possible version:D
19、ear Helen,Thank you for your email. I would like to answer your questions.I can do many things to relax myself on weekends. I often play table tennis, surf the Internet and watch TV. I usually do chores at home, because my parents are very busy and I want to help them. What I want to do most is goin
20、g bike riding with friends. We have been 1o many beautifiii villages. Next weekend, we are going to Mountain Meng. We always have fun.Best wishes.Wane Lin中考书面表达（55）B）书面表达（计 10分）91. 假如你叫李华，请你就“英语老师用英语还是用英汉双语教学”这一问题，根据下面的提示和要求，给你的老师 Miss Li写一封信，谈一谈人的看法。提示：(1)Whats your idea?(2) Why do you think so?(3)
21、 What is your advice?要求：(1)信须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。(2) 信中不要涉及真实的人名和校名。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。(3) 词数：6080。Dear Miss Li,I think youd better use _Hopefully you can think about it. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hus.【参考范文】Possible versionsDear Miss Li,I think youd better use English in class. When you speak English, well hav
22、e a good chance to improve our listening kills .It is also helpful for our reading, speaking and writing. We can copy what you say all the time. The more chances we have, the more progress we will make ! So I hope you can teach in English. But please use simple English as much as possible and speak
23、clearly and slowly. This way, we can learn English better and better.Hopefully you can think about it.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【参考范文（二）】Dear Miss Li,I think youd better use both English and Chinese. The best way to learn English is to use it. When you teach in English, its good for our listening. At
24、the same time it is helpful to improve our speaking, reading and writing .However ,if you only ous English, we cant follow you sometimes , especially when you explain grammar rules and language points. So my advice is “Use English when possible and use Chinese when necessary“. This way, we can learn English better.Hopefully you can think about it.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua
