1、第五课时 (Section B 3a3b),单元同步作文指导,话题介绍,本单元以“过去和现在的变化”为话题,围绕这一话题运用used to结构谈论过去,并对照现在描述人们的外貌、性格及日常生活等方面的变化,而最能全面体现本单元话题及语言运用能力的话题作文就是“谈论变化”,这也是单元测试和中考等试题中常考的话题作文之一。,典例在线,回顾三年的初中生活,父母的教诲与支持始终伴你成长,使你进步。那些发生在你与父母之间的故事,看似平淡却值得回味与珍藏。请以“The Story of My Progress”为题,写一篇文章。 要求:1.讲述一件发生在你与父母之间的事情,可适当发挥; 2词数80左右,文
2、中不得出现真实的姓名与学校名称。,审题指导,阅读题目要求,提取信息: 1通过讲述你与父母之间发生的事情来谈你进步的故事。这个事情一定要有意义,而且值得回味与珍藏。这是开放性作文,可以尽情发挥。 2本文要求写一篇记叙文记叙过去发生的事情,故全文使用一般过去时表达;因主要是写自己与父母之间的故事,故全文以第一人称为主进行陈述。 3为了使文章信息内容流畅、连贯,可适当使用一些关联词语;为了增强文章的可读性,注意使用不同的句式结构进行表达。 4在进行结构安排时,要注意记叙文的特点:交代故事发生的时间、地点、人物、过程。,经典范文,The Story of My Progress My progress
3、 has connected with my mother. Three years ago,I was a shy girl.I was afraid to speak in public.My mother was worried about that.One day,my mother heard that a Chinese speech competition would be held in my school and she encouraged me to take part in the activity.At first,I was shocked by her advic
4、e,but I didnt want to let her down,so I agreed.During that period,my mother often took me to the park to practice.I still remembered that day when I heard I won the first prize,my mother smiled happily. Now I am an outgoing and confident girl.Thanks to my mothers encouragement and company,I have mad
5、e such great progress.,句子积累,I used to be afraid of the dark. Its been three years since we last saw our primary school classmates. Its interesting to see how people have changed. She used to be so shy and quiet. Candy told me that she used to be really shy and took up singing to deal with her shynes
6、s. Hanging out with friends is almost impossible for me now because there are always guards around me.,It is hard to believe that he used to have difficulties in school. He studied hard and got good scores on his exams. Im still afraid of giving a speech in public. Li Wen was shy and was not able to
7、 make friends quickly in school.,实战演练,根据下列提示,写一篇100词以内的英语作文来描述张华的生活变化。第一句话已给出,不计入总词数。,Zhang Huas life has changed a lot in the last few years.In the past,he used to have much time to play after school.He spent a lot of time playing games with his friends.When he finished his homework,he often watche
8、d TV or chatted with his grandma.On weekends,he often went to concerts with his father. But now his school life has changed a lot.He is very busy every day.He has to get up early and stay in school all day long because he has to study hard.He doesnt have any more time to relax.He has to do his homework and goes to bed late every night.He hardly has any time for concerts.He misses the old days very much.,