1、题型七 书面表达,题型特点知己知彼，百战不殆。首先，我们了解一下宜宾中考英语书面表达的评分标准。【2017宜宾市中考英语书面表达评分说明】评分原则1本题总分15分，按5个档次评分。2评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。网阅时，也可以按要点打分。3词数少于70的(一般要求90 词) ，从总分中减去1分。4评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点，应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性。5拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。6如书写较差影响交际，将其分数降低
2、一个档次。按表达要点的多少和使用语言的情况，划分为五个档次，列表说明如下：给分范围 评分标准第一档1315分 包含67个要点，内容完整，语句通顺，意思连续。没有或基本没 有语法、拼写错误。书写规范，词数符合要求。第二档1012分 包含45个要点，内容较完整，表达基本清楚，语句较通顺，有少 量语法、拼写错误。书写规范，词数基本符合要求。第三档79分 写出23个要点，语句基本通顺：但句子较简单，表达不够清楚， 有部分语法、拼写错误。第四档46分 仅能写出12个要点，语句不够通顺，表达不够清楚，有大量语法 、拼写错误。通篇只有个别句子可读。第五档13分 没有要点，通篇只有个别单词可读。0分 只字未写
3、、通篇不知所云或写的内容与所要求的内容无关。,书面表达三种类型类型一：1图表型数据说话，精准指导(河南中考) 如图是李平对本班同学的周末活动情况的调查统计表。同学们的周末活动真是丰富多彩。请你以“Weekend Activities”为题，写一篇你和你的同学是如何度过周末的短文。来源:学优高考网gkstk要求：1语意连贯、句式规范、字迹工整；2词数80词左右；3开头已给出，不计入总词数。Weekend ActivitiesIn my class，most of my classmates have colorful weekends.Some_students_think_reading_is
4、_more_important_because_reading_not_only_makes_our_life_colorful_but_also_helps_us_get_more_knowledge.At_the_same_time，they_think_many_great_people_share_their_feelings_and_experiences_with_us_in_books._However，some_other_students_prefer_to_travel_outside.They_think _traveling_can_help_us_experience
5、_the_world_on_our_own.Whats_more，we_can _feel_different_cultures_by_traveling._Finally，traveling_can_also_improve_our _daily_living_abilities._I_think_both_reading_and_traveling_are_important.We_should_keep_a_balance_between_reading_and_traveling._2图片型由表及里，突出主题(2015宜宾中考)初中生活即将结束，6月6日下午，你班的班长方华组织了一次毕
6、业聚会：话友谊、忆过去、签名留言、拍照记念。请根据图片的先后顺序描述此次聚会的过程。注意：1文中不能出现真实姓名和学校的名称；2至少用两句话描写每幅图画的内容，可以适当发挥；3首句已给出，不计入总词数。词数80以上；4参考词汇：签名sign ones name，班长monitor，心形的heartshaped。As the junior life is ending，our class decided to have a party to celebrate it.At_the_beginning，we _talked_about_friendship.Friendship_is_one_of
7、_the_greatest_pleasures_that_we_can_enjoy.No_one_can_sail_the_ocean_of_life_single_handed.When_in_trouble，we_need_friends_to_offer_us_help，support_and_encouragement.With_success_achieved，we_also_need _friends_to_share_our_joys.We_cant_forget_the_happy_time_that_weve_spent_with_our_classmates_and_tea
8、chers.We_learn_how_to_face_difficulties，and _we_also_learn_how_to_get_on_well_with_friends.Our_school_life_is_meaningful_and_colorful.In_a_word，it_is _unforgettable，isnt _it?_Next，everyone_wrote_down_one_of_the_most_memorable_things_on_the_paper.And_put_them_together_to_form_a_heartshaped_essay_patt
9、ern.Then_we_signed_our_names_for_each_other.Finally，we _took_a_picture_of_a_group_photo_in_front_of_the_teaching_building._来源:学优高考网gkstkWe_had_a_wonderful_time，but_we _didnt_want_to_say_goodbye_to_our_junior_high_school_life._类型二：提纲思维导图型提纲挈领，主旨明确(2016宜宾中考)班级将举办英语演讲比赛，请根据思维导图，以 “How to Be Happy”为题目，写
10、一篇90词左右的演讲稿。开头和结尾已经给出(不计入总词数)。要求：1短文应条例清楚，行文连贯，段落分明；2短文中不能出现真实的姓名、学校、地名等信息；3短文应包括全部信息，可围绕主题适度发挥。How to Be HappyGood morning，everybody! The topic I want to talk about is “How to Be Happy”The following are my suggestions.First_of_all，we _should_have_life_aims.When_we_have_life_aims，we_can _be_clear_ab
11、out_what_to_do_every_day_and_live_a_busy_and_meaningful_life._Next，we_must_keep_ healthy.Without_good_health，we _will_have_nothing.So_we_should_have_good_life_habits_and_try_our_best_to_take_exercises_every_day._Finally，we _ought_to_be_ready_to_help_others.When_we_help_those_in_trouble，we_can_get_ha
12、ppiness._I_believe_if_we_do_so，we_can_have_a_happy_life. _Thats what I want to share with you.Thank you.类型三：话题型紧扣主题，有的放矢(2014宜宾中考)体育运动是中学生的共同爱好。请你根据下列提示写一篇题为 “What We Get from Sports”的短文，短文应包含以下要点：1学生参加体育运动的兴趣不同，理由各异；2多数学生学习疲倦时，通过运动来放松自己；3男孩们参加各项体育活动，希望运动能使自己更强壮；4女孩们也喜欢运动，希望运动能帮助自己减肥和保持苗条；5你对运动的观点。注
13、意：1文中不能出现自己的姓名和学校名称；2短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。词数：80左右，不可逐字翻译；3参考词汇：lose weight 减肥，keep slim保持苗条。What We Get from SportsStudents in our school have one thing in commonan interest in sports.But_different_students_have_different_reasons_for_taking_part_in_sports._Many_students_have_sports_when_they_feel_tired_af
14、ter_study.They_just_want_to_relax_themselves_and_have_fun.Most_boys_love_sports.They_take_part_in_all_kinds_of_sports_in_order_to_become_stronger.They_join_in_the_sports_that_interest_them_most，such _as_soccer，basketball_and_volleyball.Girls_also_like_sports.Some_of_them_want_to_lose_weight，to _keep
15、_slim_and_pretty_by_doing_sports._In_my_opinion，no_matter_what_reasons _we_have，we _all_can_get_a_lot_from_sports._ ,写作指导通过分析常见中考书面表达的类型，有助于指导我们写作，我们将从下面几个方面予以温馨提示。一、英语中考作文解题步骤1认真审题，弄清要求细读题目要求，明确文章主题，掌握表达要点信息( 它包含哪些情景、内容和要求，要明确题目有哪些要点，且要点必须齐全)，确定题材 (究竟用记叙文、议论文还是应用文等 )，确定时态，确定人称(究竟用第一人称，第二人称还是第三人称)，做
16、到心中有数，不跑题偏题。2构思框架，合理分段根据书面表达类型，首先理清写作要点间的空间顺序、逻辑顺序、分出层次。如果是看图作文，就按图构思。如果是提纲思维导图作文，则注意要点间潜在的因果联系，理清总分关系等。英语中的书面表达一般采用三段式表达，这样便于阅卷老师一目了然。3紧扣要点，遣词造句根据提示内容，在理解好中英文提示的基础上，认真选词，用准确的英文句子把文章的完整意思表达出来。有时一个句子可能有几种表达方式，要根据实际情况选用最有把握的一种。遇到自己不是十分确定的词句，可采用变通的方法来表达同样的意思，切忌使用难词、难句。4巧用连词，恰如其分在写作过程中，除了语言表达的准确性外，还要注意句
17、与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的关联词，使文章过渡平稳、自然流畅。5认真校对，规范誊写仔细检查，修改草稿，默读12遍，尤其要注意人称、时态、大小写、习惯用语有无错误，要点有无遗漏，文句有无病句，行文是否流畅。最后就是规范、工整地将作文抄写在试卷规定答题的地方，千万要注意卷面整洁，禁止涂改。二、写作储备1顺序词(1)开始陈述：(第一，首先)to start with，to begin with，in the first photo，above all(2)另外，还有：(第二，其次 )whats more，besides ，in addition，as w
18、ell as(3)结束陈述：(第三，最后)finally，lastly，in the end，in short，in a word，in conclusion(用于总结，常用于最后一段)2换一种方法表述：in other words(换句话说)3用于陈述事实：that is to say，in fact，to tell you the truth，to be honest4显示资料来源：according to5可被替换的高级连词：however，instead ，on the one handon the other hand可替换but，therefore6常用连接词：(1)并列连词：an
19、d，besides，whats more ，both and，neithernor(2)转折连词：but ，while ，only，or，however，though/although(3)因果连词：for ，because ， so(4)表观点：think ，in ones opinion(5)表列举：for example，such as ，like7常用句型：(1)Its adj. for/of sb. to do sth.(2)Youd better (not) do sth.来源:学优高考网(3)动词不定式作目的状语：To get out trouble，they tried the
20、ir best.(4)动名词作主语：Reading is useful.(5)it作形式宾语：find/make/think it adj. for sb.to do sth.,实战演练A(2017宜宾中考 )目前很多学生整天忙于学习，成绩却不理想。请根据表格内容，结合自身实际，写一篇关于“怎样提高学习效率”的短文。学习方法1.listen to the teacher2take notes3review in time4correct mistakes体育锻炼 1.exercise其他方面1.make good use of time2ask sb.for help 要求：1短文应条理清楚，
21、行文连贯，段落分明，90词左右(开头和结尾己给出，不计入总词数) ；2短文中不能出现真实的姓名、学校、地名等信息；来源:gkstk.Com3短文应包括全部信息，可围绕主题适当发挥。How to improve our study effectivelyA great number of students cant finish their tasks，which leads to bad results and makes them less interested in their study.How can we solve the problem? Here are some sugges
22、tions.First，we are supposed to have good study methods，such as previewing the lessons before class，listening to the teacher carefully in class，taking notes in time，reviewing in time，doing homework on time，correcting mistakes at any time.Then，its helpful for study to have good health.So we should spe
23、nd at least an hour (in) exercising our body every day.Besides，wed better make good use of time.Dont put off what we can do today till tomorrow.We should ask the teacher or classmates for help if we have some questions.If you follow the advice that I have mentioned above，you will be successful. B(20
24、17乐山中考)某英文杂志中学生专栏正在征集“二孩政策”放开后孩子们的意见。你们班就“Do you agree that your parents have a second child？” 这一话题，展开了一次讨论。请你根据下表提示，写一篇短文，向该杂志社投稿，介绍讨论的情况。观点 赞成 反对理由 1.不会感到孤独；2可轮流照顾父母。1.担心父母更爱弟弟或妹妹；2害怕与弟弟或妹妹相处不好。你的看法注意：1词数：80 词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数；2应覆盖所有要点；可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。Do you agree that your parents have a second child
25、? Different students have different opinions about it.Some students agree with the idea.They think，if so，they wont feel lonely and there will always be someone to play with.Besides，if their parents get old or ill，they can take turns to look after them.However，some students disagree.They worry that t
26、hey will get less love from their parents if another child comes to the family.Whats worse，they may not get along well，or even fight against each other.As for me，Id love to have a brother or sister as company， so that we can share our happiness and sorrow any time.C(2017黑龙江中考 )(A)话题作文：近几年来，校园欺凌(scho
27、ol bullies)事件时有发生，学会自我保护是我们中学生需要具备的一种意识和能力，我们应该珍惜生命，注意自己的人身安全，做好自我保护。请以“How Can We Protect Ourselves”为题写一篇英语短文，谈谈在生活中我们应该怎样自我保护(selfprotection)。提示：1不单独游泳；2谨慎交友；3遇到危险报警或向老师求助；4饮食及交通安全等(B) 图示作文：仔细观察下列六幅图片，展开合理想象，写一篇短文。要求：1话题作文或图示作文任选其一；2词数在80100词之间；3字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。范文(A)_How_Can_We_Protect_O
28、urselves_Selfprotection is one of the most important skills for teenagers.But how can we protect ourselves? Here are some of my suggestions.First，we should be careful when we make friends，especially online.Second，if we are in danger，we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep oursel
29、ves safe.Also，we ought to eat healthily and safely.Besides，we shouldnt crowd each other when we go upstairs or downstairs at school.Last but not least，summer is coming，we must remember its dangerous to swim alone.All in all，everyone needs to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger.
30、范文(B)This morning my mother didnt go to work and she wanted to do some washing at home.First，she put some dirty clothes into the washing machine，and then she went back to the bedroom to look for other dirty clothes with its door open.At that moment，my pet cat ran out of the bedroom happily and rushe
31、d into the washing machine.When my mother returned and was about to close the door，I came in with a dirty Tshirt.“Mom，could you please help me clean it？” “Of course，my dear.” Suddenly，my pet cat rushed out of the washing machine.My mother and I were both shocked.My God! What would happen if I didnt give Mom the Tshirt？ 请完成精练本第28页作业必背知识笔记：_来源:gkstk.Com_
