1、,常考话题写作指导校园旅行写作导图从全国近五年校园旅行相关话题书面表达的命题来看,通常有三个角度的内容:来源:学优高考网gkstk1旅行前的准备:通常包含旅行目的、旅行地点、出游交通方式、必备物品、出发时间等。2旅行时需要注意的事项:保护环境,不乱扔垃圾;遵守规章制度;积极主动帮助他人等。3旅游方式的描述。来源:学优高考网gkstk4旅行后的收获。结合河北 考情,可以预测第一种考查角度几率更大。亮点句型速成常用句型:I had some experiences.I traveled in Beijing.推荐句型:I had some experiences when I traveled i
2、n Beijing.常用句型:I could go traveling to a tourist attraction.I enjoyed myself in the summer holiday.推荐句型:I could go traveling to a tourist attraction to enjoy myself in the summer holiday.1Im so excited about my trip to2I hope you will have a good time here.3Every month,we go on a school trip to a mu
3、seum or a theater.来源:gkstk.Com4I will meet many people and make friends with them during my trip.5Its not surprising that so many students cant wait to go traveling after the examination!来源:学优高考网6I want to travel to the Great Wall one day.7Theres a tenthirty flight in the morning.8We have only one d
4、ay for New York.9Im very glad to be your guide.10I dont know which place is the most beautiful.11Youd better wear your sports shoes.典例剖析初中生活即将结束,一项调查结果显示很多同学想在考试后去旅游,但也有同学不喜欢旅游。请以“Traveling is”为题写一篇约100词的英语作文谈谈你的看法。要求:来源:学优高考网gkstk1先把题目补充完整(可用interesting,boring 等) ;2文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。【审题指导】细读所给的文字
5、提示,可以提取以下信息:1本文属于半命题式的书面表达,根据提示可以用interesting,boring等把题目补充完整,所以对于考生有一定的发挥空间。若认为旅游有趣,需要写出旅游时能够做的事情(观光旅游、增长见识、结交新朋友等) ;若认为旅游枯燥,需要写出旅游中烦恼的事(人多拥挤、旅游中的不愉快、睡眠不好、身体疲惫等) 。2短文要求谈论你的看法,写作时用第二人称更好。来源:gkstk.Com3根据调查结果,谈谈你的看法,主要用一般现在时。4词数约100词,不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。来源:学优高考网来源:gkstk.Com【范文点评】来源:gkstk.ComTraveling is int
6、erestingTraveling_is_interesting. You will have lots of fun things to do and see during the trip.Just_imagine_that_ you_are_walking_in_the_beautiful_mountains,enjoying_the_fresh_air_and_listening_to_the_birds_singing.Its_ amazing,isnt_it?Sometimes ,you _may_meet_people_from_different_places_and_make
7、_friends_with_them,which_makes _your_trip_a_more_pleasant_one.Also,you_may_have_many_interesting_things_to_share_with_your_friends_when_you_are_back. All the pleasure of your trip will be kept in your memory.Its_not_surprising_that _so_many_students_cant_wait_to_go_traveling_after_the_examination!开门
8、见山,表明观点:旅游很有趣。使用了宾语从句,在从句中使用三个进行时态表达想象中的旅游美景,让读者有身临其境的感觉,同时增加了句子的可读性。使用反意疑问句再次强调旅游感受,显示了作者不凡的语言运用能力。非限制性定语从句的使用,显示了作者深厚的语言功底,and 连接的并列句使用自如,增加了文章的可读性,介词短语from different places作定语修饰 people,也是增分的亮点。also一词增强文章起伏,使文章前后呼应。 when引导的时间状语从句,显示出句式的多样性。以一个主语从句总结全文,说明旅游确实很有趣。 cant wait to短语体现了动作的紧迫性,也给文章增色不少。来源:学优高考网