1、- 1 -2015-2016 学年北师大版 选修 6 Unit 16 Stories Communication Workshop 教案Teaching Aim: Learn to attracts the attention of the reader, shows the order of events, shares feelings with the reader, use vivid language to make the writing more interesting when writing a composition.Teaching procedures:. Warm u
2、pUse the following given words to make up a short story:bus, wait, walk, hot, teacher, remind, competition, prepare, last, tear. Reading Task1: Read the three drafts of a students composition on the topic A Day When Everything Went Wrong. Decide which one is the most interesting. Think about how the
3、 writer:attracts the attention of the reader. shows the order of events. shares feelings with the reader. uses vivid language to make the writing more interesting.How the writer attracts the attention of the readerMay 24th was a bad day. The day everything went wrong was may 24th.May 24th, 2005 will
4、 live in my mind forever.How the writer shows the order of eventsBecause the school bus did not First, I had to wait 30 minutes for the school bus- 2 -The day started to go wrong the instant I left home.How the writer shares feelings with the readerThis was a big mistake!and you can imagine how I fe
5、lt by the time.What a clumsy end to an awful day!How the writer used vivid language to make the writing more interestingIt was hot and tiresome. The day was hot and tiring.The sun was already boiling hotTask2: layoutintroductionbeginning of the narrativedevelopment of the narrativeconclusion. Post-reading Make draft A and B more interesting by replacing some phrases with more colorful language. Homework.- 3 -
