1、A letter of giving advice,写作攻略 1.建议信是向收信人对某事提出写信人的建议和忠告。 2建议信有可能是写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可能是写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。 3建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。,写作步骤 首段：表明写作意图。陈述事由，简单介绍自己，注意语气。 主体段落：应该首先肯定对方的优点，然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具体建议或忠告。千万注意不要让别人以为你是在投诉，而不是提建议。 结
2、尾段：对提出的建议进行总结，要注意有礼貌使读者容易接受。,建议信写作的注意事项：a这类文章一定要符合英语信件的基本格式。b这类文章的基本时态多用一般现在时和一般将来时。,写作语料库：英语建议信的常用词句,A建议信开头常用句式 (照应材料,表明写作意图) 1After I read your letter in the newspaper, I am sorry to know that 2I am very glad to hear that you want to 3I know you have trouble inafter reading your letter 4.I am writ
3、ing to you for the purpose of - 5 I am writing to share some advice with you,6 In my personal opinion, it would be wise of you to take the following action.在下认为， 如果你能采取以下措施，将是一种明智的选择。,B.建议信第二段常用句式,给出建议，井然有序。1.first，firstly，secondlythen，after that，in the endfinally。meanwhile 2 .I think it would be mo
4、re beneficial if you could - 我想如果你能-可能会更好,建议信结尾常用句式,1.I believe you will take my advice into account. 我相信你会认真考虑我的建议的。 2.I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/recommendations practical/useful/helpful. 我希望这些建议/意见/看法对你来说实用/有用/有帮助。 3.I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regar
5、d. 如果这方面有所改善我会非常开心的。,书面表达如何写？,三个步骤,Step 1 List the key points,Step 2 Make sentences,Step3. Form a passage and polish,假设你是李华，你的笔友张明来信说他英语学的不大好，请你给他写一封回信，提一些建议，帮助他学好英语。 内容提示：1. 一定要做好课前预习 2. 课堂上认真听讲，记好笔记 3. 课后认真独立完成作业 4. 每天进行英语听说练习 5. 加强课外阅读扩大词汇量,第一步：列举要点,英语学的不大好,You are not good at English,You dont do
6、 well in English,You have difficulty with English,You are not getting along well with English,提一些建议，帮助他学好英语。,give you some advice on English/learning English/how to learn English,I will give you some suggestions which I think may be helpful to you.,Here are my suggestions/tips on .,做好课前预习,preview,Pr
7、epare/ make preparations for,Look through,课堂上认真听讲,Listen to the teacher carefully,Pay attention to what the teacher says carefully,记好笔记,Set / write down,Make/take notes,课后认真独立完成作业,每天进行英语听说练习,Finish your homework by yourself/on your own/dont copy,Practise listening and speaking every day,加强课外阅读扩大词汇量,
8、Enrich/enlarge your vocabulary.,注意衔接词使用: 表先后次序： First, second, third.Finally Firstly, secondly，eventually to begin with/ to start with, at last递进关系： furthermore；moreover； not only.but also.； not.but.；, besides； in other words；on the one hand.，on the other hand.； meanwhile； at the same time；,点睛之笔：,No
9、thing is impossible to a willing heart! Practice makes perfectNever give up/lose heartIf you have any trouble, please turn to me for help.Id like to share my methods with you.Only in this way, can you learn English wellread novels, magazines and everything to do with English,改错,1.Ill help you in you
10、r English 2.My English is not very well. 3.Finish it on yourself. 4. There are some advise. 5.Dont afraid of English. 6. Set up a learning aim, go ahead to achieve it. 7. Set down the knowledge in the class 8. You must listen carefully and follow teachers said. 9. Only if you read about it ahead of
11、schedule, you will learn it better.,with,/On your own,is,be,and,what,advice,will you,Well -good,On-by,I am sure youll be success.You can set down that you think is important.,successful,You can set down what you think is important.,all,Beautiful sentences in you compositions,1.Here is some useful ad
12、vice for you about how to learn English well ( class 2 Jirun Ze) 2. Hearing that you are in trouble with English, Id like to give you some advice on how to get along well with English.(Class 1 Maguo Qin) 3. No one can fail to notice the fact that listening and reading are playing an important role i
13、n learning English.(Class 1 Han Xu),4.I will give you some necessary advice which can improve your English.(Class7 Xie Shuang) 5. No one can deny the fact that it is important to listen to the teacher carefully. (Cass 7 Liuxin Yan) 6.Only in these ways, can you have a good command of English.,如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象,整体三部分,Heading 点题；一两个句子；概括性；暗示性 2. Body 中心记述部分；层次分明 3. Ending 小结；呼应主题,小试身手,你的朋友Mary 为了迎接高考努力学习，进来冰岛了。请你以李华的名义给她写一封信，就健康和学习方面提些建议。 词数：100,
