1、TEM 4 WritingPart VI Writing 1、测试要求： 能根据所给的 作文题目、提纲或图表、数据 等，写一篇 200个单词左右的作文。能做到内容相关、充实、语言通顺、用词恰当、表达得体。考试时间 45分钟。 本部分为作答题，要求学生根据题目要求做回答。 本部分为命题作文，文章体裁主要是说明文、议论文或记叙文Part VI Writing 详细解析 大作文 200词，题型更加丰富，传统的背热门话题式押题将变得比较困难，训练中要多积累 利弊分析 的句型了亲们。 作文是拿分的重头戏，平时应重视和强化写作能力。作文水平的提高，功在平时。作文 类 型观 点 类支持一方 观点 争 议观
2、点 意 义 重要性图 表 图 画表格、曲线 、柱形、饼 状图 画（漫画 ）阅读 材料两段材料 一段材料观点类 对比 选择 型 -1赞同一方观点 Nowadays the Internet is wildly used for studying, shopping, entertainment, etc. on the campus. Some people say that the Internet facilitates students lives while others dont agree. What is your opinion? The Internet-A Blessing
3、or Curse You are to write in three parts: In the first part, state specifically what your view is. In the second part, support your view with one or two reasons. In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, gramm
4、ar and appropriateness . Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks. 第一段 : 用现象或事实引出要比较的两个方面 , 优缺点，利弊等，然后用一句话表达 自己的观点 . Nowadays college students often use the Internet for study, shopping, entertainment, and many other things. Some people say that the Internet facilitates stude
5、nts lives, but others worry that it might affect students study. In my opinion, the internet is good for college students when it is used appropriately. 第二段 :分层说明原因或理由（ 2-3条，字数酌情删减）。 First, students can collect many kinds of information via the Internet. When students find something interesting in t
6、he book, but their teachers can not give them more details or answer all their questions in class, they can search the Internet after class to find the details or answers by themselves. Second, the Internet keeps students upgraded with what is happening all over the world. Just by browsing the web-p
7、ages, students can read a lot of news. They can also type on some key words to search and follow any affairs on the internet. They dont have to search piles of newspapers and thus save much time for study. Third, the Internet is very helpful for us to learn effectively. On the internet its convenien
8、t for us to get valuable information and resources for different courses. At the same time we can communicate with our teachers, our classmates or some unknown professors through the internet to help us solve problems we encounter in our learning anytime and anyplace. Fourth, the Internet can make o
9、ur daily life more convenient. Nowadays the living pace is becoming faster and faster, sometimes we are so busy with our learning that we have no time to go shopping in the shops, pay a visit to our friends or book a film ticket in the cinema. While with the help of the internet, we can do all these
10、 things in our room easily. 第三段：结论，注意首尾观点一致。得出倾向性的结论，表明作者的态度。 In one word, the Internet facilitates students lives when it is used reasonably. Now more and more college students are becoming aware of the convenience and the importance of using the Internet. Nowadays college students often use the In
11、ternet for study, shopping, entertainment, and many other things. Some people say that the Internet facilitates students lives, but others worry that it might affect students study. In my opinion, the internet will do harm to/is not helpful for college students when it is not used appropriately. Fir
12、stly, students have little social experience and self-defense awareness, so it is easier that they will be cheated by some on-line criminals. There have been many cases about the students were cheated on line and some of them lost their money and some lost their lives. Secondly, some students are so
13、 addicted to on-line games that they waste their youth and ruin their learning. Some students have weak self-control ability, so it is easy for them to indulge themselves in on-line games. They spend too much time on line to focus their attention on their learning, thus they ruin their body and thei
14、r future. In one word, the Internet does harm to students when it is used inappropriately. Although the internet has many advantages, when we use it we should be very careful.观点类 争议观点 Many people today use electronic dictionaries instead of printed ones. Some people worry that printed dictionaries m
15、ay disappear one day. What do you think about this? Will Electronic Dictionaries Kill Printed Dictionaries? You are to write in three parts: In the first part, state specifically what your view is. In the second part, support your view with one or two reasons. In the last part, bring what you have w
16、ritten to a natural conclusion or a summary. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness . Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks. 第一段 :(用现象或事实陈述 )引出要比较的两个 事物 ,简述出现这种现象的 原因 ，用一句话表达自己的 观点 . Many people today prefer to use electronic dictionar
17、ies rather than printed ones, because electronic dictionaries are much lighter and smaller and easier to be taken everywhere. Some people worry that printed dictionaries may disappear one day. 现象与简单的原因。 But I believe that electronic dictionaries will not kill printed ones.引出自己的观点 第二段，直接论述原因 +说明。 Fir
18、st, (the first reason is that )printed dictionaries are much cheaper than the electronic ones. Many students, who use dictionaries most often, can hardly afford the very expensive electronic dictionaries. Therefore, the printed ones are what they need. Second, (the second reason is that) scholars pr
19、efer printed dictionaries to electronic ones. Holding a thick and heavy dictionary is what a teacher used to do, and I believe that they will like to keep this habit. Third, (the third reason is that) only the printed dictionaries can be collected into libraries or be put on our private bookshelves.
20、 We may use an electronic dictionary very often, but we will never collect it, since its designed to be used, not to be collected. 第三段：结论，注意首尾观点一致。得出倾向性的结论，表明作者的态度，同时也可以折中观点。 Of course electronic dictionaries will be more popular in the future, because they are really convenient. 现象 But the printed
21、ones are still needed and will not be replaced. The two kinds of dictionaries are just complementary to each other.折中 Nowadays there is a growing body using electronic dictionaries. Some people think that electronic dictionaries will kill printed dictionaries while some do not. I do agree the former
22、. First, electronic dictionaries are more convenient than printed dictionaries. Generally speaking, the printed dictionaries usually are very heavy and big-sized so it is not convenient for us to carry. While the dictionary ones are lighter and small and we can take them everywhere and use them anyt
23、ime. Second, electronic dictionaries have more functions and they are more powerful than paper ones. Nowadays many e-dictionaries can be connected with internet, so they can be used to get more information and resources through the internet. At the same time many e-dictionaries can provide audio or
24、video information related to the words or phrases, its easier for the users to get more and deep understanding of the words or phrases. Third, electronic dictionaries can be undated easily. The electronic dictionaries can be connected with the internet so they can be updated. Thus the new hot words,
25、 phrases or expressions can be adopted into the dictionaries on time. While it needs rather long time to upgrade the paper ones. So I think electronic dictionaries will become more and more popular in the following years and eventually they will replace the paper ones. 社会道德：是否应该帮助陌生人？Should We Help
26、Strangers? Helping strangers used to be considered as a virtue. But nowadays people tend to be very cautious of strangers. They are afraid that helping others can sometimes bring them trouble. Whats your opinion? Should We help Strangers? 第一段：用现象来引出要讨论的问题，用一句话表明自己的观点。 We used to appreciate those who
27、 like to help strangers. But nowadays people tend to be very cautious of strangers, because they are afraid that helping others can sometimes bring them trouble. In my opinion, we should try our best to help others in a reasonable way. 第二段：承接上文，并列出理由。 We should try to help others, no matter they are
28、 strangers or not. First, helping others is a virtue, and it will make our society more harmonious. Helping others has been one of our traditional virtues or China. Helping others can make our society become more beautiful and harmonious. Just imagine what a terrible world it would be if everyone wa
29、s cold-hearted.（正反） Second, to some extent, helping others is helping oneself. We may come across some trouble and need others help some day. If everyone turns a blind eye to our trouble and turns a deaf ear to our appeal for aid just because we are strangers to them, what shall we do at that time?
30、Therefore we should be glad to help others. 第三段： 第三段：结论，注意首尾观点一致。得出倾向性的结论，表明作者的态度，同时也可以指出一点建议。 However, helping others may sometimes bring us trouble or even put us in danger. So when we are helping others, we should also protect ourselves and offer our help in an appropriate way. For example, to he
31、lp someone who was robbed, calling the police is a much wiser way than chasing the robbers alone.意义、重要性、原因探究、利弊性说明类作文 The Importance of Extracurricular Activities (2000) The Importance of Keeping a Good Mood (2003) Travel Broadens Our Mind (2001) A Major Advantage or Disadvantage of Advertising on T
32、V Advertising (1999) People in modern society live under a lot of pressure, from education, career, or family. So it is important for them to keep a good mood under whatever circumstances. Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: The Importance of Keeping a Good Mood 提示：第一段： 大背
33、景（ 社会发展 ），引出要讨论的事物或现象（ 压力 ），表明作者对这一事物的基本 看法 ，指出其 重要性或必要性 。 With the development of modern science, technology and economics, our living standard has reached an ever higher level. But more and more people are living under greater pressure than ever before. As a consequence, people are increasingly su
34、ffering from various distortions both physically and mentally. Thus, it is important for everyone to keep a good mood today. 第二段，阐述观点，采用主题句 +支撑性材料的形式。 First, a good mood can create high efficiency. When you work with a good mood , you will feel happy and be willing to do some work which used to be b
35、oring. On the contrary, a bad mood can make you passive and do things with reluctance. Second, a good mood is beneficial to your health. If you fail to keep a good mood, you will be feeling depressed and fed up, which is apt to cause some psychological diseases. Third, when you have a good mood, oth
36、er people around you will be influenced. Thus more and more people will feel happy to communicate with you. 第三段，总结，再次强调重要性，可以发出号召或建议。 To sum up, keeping a good mood is very important both for yourself and for the people around you. If you want to have a happy and successful life, please keep a good
37、mood every day.图表作文 难度较大，这类作文可综合提供题目、数据、图像，形式多样，但实际上只涉及 5个方面： 描述图表、指明寓意、分析原因、联系实际、给出建议 ，而每次考试只是从这 5个方面的内容中选出 3个结合在一起。 从写作类型来看，基本上属于说明文。要求考生围绕题目将有关信息转化为文字形式，考生应该具有一定数据分析和材料归纳的能力，同时会运用一定的写作方法。 三段式写作方法来组织文章 第一段总结归纳信息反映的整体情况，点出主题思想 第二段回答第一段所得出的 问题 ，对数字、数据等做出有条理的分析比较 第三段做出总结或给以简单的 评论 。图表题应试策略 (1) 应仔细研究题目
38、以及提示信息，认清图表中的数字、线条、阴影等部分的 变化趋势和走向 ，抓住其主要特点，然后根据图表所显示的中心信息确定内容层次以及主题句。 (2)应该仔细研究 图表所给出的大量信息 ，从中选取最重要，最有代表性的信息，然后根据全文的主旨去组织运用所获取的关键信息。 切忌简单地罗列图表所给出的信息 。 (3)图表作文一般采用的时态为 一般现在时 ，但如果图表中给出了 具体时间参照，考生则应对时态进行相应的调整。四种图在写作方面的不同特点。 表格 可以表示多种事物的 相互关系 ，所以考生要对表格中所给出的大量数字进行比较分析，从中找出其变化规律。 曲线图 常表示事物的 变化趋势 ，考生应认真观察坐
39、标系所显示的数据信息，并且密切注意交汇在坐标横轴和纵轴上的数字及单位。 柱形图 用来表示各种事物的 变化情况及相互关系 ，要求考生通过宽度相等的柱形的高度或长度差别来判断事物的动态发展趋势，因此考生应密切关注坐标线上的 刻度单位及图表旁边的提示说明与文字 。 饼形图 表示各事物在总体中所占的 比例及相互关系 ，旨在要求考生准确理解并阐述一个被分割成大小不等切片的饼形图所传达的信息。考生应清楚掌握部分与整体，部分与部分之间的相互关系，这种关系通常是以 百分比 的数字形式给出的。 The bar chart presented above reflects the changes of comme
40、rcial housing prices in the four cities. From2004 to 2007, the housing prices in Nanjing increased gradually from nearly 4800 yuan to 10,000 yuan, then decreased to roughly 9000 yuan in 2008. In Shenzhen, prices rose rapidly from nearly 9000 yuan in 2004 to roughly 18,000yuan in 2008. Prices in Beij
41、ing ascended gradually from approximately12,500yuan in 2004 to roughly 17,500 yuan in 2007, then remained unchanged in 2008. In Hangzhou, from 2004 to 2008, prices rose gradually from nearly 8000 yuan to nearly 21,000 yuan. From the column chart we can see that the commercial housing prices in the f
42、our cities increased dramatically during the past several years. Reasons accounting for this phenomenon can be listed as follows: for one thing, the authorities have issued some promotional policies to enhance the development of real estate industry. Hence, houses can be sold at a high price. Moreov
43、er, nowadays more and more choose these big cities to be their homes which also makes the housing prices higher. Many people think living in these big cities can be convenient and their children can receive good education, so they prefer to buy houses at any prices. Last but not least, a factor whic
44、h cannot be neglected is the rise of land prices. Land has become a limited and unrenewable resource; it will naturally be becoming more expensive. Then, the rise in land prices will inevitably contribute to the rise in housing prices. The rise in housing prices is also a result of social progress and economic development. However, relevant departments should pay more attention to this phenomenon， as there are still many people who cannot buy houses there. 曲线
