1、猕猴桃妮妮 BEC 写作讲义 1一、关于 BEC 是什么的问题1 BEC 的难度。2 BEC 证书在求职中的作用。3 BEC 证书和出国留学的关系。二、BEC 中高级考试写作部分简介1 各两篇文章，原始分数均为 10 分和 20 分。2 中级写作时间 45 分钟；高级写作时间 70 分钟。3 中级写作两部分介绍4 高级写作两部分介绍5 评分标准6 参考书目三、BEC 中级（Vantage ）Part 1 四种文体2 基本格式3 按照文章内容分类讲解1） 离开类调职、出差 典型的开头部分写作 离开时间的问题 典型开头的句型练习 典型的正文部分写作 典型的结尾部分写作例一（课堂带写，三段式）： Y
2、ou are the Head of Research for an international car manufacturer. You have to make an urgent trip tomorrow to visit Pierre Blanco, a colleague who works for a subsidiary. Write a memo of 40-50 words to your secretary: Telling her who you are going to see and when Asking her to book flight tickets a
3、nd accommodation Telling her what work you would like her to do in your absence. Write on your answer sheet.例二（课堂 5 分钟快速练习，一段式）： You are a manager in a company which manufactures office furniture. Next month, you are going to London to discuss an important contract. Write a note of 40-50 words to yo
4、ur assistant: Saying when you want to leave and return Asking him to book flights Telling him which hotel to book. Write on your answer sheet.例三（课堂 10 分钟常规练习，三段/一段式）： Your company has just opened a new office in the United States. You have agreed to go and work there for six months. Write a memo of
5、40-50 words to all your colleagues: Explaining why you will be absent Saying when you are leaving the office猕猴桃妮妮 BEC 写作讲义 2 Expressing your wish to keep in touch Write on your answer sheet请假、缺席 典型的开头部分写作 典型的正文部分写作 典型的结尾部分写作例一（课堂带写）： You would like to go to a seminar on presentation skills. Write an
6、 email of 40-50 words to your line manager: Requesting time off work to go to the seminar Saying when the seminar is Explaining why you want to go Write on your answer sheet例二（课堂 10 分钟常规练习）： You are a regional sales manager for an international company. You have been asked to go to a meeting at your
7、 companys head office. You cannot go, so somebody else will go in your place. Write an email of 40-50 words to Erica Young, who is organizing the meeting: Apologizing for not being able to go to the meeting Explaining why you cannot go Saying who will go Write on your answer sheet2) 告知信息 典型的文章结构 典型的
8、开头部分写作 典型的结尾部分写作 真题写作范例：例一（课堂带写）： You are a Project Team Leader. You have had to cancel your next project meeting because some of the members of your team will be abroad. Write a memo of 40-50 words to your project team: Informing them of the cancellation and giving the reason Stating a new date and
9、 time for the meeting Requesting suggestions for the agenda Write on your answer sheet.例二（课堂 5 分钟快速拓展练习）： You are the Research and Development Director of an engineering company, which is a subsidiary of a large corporation. The Chairman of the corporation is visiting your company next week. Write a
10、 memo of 40-50 words to all your staff: Informing them of the visit Telling them why the visitor is coming Telling them when he will arrive and asking them to be at the welcome reception for him猕猴桃妮妮 BEC 写作讲义 3 Write on your answer sheet.例三（课堂 5 分钟快速拓展练习）： You are the managing director of a company
11、whose profits have recently increased and you would like to reward staff for this. Write a memo of 40-50 words to all staff: Thanking them for their contribution Explaining why profits increased Telling them what their reward will be. Write on the answer sheet例四（课堂 10 分钟常规练习）： You need to inform you
12、r marketing team about a radio advertising campaign for one of your companys new products. Write an email of 40-50 words to your team: Reminding them which new product is Explaining why youve chosen to advertise on radio Saying what you expect, the advertising campaign to achieve Write on your answe
13、r sheet3) 组织会议培训活动 典型结构 典型的开头部分写作例一（课堂带写）： You are the training manager of a company which has won a large export order. You have been asked to organize foreign language training for some of your staff. Write a memo of 40-50 words to staff: Explaining why the course is necessary Saying which members
14、 of staff should attend Announcing when the course will start Write on the answer sheet例二（课堂 10 分钟常规练习）： You have been asked to organize your companys staff training program. Before the program starts you would like to identify training areas that staff are interested in. Write a memo of 40-50 words
15、 to all staff: Saying when the training program will start Asking for suggestions for what to include in the program Giving a deadline for suggestions. Write on your answer sheet4) 询问类及其他 典型结构 典型的开头部分写作例（课堂 5 分钟快速练习）： You are the factory manager of a car company. You are waiting for urgently needed
16、components from your purchasing department. Write a note of 40-50 words to Mr. Grayson, the Assistant Purchasing Manager: Enquiring about the reason for the delay猕猴桃妮妮 BEC 写作讲义 4 Stating when the components are needed Suggesting a meeting to discuss future deliveries. Write on your answer sheet.四、BE
17、C 中级（Vantage ）Part 1 文体Correspondence / Report / Proposal2 写作者的口吻3 语言的整合4 按照文体讲解：1） Business Correspondence 考试频率 7 种内容类型（补充求职信和简历） 基本格式:1） Make Change 写作的注意事项 典型的开头部分写作 典型的正文部分写作 真题写作范例：例一（课堂带写）： Your Managing Director has asked you to reply to the letter below which is about a proposed educational
18、visit to your company by a local school. He has written his comments on the letter.SUNDSTORM TECHNICAL COLLEGEDear Mr. Takahashi,Re: Educational VisitThank you for your recent letter accepting our request for an educational visit to your company.I have spoken to the students concerned as well as the
19、 teacher who will accompany them. They are a group of 35 students, aged between 17 and 18, and will be taking part in the visit as part of their careers development program.I would like to suggest Friday 10th December. The group will leave here at 9:00am and should be with you by 9:45am.I understand
20、 the training officer is willing to give a talk to the students about the companys training program. This will be of considerable value, and I wondered if it would be most effective Too many, 25 maximumMonday of following week bettertimes fine!猕猴桃妮妮 BEC 写作讲义 5at the beginning of the visit.Finally, w
21、ould it be possible for the students to talk to some new employees in an informal question and answer session?I would be grateful if you could inform me as to whether these proposals are suitable and would like to thank you once again for your cooperation with the scheme for School and Business Link
22、s.Yours sincerely,Yamaguchi,Headteacher Write a letter of 100-120 words to the head teacher explaining the changes the Managing Director would like to make to the visit. Write on your answer sheet.例二（课堂 12 分钟快速练习）： The company where you work is organizing a sales conference. Your Sales Manager has a
23、sked you to reply to the letter below, from a transport hire company called A1 Coaches, concerning arrangements for the conference. He has written his comments on the letter. Write a letter of 100-120 words to Mr. Otley of A1 Coaches, to make sure that the arrangements are changed. Do not include ad
24、dress. Write on your answer sheet.Dear Conference Organizer,Transport arrangements-Sales Conference 9/10 DecemberFollowing your telephone call yesterday, I am writing to confirm the coach and car hire details for your Sales Conference in December.Friday 9, December8:15 am Collect delegates from Gran
25、d HotelTransfer passengers to Whitestone Conference Centre by 9 am48 passengers-1 coachTraining officer not available until 11:30No, sorry! Cannot release employees from dutiesPlease request the phone to confirm arrangements8:30 better, not far from Conference Centre猕猴桃妮妮 BEC 写作讲义 68:45 am Collect C
26、hairman and guests from your Head Office (Silver Street) to arrive at Conference Centre by 9 am.10 passengers-2 car6:00 pm Collect all delegates from Conference Centre. Take to Grand Hotel, for overnight stay.Collect Chairman and guests by car-transfer to Grand Hotel.48 passengers-1 coach10 car pass
27、engers-2 carsSaturday 10, December (1 coach booked for 48 passengers. No cars booked)9:00 am Transfer delegates from Grand Hotel to Conference Centre.10:30 am Take delegates to your factory site in Station Road1:00 pm Collect delegates from factory to return to Grand Hotel for End of Conference lunc
28、hPlease confirm that these arrangements are correct.Yours sincerely,PJ OtleyA1 Coaches Ltd.例三（课堂 20 分钟常规练习）： You are responsible for planning the magazine advertising of your companys new product, which is a polish for cars. You have just received the letter below from the magazine that you are goin
29、g to advertise with. You have also received a memo from your Marketing Manager about the advertising campaign. Write a letter of 100-120 words to Mr. Ellwood at the magazine, telling him about the changes to the advertisement booking, and asking him or any other information that you require. Do not
30、include addresses Write on your answer sheetCancel cars-Chairmans party staying at Conference CentreShould be Commercial Road site. My mistake, please give my apologies.Ask if coach can wait at the Grand Hotel until 2:30 pm-12 people need transport to the airport. Also say that Ill phone next week t
31、o check everything. Thanks.猕猴桃妮妮 BEC 写作讲义 72) 推荐信 推荐信的分类自荐与推荐 推荐信的原则开门见山 推荐信的典型开头部分写作开门见山 真题写作范例：例一（课堂带写自荐）： You work for RCT, a company which sells business stationery. RCT is interested in becoming an agent for Novestat, a company which manufactures paper products. Read Novestats advertisement bel
32、ow, on which you have made some notes.Dear Ms. Beddington,Thank you for your advertisement booking, the details of which I confirm below.Name of Company: Autocare ProductsName of Product: SuperglossDetails of Advert: 1/2-page, black and whiteAdvert will appear in: July and August issues of the magaz
33、ineCost of Advert: $350 per issue (3 issues=$1050)Discount: 5% for early bookingTotal Cost: $997.50We trust that this is satisfactory.Yours sincerely,Nelson EllwoodNelson Ellwood MemoTo: Cathy BeddingtonFrom: John HumphreyRe: New Product AdvertisingThe Managing Director has approved an increase of b
34、udget on this campaign, so we can go for: color advert, six issues.Could you contact the magazine and get them to change this? Please check the price and the possibility of a bigger discount.Also tell them to get the product name rightSupagloss.Thanks猕猴桃妮妮 BEC 写作讲义 8 Then, using all your notes, writ
35、e a letter of 100-120 words to James Dowling at Novestat. Do not include addresses. Write on your answer sheet.NOVESTATAGENTS REQUIREDFOR A NEW PAPER PRODUCTNovestat, a leading manufacturer of business stationery, is delighted to announce its exciting new range of designer paper products. This range
36、 allows customers to create their own business stationery to the highest professional standards, using their own computer printers.We are looking for companies world-wide to distribute the NOVESTAT DESIGNER PAPER range.If your company has: Minimum 5 years relevant experience Dynamic, motivated sales
37、force Excellent distribution networkThen, please write to James Dowling, Novestat, Unit 3, Basing EASTAT, Hampton, Middlesex, TW13 5SA, UK.例二（课堂 20 分钟快速拓展练习推荐信）： The international organization you work for makes an award every month to a person in each department based on the following criteria: Pro
38、ductivity Relations with customers Contribution to the team Your line manager has asked you to recommend someone from your department for this months award. Write your recommendation, stating who the person is and the reason for your choice. Describe how this person meets each of the three criteria
39、for receiving the award. Write 200-250 words on your answer sheet.专题：求职信与简历（Covering Letter / Letter of Application and Resume）：例一：求职信 You have seen a job with a multi-national company advertised in a newspaper. Write a letter to the company applying for the job. Refer to relevant factors such as th
40、e nature of the job and why you are interested in it, your qualification and experience, what you are doing now and what you could contribute to the position.10 years; say what RCT doesNational Sales Award last yearTell them about our retail outletsArrange a meeting with them next month?猕猴桃妮妮 BEC 写作
41、讲义 9 Write 200-250 words on your answer sheet.Letter of ApplicationRoom 320, Building 3, Lane 5130 Nanjing RoadHuangpu DistrictShanghai, 200000P. R. China22 June, 2008Mr. Julian ProctorDirector of Sales part not availablePossible to replace, but very expensiveManufactured in 1995!Out of business sin
42、ce 2000猕猴桃妮妮 BEC 写作讲义 11include the following points: Whether extra staff are needed (and if so, why?) Whether changes to the office space and equipment should be made What plans you have for future development How the investment would generate extra business. Write on your answer sheet.4) 多选一 题型特点及
43、中高级区别 Your company exports to a number of countries around the world and is looking for a new agent for international freight. The Export Sales Manager has asked you to write a proposal saying which agent you recommend. Read the two advertisements below, on which you have already made some notes. Th
44、en, using all your handwritten notes, write your proposal of 120-140 words for the Export Sales Manager. Write on your answer sheet.Globelink25 years experience in sea freight Worldwide destinations Air freight also available All documentation providedCompetitive ratesquotes available on requestTel:
45、 0208 344 879May need for urgent ordersThey complete all custom formsFTDdont FTD Shipping AgentsFreight agents to many major ports Refrigerated shipping Containers available No quantity too smallContact Martin Taylor on 0207 234 5675 for further information and details of chargesContact Martin Taylo
46、r on 0207 234 5765 for further information and details of chargesCould be useful for small ordersMainly in EuropeA bit higher than Globelink猕猴桃妮妮 BEC 写作讲义 125）询问类 常用句型例题： The company you work for is expanding rapidly and is looking for new premises. Your Managing Director is interested in Waterside
47、Industrial Park, and has asked you to write a letter to find out more information. Read Waterside Industrial Parks advertisement below, on which your Managing Director has already made some notes. Then, using all your Managing Directors handwritten notes, write your letter to Rosemary Brown at Water
48、side Industrial Park. Do not include postal addresses. Write 120-140 words on a separate sheet.WATERSIDE INDUSTRIAL PARK A variety of large and small units available. Financial help available for many companies moving to the area. Excellent road and rail links with all parts of the country. Skilled labour force for manufacturing or service sector business.For an information pack, please contact: Rosemary BrownWaterside Industrial ParkPhone (11) 8008866Fax (11) 323 6644Who would qualify?Which
