1、寒假英语作文计划 李阳 昌黎一中高三二十班1一开头用语： 议论论文： A. Just as every coin has two sides, cars have both advantages and disadvantagesB. Compared to/ In comparison with letters, e-mails are more convenient.C. When it comes to computers, some people think they have brought us a lot of convenience. However,.D. Opinions
2、are divided on the advantages and disadvantages of living in the city and in the countryside. E. As is known to all/ As we all know, computers have played an important role/part in our daily life.F. Why do you go to university? Different people have different points of view. 2. 书信：A. I am writing to
3、 you to apply for admission to your university as a visiting scholar.B. I read an advertisement in todays China Daily and I apply for the job.C. Thank you for your letter of May 5.D. How happy I am to receive your letter of January 9.E. How nice to hear from you again.3. 口头通知或介绍情况：A. Ladies and gent
4、lemen, May I have your attention, please. I have an announcement to make.B. Attention, please. I have something important to tell you.C. Mr. Green, Welcome to our school. To begin with, let me introduce Mr. Wang to you.4. 演讲稿：A. Ladies and gentlemen, I feel very much honored to have a chance here to
5、 make a speech on the subject - A Balance Diet and Health.B. Good morning everyone! Allow me, first of all, on behalf of all present here, to extend our warm welcome and cordial greeting to our distinguished guest. 二并列用语：as well as, not onlybut (also), including,A. Not only do computers play an impo
6、rtant part in science and technology, but also play an informative role in our daily life.B. All of us, including the teachers / the teachers included, will attend the lecture.C. He speaks French as well as English.=He speaks English, and French as well.=He speaks not only English but also French. D
7、. E-mail, as well as telephones, is playing an important part in daily communication.三对比用语：on one hand ,on the other hand, on the contrary/contrary to ., though, for one thing ;for another, neverthelessA. I know the Internet can only be used at home or in the office, but on the other hand, it is bec
8、oming more and more popular for much information as well as clear and vivid pictures.B. It is hard work; I enjoy it though.C. Contrary to what I had originally thought, the trip turned out to be fun.四. 递进用语：even, besides, whats more, as for, sothat, worse still, moreover, furthermore; but for, in ad
9、dition, to make matters worse A. The house is too small for a family of four, and furthermore/besides/whats more/moreover /in addition/worse still , it is in a bad location. 五. 例证用语：in ones opinion, that is to say, for example, for instance, as a matter of fact, in fact, namely A. As a matter of fac
10、t, advertisement plays an informative role in our daily lifeB. There is one more topic to discuss, namely/that is ( to say ), the question of education.寒假英语作文计划 李阳 昌黎一中高三二十班2六. 时序用语：first/firstly, meanwhile, before long, ever since, while, at the same time, in the meantime, shortly after, nowadays,A
11、. They will be here soon. Meanwhile, lets have coffee.B. Firstly, let me deal with the most important difficulty.七. 强调用语：especially, indeed, at least, at the most, What in the world/on earth , not at all , A. Noise is unpleasant, especially when you are trying to sleep.B What in the world/on earth a
12、re you doing?八. 因果用语：thanks to, because, as a result, because of/as a result of , without, with the help of., owe .to.A. The company has a successful year, thanks mainly to the improvement in export sales.B. As a result, many of us succeeded in passing the College Entrance Examinations. 九. 总结用语：in s
13、hort; briefly/ in brief ; generally speaking, in a word, as you know, as is known to all A. Generally speaking, sending an e-mail is more convenient than sending letters.B. In short, measures must be taken to prevent the environment being polluted. 常用句型（一）段首句 1. 关于人们有不同 的观点。一些人认为There are different
14、opinions among people as toSome people suggest that 3. 现在， ，它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先，；其次，。更为糟糕的是。Today, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First, Second,What makes things worse is that.4. 现在， 很普遍，许多人喜欢，因为，另外（而且）。Nowadays，it is common to . Many people like because Besides，5. 任何事物都是有两面性，
15、也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。Everything has two sides and is not an exception，it has both advantages and disadvantages. 6. 关于人们的观点 各不相同，一些人认为（说），在他们看来， Peoples opinions about vary from person to person. Some people say that To them, 8. 已成为人的关注的热门话题，特别是在年青人当中，将引发激烈的辩论。has become a hot topic among people，esp
16、ecially among the young and heated debates are right on their way. 9. 在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用，它给我们带来了许多好处，但同时也引发一些严重的问题。 has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.10. 根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形
17、图 /成形图可以看出。很显然，但是为什么呢？ According to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph，it can be seen thatwhile. Obviously，but why? （二）中间段落句 1. 相反，有一些人赞成，他们相信，而且，他们认为。 On the contrary，there are some people in favor oft the same time，they say寒假英语作文计划 李阳 昌黎一中高三二十班32. 但是，我认为这不是
18、解决的好方法，比如。最糟糕的是。But I dont think it is a very good way to solve .For example，Worst of all，.4. 有几个可供我们采纳的方法。首先，我们可以。There are several measures for us to adopt. First, we can5. 面临，我们应该采 取一系列行之有效的方法来。一方面，另一方面，Confronted withwe should take a series of effective measures to. For one thing，For another，6.
19、早就应该拿出行动了。比如说，另外。所有这些方法肯定会。 It is high time that something was done about it. For example. In addition.All these measures will certainly.8. 然而，正如任何事物都有好坏两个方面一样，也有它的不利的一面，象。However, just like everything has both its good and bad sides, also has its own disadvantages, such as 9. 尽管如此，我相信更有利。Nonetheles
20、s, I believe that is more advantageous.10. 完全同意这种观点（陈述），主要理由如下：I fully agree with the statement that because.（三）结尾句 1. 至于我，在某种程度上我同意后面的观点，我认为As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion to some extent. I think that 2. 总而言之，整个社会应该密切关注这个问题。只有这样，我们才能在将来。 In a word, the whole society should
21、 pay close attention to the problem of Only in this way can in the future. 3. 但是， 和都有它们各自的优势（好处）。例如，而。然而，把这两者相比较，我更倾向于（喜欢） But andhave heir own advantages. For example, while Comparing this with that, however, I prefer to 4. 就我个人而言，我相信，因此，我坚信美好的未来正等着我们。因为Personally, I believe that Consequently, Im c
22、onfident that a bright future is awaiting us because 5. 随着社会的发展，。因此，迫切需要。如果每个人都愿为社会贡献自己的一份力量，这个社会将要变得越来越好。 With the development of society, So its urgent and necessary to If every member is willing to contribute himself to the society, it will be better and better. 6. 至于我（对我来说，就我而言），我认为更合理。只有这样，我们才能
23、For my part, I think it reasonable to Only in this way can you 7. 对我来说，我认为有必要。原因如下：第一，； 第二，；最后但同样重要的是 In my opinion, I think it necessary toThe reasons are as follows. First second Last but not least,8. 在总体上很难说是好还是坏，因为它在很大程度上取决于的形势。然而，就我个人而言，我发现。 It is difficult to say whether is good or not in gene
24、ral as it depends very much on the situation of.however, from a personal point of view find9. 综上所述，我们可以清楚地得出结论寒假英语作文计划 李阳 昌黎一中高三二十班4From what has been discussed above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that10. 如果我们不采取有效的方法，就可能控制不了这种趋势，就会出现一些意想不到的不良后果，所以，我们应该做的是If we can not take useful mean
25、s, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable result may come out unexpectedly, so what we should do is常用句型：开头： When it comes to ., some think . There is a public debate today that . A is a commen way of ., but is it a wise one? Recentaly the problem has been brought into focus. 提出观点： Now t
26、here is a growing awareness that. It is time we explore the truth of . Nowhere in history has the issue been more visible. 进一步提出观点： . but that is only part of the history. Another equally important aspect is . A is but one of the many effects. Another is . Besides, other reasons are. 提出假想例子的方式： Supp
27、ose that. Just imagine what would be like if. It is reasonable to expect. It is not surprising that. 举普通例子： For example(instance),. . such as A,B,C and so on (so forth) A good case in point is. A particular example for this is. 引用： One of the greatest early writers said . “Knowledge is power“, such
28、is the remard of . “. That is how sb comment ( criticize/ praise.). “. How often we hear such words like there. 讲故事 （先说故事主体），this story is not rare. ., such delimma we often meet in daily life. ., the story still has a realistic significance.提出原因： There are many reasons for . Why , for one thing,. T
29、he answer to this problem involves many factors. Any discussion about this problem would inevitably involves . The first reason can be obiviously seen. 寒假英语作文计划 李阳 昌黎一中高三二十班5Most people would agree that. Some people may neglect that in fact . Others suggest that. Part of the explanation is . 进行对比： T
30、he advantages for A for outweigh the disadvantages of. Although A enjoys a distinct advantage . Indeed , A carries much weight than B when sth is concerned. A maybe . , but it suffers from the disadvantage that. 承上启下： To understand the truth of ., it is also important to see. A study of . will make
31、this point clear 让步： Certainly, B has its own advantages, such as. I do not deny that A has its own merits. 结尾： From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that . In summary, it is wiser . In short.多使用过渡性词语使句子连贯表列举：for example 、for instance、that is to say表补充：besides、in addi
32、t ion、moreo ver表对比：on the one handon the other handin spite of表原因：because of、thank s to、due to、owing to表结果：therefore、thus、as a result、so表结论：to conclude、in a word、in brief、to sum up表转折：however 、neverthele ss、yet 递进：furthermore 此外，更有甚则 moreover 再则，加之，此外 nevertheless然而，不过 二、词汇高级化高级词汇并不是越难越好，越长越好，主要是指那些
33、大部分考生都想不到用且又符合英美国家表达习惯的方式，例如一些常规词的特殊用法，或是通过构词法而形成的词汇、复合词、名词用作动词，象声词等。1. A new railway is being built in my home town.A new railway is under construction in my home town.2. A strong storm happened in our city last night .A strong storm hit (struck) our city last night.3. Some of my classmates are for
34、 the movie .Some of my classmates are in favour of the movie.1词组优先原则。表达同样的意思，如果是在单词和词组中进行选择，要优先选择词组。如：寒假英语作文计划 李阳 昌黎一中高三二十班6原文A new railway is being built in my hometown.改进A new railway is under construction in my hometown.点拨：在写一篇介绍自己家乡的文章中，说到了家乡“正在修建”一条铁路时，用介词短语来表达就比用“build”这个单词的被动语态要好得多。2地道原则。尽量使用
35、英文中的既有词组，不要自己生造，以免出现中式英文。如：原文Through traveling, I learned a lot of knowledge.改进Through traveling, I gained/obtained a lot of knowledge.点拨：知识不是“学习”的，而是“获得”的。这是许多同学容易犯错的地方，需引起注意。3避免重复原则。因为在高考中只要求 80120 个单词，所以一味重复使用低水平单词就会与 “高级、复杂”这个评分概念相抵触。如：原文I like reading while my brother likes watching television.
36、改进I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.点拨：重复使用 like 来表达“喜欢”的意思，不仅表达单一，文章显得死板，而且容易让阅卷老师感觉你词汇匮乏，影响得分。此外，表达“我认为”，大多数人一般都只会“I think”,其实我们完 全可以用“I suppose”“I consider”“I hold the view that”“I take the attitude that”等来表达。4“后高长”原则。启用后学到的、较高级的、较长的词汇。例如下面单词的替换：原词 替换词clever intelligentha
37、rdworking diligenthard diligentlyvery rather/extremelypay attention to attach importance tohappy delightedmore and more an increasing number offirstly first of all；to begin with；initiallybut;however on the contrary三、文辞优美化要想使所写的文章凸显文采，展示综合运用语言的能力，就要能写出几个漂亮的句子来，这就要求在平时的学习过程中大量地积累课内外一切有用的习惯表达和典型的句子，如强调
38、句、倒装句、虚拟句、感叹句、非谓语动词句型、it 句型、with 结构以及各种典型的从句等，真正做到句式多样，句型结构复杂，使用恰当得体，尽量避免使用结构单一、长度相同的单句，以免使所写文章平淡无奇，缺乏生气，读起来索然无味。1、基本句型布大局，多种句型来交替寒假英语作文计划 李阳 昌黎一中高三二十班7(1) people can well use Internet Bars only in this way.Only in this way can Internet Bars be well used by people.(2)I suggest Internet Bars shoul d
39、be strictly managed and should direct young kids to surf the web.I suggest Internet Bars be under strict supervision and young kids be guided to surf the web.(3) I have found a house. It is 25 square meters. It has a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen.I have found a small flat of 25 square meters, wi
40、th a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen.2、凭关系、并列、复合恰当介入(1) I used to play ping-pong a lot in my spare time. Now I am interested in football.I used to play ping-pong a lot in my spare time, but now I am interested in football.以上根据两个单句间的并列关系或转折关系，合并成有相应关系的并列句。(2)I hope you come and see for yourself som
41、e day.(3)You want to know what is going on in schools in China.以上为含宾语从句的复合句。(4)The main subjects I studied at school included(5)The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street , which is not far from Jiaxin Chinese School.以上为含定语从句的复合句。(6)As we came to the crossroads a young man and a girl came up and st
42、opped us.(7)Before we knew it , we had to say good-bye to the workers.以上为含时间状语从句的复合句(8)The meal was so nice that we all enjoyed it very much.含结果状语从句的复合句(9) Hope you dont have to wait as long as we did .含比较状语从句的复合句(10)Hope things have begun to improve since schools were called on to reduce the learni
43、ng load.注意：以上句型要在确保语法的正确和准确下使用。文章中存在语法错误必然会影响最终的得分。一般在高考英语阅卷中，三个小的语法错误会被扣掉 1 分，一个大的语法错误(例如谓语使用错误)会被扣掉 1分。所以，大家在平时写作时要养成时时提醒自己尽量不犯语法错误的习惯，特别是要尽量避免由于粗心引起的错误，如冠词的基本用法、名词复数形式的写法等方面的错误。而语法基础较为薄弱的同学，除了要加强自己的语法功底，还可以试着背诵一些高频句型结构。因为这些结构不仅语法正确，而且必定会成为高考英语作文中的得分点。如果大家能背诵这些高频结构并在考试中直接套用，即使语法偏弱也能在一定程度上避免自己造句所犯的
44、语法错误，还能在这些点上得分可谓一举两得。比如倒装句，大家在考试中很少主动去用，但只要正确使用这个句型，通寒假英语作文计划 李阳 昌黎一中高三二十班8常都会让阅卷人眼前一亮，从而起到意想不到的效果。在此，笔者推荐四组倒装句，大家不妨仔细揣摩并模仿练习。这些句子分别如下：1. Only when we realize the importance of environmental protection can we solve the problem of pollution.2. So precious is time that we cant afford to waste it.3. Di
45、ligent as he was, he failed to pass the exam.4. By no means should teenagers get into the habit of smoking.四、衔接自然化文章的连贯性和紧凑感是高考书面表达的一个重要评分标准。只有很好地运用连接词才能使文章连贯、流畅，才能提升书面表达的质量，拿到高分。有的同学在作文中使用过多的简单句，使文章显得单调、急促；有的尽管用了连接词，但表达过于单一，满篇都用 so、and、then、but、or 等。这非但达不到丰富表达方式的目的，反而使文章显得呆板。为了避免这种现象，应尽量使用不同的关联词，以使
46、文章不仅句型丰富，而且思想表达清楚，语意连贯。评分标准把衔接和连贯作为核心标准，有效而恰当地使用连接词是衡量是否衔接连贯的重要标准之一。我们应根据所写文章的内容，按照时间先后、空间顺序、逻辑关系、因果关系，弄清所写内容之间的内在联系，切莫按照要求中的提示顺序来组篇，一定要加以适当调整。然后加入构成语篇组带的过渡词串句成文，从而使所写的文章前后连贯，结构紧凑，语义贯通，过渡自然，环环相扣，层次清晰，逻辑分明，不留痕迹，自然成文。现将中学阶段应掌握的过渡语以及高考书面表达范文中出现的例句总结如下：（一）表起始的过渡语有 first of all, to begin with, in my / ou
47、r opinion, according to , so far, as far as.(1)As far as I know, everyone is happy about this new arrangement of things.（二）表时间的过渡语有 at first, then , later, meanwhile , in the end, finally, after that , since then for the first time, at last , as soon as, the next moment , in the past, at present, in
48、 the future 等。(2)After that I went to No. 8 Middle School of Dalian and graduated this summer .(3)Firstly, the technology of secondly, peoples income hasThirdly, mobile phones are （三）表空间的过渡语有 on the right/ left, to the right/ left of, on one side of on the other side of , at the foot/ top/ end of, in the middle/ center of 等。(4)On one side of the road there is a new classroom building.On the other side, where the playground used to be now stands another new buildingour library.寒假英语作文计划 李阳 昌黎一中高三二十班9（四）表因果的过渡语
